MMZ- Married by Fate – Chapter 33

Hello my dear friends…so here is the next update…I typed in a hurry…so please ignore my mistakes…Friday morning Cross roads…next MMZ on Sunday 🙂 Stay blessed

Chapter 33

The permission of one drink went to thress four and five Radhika was out and Nia was turning crazy….she was laughing at every small thing….Ankush was holding his head..looking at his two sisters going all mad…Rishi for whom Nia had always been a kid….now looked like a gorgeous grown up lady….he smiled looking at her cute antics and averted his gaze she was Ankush’s sister….Radhika was sitting with Sam who was trying to control her drunk Chashni…Radhika hugged and kissed Sam’s cheek; ‘’ you know miss …Sam is my best friend.. Sammy and I love you’’

Sam rolled her eyes Radhika had spoken this line 10th time…and talking to her as if Sam was a third person; ‘’I know Chashni…now be a good girl and have this lemonade’’

Radhika laughed; ‘’No…..you are my best friend’’ Sam banged her head…and looked at Neil…..Neil gestured her to move….he gave Radhika an arm hug and said; ‘’Chashni….you are a good girl right’’

Radhika thought for good 5 min and responded; ‘’I don’t know I am confused….you tell me am I good girl’’ Radhika looked at Neil with lot of expectations and smiled like a kid….

Neil nodded; ‘’ yes you are the best…’’

Radhika screamed loudly; ‘’Thank u….By the way who are you…leave it….Call that Arjun and tell him…I am the best…. go tell him I am good and not a panoti’’ Now it was hard to control for Sam she started laughing

Neil was having fun…he looked at ARjun who was sitting with his eyes covered by his palm….Neil smiled turned to Radhika and spoke; ‘’Arjun is a bad guy right’’

Radhika went into thinking mode again then smiled wide; ‘’Nope he is sweeeeeeteeeeeeessssst…..I love him’’ Arjun smiled at her cute confession…and Ankush excused himself….there was no way he could hear all the love blabbering of his sister…Sam was recording all this

Neil; ‘’But he called you panoti…..he is a very bad guy’’

Radhika got up stood on the table glaring Neil’; ‘’NO…he is not bad you are bad….because you are calling him…bad… Say sorry now!’’

Neil; ‘’No I won’t what will you do’’ Radhika huffed and pulled Neil’s hair with both hands…shocking all of them….Arjun laughed now….Neil growled; ‘’Save me Arjun….or else I will be going home bald….Chashni is turning dangerous’’

Arjun held Radhika’s hands from behind locking her gently’; ‘’its ok Radhika leave him….he is sorry’’

Radhika looked at ARjun and complained like a child; ‘’then ask him to say sorry’’

Sam looked at Neil; ‘’Say sorry because I won’t marry a bald Neil’’

Neil; ‘’Chashni ….I am sorry…please spare my hair’’

Radhika curled her lip and pointed her forefinger at Neil warning him; ‘’Last time….I am forgiving…you….next time my buddy will beat you black and Blue’’

Neil smiled emotionally; ‘’Who is your buddy’’

Radhika smiled wide; ‘’My Niel’’ Sam smiled

Neil looked at Radhika and pecked her forehead; ‘’Arjun take her home…before she pulls another stunt…’’ Arjun helped Radhika down on the floor…and walked her to the car…he called Ankush and got to know that Nia was giving another rocking performance…she had assumed herself to be Veeru of Sholay….calling Teji as Jai….and Ankush seemed to be villain mausi….between her and her basanti Rishi….

Arjun huffed and told Ankush he was waiting for them….but Nia calling Rishi as her love interest even in a drunken state …alerted his mind….his POV; ‘This Rishi is the real villain…first Radhika then Sam….and now Nia…god she is a baby…have to talk to her…and why the hell Ankush couldn’t get a better partner’

Back at the party…Ankush was trying to get Nia down the bar table….and she wasn’t listening; ‘’I won’t listen to this old mausi’’

Ankush got irritated…he pulled her down with a jerk; ‘’Will deal with you tomorrow ‘’

But what Nia did next left Teji heart broken…as she was dragged along by ANkush…Nia screame; ‘’I love you my Basanti….Rishi..’’ Rishi coughed his drink…Neil was shocked and Sam held Teji’s hand gently squeezing it…she whispered; ‘’Teji….its all rubbish she is drunk…’’

Teji gave a sad smile; ‘’This is why she spoke her heart…I am happy she considers me her friend’’ he left after wishing neil and Sam

Sam; ‘’Neil can we do something’’

Neil; ‘’I am tired of fixing others love story…I want to deal with mine now….so lets not talk…..I am waiting for youin the parking…’’
Sam thought; ‘’Fine ….if you don’t I will…will speak to Chashni’’ She followed him quietly thinking of a plan to flush Rishi out

After reaching home…..Ankush somehow tugged Nia to bed….he looked at Arjun; ‘’ Today I am taking an oath….no more drinks for my siters…they are worst then drunkards…and they are so heavy….my hands are aching’’

Arjun laughed; ‘’Go sleep Ankush….its late’’ Ankush nodded and left for his room….Arjun walked into his room…and watched…Radhika trying to fly…he smiled and pulled her down making her lie down… ‘’Sleep ‘’

Radhika; ‘’NOOOOOOOO!….I want a story….bed time story’’

Arjun banged his head; ‘’What got into you….first you were a fierce wife..and now a child….Ankush is right no more drinks for you’’ Arjun just threw his body on the bed…lying on his back…covering his face with his palms…all tired

Radhika gently squeezed in and kept her chin on his chest; ‘’Are you angry…Sir!’’

Arjun removed his hands on hearing Sir and looked at her face…she was blinking in slow motion…Arjun knew sleep was taking over her…he smiled and wrapped an arm around her; ‘’No…how can I be angry with you…you are a good girl now sleep…’’

Radhika nodded…snuggling close to him; ‘’I love my Arjun’’ Arjun was so happy listening to this ….he tucked her hair behind her ears….pecked her forehead and closed his eyes hugging his life protectively

Neil was driving and Sam was lost thinking about Teji she felt bad for him….but in the process she ignored the route to which Neil took her….she came back to present when he applied breaks…Sam looked around and then at Neil; ‘’Why are we here?’’

Neil; ‘’So that I can have some we time….which you seem to be denying me’’

Sam rolled her eyes and followed him inside the old house which she shared with Radhika…as she walked in a smile covered her lips remembering the old days…Neil tapped her shoulder; ‘’Remember this was the place where Chasni played holi with pineapple’’

Sam; ‘’yes and today she played Kung-fu-hustle with you’’

Neil laughed…and crashed on the couch; ‘’why are you standing so far….come to me Samrunder Singh’’
Sam smiled and made herself comfortable next to Neil….Neil held her hand in wining their fingers together…he pulled it close to his lips and kissed her fingers; ‘’enough of waiting Sam…marry me’’

Sam smiled wide; ‘’finally…I am dying to hear that…couldn’t you say that before…’’

Neil frowned; ‘’You wanted to settle down Arjun and Chashsni’s matter and now you are blaming me’’

Sam; ‘’Idiot…don’t….they are long settled and must be planning next generation…its you who is fooling around…acting all jealous…and now when you proposed…its without a ring….you are such an Idiot….every girl has a dream of dream proposal…guy going down on his knees…extending a big diamond ring to his girl….telling her beautiful words…it should be magical…and here I am getting proposed …on an old couch…without a ring and by my Idiotic fighting boy freind’’

Neil was looking at Sam with his mouth hung open…she spoke so much in one go…he smiled ; ‘’forget it’’ pushed Sam on the couch on got on the top of her.. ‘’Samaira Khanna….you are my Samrunder Singh and I am your Idiot…I can never be anywhere other than around you…so here is it…marry me and become Mrs Idiot…so that we can make plenty of little Idiots soon’’

Sam’s cheek turned pink…but she couldn’t hold her laughter on hearing Neil’s proposal….Neil lowered himself more…and whispered near her lips; ‘’I love you Sam…always have always will’’ He kissed her lovingly and Sam responded wrapping her arms around his neck….the loving kiss turned passionate…poor couch couldn’t handle two bodies and they fell off …Neil was lying on his back with Sam on thw top….he was cursing the couch…; ‘’Shit Sam…lose some pounds…you are heavy’’

Sam who was worried about Neil till now…sat upright and punched his stomach; ‘’Did I complain when you jumped on me…what did you think you are some…cotton man…you weigh more than 100 kgs’’

Neil laughed…he loved fighting Sam…he opened his arms…’’ Come Sammy floor is safer…lets continue…tomorrow we are buying your ring’’ Sam squealed and jumped on Neil…inviting another scowl…but they hardly cared.

Delhi

It had been a week for Shiv since he started visiting Pari….the little now had started expecting him…and would throw her arms and legs in happiness once she would get his glimpse…Shiv was happy that he was becoming a habit for Pari…but he wasn’t realizing Pari was becoming a habit for him…he was late by an hour….and he knew he just had 2 hrs as after that Riddhima would come to pick her up…Shive entered the room and was greeted by wailing kids…he moved carefully towards Pari’s crib and found her crying miserably…he couldn’t hold and lifted her up…Shiv cooed her wiping her tears…Pari in her language complained something….which made Shiv turn and the one of the staff stiffened….Shiv cradled Pari…she rested her small head on his shoulder …and calmed after 2-3 hiccups….he rubbed her back…. And in sometime Pari dozed off…sucking her thumb and holding Shiv’s shirt tightly with the other hand…Shiv slowly lowered her…removing her small hand from his Shirt…he pecked her small fingers…and caressed her head…Shiv gently removed her thumb from her mouth…and watched her…he pulled his mobile out and clicked a picture…before leaving he turned around and glanced at the room keenly…he noticed a CCTV and decided to check it…

Shiv was walking out when he saw Riddhima walking he …he realized that it was late…as he forgot the time being with Pari…he quickly turned …towards another crip…Riddhima walk passed him and stood watching Pari…Shiv moved out and watched Ridhhima adoring her daughter… Riddhima…stroked her cheek with her finger…and Shiv wanted to stop her as she was disturbing Pari…he moved his hand back…and quicklt walked out…and got inside his car….he wanted to drive off…but decided against..it…he watched Riddhima walking out…holding Pari in her arms…he smiled emotionally looking at them…Riddhima was trying to get an auto but was failing…Shiv reversed and stopped next to her; ‘’Get in I will drop you’’

Riddhima; ‘’No thanks ….I will manage…’’

Shiv got down and spoke; ‘’Not for you its for the baby….its really hot and humid…she will fall sick….get in’’

Riddhima knew he was right…she finally got in; ‘’ What are you doing here’’

Shiv; ‘’Was passing by’’

Riddhima; ‘’Or following me…’’

Shiv; ‘’Believe what you want to …I am done….’’

Riddhima noticed he wasn’t looking at her…may be because the way she insulted him…she spoke softly; ‘’Shiv…sorry for that restaurant incident…I didn’t mean to hurt you’’

Shiv; ‘’But you did and bad…leave it …it dosen’t matter now’’

Riddhima; ‘’So are you thinking about getting married’’

Shiv gave her you are impossible look; ‘’ Miss Mishra…I am not interfering in your life and expect the same from you….this is my personal matter’’

Riddhima lowered her eyes; ‘’Shiv….I spoiled your life…forgive me if you can’’

Shiv; ‘’Fine … give me my 5 yrs….Can you…? No…right…then please stop discussing about it…I said I am done’’

Riddhima felt a strange pain…but both of them didn’t realize…that their discussion had woken Pari up….and she let out a deafening cry…being woken up from half sleep…Riddhima…tried pacifying her…but Pari..started squealing she was trying to get out of mother’s arms….something irritated her…Shiv was felt bad…he softly spoke; ‘’I think she is not well…you should check with a doctor…’’

Riddhima; ‘’But she was fine in the morning’’

Shiv extended his palm to touch Pari…and she held his finger…Shiv smiled but Riddhima was surprised….Shiv quickly drove his car to a famous paediatrics…Riddhima followed him….the doctor did the check up…and said that Pri had stomach ache….he gave the prescription to Shiv thinking him to be Pari’s father…Riddima was uncomfortable hearing that but it pained more….when Shiv said he was just a friend…after dropping Riddhima home….Shiv drove off…he realized that Riddhima left Pari’s toy in his car….he smiled …and then laughed…shaking it…he kissed the toy…and drove off happily

Riddhima on the other hand was restless…she felt bad when Shiv said they were just friends…she cursed herself…before going to bed

Hrishikesh

Saral’s house was on fire….they had received the notice…the hearing was in a week…and Joshi’s had to face their nemesis …Shivansh Dutta…Saral cursed the day he met radhika…he asked his lawyer to do whatever he can to win the case.

Mumbai

Radhika entered BS and quickly started her work….she saw an important mail from Sam …..it had a video attached to it….Radhika thought it to be related to work….but once it started….her eyes popped out….she covered her mouth gaping at ….she behaved like a mad….pulled Neil’s hair…radhika covered her face cursing herself when she heard a collective laughter….Neil Sam Arjun and Teji were laughing at her

Radhika; ‘’Sam…please delete it’’

Sam; ‘’Are you crazy…that will go in Oscar library’’

Radhika was embarrassed; ‘’Sorry Neil…’’

Neil gave her an arm hug; ‘’I forgive you because my hair are still alive….by the way which bed time story Arjun read to you’’

Radhika understood…a glared at ARjun for embarrassing her more….her friends left her alone with Arjun..he pinched her cheek; ‘’you were so cute yesterday….Ók now something serious…we are leaving for Rhrishikesh….Saral’s trial is beginning …Shiv wants us there….Nia will stay with Prerna aunty till we are back…’’

Radhika; ‘’I just want this to be over’’

Arjun; ‘’It will be trust me…’’ Radhika placed her head on Arjun’s chest….she knew Saral will try all to save himself..

Precap; Arjun confronts Nia on Shiv….Radhika forgives Zubin Kritika….Sam decides testify in Radhika’s favour

60 comments

    • S.v

      |Registered Member

      made it yes yes yes yes yes yes, U donno di when i saw the cover pic first thing was scrolled down and commented and then sat down to read the update.

      Radhika rocked i love her. She is drunk yet so lovely. Arjun is good and neil is bad and pulling of his hair wow wish the original have included this drunk episode would be a treat to watch hello cv see how beautiful the story is ?? thats our didi she rocks always always,

      Pari and shiv a lone tear of happiness how beautiful they were when they were together shiv dont leave pari plssss and di make shiv and pari’s part even more as it is seriously adorable can see that kid playing with shiv for that he will just crush saral as a tissue paper wish that happens soon saral has done his part now its time for his pay back..

      Neil poor him shouting sam as she was over weight. Lol and poor couch could not hold them and the best part was his proposal how idiotic lol as he is an idiot his romantic words was seriously idiotic(idiot + romantic di)

      Aaha precap seems to be fueling the eagerness arjun comes to know about shiv from nia and nia why did she took the side of rishab but not my chashmish teji he is disappointed feeling bad di make that teji is her heart is she has any feel over teji ?? she has na ?? or not ?? Ankush poor him 2 sisters full of energy of drink. i was just seeing everything in my eyes. Love you soo much di.

      Im going all crazy its all because of u i m love with arjun radhika neil sam shiv pari teji nia everyone everyone di and of all i love u the most. I wanna hug u tight and say how much i love u love you di and ur words. Bear hugs and stay healthy and happy di muhhhhaaaaaaaaa

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton SV 🙂 you will see a lot of Shiv and Pari….he will love her like his own daughter 🙂 thanks a ton for so much of love …. stay blessed my darling 😀

  1. Sathya

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    Kya bataauin Mein….. THE BEST EPISODE EVER in my pov…. I just loved it n laughed heartily reading rads drunken blabber….. That’s was hell funny…. Really I agree with arjun… She was cute in drunken state…. Arnesam gone mad going after rads… I really pity on ankush having drunken sisters… Lol…. Oh no I feel sad for Teji… But I m sure u will have some twist… And yes… Rivansh scenes r superbbbb… Now I m admiring shivansh more…. He is a very strong man like arjun…. It’s very difficult to see these kind of person who is still longing for his love…. Totally a magnificent episode…. Love u dear 😍😍😍😍😘

  2. Jessie

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    Radz n Nia..!! Radz confession was soooo1 cute!! And bed time story!! Lol..Nia n Rishi as basanti..rofl…Arjun’s mind clicks Rishi as everyone’s villian.. Highlight of d incident…
    Poor couch!! Am rolling..! Wat a couch breaking confession!! 😂😂😂 Neil d true idiot proposed without a ring..
    Heartbroken Teji!! Sad.. both the sisters rocked! Shiv..shiv..Fantastic! Guess..something wrong der..waiting 4 cctv footage.. loved pari bonding with shiv. So sweet.. she complained..!! Ridhi feels bad.. Shiv..ur trick is working man!!! Am eager 4 saral’s trial.. precap is I interesting..
    Arjun confronts nia on shiv.. I was awaiting for this…!! Fantabulous.!! Waiting 4 nxt one.. TC n love u loads

  3. Rossy

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    Omg…that drunkard seen…hilarious…rads n nia…funny…bechara Neil…he loves his hair most…lol…and Neil’s proposal…that was best…but the most best n happiest moment for me is shiv n Pari moments ..ridhima may be soon agree for shiv…i wish that happen soon..😃😃

  4. Jnana

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    hey!!! the epi was superb…. radhika was sooo cute as a drunkard….. arjun is sweeetie pie. nasam…. they were awesome….. sam’s complaints were too cute. rishi and nia…. no please teji is good for her. shivansh loved him yaar. he is sooo sweet. wish ridhima understands this faster. his bond with pari is a treat to see…. saral ka abhi dekhni hai. waiting curiously for the next…. post soon…

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks Jnana 🙂 Teji Nia and rishi are a triangle right now 😉 yes Teji is sweet …. Riddhima will understand soon 🙂 load of love sty blessed 🙂

  5. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    Soooo cute……thank you for making me smile……..I just made a fight with my dad……my sis is going back tmrw and I need a buk frm hr frnd……since my dad s going to leave hr in the railway station I asked hm to pick it up 4 me…..bt he said he was going to office and so he cud NT……..and f I want I CN collect it and go back home via bus………..that’s it….as an after effect I almost shouted at my frnd who called me at the wrong time and also at my sis n mom…………thanks for making me smile…..

  6. Dhara

    |Registered Member

    Superb. I really loved he way you portrayed shiv and little one’s emotional bond. Radhika was bang on 👍👍👍

  7. Starz

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god di….u exhibited the whole scene beautifully….loved it ….waiting for next one eagerly…..rads was cool….lots of love and take care😃

  8. Sweetie

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    Didi,love you…😘Haayyyeee!!! I can’t express more than that..Radhika and Nia’s drunken drama was so cute…😂Over all it’s a marvelous episode.. 🙂 Love you loads and take care.. 🙂

  9. shreya

    Is it gonna be love triangle between rishi nia n teji ……today radz was really cute ……..cute movement between shiv n pari ………God saral let him die soon

  10. Manolove

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    Really cute.. I wish to be right in frontof u to give a big hug.. the way u portrayed pari was amazing.. Radhika was out of the world but pari stole my heart.. please bring pari more..

    Great work dear.. I have waited for this update a long… My awaiting was fruitful… Thanks dear for spending time to entertain us.. 🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌👌👌👌👌👌👌🙌🙌🙌🙌

  11. Aadia

    |Registered Member

    What a chapter Gauri di…Radhika….she is adorable.. Really cute and is there any crazy act she had not done,nothing..even though Ankush was pissed of by both the girls, we thoroughly enjoyed it..rads trying to fly..lol..then cute romance between Mr.Idiot and to be Mrs.Idiot.. Poor teji..and the bonding between Shiv and Pari..amazing..
    And di,you are working in Bangalore and so many things are happening there.
    Is your place safe??

  12. KK(Krishna)

    cuteness overloads….entire episode. loved..loved..and loved it…you are an amazing writer..and i will say this to you in every comment of mine on your chappy…thank you dear…love..blessing

  13. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    Super update Gauri, Rads drunken stunts were sp funny, pulling Neil’s hair ☺ Nia thought she was Veeru n Rishi Basanti LOL but poor Teji got heart broken. Shiv was so cool in this one I love that Ridhima felt bad with his answer. Loved the update, was smiling while reading. Amazing update .
    Love u

  14. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Ohhhh my Gauri darling… Simple si ,naughty si Radhika turns into drunken radz…haha.. She is so funny..n drunken state too she don’t want to heard anything abt arjun..tht was sooo cute ..nei..omg turned into viru..lol…Neil’s hair..buchara bald hote hote baccha hai…n shivdhima..omg..n pari she is shoooo cute yar..unknowingly shiv builds father-daughter bond with pari….u nailed it as usual yarrr..awsome n mindblowing…precap…m on toe for it…my magical angel..come soon… Loads of Love you…muhhhha..huggs n kissess…tc

  15. Roma

    Gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling. …very interesting n lovely, marvellous, outstanding, mind blowing. ….rads n nia drunk…..had fun rads blabbering n pulling neil’s hair..n nia…sholay scene….lol…both girls confessed…but I felt sad for teji…..ardhika were so cuteeeee n nesam very lovely. …ridhima n shivansh very outstanding scenes…he is worried for Pari…..n ridhi feeling bad for shiv….I hope they get together soon. …saral is gone….shiv n arjun won’t spare him…loved the episode so so sooooooo muchhhhhhh. …gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling sissyyyy. …it’s very interesting n exciting unique story…keep it up honeyyy…love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug 🙂 ♡♡♡♡♡ 😉

  16. Hemalattha

    |Registered Member

    awesome.I just loved it n laughed heartily reading rads drunken blabber That’s was so funny She was cute in drunken state.arjun was right.amazing di.

  17. Silpa k sivadasan

    I accidently stumbled upon this chapter …..
    It was so spellbounding that i searched for all chapters and read it one go
    U r an amazing writer gauri di……
    Just amazinggg plz upfate the nxt one faaaaaaaaaast….
    Cant wait much longer…………

  18. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Amazing Gauri…a refreshing update 🙂 Rads nd antics…lol 😀 nd Nia nd Rishi…I thought Nia is for Teji…. Shivansh nd Pari were too adorable…loved every part dear….really sorry for dis very late comment 🙂 waiting for nxt…loads of love. 🙂

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