MMZ- Married by Fate- Chapter 18

Hi Friends …apologies as I am late today and also because this will be a short one…please bear with me…I am badly stuck these days…will give a longer update next that’s a promise… love you all 🙂

Chapter 18

Radhika was left shocked with Arjun’s move…she was standing there like a stone…. ‘how can he do that…Arjun Sir was never this kind of a man’…. Neil said something but Radhika did not respond…Neil held her tightly and shook her violently…Radhika came back to her senses and cried…Neil hugged her …for Radhika Neil this hug was just pure care but for Sam who witnessed it was a moment between 2 people who loved who loved each other deeply

Arjun after reaching his house cursed himself… ‘’Arjun Mehra…why you had to behave like a total jerk….she is your wife and she has some dignity…you insulted her….you should apologize ….’’ But his other side strongly opposed… ‘’Atleast you know she loves you… may be for a second but she did respond’’ Arjun smiled…but he again hid is face in his palms…. ‘’she never deserved this kind of behaviour.. I will apolozise …I insulted her…and should aplogize’’

Sam was standing near the window recalling all the events….Radhika thanking Neil …Neil’s continuous support for Radhika…their hug in the parking….Manya brought Sam coffee… ‘’You look upset’’

Sam; ‘’No just worried’’

Manya; ‘’Why??? BS is doing good….Mom has started normalizing… I know it will take time for her to accept dad back.. so just chill’’

Sam; ‘’I worried that I might lose Neil forever’’

Manya’s ears were alert now… ‘’What about him’’

Sam; ‘’I think he loves Radhika…. All my life I had my true love right infront of me yet I never realized now when I want him desperately….he seems have forgotten me completely’’

Manya smirked… her POV; ‘Stupid….he is angry …but I will use this in my favour’’

Manya in sugar coated voice; ‘’Sammy you should rest we will think about it later’’

Radhika tried sleeping but all she could remember was Arjun’s lips against hers…she cursed herself for responding….she never wanted to…but her heart gave up…that feeling was a bliss…radhika groaned in frustration…and left the bed….she went to the terreace to get some air…Radhika folded her arms to her chest and took a deep breath..when she herad Neil; ‘’Couldn’t sleep ??? Me too….Love!…. thy name misery’’

Radhika; ‘’Its nothing like that’’

Neil; ‘’you love him….and you responded…am I right’’

Radhika replied irritated; ‘’Why are you talking about it’’

Neil; ‘’because you tortured me that day about Sam…’’ Radhika frowned and Neil chuckled; ‘’jokes apart….because I can open my heart to you and you to me’’

Radhika; ‘’Neil….peoplea re poiting fingers at you now…they doubt our relationship..I think I should move out’’

Neil; ‘’And confirm their doubt…dumb…Chashni…who are these people …99%… we don’t even know them…their existence dosen’t matter to us …they why their lame words would…chill….so what say I will prepare coffee…because neither you will sleep nor I’’ radhika smiled and Neil went to get coffee for both.

Radhika reached her office…and was welcomed with applauding colleagues ,flowers and best wishes….she smiled and thanked them…Anuj watched her…she thanked everyone personally….Anuj kept his palm on his chest…he felt the thudding of his heart…Radhika was able to make his heart skip a beat…Bonnie had tears in her eyes when she watched Anuj eyeing Radhika…. She loved him…and was in no mood of losing him…she decided to call Arjun…

Arjun; ‘’Bonnie….I have nothing for you…’’

Bonnie; ‘’Not for me…but for your precious wife…if you love her…take her far from Anuj…he is falling for her every second…be quick Arjun you might just lose the most precious possession of your life’’

Arjun banged his phone…he had to meet Radhika today by will or by force….

Hrishikeash

Mala was still not able to understand dadaji’s plan… she was restless…she couldn’t control her anxiety and went to him… ‘’Papaji Choti is not ready to hear a single word about Arjun..how will she agree’’

Dadaji ; ‘’Mala when we tend to hide our feelings…we mask it with violent outburst…this is what Choti is doing….I will make her pour all her anger on Arjun…and Arjun will speak everything he wants to but is not able to do it…do one thing call Sam and Neil too’’

Mala nodded and left.. She dialled Arjun….who answered immediately; ‘’How are you ma’’

Mala; ‘’Arjun…we have function for Riddhima’s daughter… I want you to come down….can you keep this small request ?’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’You accepted me as a family…I can never refuse you I will come…’’ Mala happily disconnected.

Samudra

Rdhika was worried about Neil…he loved Sam but wasn’t ready to confess….she kept playing with her pen and then smiled when a brilliant idea strike her head.. ; ‘’Neil you are so gone’’…She was still thinking when Chirag tapped her desk… ‘’Whom areyou thinking about…Arjun or Anuj…its just a letter difference…looks like you have some charm that captures the powerful one’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’This is because I have talent…and I don’t steal others hard work or credit…don’t worry…since you are working with me….I might dust a little talent on you too’’

Chirag; ‘’Don’t fly too high girl…I might chop you feathers’’

Radhika stood straight infornt of him challenging him; ‘’For that you need to reach the altitude I am flying at … which looks little difficult for you … you know why because I don’t feed on others hard work or as you said I have the charm to capture the powerful ones…so beware even if I don’t they might chop your feathers’’ Radhika walked off leaving Chirag speechless…she was not the same girl anymore…she missed her old self….the positive one…but she missed someone else more than anything….

Radhika called Prerna ; ‘’Aunty…can we talk…its about Neil’’

Prerna; ‘’What about him’’

Radhika; ‘’Sam loves him ….she proposed but he refused…I need your help to reconcile them’’

Prerna was quite for sometime; ‘’What if Sam again breaks his heart…Neil will never be ale to cope up’’

Radhika; ‘’Aunty…I will never let such situation come…Neil will only commit if Sam is sure about her feelings’’

Prerna smiled; ‘’You still care for Sam’’

Radhika; ‘’No aunty…not for Sam… I care for Neil….this is only for him…ok I will leave early and meet you at your office’’ Radhika asked Anuj for half day off and he readily agreed…she left Neil a message tha she was leaving early…But what she didn’t expect was encounter with Arjun…standing just outside her office campus…she tried walking pass him but he blocked her way; ‘’I have been waiting for you since 10:00 AM’’

Radhika POV; ‘Why do I feel nice hearing that’…she brushed her thoughts aside and replied.. ‘’I never asked you…now excuse me as I have something important to do’’

Arjun held her hand; ‘’I need just 10 min….please’’ Radhika looked at his pleading eyes and melted…she took the passenger seat and Arjun smiled….he quickly got in and drove off…Arjun parked outside a well known restaurant …held the door for her…she stepped out and walked…all the while he kept staring at her and she never looked at him….once inside they were taken to a reserved table … it was kind of private with a semicircular sitting arrangement…Radhika’s heart flipped…Arjun gestured her to sit…she obliged and Arjun locked her to the corner….as there was a single exit from the table…he turned and stared at her; ‘’I am sorry…for what I did yesterday…you never deserved that’’

Radhika; ‘’Anything else???’’

Arjun smirked; ‘’A lot…come back home…I miss you’’

Radhika; ‘’I think I answered that before…but will do it again…that was never my home…I am not coming back’’

Arjun moved closer…making her squeeze in the corner….he leaned and kissed her cheek…; ‘’Don’t make me do things in a twisted manner’’

Radhika; ‘’I am not scared…and please move back’’

Arjun closed his eyes and plated one more kiss on her cheek…Radhika kept her palms in between to push him..but Arjun used his strength to overcome that…he watched the curling of her fingers…he smirked and spoke; ‘’do you remember how I got you framed in Maybelline account…what if I harm Neil the same way’’

Radhika looked at him with a shocked expression; ‘’Why??’’

Arjun; ‘’because he took what I want…and I will take it back’’

Radhika was angry; ‘’What do you want…?’’

Arjun; ‘’A dinner date with you…and one complete night….you can do that much for your beloved Neil’’

Radhika couldn’t believed what he just said; ‘’NO!!!!’’

Arjun; ‘’Radhika I don’t want anyone hurt…Neil is Prerna aunty’s only son…think’’

Radhika smirked; ‘’I thought you were sorry …fine…You are right Sir…I will do that for my Beloved Neil…please message me the date and time…now excuse me’’ She got up to leave…but Arjun pulled her in a hug and pecked her forehead… ‘’someday you will know how much I love you’’ Radhika looked straight into his eyes…his face his expressions were calm and soft…ARjun tugged her hair strands lovingly behind her ear and caressed her face… ; ‘’My Radhika had the heart to forgive even the worst…please bring her back’’

Radhika whispered; ‘’I tried keeping that Radhika alive….but the people whom she loved the most gave her a slow painful death’’

Arjun Radhika shared a painful eyelock…both had longing for each other…Arjun wanted Radhika to confess her feelings… Radhika wanted Arjun to prove he loved her and he is a changed man…Arjun without a word hugged her…Radhika blinked and stood in his arms for a minute before pushing him and running out of that place…

Bird Song

Manya watched Neil across the glass wall…his movements…while working or during the break,,,the way he interacted with colleagues and his dimpled smile…Manya adjusted her short dress to so as to flaunt her body perfectly…she entered his cabin ; ‘’Hi Handsome… busy???’’

Neil studied her posture and understood ; ‘’No kiddo…come in’’
Manya got irritated at word kiddo…but smiled; ‘’How about a coffee’’ She asked sitting on his table crossing her legs…Neil averted his eyes and got up moving to nearby book shelf……Manya got up and stood behind him….she took a grand tour of Neil’s physic and placed her palm on his back…moving and feeling him up…she softly spoke; ‘’Not every girlis as heartless as Sam you should move on …you should be be someone who loves you…someone like me’’

Neil clenched his jaw turned around and moved close to Manya making her retreat….she collided with the table and Neil locked her…Manya blushed thinking her plan worked…Neil gave her a hateful glare; ‘’ I will be with someone who has a beautiful heart and loves me unconditionally … but it will never be you….you are a trash….a girl who cannot be faithful to her own blood will never be faithful to me…get lost!!’’ Neil had so much hate that Manya jumped and quickly moved out of his cabin…Neil dialled his mother; ‘’Mom I am ready for marriage’’

Prerna disconnected and turned to Radhhika; ‘’He is ready to marry any girl of my choice’’

Radhika; ‘’SO lets being the game…first one is Saloni…she is an actress….she will do what we tell her…unless she goes gaga over Neil’’

Prerna laughed; ‘’Are you ready with a fake Mom too…and ask Teji to Drop the bomb on Sam’’

Radhika nodded and they shared a laugh…Prerna asked Neil to come home as a girl and her family were visiting them…Neil was shocked….he didn’t expect this so soon…but since he committed this to his mom he left

Teji watched him leave…and went to Sam on pretext of asking something…he knew she will direct him to Neil…; ‘’Sam… client needs better punch line’’

Sam; ‘’Go to Neil…this is his job’’

Teji; ‘’He is not in office …he left for the day’’

Sam frowned ; ‘’So soon…all good’’

Teji pretended all shocked; ‘’Are you kidding ???? Don’t tell me that….how can hide such a big thing from his best friend’’

Sam; ‘’Cut the crap’’

Teji all happy; ‘’Neil might get engaged today…or may be not depends if he likes the girl he is about to meet’’

Sam’s heart sank ….after Teji left she crashed on the floor…her legs were trembling…her body was shaking with fear of losing Neil…Arjun walked in and saw her in a venerable state…he helped her up but she fell again; ‘’Arjun …Neil decided to marry…he will never come back to me…I will die’’

Arjun gave her a glass of water and rubbed her palm…she was cold…Arjun spoke; ‘’Look at me Sam’’ She obliged… ‘’Neil said yes for marriage….he is not married yet and till he is not married …you have hope..don’t give up…fight…promise me you will’’

Sam just nodded.

Neil’s house

Neil entered his house to find 4 women giggling and talking…he looked at Radhika…who got up and dragged him; ‘’Saloni he is Neil..and Neil she is Saloni’’ they greeted each other and as per Radhika’s instruction girl…licked her lips looking at Neil…he froze…he got goose bumps over his skin…but he just smiled.

Prerna; ‘’I think they should talk alone’’ Neil was shit scared…Radhika escorted Saloni to the Terrace aand asked Neil to go…he held radhika’s hand tight; ‘’Please come Chashni… I am scared to be alone with her…she going to eat me’’

Radhika; ‘’don’t act now…go…I will be here’’ Neil gulped in fear like a sacrificial lamb and slowly went to the terrace…radhika was waiting for the drama….after 10 min Neil cam running down…falling and trying to gather himself…he was breathing heavily …Radhika; ‘’Neil!! You like her so much’’

Neil; ‘’Chashni…she tried to molest me…she tried to kiss me forcefully’’ Neil was talking like a kid who just saw a white cockroach…

Radhika tried controlling her laughter; ‘’that means you like each other…good let me inform the good news to every one’’ Radhika turned to leave but Neil caught her hand; ‘’I will murder you…you are having fun at my expense’’ He walked angrily towards the hall…Saloni gave Radhika a hifi

Neil refused Saloni in the most polite manner…and Saloni made an act…crying vigorously about her broken heart…Radhika and Prerna had a gala time looking at Neil’s shocked expressions…which did not leave him for a day.

Next day Radhika got a parcel with a letter… ‘Tomorrow-Paradise Worli…Sharp at 8:00 PM…I bought a dress for you want you to wear that’ Only yours Arjun… Radhika checked the dress it was a backless green gown with earrings and shoes…she looked at the gown and cursed… ‘Shameless’

Prcap; The dinner date…Sam’s proposes and threaten Neil…Anuj proposes Radhika

Credit to: Gauri

88 comments

  1. Rosie

    Arjun repent n again doing shameless thing…lol….today show stealer raneil…omg that reaction when he met Saloni….m still laughing…anuj propose…kya hoga….chalo tc…gud nt

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rosie 🙂 kua karen ladka easily sudharne wala nai hai 😛 loads of love 🙂 stay blessed

  2. Aastha

    diiiiiiiiiiiiiii I loved it……………….Neil was very funny………………so Rads has feelings buried in her towards Arjun…………………..loved Neil’s answer to Manya…………………….Arjun is really shameless…………………….excited for the next update……………….love u…………….TC…………..sorry as my computer was not working I couldn’t comment on DPO…….but I had read it…………..it’s breathtaking……………

  3. Jessie

    Gauri… Gauri…. u are d best.. its not short..its sweeet n Neil made it sweeetest.
    Rofl rofl… I just read d part again n again n enjoyed.. why don’t Rads try a terrific plan.for Arjun too..??wat say… Rads is all naughty 2 execute this wit Neil.. Hmmm.. Arjun never leaves one single chance n creates one of his own too..Awww.. ???????? waiting 4 next update.. dadaji’s plan n Arjun’s reaction 4 Anuj proposal ..I liked Rads snapping tat Chirag… Take care of ur health also .. Love u loads…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Jessie, glad to see you back 🙂 Rads might try something on Arjun but later 🙂 loads of love 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  4. Brin

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    Awesome episode, eagerly waiting for the next update, your story has magic your alway nailing it, well done. 🙂

  5. S.v

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    Didi missed your update di. Now happy now. Loved it a lot. I’m jumping and my family has confirmed that i have gone mad. Arjun wow nice but yuck. He wanted to apologies Radhika but was also happy for that kiss??
    Neil was made a dummy by radhika loved the part of girl seeing. Lol and the way he ran and speaking to Radhika . Loved it and bonnie felt bad for her the first time. But wish her heart is answered. Radhika a girl with super powers and dadaji and his ideas always works. Loved it. SAm oh my gosh wish she comes to know about the drama before she cries lot. Do super di .Precap was something which is making me jump too. Sam threating Neil and Ardhika’s dream date wow di pls update soon.

    Love you di and your words. Bear my love , Hugs and infinite kisses. Love you lods di

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton SV 🙂 Dadaji will bring them closein the funniest way possible 🙂 tc cutie pie 🙂 love you

  6. Shree

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    Di!! Too good!! Omg!! First time I loved Bonnie.. She is selfish.. But did something good.. Arjun toh gone… Neil be the sweetest.. so selfless, so loveable .. Why do you hurt the kid so much? Apology? Thatvwas not one … This guy is crazy.. Has his own ways.. Sam really did freak out.. Wow.. Saloni.. Loved her.. Hahahahaha white cockroach… I’ve seen it only once and I did psych the hell out.. Love the precap.. Post soon di

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Shree darling 🙂 i love your DP 🙂 my sister saw a white cockroach when we were in school…she reacted as she saw a spaceship 😛 lol miss those days 🙂 tc love u

  7. suga

    Cutieeeee sissy its adorable 😀 😀 thanks to gods in heaven 😀 😀 v got such a beautiful writer 😀 😀 all part superbbbbbbbb 😀 Neil part ha ha ha was laughing like mad 😀 😀 rads idea worked 😀 😀 aradhika part full of 2 pure soul love 😀 one special hug for dat 😀 😀 😀 really lived dat moment 😀 awesome darling sissy 😀 😀 loved it 😀 arjun s right Sam should not loose hope 🙂 manya got nicely from Neil dats superbbbbbbbb 😀

  8. dipika

    Awsome awsome awsome awsomeeeee..each n every incident is flawless yarr…the way rads answered chirag. omg u stole my heart for the line that says u have to reach to that altitude for that.. i read it couple if times.. hatss off..n old rads is bck..wow good to see her mischievous… Aradhika moment again you makes me shiver.. haha..m dying to see them together.. n nesam..sam’s reaction aftr hearing abt neil’s marriage.. beautifully explained… wht??? anuj going to propose rads. ye to gaya kam se..pitane wala hai bahot…excited as anything.. love you darling. tc

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton darling 🙂 love you Dipika for this mindblowing comment 🙂 hope u enjoy their dinner date 🙂 Anuj will be completely destroyed now 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂 😀

  9. shreya

    Oh god I had a fun reading it……….loved it Neil ‘s situation …….radz painful eye lock with Arjun
    Everything was osum yaar …….hi is anuj going to help radz n arj or a trouble for the ……..I kn it was short but u to have a life ……….so plz overcome your prob n next time biggggg one plz ……love lods take care n when you are coming …..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Shreya 🙂 Anuj is a trouble 🙂 I will try to give a longer update next time 🙂 loads of love 🙂 stay blessed 😀

  10. Ritu

    dear this was a masterpiece..even after having a hectic schedule u managed to write such an amazing chapter..loved each part…raneil superb..and that girl and neil mindblowing…finally the much awaited dinner date..somehow I love the shameless Arjun 😉 …eagerly waiting for that…anuj proposed rads…omg god save him..waiting for nxt…love u…take care. gud night..

  11. Supriya

    Hii di….I missed your morning updates so much….it’s like first thing I use to do after getting up was reading your updates….. I m not complaining di I know you r very busy nd you get dead tired after the exhausting day…I was really excited to read this one nd the wait doubled my excitement but that does not mean you can keep me hanging whole day…..the time you texted me stating that you posted I kept on checking with Tu after one one second….yup my curiosity nd excitement both was fueled becoz of this wait….that does not mean m happy with it…..but no apologies between us….you are special to me nd I don’t accept apologies from special ppl of my life…..abt the epi…..di you are a true genius…. I have read it for almost 20 times from the time you texted me that it z updated…..I loved it to the core di….m on the seventh heaven after reading this one…..someone pull me to the earth….you know what I feel I can live without oxygen but can’t bear you not updating…..
    Manya oh god this girl I feel to rip her hair from her scalp….loved the way Neil answered her….so true if you can’t remain faithful to your own blood than you can’t remain faithful to anyone….. I love Arjun’s impossible nature….so now he z feeling sorry for that forceful kiss…..Good he apologized…..
    Di why z this anuj sneaking around radhika I don’t like this at all…y do ppl run after things that belong to others…..I mean he knows radhika z Arjun’s wife but still he z eyeing a married woman….how disgusting …this z the grave sin to eye someone else wife…..even ravan met his death becoz he tried to take sita who never belonged to him…..
    Loved saloni’s drama….oh god m laughing imagining Neil’s scared face…..srsly rads z a true frd nd Neil proved his frdship now its radhika’s turn…..
    Oh god you r making me fall in love with arjun…..I will kidnap him then you sit consoling radhika?….
    Now my questions…..
    1)will radhika confess in drunken state?….
    2)what will be radhika’s reaction to anuj’s proposal?….
    3)how will arjun react after hearing abt anuj proposal?….
    4)will he go mad after that?….
    5)how Sam z going to convince Neil on her love for him?….
    6)will arjun vent his anger on anuj for eyeing his radhika?…..
    7)so when z the double dhamaka?….
    8)will manya create more trouble in nesam life?…
    9)di when you will show samrat punishment?…..
    10)when z the next update?….
    Di its fantastic…..you r just mind blowing……I wish to meet you someday nd tell you personally how much you mean to me….. Love you glycerin….. muaaaaaaaah….. Tc?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton darling now your answers 🙂 you have to wait for the dinner 🙂 reaction toanuj’s proposal shocked scared and sick 🙂 Arjun will be mad 🙂 Ne-Sam will be an unexpected one 🙂 yup Anuj will face Arjun’s anger and bad 🙂 double I don’t know but will give a long update 🙂 for now no thought about manya 🙂 samrat in next update 🙂 sunday eveing next update 🙂 love you to moon and back 🙂

  12. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    This was not short at all Gauri it was just perfect. Am still laughing on Neil’s reaction, Prena and Rads pulled a great one at him. Arjun is totally shameless and loved Rads answer to Chirag. Loved the entire update. Loads of love to u ???

  13. neetz

    It was a super cute and funny chapter 🙂 loved it …take care dear ..if thw work is hectic try to post in weekends dear..dont overdo..updates can wait but ur body will not .it needs rest..i know u r too commited to ppl here but every one will understand ..love you..take ample rest

  14. Apra

    I m a silent run ader of your ff and this is 1 of the ff which is most awaited by me but sort to say I don’t like Arjuna character looks as if he is a psycho plz make him a lil softer

  15. Rg2015

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    Hi gauri this one isn’t actually small but compared to ur usual standards yes. I read this at 1.45 am sg time. Couldn’t wait to read it. I was waiting d whole day for this. I was missing it. Am Glad regarding nesam date. Yes it’s awesome. Rads is rads. Wether she is doing it for Neil or Sam. Arjun waiting for rads since 10 am is fantastic.. I loved it. Am Glad arjun knows tat she loves him. Am also happy tat he apologised to her. Yet I really hope he doesn’t turn into a gud boy but stays a bad boy with his madness intact . Imagining arjun as a gud boy is very difficult. He doesn’t fit d bill. Where as Neil can b a gud or bad boy. Enough of my blabbering now moving on to questions
    Will arjun see rads tattoo when she wears d green dress? Wat will b his reaction
    Will rads in her drunken state give away her feelings or will she lose her control against her anger and spill out everything in her heart?
    Will arjun get more intimate with rads?
    When arjun and rads go to rishikesh will they manage to stay in d same room?
    Since every one in rads town knows she is married will they ask her y she isn’t with her Husband or whr is her mangalsutr? ( as its a small town ppl can b a bit nosy voicing things loud) so am curious as to know how she will answer tat.
    Will Neil accept Sam before going to rishikesh? If so how will he diffuse d tension btw Sam and rads?
    Will teji join all in rishikesh?
    Will rads b more favourable towards arjun in rishikesh
    Will arjun give more explanations to rads with regards to his rude behaviour to her? And also y he forced her to marry him? As he only seems to say sorry and l❤️U repeatedly. And zero explanation. I hope tat changes soon gauri…. I also hope he gives a reason for his flirty ways….( gauri pls tell me this.)
    When d couples actual dating start?
    Wat will saral do? And who will save her?
    Wat will dadaji tell her.
    I want Sam and rads to patch up soon. And when they do whom will Sam chose rads or arjun?

    Wow I know it’s toooo much but I can’t help it …. I love all ur stories. U r tooooo gud. I felt rads and arjun were a lit cut short today. I missed their prolonged chemistry. Pls give me a longer a Ardhika. Well will arjun and Neil compromise? If so when ?

    Gauri oops I again bombarded u with loads of questions, gauri u r beautiful writer. Thank u soooo much for giving us this one. I loved it to d core. A writer par excellence with an imagination tat is stuff for dreams. May u reach greater heights in ur writing world. I know u r actually very busy yet I can’t leave u alone but pester u got updates. Becos d wait was unbearable and truly difficult. Thank u sooo much for giving me this amidst ur hectic schedule. Indeed u have done justice to d story and us all ur readers. I do personally appreciate all ur hard work with regards to giving us this awesome chapter. May u give us even more ardhika stories and chapter. Thanks for such a wonderful story. May u live a grt life. Hugs to u for this grt chapter. U r a wonderful person. Take care. Live ur dreams.cheers.

    Am still thinking abt d plot for a new story to suggest to u. Though my imagination isn’t tat gud, I will try….
    By d way when will u give us d nxt update in mmz? Is a double damaka possible??? Pls pls pretty pls gauri….
    Awaiting ur brilliant answers and reply….???…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton RG 🙂 yup he will see the tatoo 🙂 You will have to wait for the date 🙂 Arjun will not take advantage of drunken Rads 🙂 he is mad not a pervert 🙂 HRishikesh after 2 updates from now 🙂 they will be pushed in the same room 😛 Rads will be wearing everthing that a married women should wear 🙂 NeSam will reconcile before going to hrishikesh 🙂 Arjun will pour his heart out and plead her forgiveness Rads will start melting 🙂 Saral will be thrashed and Sam-Rads will patch up in next 🙂 I will try if not double I will try for a long update 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love u

  16. Sammy

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    Omg arjun is so romantic ..:-) pls I want bf like arjun now ….and Neil and saloni awesome hehe sahi me bandi usse kha jayegi …..and here comes again my lovely arjun itna romance dekh ke iam all blushing ..:-) love u our romantic writer 🙂 🙂

  17. Jas

    Nice episide. When will u post next one? Plz post a long one with more ardhika scenes☺️☺️☺️

  18. Sweetie

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    Di..It’s fantastic..Arjun talk with Radhika,Neil’s answer to Manya,plan of Prerna and Radhika..Wah!!Prerna and Radhika are having such a gala time..Loved it..Neil’s expressions by seeing Saloni were hilarious.. 😀 I’m laughing like anything right now.. 🙂 And finally Arjun’s shameless act was Oohooo.. 😀 😀 Stay blessed and keep smiling di.. 🙂 Lots of love.. 😀

  19. RituM

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    gauri…babes….ur writtings work as drugs n with them .u r making me drug addicts…… moreover…i love to be like that….

    radhika……..i can understand….

    arjun…i can understand….

    neil….i can understand….

    sam…i can understand….

    anuj…i donot want to understand…at alllll!!!!

    i hope now u understand what i understand!! 🙂

  20. Meghna shanti

    Dii doesn’t it look like anuj is inviting his own destruction
    Whatever neil’s reactions are awesome

  21. sreee

    awesome epi di….poor neil…but i expect more from arjun and sam….waiting for next…love u..muahhh

  22. Lakshmi05

    |Registered Member

    Gauri u r really amazing n ur stories r too good and we r addicted to ur stories. Will be waiting for next one..luv u…tc..

  23. chandan

    Hi Gauri…finally got time to read both the updates of your FFs..they are as usual fantastic…tc

  24. tanya

    Sorry couldnt cmnt for long sry vry sry…..
    amazing u r the best ur previous episodee r ur only competition nd every u bring btr nd keep winning just again nd again…..
    try to post sooon pls pls. Pls pls pls pls….. i cant wait pls…

  25. tanya

    Sorry couldnt cmnt for long sry vry sry
    it was jus tthe best
    try to post sooon pls pls. Pls pls pls pls….. i cant wait pls…

  26. Roma

    My gauriiiiiiiiiiiii. ….first of all so sorry for late comment. ….now coming to episode….muaaaaahhhhhh. …..my dream date…here it comes….as you promised. …yayyy……I’m soooo glaaaaddd n excited for it….can’t even wait for the next episode. …Overall whole episode was mind blowing n superbbbbb. …I enjoyed every bit of it….ardhika so lovelyyyyyy. …arjun trying very hard to convince rads….manya trying to take advantage of rift of nesam but failed miserably…lol…rads planning for nesam union…the saloni n Neil scene was hilaaaaaaarious. …I just love you soooooooo muchhhhhh gauriiiiiiiiiiiii. ….keep it up honeyyy. eagerly waiting for the next episode, lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. Muaaaaahhhhhh ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

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