MMZ- Married by Fate- Chapter 22

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Chapter 22

Radhika woke up and looked around Arjun had already left the bed…she heard the water sound from the wash room…Radhika tied her hair into a bun unlocked the door and pulled her clothes out of her suitcase… Arjun walked out only in his track pants water dripping from his hair…Radhika gave him a look and quickly averted her gaze…her cheeks went red…Arjun smiled at her embarrassed face….he took his time wiping his body …Radhika picked her clothes and started walking towards the wash room…Arjun blocked her path….Radhika tried moving sideways but he would move with her…. Radhika got annoyed; ‘’Sir please let me pass’’

Arjun; ‘’Why are you not looking at me Radhika…..am I looking that bad’’

Radhika; ‘’because you are not properly dressed…Sir please let me go’’ Arjun started moving towards Radhika making her retreat she collided the cupboard…Arjun placed his arms on either side of Radhika….she was very uncomfortable nervous her heart was racing …she softly and timidly spoke ; ‘’ Sir please let me go’’

Before Arjun could respond… Nia screamed; ‘’Di Lizard above you head’’ Radhika panicked jumped threw everything and hugged Arjun tightly…..Nia winked at Arjun and left Arjun’s heart beat increased….Radhika was holding him tightly with her head buried in his bare chest and her warm breath tingling his senses making him go wild…he moved his palm on her back… Radhika realized her state …she moved back picked her clothes and ran to the wash room….Arjun wiped his face and took a deep breath to calm his senses…he quickly wore his t-shirt and moved out of the room…

Nia was going to the kitchen….she saw Teji…clicking pictures of the natural surroundings visible from the balcony…she quietly walked towards him and stood behind him…but Teji was completely engrossed…..Nia screamed coming close to ear…making Teji slip…Nia laughed and clapped….and teji forgot his pain…he kept watching her mid night black eyes ….flawless skin and long hairs…she was like Radhika but a bold version ….he kept looking at her …Nia waved her hand infront of his eyes to wake him up…and then lightly slapped him….she smiled and left and Teji kept looking in the direction where she disappeared …

When Riddhima woke up she found Sam playing with her daughter….Riddhima smiled; ‘’Sam…for how long have you been up’’

Sam smiled; ‘’I think the baby was up by 2:00 AM … since that time we have been playing …I din’’t realize it was morning’’

Riddhima giggled; ‘’So this is the reason…I could sleep soundly…thanks…’’ Riddhima after a pause asked a question… ‘’Sam…you are going ahead with Dadaji’s plan…. But it might hurt you bad’’

Sam smiled; ‘’Di whatever will happen will be a part of a plan…but what Radhika went through was more painful…. I am ready for it …by the way can I bath her today’’ Ridddhima smiled and nodded

Mala called everyone for breakfast…Ankush was sweating he had to initiate the plan as directed by Dadaji… Ankush was annoyed with Sam and Arjun but he wasn’t the one to insult anyone…and this exactly he had to do with Sam in presence of Radhika…Neil was pumping energy in Ankush; ‘’Its just a plan….nothing is real’’

Ankush; ‘’you should read Dadaji’s script… I don’t think any dialogue writer would have written something like he did…I just hope Sam forgives me…’’

Neil; ‘’Sam won’t mind I know her’’

Ankush ; ‘’Neil please tell me everything will be fine….’’ Neil smiled and patted his back…and they walked to wards the breakfast room….he looked around everyone was there except Radhika….Sam gave him a thumbs up…Radhika walked in and everyone was alert…she greeted everyone and had to sit next to Arjun….as her dear family did not leave a single place vacant for her….Dadaji coughed to signal Ankush to start…Ankush took almighty’s name and started; ‘’So Sam for how long you will be staying at our place’’ Radhika was surprised at Ankush’s rude tone…but kept quite

Sam ; ‘’I will be going back with Neil and Teji’’

Ankush made a sarcastic face; ‘’ Sam weren’t you little hesitant coming to our house after what you did with choti…I mean…how can you be so shameless…that you insulted her called her names…slapped her …and now you are staying at her place…as if nothing happened…
Radhika was surprised; ‘’Bhai…this is not required’’

Ankush; ‘’ Why not Choti… she kept insulting yet you saved her….you know what people like Sam use simple and vulnerable people like you and the discard them when you are no more beneficial… You saved Bird Song for her…she kicked you once you were of no use …She is here not because she is sorry…she is here because she must have some motive … there must be something or someway you can benefit her..so she wore this aplogy mask over her cunning face….am I right Sam.’’

Sam eyes had already started watering…she knew all this was a part of the plan…but today she realized if these planned words were hurting her so much… what would have Radhika felt when she acused her …insulted her…Sam recalled everything and shut her eyes in guilt….Radhika was growing impatient..she warned Ankush ; ‘’Bhai this is between me and Sam….we can handle it ….please don’t interfere’’

Ankush; ‘’Why shouldn’t I …you are my sister… her family never supported you….her father knew the truth still he let you go through so much of pain…’’ Before Ankush could complete…Sam got up and excused herself… and left the room…. Radhika called out for her…and then turned to her family; ‘’How could you let Bhai do this…. Dadaji why didn’t you stop him…’’

Dadaji; ‘’You cannot stop someone from doing or speaking the right’’

Radhika; ‘’Since when insulting your guest became the right thing in this house…Bhai you don’t have any right to insult Sam…you too left me alone when I needed you…and don’t forget more than you Sam helped me in realizing my dream…you better be ready to apologies to her’’ Like Radhika Arjun was also not aware of the paln…he felt bad for Sam…but couldn’t complain … he was the reason all this was happening… he felt like a monster … Arjun kept silently cursing himself…Radhika got up with a jerk and walked …she stopped and looked at Arjun her POV; ‘All this is your fault…and you are still quite’ she gave him a disgusted look and walked out of the room…Mala kept calling her but she didn’t pay the heed… Radhika was looking for Sam…she called out for her name but received no response…she checked Riddhima’s room but Sam wasn’t there…Radhika went to the terrace and found Sam sitting in a corner…with her face hidden in her bent legs…Radhika walked to her and sat next to Sam…she rubbed Sam’s back; ‘’Sam I am sorry…Bhai never did such a thing I don’t know how come today he was so rude’’

Sam; ‘’because I deserved it… and I think I deserve more than that for hurting you insulting you…and not trusting you…Radhika I don’t know if you will believe me or not…but I miss you Chashni… I miss you more than anyone…you absence has created a void in my life, I don’t know how fill that gap…. I will never be able to live in peace if I don’t get your forgiveness … I know a mean girl like me can never deserve the friendship of an angle like you…but still can you forgive me for one last time … I will never forget this favour of yours… I promise you I will never show my face to you if you forgive me once’’

Radhika smiled lifted Sam’s chin up; ‘’ So you will never show your face to me….Ok I am living at Neil’s house… and will keep living there till I am in Mumbai…so if you marry Neil….you will wear a veil when ever you come infornt of me… am I right’’ Sam blinked at looked at Radhika…..Radhika wiped Sam’s tears …and softly spoke; ‘’Sam I forgive you and I missed you too’’ Sam looked at Radhika with her mouth wide open….she first smiled then squealed and leaped at Radhika…pushing Radhika to floor and Sam on the top… Sam pecked Radhika’s cheeks and hugged her….Neil and Ankush watched the drama from the distance …and shook hands…they left the girls alone…. Sam got up and pulled Radhika up…. ‘’So can we go for some sight seeing… and also I want to talk to you about so many things…also please come back to Bird Song … there is no sensible people to talk to’’

Radhika turned quite; ‘’Sam I don’t want to come to BS… I don’t want to be anywhere near Arjun Sir… please don’t force me…’’

Sam; ‘’Radhika why not…Arjun Loves you’’

Radhika; ‘’Love ! He was committed to you and suddenly he fell in love with me….tell me honestly Sam can you stay with a man…who was dating your best friend and then tells you that he is love with you…think Sam…

Sam; ‘’Is this the only reason….’’

Radhika ; ‘’No…he claims to love me but he never stood up for me…Sam I cannot stay with a man who is not strong enough to support or take a stand for right….’’
Sam smiled and gave Radhika a side hug ; ‘’Ok I will never force you again to join Bird Song … but you will never stop talking to me….promise me’’

Radhika pulled her cheeks ; ‘’Promise…. Now come Bhai should apologies to you’’

Sam; ‘’No required just leave it ….I have you I don’t want anything …’’

Radhika took Sam back to make her finish her breakfast….Dadaji and Mala smiled looking Radhika happily chatting with Sam….the girls were feeding each other happily… Ankush from a corner folded his hands to Sam…. Sam got and went to him; ‘’I should be thankful for helping me in getting Radhika’s forgiveness….you know Ankush…I guess if Jai would have been alive….he would have made me understand things in the same way…’’

Dadaji; ‘’ So Sam all thanks to Ankush… I am the script writer and the director of this hit film and I am getting nothing…Sam smiled and gave dadaji a peck on cheek and a loving hug….

Sam; ‘’Radhika is gem but she is like this because of her family … she is lucky to have you guys ‘’

Dadaji; ‘’Now we have to bring choti and Arjun close’’ Sam just smiled she knew Radhika will not budge so easily….. Sam looked at Radhika who was busy with Teji and clearly ignoring Arjun who was just looking at her….

Arjun was looking at Radhika who along with Teji was playing with Riddhima’s little daughter…the kid would squealed when Radhika would lift her up…or tickle her… Arjun smiled she looked so good with a kid in her arms…He wondered how would she look with his baby in her arms… Arjun made a prayer…. ‘’I never believed in you …but please if you are there please grant this one wish… please help me bring my Radhika to me ‘’ Arjun excused himself and moved to the room…he had to make some calls…The Little girl made her aunt wet….and everybody laughed on Radhika… Radhika handed the baby to Ridhhima and went to her room to change…Radhika entered her room and saw Arjun standing at the window…commanding the person on the other side to nail someone..Radhika’s POV; ‘Don’t know whose time of suffering started’

Radhika quickly changed and came out….Arjun watched her from the corner of his eyes….he really wanted to start a conversation…but she was indifferent…more thank ever…she was pretending as if he wasn’t there… Radhika was about to leave the room when Nia and Riddhima locked it from outside…Radhika was surprised…Arjun smiled….Radhika found him smiling and turned angry… ‘’ So this was your plan…do you think spending sometime with me in the same room will change the reality’’

Arjun took a deep breath; ‘’Radhika you are taking it all wrong… I didn’t ask anyone to lock us up…’’

Radhika; ‘’Why are you here..what do you want to prove to my family….that you are a gem of a person or best available choice for me… if yes then I am sorry to inform you that will never never happen… ‘’ Radhika’s outburst left Arjun shocked and in pain …Riddhima who was standing outside the room with Nia asked Nia to inform Mala and to prevent more damage just unlocked the door and barged in; ‘’Is this a way to behave choti’’

Arjun; ‘’’Riddhima its ok… I think I deserve that’’ By this time Radhika’s family was already at the door of her room

Radhika clapped; ‘’Wow Sir…I must say you put up a mask very nicely…few moths back you wore a mask of being gentle man and fooled Sam… with your false love and now you are standing in the bedroom of her best friend as her husband…’’

Arjun couldn’t stand hate in her eyes ..he replied in a pained voice; ‘’Radhika I came here so that we can work on our relationship… mend our gap’’

Radhika ‘s voice was rising; ‘’What all can you mend… my broken heart my shattered confidence….or my way of looking at things…you made me something I never wanted to be…look at me…I haven’t ever screamed in my life…and now…I am cursing you…you know all the pain in my Sam and Neil’s life is because of you…my bhai who always had been a polite person…but today he did something which none of us could expect he insulted Sam…he made a her cry…and you know the reason… its you…but as always you were quite…like you always were… when I got blamed…I my character my upbringing was questioned…what did you do…??? I will answer that you were quite…and you expect me to go back to a man who is so weak…who cannot differentiate between wrong and right…’’

Mala was impatient now; ‘’Choti enough…apologies now’’

Radhika; ‘’Why Ma?? Why should I what did I do…I am the one bearing the pain…’’

Dilip; ‘’This is not what we taught you’’

Radhika smirked ; ‘’Yes Papa….you never taught me this… Arjun Sir did…am I right Sir’’

Arjun looked at Radhika; ‘’Tell me once what should I do to get your forgiveness’’

Radhika; ‘’Did you check with me before giving me the pain…then why now….but still if you are asking I will answer please leave me alone’’

Arjun felt someone just put dagger through his heart…he gulped his pain and responded; ‘’Fine… but before that…Ma Papa and Sam…I forced Radhika to marry me…so she shouldn’t spoil my plan… I destroyed the proof against Nandu….I insulted her I put her down infornt of Sam and others…I was rude to her and gave her pain which she never deserved…I did what a monster does … but I did this only for my sister who was my world since I was 8… I did what I felt right… I was wrong..because no one taught me the difference between right or wrong… but today I will do what Radhika wants me to… I am leaving you Radhika…I will myself free you from this unwanted marriage…I can stay without you …but staying with your hatred is impossible…stay happy….. I will leave for London before you come back to Mumbai …I don’t want you to bear the pain of my presence anymore’’

Arjun pulled his suitcase…dumped his stuff..and walked to the door… Mala tried stopping him…Arjun pacified her; ‘’Ma you might have lost a SIL but you will never lose a son this is a promise…Papa I am sorry…I wish I could show you how embarrassed and sorry I am…Dadaji thanks for giving me a chance’’ Arjun shook hands with Ankush and moved out Dadaji looked and Ankush; ‘’GO after him…he should not leave Hrishikesh…’’
Ankush nodded and Neil accompanied him…

Mala angrily looked at Radhika; ‘’Now celebrate…you just destroyed your life with your own hands’’ Radhika looked at her family ….even Dadaji gave her a disappointed look…all walked out Sam came to Radhika and touched her shoulder gently…Radhika broke down… she knew…she lost the most precious thing of her life….her heart pained…but it’s a human nature to the hurt the one you love th most…Sam kept holding her and once she stopped sobbing …Sam made her lie down covered her and left the room… she had to speak to Dadaji there should be some way to end all this…

Arjun was checking for the taxi…. He kept on wiping his eyes …it was raining heavily it seemed even sky could not take Arjun’s pain… he was shattered…. He lost her …his reason to live… Arjun was ready togive any price to reach delhi at the earliest but…the cab drivers and buses were not moving due to heavy rains…it was dangerous….but Arjun was adamant on leaving Hrishikeash…Radhika’s hatred was killing him… finally one driver agreed…But Neil pulled him… ‘’Are you crazy…she asked you to leave and you agreed like a good boy…when will you understand Arjun… its time be a bad one…you are sorry…I know… then stay fight for her…or you will regret whole life’’

Arjun; ‘’Who wants this life now…I wish it ends today’’

Ankush; ‘’Look I don’t have patience of handling 2 equally stupid people…so cut the crap..and come with us’’

Arjun ; ‘’No I have made my arrangements…I am leaving day after tomorrow..for London…before that I will complete all legal formalities to free Radhika from this marriage’’

Neil; ‘’I feel like banging your head on something…you want to see her happy than fight for her…you are her happiness…she loves you Arjun…the day I brought her from your house she confessed she had fallen for you…please Arjun..she has right to be angry…now do as I say… come with us…’’ Arjun looked at Neil…he was the same guy who kept Radhika away from him…but now was ready to help him…it confused him..
Arjun; ‘’Why Neil…you took her from my life….Why are you helping’’

Neil smiled; ‘’because I saw repentance in your eyes…now my Mumbai body will freeze in this Hrishikesh down pour…’’ Neil snatched Arjun’s bag and took him to a hotel… Ankush did the arrangement and came to the room… ‘’ Arjun give us today’s…Choti will come running to you’’

Arjun; ‘’This is my last try….I don’t have any hope’’

Neil smirked and pulled his cheeks…; ‘’My baby is upset’’ Arjun gave him a death glare….Neil smiled and gave Arjun an assuring hug.. ‘’I know your pain bro… I will help you…just don’t give up’’ Arjun after sometime responded to Neil’s hug…holding him tightly… ‘’I am sorry Neil….I have hurt you too’’

Neil; ‘’you are forgiven..take rest…I will come tomorrow morning’’

Radhika was lying lifelessly on her bed…and kept looking at the ceiling…she turned to her left …and found Arjun smiling it her…she lifted her palm to touch him…but he disappeared…Radhika curled her body…covered her mouth and cried… ‘’I am sorry Sir….I never wanted to hurt you…I don’t know what got into me….’’ Radhika heard the bike sound and ran to the window…but found Neil and Ankush …without Arjun…he left her .. Neil saw her hanging on the window and started the drama; ‘’Aunty we tried stopping him…but he didn’tlisten to us…he took a cab to Delhi….he paid double… I am so worried….Its so dangerous to travel in this weather…plus the hilly roads’’

Mala panicked; ‘’What were you doing Ankush……two of you couldn’t stop him from leaving…its so dangerous…do you know all buses have been cancelled due to the down pour…you are good for nothing’’ Mala left after reprimanding Ankush…he banged his head…as his mother couldn’t understand the drama’’ Radhika’s heart sank…she knew the hilly roads and the consequences of travelling during the down pour…she left her ego behind and dialled Arjun…as per Neil’s request Arjun and put his phone on Offline mode…and Radhika got the message of no. not reachable she panicked…She ran out of the room to Neil… ‘’Neil Arjun’s Sir no. is not reachable…I am worried…please do something’’

Mala; ‘’whatever is happening its because of your stupid anger…he apologised..begged…but no…you wanted to put him down…now stop this show off’’

Ankush; ‘’What is he to you…Unknown Man right … now let him be…but one thing is sure if anything happens to him you are to be blamed’’ Radhika broke down…Sam hugged her…even Sam wasn’t aware that Arjun was in Hrishikesh…because Neil knew …Sam out of emotions would blurt the truth out to Radhika…Sam took Radhika to her room… ‘’Chashni…please calm down I have messaged Arjun he will contact us after reaching Mumbai’’

Radhika; ‘’But why is his no..not reachable…this is all because of me….Sam everybody is angry at me can you please talk to them…’’ Sam nodded and left. Radhika went to Dadaji’s room…who turned away looking at her … Radhika went and kept her head in his lap.. ‘’Dadaji do you hate me too’’

Dadaji ; ‘’I never expected you to be so bitter…did you even try to get into his shoes…he had no one in the same of family….your sister left her husband’s house…just because his brother did wrong with you…what is the fault of that little girl…you tend to go over board for people you love…’’

Radhika; ‘’But he knew he was doing wrong’’

Dadaji; ‘’You were also wrong in your family’s eyes …did we disown you…no whatever it was we still cared for you…when you came back we accepted you with open arms… but what did you do… you insulted him…you insulted his feelings for you…you went overboard for Sam whom you knew just for few months… if he unconditionally loved and trusted his sister what was wrong in that…he wanted to leave darkness and looked at you to hold his hand and take him to light but what did you do…you pushed him again into the darkness…Radhika lucky are people who find true love…and you turned it down… he could have forced you….you know what he is capable off but he did not he just stood infront of like a guilty convict asking for your forgiveness… and you crushed his heart…you cannot be my choti….now please leave me alone’’ Radhika quietly walked out of the room and Dadaji smiled mischievously….his POV ‘what a speech’

Radhika went back to her room and hid herself in the pillow…she was crying as if someone beloved died…Radhika whispered between her sobs ; ‘ Sir I am sorry….please come back … I cannot live without you…’ Arjun suddenly woke up from his slumber… ; ‘Radhika…. are you fine…’ he just got up and stood at the window…looking at the clouded sky…it was still time was morning… he was searching was his sunshine….and waiting for her to come to him.

Precap; Radhika – Arjun reconcile… love Birds anxious to meet friends and family act villan 😉

Credit to: Gauri

99 comments

  1. ammu

    Di…you are really a princess of letters wearing a crown of creativity.Just mindblowing..waiting for the next one..may god bless you…

  2. abhigya

    Awesome Di u rocked it can’t express my feelings it just beyond words …….love you Di .when will u post do waiting for it

  3. Suga

    |Registered Member

    Darling sissy 😀 😀 😀 this s really a emotional fun :D:D 😀 nia drama ardhika moments cute 😀 dhadha ji plan he s really master mind 😀 😀 arjun confession awesome 😀 😀 Neil pulling arjun’s cheeks he he he superbbbbbbbb 😀 😀 always loved to tease angry birds ha ha ha 😀 😀 teji n nia good one 😀 😀 dhadha ji speech amazing one after praising himself s awesome one 😀 😀 😀 finally ardhika gonna unit 😀 😀 😀 yipeeeeeeeee 😀 😀 loved it 😀 love u 😀

  4. Supriya.

    Hii glycerin…you know I loved it….no word on this earth can help me to explain how happy I m right now……marvelous….. outstanding….. fantastic….. Superb….all the good words of dictionary……
    Loved the very first scene….I m having goosebumps here…..God he z so hot….she z bloomed rose who turns red every second when he comes closer….
    Radhika nd Sam frdship….. muaaaaaaaah for that…..hats off to you dear…..very well narrated……loved it from the bottom of my heart…..
    ARjun m really feeling bad for him……I know he did many mistakes but if we ask forgiveness truthfully every mistake can be forgiven…ppl come to pray in church but don’t see the confession box…..they keep alot in their hearts and don’t move on just keep holding grudges…… I don’t know y they trouble themselves so much……
    Today I didn’t like radhika…….agreed arjun did wrong….very wrong….. But he did everything under the influence of nandini and how was he wrong in loving someone or trusting someone blindly……He got enough punishment…… Now she shouldn’t have done that insult part……
    Even if he was under nandu ka influence that time…..did he ever hurt or tried getting intimate with radhika…… No he respected her dignity…… Though no one could have stopped him from showing his rights on her but still he never did anything against her Will…..
    I never thought a man like arjun will give up and someone like Neil would pacify him…..Neil calling arjun baby that was so hilarious……
    Overall a masterpiece…… you nailed it baby…….I love the fact that you are always true to your words……that’s the most amazing thing about you di…….srsly despite of having such a busy schedule you always keep your words……that’s reason you are everyone’s favourite……. But I love you more…….let’s give you some different compliment…… You are the crown of TU…….without you TU z worthless…… I mean it di…..
    Now few questions…..
    1)you mentioned in your last reply to my comment that saral in the next one…..so did you eat him up?…..
    2)z the remarriage plan still on?…..frankly make it a private affair…..I don’t want to c the remarriage track di……if you have any such thoughts than please a closeknit ceremony……
    3)when will this ppl head back to Mumbai?….
    4)Di do you have some more twist going on in your awsme brains?…..
    5)will anuj try to take away radhika from arjun?….
    6)When z nesam wedding track?….
    7)you only keep on doing others wedding….. when will I get the chance to dance in your wedding?
    8)z the end near?
    Chalo need to sleep now….will catch you later….once again big round of applause for this one….. Love you……muaaaaaaaah……. Tc?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks Darling 🙂 now your answers 🙂 I didn’t eat up Saral…..coming up next is Saral 🙂 don’t know but court ship yes 🙂 🙂 next update they will head back to Mumbai 🙂 twistt yes many 🙂 Anuj nope….but he will create issues 🙂 Nesam wedding in still has time 🙂 No comments for question no. 7 😛 nope still time for end 🙂 loads of love sweet hrt stay blessed 🙂

  5. shreya

    Just loved it yaar just loved it …………it was awesome socially ankush n dadaji’s part …….thank god everything is going to be normal
    ……….really sorry dear couldn’t wish you on ur bday so happy happy wala happy birthday bady ………live longest life ………be always happiest person …….enjoy even lightest movement of life …….but dont forget to write buddy ……..n don’t u think sat or sun is toooooooooooooo early ……..plz be soon lods of love

    • Gauri

      Thanks for the wishes Shreya and no problem … no need for sorry 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love you 🙂

  6. dipika

    Gauri means really what r you darling..a magic… sach me…This episode was best… i can say that it was bestest of best..no one could write ever such beautiful epi but you…m spellbound for minute when it ends…you just pick the real essence of every character from mmz n used it soooo well…Dadaji stole the show today..wish i too had dadaji like him..he is coolest one….Arjun speech touched my heart.. you write so beautiful that the pain of him felt that its coming from me…you write from your heart.. after all the rads hit worried n she sobbed n arjun felt her sobbing in hotel was marvelous… n from precap i guess this ff is ending soon..pls don’t end it..i will cry like anything..can’t evn think of without reading ur stories…. pls don’t end it na my smll reqst.. sach me i just really want to me you..i never been so crazy abt any writer this much…may god fulfill my wish one day..n i can meet you n hug you tight…enough of my blabbering… Loads n millions n enifinity love to u…take care..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dipika 🙂 you made my day 🙂 even I want to meet you…and I have a firm belief that we will some day for sure 🙂 nope its not ending 🙂 now Arjun Radhika will do everthing to meet each other but family and friends will tease them and pull pranks on them and will irritate them to the core 🙂 🙂 Million hugs for you stay blessed 🙂

  7. Sammy

    |Registered Member

    Now di don’t tell me in this beautiful morning that you are going to end it soon ..chappy was amazing ..oh god I was crying with arjun …ankush is awesome ..teji and nia so cute iam in love with all of them ..thanks for amazing chappy di
    A song dedicated to this chapter from my side ;- bol do na Zara dil me Jo hai chipa main kisi se kahunga nahi 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Sammy I am not ending it ….there is lot more 🙂 thanks for the amazing song dedication 🙂 love you darling stay blessed 🙂

  8. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Excellent excellent excellent… What else gauri….. U nailed it simply… It was a very cool and emotional filled episode. I loved Neil annual n Dadaji plan. Perfect plan to make her follow him. The best episode.

  9. priya

    This was splendid episode…u made me cry too..the emotions and their roles …the way u portrayed was outstanding..really wonderful episode..u deserve the best writer award..super episode…u nailed it out..don’t end this soon..pls nd teji nd Nia very good …thank you for listening me…difficult to wait till Saturday?

    • Gauri

      Thanks Priya 🙂 I got my award with your words 🙂 I am not ending it still more to come 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love u 🙂

  10. RituM

    |Registered Member

    hmmmm…….it had everything……. guilt, anger, love, forgivness, hope, realization…..m happy…..u make this story beautiful with all balanced emotions!!

  11. Naaga

    Ahhhhhh……Brilliant Gauri, Dadajis (Gauri) master plan work-out very well ?

    Thank u soo much Gauri ☺

  12. Rg2015

    |Registered Member

    Hi gauri. How r u? Am good. Thanks to ur ff my day was a fantastic one. But then i feel very bad for arjun today. Yes gauri u made me very emotional today. I read this chapprer more 5 or 6 times. But i couldn’t bear rads anger towards arjun. Wow she came off as a fiesty one today. Unlike herself. Rads was never tat. I did cry in d end today. As much as i felt rads anger was justified and tat after bearing so much hurt anger humiliation, scorn and soo much pain it was expected…. It sonewhr left me with a feeling of her being a bit cruel. Am not sure. I did feel she was entiteled to tat kind of angst. But still in d end my pity lies with arjun for bearing her hateful and scornful words. Never thot i had say this or admit this. But yes rads words to him made me cry. Its true tat d person whom u love the most hurts d most.
    The romance part though i felt was very little was beautifully described. I enjoyed d chipkali scene all over again. It was totally a treat. I wished to have seen more chemistry… Pls gauri let them romance more…????… Now for few questions
    1) wat did mean by d family turning d villian? I mean from d precap.
    2) where is saral wat happened to him he was suppose d create a rukus right?
    3) will rads join bird song_?
    4) will she go home with her arjun sir?
    5) will they have more romance btw them
    ?. I really hope soo.
    6) wil anuj try to hurt rads or come between them?
    7) now tat both have confessed and done away with d misunderstandings will they have heart to heart talk abt d past their
    present and future. I personally felt tat in
    original series tat particular hrt to hrt talk btw them were missing. They dint have time for it. Gauri will u plz potray tat. I
    really feel rads arjun and sam all require
    it… Wat do u feel?
    8) will rads start to trust arjun?
    9) will she ask him to put d mangalsutr around her neck again… No i dont mean remarriage… I mean just whn tgey r in
    private he can make her wear it..
    10) will she ask him when he fell for het? Am very curious abt tat answer. I want him to repeat the question to her…
    Oops gauri i tgink in my excitement i gave
    u bit toooo much suggestionsm sorry yaar.
    Am not trying to interfere in ur creativity. Am just telling u thoz scenes which i could c.. Basically i couldn’t get enough of them… And ur story is dream come true for me.
    I loved dadajis fantastic idea. Neil calling arjun was too gud. Ankush was grt. Samrads patch was awesome. Nia teji pairing was grt… Chipkali scene was mindblowing. In short am in love with ur ff.

    Gauri u r an exceptional writer. U r tooooo gud. Awesome. U r d best. Thanking for giving us oodles of ardhika in various forms … U r truly fantastic. Ur ffs have been an extention of my favorite story . plus dpo gave me another rads to love. Pls never stop writing. Pls dont end this one… Pls pls. Am not sure i can wait till sat or sunday. Pls undate soon. Once again thankd for making my day veautiful. You r amazing. Stay blessedly happy. Cheers.

    • Gauri

      Hi Rg am good dear 🙂 a big thanks for the amazing comment 🙂 If you felt Arjun’s pain…and hated Radhika’s attitude then yes I feel I am successful 🙂 family turning Villan means now the love birds will look for all the moments to spend together…but their family and friends will tease them and pull their led :p Saral next….I was so emotional writing the pain that cldn’t think of writing nasty 🙂 yes she will join BS 🙂 Nope they will have a proper court ship… a heart to heart talk to know each other better before going forward 🙂 yup… both the couples will have a proper courtship 🙂 yes she will but slowly 🙂 havent thought on mangalsutra part 🙂 yes and ARjun will confess his heart when and how 🙂 wait for the updates 🙂 thanks for making each chapter so beautiful loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  13. S.v

    |Registered Member

    Wooooo that was somethibg which is unexplainable. Didi u always make me blush. Second time I.m blushing bcause of u thats not fair di..and this update u made it di . I loved it. Finally arjun and radhika are gonna join hands soon and im jumping as aap ko patha nahi ki mein kitne kush hoon. And dadaji is the master of all the plans. Wow and finally radand sasam are back to their friendship and I was hurt when radhika busrt out her heart and hurted arjun but now im jumping that ardhika is gonna be back soon happily. Loved it soo much di . Love u lods . U r the hero. Love u di and ur words. Take care di and bear hugs and kisses. Muuhhhaaa.

    Precap omg omg omg didid wish saturday comes soon. I cannot wait more. Didi update soon didi and dpo also.

    • Gauri

      OMG why are you blushing cutie pie…did you imagine hugging Arjun instead of Radhika 😛 jokes apart thanks SV for such a beautiful comment 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  14. desi gal

    I really refreshed this websit 15 times since …..bcoz i didnt find any update on this chappy….atkast i got..and its jus mind blowing awesome

  15. Rossy

    Superb,amazing…kya kiya tune…m gone….teji n nia…aweeee….m thinking what to say u now…i can’t say anything other than just hope ur wish get fulfilled n u promoted…so I can get my treat…when will jiju come??

    • Gauri

      Rosie darling I am happy without so called jiju….kyun meri Band banjane par tuli ho 😛 thanks a ton dear for the amazing comment love you 🙂

  16. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Di..This episode is super se uper wala episode yaar..?Nia prank,Ankush acting,Dadaji supporting Ankush,RadSam reconcile,the outburst of Radhika,ArNeil bonding,finally the drama of Dadaji(Kya acting karte hain yaar)..Dadaji is one of my favorites..?Totally a masterpiece again..Jaadoo kar diya Abha di..Yeh trophy aapke liye..?Stay blessed and lots of love..❤?

  17. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    Wow, Gauri u are an extraordinary being, never though I will read something so beautiful like this. U have brought all the emotions alive with your words that I felt them too. All the characters and their words all the emotions and reactions were perfectly narrated. Thank u for this story and for this chapter. Lots and lots of hugs and kisses am sending u, God bless u ????

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Gianna 🙂 I am sending you million hugs and kisses for this amazing comment 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  18. sreee

    very emotionally beautiful epi di…..atlast am happy that neil is on arjuns side….yippeeeee….and aradhika r going to b one soo…wow really a good news..di ankush was so right no one could write dialogues like u…pattaka…every single word was… i loved arjun and malas bond….so sweet…wish really arjun has a family like that…..vil he have that di….and sam was so a good frnd ..loved her today…hmm teju and nia…good cimbination…really i felt this epi was so beautifully balanced….u know di probably i was one of first to red ur ff today…when i read the time ws like 12:15 midnight…..greedy to read ur ff….but had mom near …she was busy doing her work…and me mine(lol…. )so couldnt comment if i would have did na then surely she woud have spanked me….lol…ur words so beautiful as always di…love u for that amazing gift…muahhh…when is dpo di? take cre…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Sreee 🙂 happy that you liked it :)more ArNeil bond to come 🙂 hope you will like that 🙂 stay blessed darling love you 🙂

  19. Bhabya

    Di what is this? …I didn’t expected this type of episode….?so emotional n so nice?..superb episode Di. ..love u

  20. Ritu

    this was a masterpiece.. a complete and perfect movie…for the first time I feel like punching rads hard after seeing Arjun’s pain.. he is someone so beautiful…ur line that even sky couldn’t bear Arjun’s pain touched my heart…Sam that poor soul got so much pain…Ankush Neil Dadaji. they are jst amazing… precap sounds superb…Nia for Teji..yeah m jumping in happiness..both are equally mad… Gauri u r one of the most amazing person I have ever met..I really wish to abduct u and tied u down with me for eternity..hehe…our jiju would be so lucky to have u… 🙂 😉

    • Gauri

      Thanks Ritu 🙂 I am speechless … I don’t have words to Thank you sweety 🙂 love you stay bless 🙂

  21. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    its simply superb !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my eyes filled with tears hearing Arjun…….dadaji is simply superb !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  22. subha

    mind blowing episode………precap interesting……..thanks for updating …….last neil,arjun part super,.( un child rempa rempa rempa lucky becasue daily story solli thoonga vaipai—-future la ) ur amazing writer…… one story to another story tottally different …….eagerly waiting next one..pls pls pls pls update soon……tc

  23. happy

    oh god……its amazing dr…………thank you so so so so so so much…………..i am reading it again and again……….i cant control myself……….its amazing dr……………hw r u………………thank u so so much for filling happiness in my life……….thanks dr…….

  24. Chandan

    Nice one Gauri…make Arjun’s wish come true…holding their baby in radhikas arms n he feeling complete…having his family…you are very good at emotions…keep rocking… Tc

  25. aarathi

    hi gauri………ur amazing yar……always im falling for marquez novels becoz they have the emotions and love at another level…….but for the first time im addicted to a fanfiction……….lot of love,prayers and blessings my dear……..keep it up always………nd waiting for next update……….

  26. Jessie

    Gauri di… bear hugs…u knw I found tears forming1 while reading Rads -Arjun part.. though u love a prsn if he/she doesn’t stand for u at d ri8 moment n make u feel alone is jus hell.. Rads is pointing d ri8 one.. though she loves him d fear of wat if again he leaves me alone is pulling her back…Absolutely fantastic.. Arjun proved his best.. Rads herself isn’t aware wat will keep her happy..its nice 2 see her dadaji knows it..Neil jus broke d sensitive bubble of Arjun’s with one sentence lol.. Ardhika moments at d beginning ???????? Dadaji…dadaji… chumeshwari performance… his script s jus brilliant.. jus thought why Arjun dint say a word tat he is d main reason.. its high time Arjun bitwa shld learn 2 stand up.. lol… lizards n nia Omg!!! Neil s coooolll.. rads cry n plead to come back is felt by Arjun in hotel…????? precap is all interesting…all excited 4 nxt chappy… n one doubt out of curiosity… when n will Arjun stand for her or will answer for those accusations n insults if situation arise..Rads point so correct..tats y… TC n loads of love…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Jessie 🙂 yes Arjun will now stand up for Radhika you will know that in future updates a big hug and loads of love for you stay blessed 🙂

  27. priya

    awesome episode diiiiiiiiiii …………………… loved it to the core …………………. super duper exited for nxt one………………….. love you loads ………and belated happy birthday dii

  28. Aastha

    Sorry Di for being late…..this chp is awesome funny and emotional
    Loved Dada Ji…he is mastermind,… what a script writer. !!!! and what would all family members done without him…..
    Arjun all emotional…he is hurt badly
    Radhika is ironic one side loves Arjun madly and other side doesn’t want him by her side
    OH !!!! Precap. is so Interesting couldn’t wait…. please post fastly Di
    Love you Di TC 🙂 🙂 🙂
    And Di I am from Panipat (Haryana)
    and in grey jacket in my DP
    🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Aastha 🙂 send a frnd request hope I have added the right one 🙂 love u

  29. Nupur

    Hi Gauri di, woah! Today’s chapter was just superb!
    M reading the previous chapters at the moment but can u please tell me the names of d ffs that u write…it’ll surely help a newcomer like me.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Nupur 🙂 I am writing 2 currently Destiny Passion Obsession and Married by fate 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  30. Pankh

    Gauri Saastaang Dhandwat Pranam 🙂 for this one.. I dont have more words to say. Kung fu panda hug..

  31. Umama

    Awesome like always.And what a dadaji?Update asap..Sorry fr late.And Eid Mubarak,apu..

  32. Roma

    Gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling. …it’s superbbbbb awesome., marvellous episode. ..loved the way dadaji planned everything. ..ankush did very well. …Sam n rads unite whain…good job. …feeling so bad for arjun…poor him….precap is very interesting n exciting. ..keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. Muaaaaahhhhhh

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