MMZ- Married by Fate- Chapter 32

Hello friends…so here is the next chapter next will be crossroads and after that a sweet gift for Sathya …
Ok I need a suggestion…I had thought of writing Crossroads from character’s POV …please let me know if you want me to continue the same way or I should go to the third person like DPO

Chapter 32

Radhika entered bird Song all happy jolly …she ruffed Teji’s hair and pulled Neil cheek…before moving to Sam’s cabin….Neil smiled and Teji frowned….there were two more who were still waiting for their chasni to forgive them and include them in her smiles to….Zubin and Krikita….couldn’t dare go and speak to Radhika after the way they behaved with her….Neil never took them back…and Teji only spoke whar was necessary…Arjun noticed Zubin while moving towards his cabin…he decided to speak to Radhika…Radhika knocked on Sam’s cabin door and peeped in all smiling….Sam returned her smile with a frown …Radhika walked in… ‘’Morning Sammy….Isn’t morning beautiful today’’

Sam leanead on her chair; ‘’Looks like you had great time with you hubby’’

Radhika understood….she was expressing her happiness a little too much…she composed herself and looked at Sam; ‘’I think we should get back to work…we have Rishi’s party in the evening’’

Sam face fell; ‘’I don’t want to go….Neil is mad at me….Chashni he is not evening looking at me…don’t know how to pacify him’’

Radhika; ‘’Why will you pacify him….you are not even at fault…you know Sammy this is the problem with guys once they have the girl they don’t value her….let him go to hell….will teach him a lesson….Now listen to me…ignore him to the max….and we will make him sit on a ticking bomb’’

Sam lifted her hands up in air; ‘’Whoa!!!! … Chashni….its about Neil he is your best friend…’’

Radhika smiled pulled Sam’s cheeks; ‘’This is why I need to teach him a lesson for the stupidity his doing….do you know ..me Prerna aunty and Teji planned everything to get you and Neil together…and this is why you molested him on his date’’

Sam looked at Radhika wide eyed; ‘’Chashni…it was just a kiss….’’ She couldn’t utter more being all embarrassed recalling the incident …she just hid her face in her palms and Radhika kept laughing’’

Radhika; ‘’Ok blushing queen…we are leaving early…today I will dress you up…lets see how long Neil can resists you…but till then ignore him…as if you don’t care at all’’

Sam; ‘’Don’t you think it will spoil his mood more…what if it backfires’’

Radhika kept her hands on her hip; ‘’Ok I ignored ARjun bad after leaving him…did it backfire???…No right !!…Instead he went on his knees all pleading…then I took him back….Neil is no better’’

Sam folded her arms to chest; ‘’My God ! what a drama queen you are …find I will go by your plan…but please tell me what if it backfires’’

Radhika replied all serious; ‘’Will kidnap Neil…and will get him married to you forcefully…so in both cases its win-win for us’’

Sam blinked ; ‘’What have you eaten for breakfast…or rather what did Arjun do you’’

Radhika sucked her cheeks in; ‘’Arjun took me on a love ride…and morning he cooked for me’’

Sam; ‘’Hmmm this is why you look like a blooming rose’’ Radhika nodded before joining Sam in her giggles

Delhi

Riddhima’s uncle (Nia’ father) helped her getting a part time job in a kindergarden school…her aunt and uncle suggested her to apply for a higher degree…to make a good career in teaching…Riddhima didn’t wanted to bother her aunt…who was a working with an NGO…she decided to leave Pari in a nearby creche….she cried badly leaving her daughter on first day…maybe it was for few hours but it pained bad…. Riddhima was oblivious that Shiv still followed her….well why wouldn’t he…his idea worked…

A week back

Nia’s parents were shopping in a market when Nia’s father dashed against someone…the guy quickly apologised and helped the couple in picking the scattered stuff…Nia’s father looked at the man and exclaimed; ‘’Shivansh Dutta….right’’

Shiv; ‘’Yes….But do we know each other’’

Sandeep; ‘’Yes I am Sandeep Mishra….Riddhima’s uncle…you fought in favor of Mishra’s against Joshis…’’

Shiv pretended as if suddenly enlightened; ‘’Oh yes how are you Sir….sorry I couldn’t recognize you’’

Sandeep smiled; ‘’No worries young man…we were never formally introduced…But Thanks for bailing our girl out…we committed a grave mistake marrying her off to SUraj…’’

Shiv all emotionless; ‘’That’s my job…no need to thanks me…Arjun is my friend I did it for him…So how is Riddhima doing now’’

Sandeep; ‘’Not good…she wants to be independent…but it’s a long gap…getting a job is difficult in this competitive market’’

Shivansh thought; ‘’I have a reference…but please don’t tell this to Riddhimaji …I don’t want her to feel obliged or bad…it’s a well known franchise in education…she can get a job in kinder garden…and meanwhile can study further’’ The couple was happy finally Riddhima will have something to divert her attention from her past…they took the reference thanked Shiv and left…Shiv made few calls and the job was done

Coming to present …Shiv smiled he had planned this sudden meeting with Nia’s parents….He looked at the exit…waiting for Riddhima to leave…once Riddhima moved out of the creche after dropping her daughter…Shiv moved in….it was supported by the same school where Riddhima joined…..he was feeling bad of manipulating the situations to get Riddhima…but he was helpless…he asked the care taker about Pari…and moved to the crib….the girl was happily throwing her arms and legs in air watching the spinning toy in her crib…she would make some baby sounds being all excited …SHiv’s legs halted….his fingers curled….a sudden thought crossed his mind this was Suraj Joshi’s daughter….because of her Riddhima rejected him.. he moved closer….and all his anger evaporated….Shiv stood their dumb found…looking at the little angel…she had all features of her Mom…Shiv sat on his knees and caressed her head.. ; ‘’Sorry Angel…I am using you…but can’t help….I will give you everything….but can’t promise love for now….its difficult….you have to make me a habit Angel so that your Mom has no choice’’

Shiv out of the blue stroked her cheek with his fingers….and she gave him a smile…Pari moved her small hands and held his finger…pulling it in her toothless mouth…Shiv smiled….he couldn’t hold more and picked her up…she was so small…fitting perfectly in the cradle of his arms…Shiv’s eyes started filling up with unknown emotions…Pari kept looking at Shiv as if trying to memorize his face…she blinked like a doll…Shiv pecked her forehead and put her back in her crib…he smiled at her and before he could leave Pari let out a small sneeze her expression looked as if she had worked for hours…Shiv pulled his handkerchief out and cleaned her face gently….before pulling a small blanket over her…When he moved out to his car….his heart was full of clamn….he was being bought up alone….after his mother died…his father remarried…and Step mother couldn’t bare his presence…Shiv moved in with his maternal grandparents but even they left him alone after few years….he decided to stay in an orphanage…than going back to his house….because even his father was not much willing to keep him….his conscious was cursing him for using an innocent infant….but for now…he turned deaf to his own heart

Mumbai

Sam did exactly what Radhika told her…she walked out her cabin to teji’s place…she had noticed Neil there but ignored him and went straight to Teji; ‘’Teji…you will heading Rishi’s shoot….this ad will be shot in flim city…dates are fixed…go through all the details and come back to me if you need more details’’

Teji’; ‘’Sam…I have never handled a shoot individually….I have been working as an assistant coordinator’’

Sam turned; ‘’Then you got promoted….do as I say and make me proud’’

Neil kept throwing tantrums and weird gestures hoping Sam to notice him…but she ignored him completely making him frown…Neil just walked into his cabin and dialled Arjun; ‘’Care for a coffee…I am upset’’
Arjun smiled at his baby tantrums; ‘’Yes bro…coming’’

Arjun moved out…but was stopped mid way by Radhika and Sam….he looked at them little suspiously….’’What are you two upto….why the hell I smell danger in air…’’

Radhika gave Arjun the sweetest smile; ‘’You are coming for coffee…But with us…we are cornering Neil…’’

Arjun; ‘’Hang on…what if I refuse’’ radhika kept a swiss knife on Arjun’s waist….Arjun grinned.. ;’’That won’t scare me’

Radhika; ‘’Sleeping on the couch for rest of you life….How about that…scary enough’’ Arjun hung his head and accepted defeat…making Sam laugh…both the girls looped their arm on Arjun’s either side and pushed him towards to thee cafeteria….Neil looked at the trio..with his mouth hung wide …Arjun gave him a apologetic look and Radhika poked her tounge out….The trio kept joking and talking….ignoring Neil to the max…Neil all annoyed left for his cabin and Sam-Radhika gave each other a hifi…and Arjun just rolled his eyes

Radhika called teji to initiate the next part of the plan….she knew Neil will refuse to come in the party…and she wanted him to come….Neil stormed inside his cabin…he kept on blabbering… ‘’What does she think of herself…she din’t even try to pacify me….and now she is ignoring me….this must be all Chashni’s plan…’’ Neil smiled… ‘’What do think Chashni…I don’t know your ideas….no my sugar candy I know you a little too much…let me see…what more you can do…I know Sam she won’t ignore me for long and she won’t attend this party’’

Neil was still smiling at his intelligence when he got a mail form Radhika; ‘’Neil…me and Sam are out for shopping for tonight’s party…and don’t scream I have the permission of the Boss (Arjun 🙂 🙂 ) will meet you directly at the party….if you are coming 🙂 your lovely Chashni’’

Neil was still thinking if this was a plan or reality when Teji barged in…; ‘’Neil Boss…I am done with W project…mailed you the details…I am off to home….I am going to Rishi’s party with Chashni amd Arjun Sir….and Sam…you are coming right…after all Sam is the chief guest’’ Neil picked a pencil and broke it …staring at teji…Teji stammered; ‘’Ok I understood….I will send you the pics…bye’’

Arjun dropped Radhika at Khanna residence…Radhika dressed Sam up in a elegant blue Chiffon Sari…she clipped her hair from one side with a thin studded clip…and made soft curls….she dawned Sam with beautiful stud earings and a thin pendent chain…after the makeup Sam looked like a beautiful doll…Radhika kept her palm on her heart; ‘’Neil you are so dead’’

Sam smiled ; ‘’Ok now its time to get you ready’’ Radhika wore a black net saree with a sleeveless blouse…compliment her look with long danglers and red lip gloss…she looked glamorous…’’ Piyali smiled looking at Radhika and Sam enjoying together…

Manya too wanted to go…she walked into the room and asked; ‘’Can I come with you….I am kind of bored’’

Sam thought for a moments and replied; ‘’Only if you keep your hands of Neil’’

Manya gasped; ‘’What do you mean?’’

Sam smiled and took Manya’s hand hers and softly said; ‘’You know what I mean…Manya you will get nothing going after a man who isn’t interested in you…and will end up hurting everyone….I committed a mistake by going after Arjun… don’t repeat my mistake… find a guy who loves you and accepts you the way you are…and is ready to hold you every time you fall…he should have the patience to correct you when you are wrong…I am your sister and I love you more than anything…hope baby you will understand…’’ Sam turned to Radhika ; ‘’Chashni lets leave…’’ Radhika nodded and gently caressed Manya’s face before leaving…

Arjun picked Radhika Sam up….Sam applauded Nia’s look…who was dressed in an off shoulder floor length purple gown… with a French bun smoky eyes and no accessories look…Radhika looked at her; ‘’Nia you look all grown up’’

Sam; ‘’Yes…god save the guys in Rishi’s party’’

Ankush interrupted; ‘’Choti don’t spoil her…she is still a kid’’

Arjun; ‘’Nia no hard drinks…and no mingling with strangers…we will keep an eye on you’’ Sam and Radhika just banged their heads

Nia was all frustrated; ‘’ Wow I had one body guard in my Bhai…now I have a whole panchayt in Jiju…not fair’’ All of them laughed

Neil threaten Teji to come with him…Neil was wearing a torn jeans with a black shirt…top button loose giving all the females a glimpse of his toned chest…and it was working…he was getting good invitation from eyes , his pOV; ‘’Let me Sam for how long you will resists me…’’ But Neil breath was caught in throat when Sam entered…it wasn’t just Neil there were others who were admiring Sam …Neil smiled and walked towards her…but before him Rishi greeted Sam; ‘’Wow ! you look breath taking Samaira…and Chotti you too’’

Radhika glared; ‘’Its Radhika for now’’ Rishi threw his hands up in defeat…

Sam looked and Neil and then took Rishi arm…burning Neil to ashes…Arjun looped his arm around Radhika pulling her to him; ‘’Thank god…this Rishi is more interested in you’’

Radhika; ‘’Arjun…he was never interested in me…I am his best friend ‘s sister…a friend to him…we don’t look at each other in that way…we grew up together….this feeling is different’’

Arjun; ‘’I didn’t understand a single word you said…I just know I am possessive about you…and today you are looking like a dark chocolate brownie with a cherry toppings…and Mrs. Mehra I am hungry…’’

Radhika turned into a tomato…she gently pushed him; ‘’Shameless’’

Arjun chuckled; ‘’Oh I am !…by the way…keep an eye on Nia…I will instigate Neil’’ Radhika nodded…
Arjun moved to Neil…; ‘’I took suggestion from you on my love life…but seems you are fake love guru’’

Neil clenched his jaw; ‘’Not Now Arjun…Sam is pissing me off’’

Arjun; ‘’Who asked you to doubt her…?’’

Neil looked at Arjun; ‘’Really….a week back it was you all jealous of this male mannequin Rishi…and now since he stopped going behind your girl…you are giving me all the gyan…tell me what to do…before I explode’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’I like being straight and simple…go snatch your girl…show the world…she belongs to you”

Neil kept his glass on the counter and moved to the dance floor….and pulled Sam in his arms…she blinked Neil gave her a lopside smiled…and ordered the Dj; ‘’Music’’ the DJ played Angreji Beat…from Cocktail …Neil danced pulling Sam to his body….Sam was lost in his eyes…so was Neil…his grip was possessive tion her waist….Neil twirled her out..pulling her to himself and plastering her back to his front…he removed her hais from one side…and pecked her neck…NeSam dance created a beautiful environment…pulling everybody else to dance floor…

Neil; ‘’Dare you make me jaelous’’

Sam; ‘’Wow…that voice of yours was new to me …Since when have your started behaving like a stone age boyfriend’’

Neil; ‘’The day you confessed you love to me…’’ Neil tighten his grip on Sam’s waist lifted her her with an arm..twiring her around…

Nia was being asked by many but she knew she was being watched…she finally pulled Teji for a dance….who turned cold… but Nia made him comfortable… Teji finally danced with full heart…Nia…gave him confidence…Ankush smiled…he liked Teji for Ankush teji meant safe zone…but Arjun was still thinking…Radhika cupped his face and turned towards her; ‘’Let her enjoy’’

Arjun; ‘’She is a kid…its my responsibility to take care of her’’

Radhika; ‘’She is n adult …grown up enough…let her enjoy and I did all this dressing up for you and you are busy spying’’

Arjun pulled Radhika close to him…and wrapped her arms around his neck…holding her waist tightly…; ‘’Panoti you will know…what effect you have on me once we reach hom…’’ Radhika blushed…

Rishi took a sip and watched NeSam and Aradhika.. ‘’Cute’’….he clapped to grab the attention…’’guys thanks for the making my eveing….and now happiness is doubled as my childhood buddies Ankush and Radhika are here…Arjun please don’t be jealous…she is like a sister to me…plus I always wanted a girl with more brains…Choti no offence’’ radhika’s jaw dropped…Arjun just gave a sheepish smile…Rishi turned to his guests‘’ I have one more good news….I am starting a clothing line by name INK with Ankush as my partner…’’ Arjun Radhika Neil Sam and Nia were left shocked…Ankush smiled and moved forward to join Rishi…he spoke; ‘’Sorry guys…wanted to surprise you…was working for long …and now my hard work is bearing fruit…’’

Radhika and Nia…gave Ankush a big hug…followed by Sam and Neil and Arjun…they decided to celebrate and Arjun allowed a drink to Radhika. And Nia…Nia was all happy; ‘’Bhai now I can have clothes for free’’ Ankush just rolled his eyes

Manya kept on thinking about Sam’s words…everything she did came flashing to her eyes all nuisance she created…she almost destroyed her relationship with her sister….what was she thinking…when she decided to give pain to her pain sister…Neil…she would have lost his friendship to…Manya walked to her cupboard pulled a dress and got ready…Piyali saw her leaving; ‘’Manya where are you going at this hour’’

Manya; ‘’To set things right’’ Manya lfet leaving a confused and worried Piyali behind…after and hour drive Manya reached the party venue…the music was low…people were either chatting or enjoying dinner…Manya looked around and finally saw Sam with Neil…they were lost in each other…she took slow steps to them and said; ‘’Mind if I take sometime of yours ‘’

Sam looked at her little shocked; ‘’Manya? What are you doing here’’

Manya; ‘’Setting things right….Sam I am sorry for what ever wrong I did with you and Neil…I am sorry for being so stupid…and Neil…I would love to be the kiddo for you the way I was for all the years…I know its difficult to forgive in one go but will wait for your forgiveness’’ Neil just kept his hand on Manya’s head and walked away leaving sisters alone…Sam wiped her tears and hugged her…getting an additional hug from Radhika who jumped on Sam from behind…Sam smiled… Manya decided to leave when Nia came to Radhika….Nia spotted her and her expressions turned grave…Sam introduced them; ‘’Manya she is Nia…Radhika’s sister…and Nia she is Manya my baby sister’’

Nia gave an artificial smile…Manya moved forward; ‘’Sorry Nia…I am a kind of a spoiled brat…and today I realized how bad I had been with everyone….please fogive me’’

Nia looked at her and then at Radhika…who nodded; ‘’ I don’t trust or let go easily…but since you are Sam’s sis…I forgive you…don’t expect more…’’ She turned to Radhika; ‘’Di I am going for one more dance’’

Manya greeted everyone and walked to the exit her heart felt amazingly light…she closed her eyes and took a deep breath and in procees collided with someone…when she opened her eyes she found Ankush holding her….he was dressed in black trouser with an untucked white shirt and a black jacket…Manya blinked she was blank as her heart was racing….Ankush helped her stand straight; ‘’Sorry Manya…hope I din’t hurt you…’’
Manya still was mute…how can someone be that polite …if it had been someone else in his place….the person would have called her blind…or Manya herself would have thrown curses …but ANkush was like ice..Ankush spoke again; ‘’Are you fine….do you need something’’

Manya nodded negative and spoke; ‘’Yes…you’’…..Ankush looked at her little shocked she realised what she said…she stammered; ‘’I mean No…and thankyou…I was leaving…’’ She quickly walk past him…wiping her forehead and neck…which was sweating profusely…Ankush smiled and went back to his family as Arjun was having a hard time handling two mad females…

Precap; Drunk drama…Saral’s trial begins…Shiv’s melting heart for Pari

83 comments

  1. Meen

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    Oh My God……..even breath taking would be a small word for this……loved it….amazing………shiv….he still love riddhima this deeply……i like him….manya…lol…..aradhika moments are always………..super…..duper…hit……& radz & teji…..rocked it……& poor neil…..awwww im so in love with him…….thanks for this marvellous update gauri……& yeah i would suggest u to go for d 3 person like in dpo for crossroads…..just a suggestion……..coz i think sometimes povs….create a little bit confusion……..but i know u r wise enough to use them ………so……waiting for mmz & crossroads…loads of love

  2. neetz

    Yaaaay hope m the 1st to.comment..lol just kidding ..
    Today epi was.mindblowing..m eithersmiling or showing.my teeth …wow..i liked it

    • neetz

      And cross roads hmm usually like stories from a third point of view with few points from them on betwwn just like dpo coz thats when i feel connected with all characters ..if its from.each person i just feel they r some one and m standing somewhere else..its just my pov ..afterall its ur story..u r the person to decide ..what ever u write i l read ..sure 🙂

      • neetz

        Yaaa i wanted to ask a favour ..can u write like a ss or os some thing jais repentance ,recovery nehas treatment sia… with the dpo characters as side …
        Only if u like and have time ..i was just asking coz m a dpo addict u know.. i know u r already busy with 2 ff 🙂

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Neetz thanks 🙂 and you are full lost in DPO….love you for that…ok I will write on Jai’s recovery and Sia’s teenage crush 😛 but after sometime 🙂 thanks of so much love 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love u

  3. Sathya

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    Wowwwww…it is SCINTILLATING EPISODE. U rocking gauri…. Ohooooooo… I love each n every line…. Radhika is in full form n now teaching Sam how to hold Neil.. Oh God I couldn’t believe it… N Neil he is at his extreme Jealous n I love Teji reaction when Neil broke the pencil.. Ha ha ha that was really funny… Ok now ardhika becomes gyan baba for nesam…. Lovely…. N shivansh.. What to say now…. I started loving him… N yes Pari will melt him n he is not bad though to hurt the baby.. I like his treatment to handle riddhi…. Totally it is a RESPLENDENT one…. 😍😍😘😘😍😍

    And lastly…..the most awaiting day is approaching me…. I m so excited for it… N thank u sooooooooo much gauri 😘😘😘😘love u lot

  4. Aastha

    loved it…..di cud u include ardhika nesam and shiridhi (shivash pari ridhima) scenes???? its ok if u can’t……….abt CR….I liked POV’s version but I thnk maybe third person will do the job….but at times u must give us POV’s to…..

  5. shreya

    It was really omg radz I think she is back …….poor Nieln Arjun …….nia poor baby ….. .. thank God manya got her brain at rt time ……..shiv I wish him to be good dad …….coz he kn ‘s wat being step parent effect on child …….radihi should move on with shiv n pari ………really crossing fingers……..I want like dpo coz there won’t be any confusion ………it jt I think rest depends on u…..love u stay blessed

  6. KK(Krishna)

    it was another rocking episode….everything i mean everything was outstanding…everyone rocked the epi today….OMG::Many and Ankush & Nia and Teji???its going to be fun…i think Arjun will become a spy director…LOL..anyways i enjoyed a lot. waiting on your “Crossroads” and my suggestion will be the “third person”view. thank you again and lots of love..stay bless

  7. Starz

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    Omg omg….. such a fantastic episode Di…i loved it…..loads of love and take care….it really gave me a break between exam stress …. thanks….and I would like cross roads I would like it to be third person view….bye😍😍

  8. Dhara

    Superb Gauri😃 waiting for drinkers drama. And for crossroads you can write the way you fell comfortable.

  9. Jnana

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    AaawwwweessooommmeAaawwwweessooommme…… Loved everything…… Manyas change, Neils possessiveness, radhikas plan, shiv and Paris scenes… . everything was soooooo good. ….

  10. Rossy

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    Rads back in her avtar…its glad to see her true self..she gave rocking ideas to Sam even…lol…i think shivansh will be addicted with Pari after few moments…neil…bechara…manya sudhar gayi…really😲…koi nahin…achi baat hai…hope everything will be fine soon…
    Crossroad I would like it to be from third person view with bit of their own povs…

  11. Sammy

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    hehe everyone is excited to comment first …..di what do you eat ..seriously …which chaki ka aata do you eat?? ..such a breath taking episode ……oh god only ..lovely GAURI DI ..can do that …what to say further …in every update ..i just lack words to describe your ff…marvellous ..and crossroads well as you wish ….you can write in any way ..i will love to read it

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Sammy 🙂 what do I eat ??? well anything veg that tastes good…specially sweets 🙂 and I am waiting for desperate silence 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  12. S.v

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    didi finally i made it but not first toady cha missed to comment firat on an outstanding comment. I was all the was smiling big one and now my cheeks are paining all credit goes to u how lovely was this and radhika was like haa ?? i mean she our radhika ?? is this the same radhika no she is arjun’s radhika today and made me jump she was super awesome and i loved it so much cute na she was when she and sam spoke my eyes fell over my laptop and yes i took it placed it inside my eye socket. what a maniac idea was that neil should be ignored more than enough for my idiot to go all mad and the way rads said after dressing sam im all the time laughing and all are giving a weird look and that adds more laugh to me , and teji and nia cute woo full panchayt for body guard and shiv was seriously a nice person so cute of him and i guess he will love pari very much so that atleast because of that ridhima didi will accept him hain na didi ?? i am all the time jumping and breaking the chiar dont worry chair is seriously strong. Lovely update didi seriously lovely update and haa forgot to mention when neil broke the pencil teji was like haa understood i was laughing like hell. How realistic how lovely update didi Love you so much didi i want to see you so deserately and hug u tight as u made me go mad for this update and cross roads both didi i mean both their pov and 3rd pov coz addicted to dpo so much so both but what ever u feel like write it.
    Lovely update didi love your words always and love you like mad and always bear my tight hugs and infinite kisses muhhhhaaaaa,……………

  13. Jewel

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    hey, i think shivsnsh is started to love pari. and poor neil…. i love the way neil questioned arjun. and nesam and ardhika moments are superb. and the whole chapter is superb…. i loved it… waiting for drunk drama…. come with that soon..

  14. n

    omg such an amazing epi gauri di story is getting intrested day by day
    will be w8ing for nxt epi di
    bye tc love u

  15. Sweetie

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    Di,you know I’m smiling like an idiot while reading this chapter.. 🙂 You make me smile with all those words weaved together wonderfully.. 😀 About the episode,it’s paisa wasool chapter..Glimpse of Shivansh’s past,why he was unable to accept Pari in full form and his antics to get Riddima were superb.. 😀 Arjun handling two mad ladies,haha,true.. 😀 Nia will get clothes for free,lol.. 😀 Manya-she is head turner today,seriously,amazing job for her character..And she’s gone fida on Ankush,not bad.. 😀 Rishi wants a beauty with brains and that is not Radhika and Arjun supporting him,wow,Arjun ki waat lagne wali hai shaayad.. 😉

    Just loved it Di and about CR,I prefer 3rd person POV as I can relate more to stories that were told in that way..Rest depends on the majority’s opinion,I guess.. 🙂 Love you loads and take care.. 🙂

  16. Brin

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    Amazing episode, brillent writing, and you nail it, well done. With crossroad, which ever way you do it, will be amazing, eagerly waiting for both of the ff. 🙂

  17. priya k

    Superb episode…radhika teaching Sam..hope Shiv grow affection towards Pari …episode was very pleasant..as usual I will rock in every way as possible…for cross wordsfollow as dpo…as pov would be confusing sometimes..waiting for the drunken part..when will Radhika get to know abt ridhimas past..

  18. Myra

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    Dii…it was a mind blowing episode….loved it….amazing writing talent you possess…..radhika’s happiness….neil beechara….everybody seems to be after him….radhika helps so….and arjun helps neil…..well, fair enough……diii….nia’s dialogue abouy having a bodyguard in bhai and a panchayat in jiju had me in spilts…..you did a great job….shivansh….well, i am really glad he is trying to warm to pari….and the precap sounds interesting….drunk drama….ohhlalala 😂
    Love you loads….please update soon… 😘

    • Myra

      |Registered Member

      Di…about crossroads….please try to write it from a third person point of view…including pov’s in between….the way you used to write dpo….aah….dpo memories come flashing by….love you loads 😘

  19. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Gauri.. I just wish to read..read..n read without a break.. Radz herself… cute!! and RaSam on action.. bechara neil.. even Arjun is threatened..hahha… and Teji scared seeing pencil tip being broken..lol.. Ardhika ..sweet. Manya turned good.. sab kuch Ankhush baba ke dharshan wajah se..!!lol Arjun over protective BIL.. ab Ankhush ban gaya business man! i loved reading Neil’s reactions..
    Shivansh.. I cant believe am interested a character other than MMZ stars.. his POV while meeting pari is just fab.. he wont hate her n cant too! and job offer thro nia’s parents.. wat an idea shivansh!!! All is fair in love n war.. take on his past justified his mindset.!! Awesome..

    Abt crossroads i guess 3rd prsn will do better.. coz 4 leads we have.. like DPO will make it best!!
    Eager 4 nxt chappy.. Now its Arjun’s turn..coz saral’s trial!! n drunk drama!! wow!! TC n loads of love

  20. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    Oh I loooveeeeeeeee it, awesome chapter. How do u do this Gauri, giving amazing chapters every time. I salute u👏👏👏👏

    This chapter was just marvelous, Nesam were hell cute in this one, loved them so much. Glad that Manya is a changed person now waiting to see how hers n Ankush’s story will unfold. Nia happy that she will get free clothes, LOL. Flirtatious Arjun and blushing Rads, I always enjoy to read about them.
    Shiv, am loving this character too, today we got a glimpse of his past waiting to see how Pari will change his heart.
    Stay blessed, love u n tc 😘😘😘😘😘

  21. RituM

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    here i am……lol……it s so interesting for me…hehehe after reading this…i also read previous one again…..lol…..radhika’s excitment is superb…nd neil….(tere bina guzara…aye dil hai mushkil)

  22. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Wow wow wow…..oh my goddddd…what to say..m speechless darling.. Seriously no words coming frm my mouth..m utterly amazed n happy…this is epic n phenomenal babe…I LoVe You yarrrr….rasam…so cute..they r on back being besties….rads got smarter more. Haha…chocolate browny with red toppings.. Lol….arjun becoming romantic day by day…ohhhh Neil….the way u described him today for first time i forget abt arjun..haha…n shiv..omg..he is going to love pari…u just nailed it while expressing his emotion…yeahhh its right..we never evr able hate to babies…whm ever they belongs.. Their cute n innocence can melt devil’s heart too..thn shiv kya jeez hai..manya. First time evr i like her in todays epi..this minf blowing… I wand it to b continuous as much as i can read… So m eagerly waiting now…pls pls pls my darling update fast na…muhhhha. .loves u already… Kissess n huggs .

    • Gauri

      |Author

      Love you Dipu 🙂 now I am happy 🙂 I was waiting for comment since morning …. and after reading it I am smiling ….thanks for making my day it means a lot to me 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 and keep smiling 🙂

      • Dipika

        |Registered Member

        Sorry dearrryyy for making u wait..actually i want to read it peacefully so i save the page read it after coming home..i want to enjoy each n every sentence.. Gauri darling i m voting for individual pov..tht will depict their inner turmoil well….all decision and s urs.bbyye .muhha

  23. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. …gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeetheart darling abhaaa….you make soooo happy with your each update…every single word coming out of your brain steals my heart…..you have a devine power of winning our hearts…..the epi was really superbbbb n mind blowing. ..rads all chirpy n blushing after finding her true love….arjun…giving all master plans to get neil back on track for sam….lol…their dressing styles n lovely dresses were killer. …n they were all breath taking. ..Nia couldn’t stop taking teji for dance….ankush a arjun both guarding their Lil sis nia…lol….ardhika were fantabulous, stupendous. ..loved them soooo muchhh…….manya realized her mistake n apologized to nesammm…awww…that was cutest scene when ankush held manya n she said she wants him….lol…u just know very well how to bring things in place very interestingly n beautifully. ….God bless you my sweetheart gauriiii…stay blessed n healthy alwaysssss. …I love you soooooooo muchhhhhh my dear…muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ will wait for next part of this story n your crossroads too. ….take care sweetheart 😉

    • Gauri

      |Author

      thanks a ton Roma 🙂 u have a heart of gold Roma which is full of love and I am blessed to have a friend like you 🙂 thanks a ton darling ❤❤❤❤

  24. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    All beautiful Gauri…lived every part…NeSam ArDhika Nia Teji Ankush Manya Riddi Shivansh every one was breathtaking…..their gang…wish I could also be a part of Dem… 🙂 🙂 u r amazing dear…waiting for nxt…post soon. Loads of love nd happy Sunday 🙂

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