MMZ- Married by Fate- Chapter 16

Hello my lovely people 🙂 Thanks a ton for all the love and appreciation…I am actually looking for new words to thank you guys…thanks for everything 🙂 friends do keep sharing your comments feedback and suggestion…it helps me improve 🙂 Enough of me so here is the next chapter ….next one on Saturday 🙂 love you all

Chapter 16

Hrishikesh

Dilip and Ankush were sitting holding their head….Mala has refused food she was on a hunger strike with one demand that Radhika should go back to Arjun…Dilip tried convincing her but she was adamant finally Dadaji intertwined… ‘’Mala have patience beta with time everything will fall into place….right now choti is full of anger…she won’t understand anything….give her some time’’

Mala; ‘’Why is she angry…it should be us who should be angry on her for leaving a good guy like Arjun…she should understand his point of view too…and here this Ankush is adamant on sending Saral to Jail what will happen to Riddhima…’’

Dadaji; ‘’Saral should be punished….and Riddhima herself is supporting Ankush…and for choti I promise you will bring them together…but give her some time ‘….now have something ‘’ Mala agreed

Mumbai

Radhika got up late….she quickly got ready her hair were still wet she decided to set them in office….Neil dropped her …promising to pick her up in the evening….Radhika quickly went to her place and started her work…moving her fingers through her partially dried hairs…Anuj watched her and smiled…she looked cute …Anuj called Radhika to his cabin…he enjoyed observing her…Radhika went inside his cabin…Anuj asked her to sit ; ‘’ Radhika from today Chirag will work with you…Chirag was little uncomfortable at the way Radhika looked at him… Radhika got distracted by Anuj’s voice… ‘’Radhika Lancome has got amazing coverage through your campaign….so we have decided to nominate you for best copy writer award….so this calls for a celebration what say’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’let me win the award after that yes…for now I would like to go back to my work’’ She greeted Anju and left his cabin…Anuj took a deep breath and smiled; ‘’Sorry Arjun ….I think I am going to keep her for life’’

Anuj was still smiling when Bonnie barged in… ‘’Did you check the headlines….’’

Anuj; ‘’What so important…did Arjun decided to leave the worldly pleasures and reside in Himalayas’’

Bonnie; ‘’I guess you would be doing that soon….BS acquired 2 advertising firms…with it their accounts and staff…and you thought they weren’t doing good’’

Anuj jerked up from his place…he quickly checked the details online…this meant BS was still miles ahead of them…he looked at Bonnie and spoke hiding is worry; ‘’Arjun won’t harm Samurdra till I have his wife’’

Bonnie; ‘’You are wrong…he will keep harming you till you keep her…and if you are planning to keep her…he will ruin you and take her…its still time…get rid for her’’

Anuj screamed ; ‘’Shut up…has any one ever cracked a deal as big as this one…I need her and will take maximum out of her…send the BD manager to my cabin now’’ Bonnie smirked and left.

BS

Sam was wild since morning….since the news of acquisition was out…she had been getting calls to congratulate her …or for meetings…Arjun walked in BS with a proud smile….he watched the way people were busy…none of them had work so much in last 2 yrs…Sam had assigned accounts and presentations to almost everyone…and her temper regarding the deadline..was keeping everyone on toes…Arjun walked into her cabin and found her screaming on Zubin…; ‘’Zubin…is this a presentation…even a 12th grade would prepare better than this…Lancome was BS last failure I don’t want anymore ..get to work I want this by 5 PM’’ Today… Zubin just nodded and left…Sam crashed on the chair…Arjun; ‘’take it easy Sam’’

Sam; ‘’Now!!! After creating this chaos…you want me to take it easy…wow Arjun Mehra’’

Ajun smiled; ‘’You wanted me to get back the glorious days of BS..this is the first step’’

Sam; ‘’First Step!!!…OMG I will die while reaching the last one’’

Arjun; ‘’Leave all that…tell me which account in last one year has given you the maximum output’’

Sam; ‘’Maybelline…Why?’’

Arjun; ‘’Nominate Radhika for Best Copy writer award’’

Sam; ‘’I will do that…but I have a news…Samudra has nominated Radhika too’’

Arjun; ‘’They are fools…she won’t win on their nomination but ours…because the awards are in a month…and their ad release will take time…by the way how do you know this’’

Sam smiled; ‘’I have my ways…you want your wife…I want my friend back…I miss her….anyways we will get her back…now please help me sort this out’’ Arjun smiled and nodded….Neil who watched this from outside..was pained to watch Arjun and Sam laughing and enjoying…he gulped his pain and dialed Radhika… ‘’Chashni will you have lunch with me’’

Radhika; ‘’Why are you asking just come or let me know where to come….’’

Neil smiled wide; ‘’Fine see u in 10 min’’ Neil turned around and found Manya grinning at him…he rolled his eyes and left he was in no mood of dealing with another Khanna right now.

Arjun badly wanted to see Radhika and he had his own ways…he smiled recalling his last meeting when she kept looking everywhere accept his eyes…the way her cheek heated up on his touch…Arjun knew she will fight him and he wanted her too….this would pull her anger out….Arjun closed his eyes and thought ; ‘’Neil my friend you will be leaving late today….I have to see my wife I am desperate to hold her today…got to get you busy’’ Arjun smiled and went back to his work

Neil was waiting for Radhika she came down smiling and tapped his shoulder.. ‘’You should have bought Teji along too’’

Neil; ‘’Not today…just wanted to be with my best friend’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’Neil ! can you please open your heart to me…I am your friend…may be I can help’’

Neil gave a dimpled smiled; ‘’Chashni right now…my stomach has opened its mouth wide screaming hungry..lets go’’ As they walked Neil felt eyes on their back… he just tilted his bike mirror…it was Anuj…Neil felt fishy he didn’t like the way Anuj had hugged Radhika in the Lancome presentation….he decided to keep an eye…no more troubles for Radhika.

Neil walked back into office whistling…Teji caught hold of him… ‘’Boss where were you…I kept looking for you’’

Neil; ‘’Was out on lunch with Chashni’’

Teji; ‘’Not fair…I too wanted to meet her’’

Neil; ‘’She is not staying on Mt Everest…she is staying with me…come anytime you like … useless drama’’

Teji; ‘’Sam was looking for you…we have many assignments to complete…go meet her’’ Neil nodded and entered the board room…Sam and Arjun were in a discussion….Neil greeted them professionally which irked Sam…day by day Neil was increasing his distance….Arjun watched the tension between the two and started …. ‘’Neil we have more than 20 big names with us as active client…these are all big budget projects…and they all need a brief on our approach…you are a master in this…can you please finish and prepare a rough draft on some off them by today eod…Neil looked at the list..it was challenging and he loved challenges…he nodded ; ‘’I would be needing more people….but not Zubin and Kritika’’

Sam; ‘’Don’t worry …I have assigned 4 to your team…your mail has the details…’’Neil nodded and left the cabin Sam turned to Arjun; ‘’Thanks !…now I can talk to him’’

Arjun; ‘’And I can meet my panoti…all the best Sam’’ Sam smiled wished him and left…Arjun locked his cabin took his keys and left…

Radhika got a message from Neil that he would be late…she decided to take bus or a cab….she sneaked out before Anuj could could offer a ride…Radhika was waiting for the bus when a white SUV came at stopped near her…she knew to whom it belonged to she turned nervous…facing the man she loved so dearly and refusing him again and again was making her weak….she wiped her forehead and felt relieved when she saw the bus coming from behind….but before she could get in… a familiar hand pulled her in a strong grip…dragging her along … ‘’Sir leave my arm…how can you …” but her words died…when Arjun gave her a glace

Arjun; ‘’I will give you time to curse me …for now be quite’’ Arjun pushed Radhika to the passenger seat locking her seat belt….he got in on the driver side and drove off’’

Radhika ; ‘’Where are you taking me…???’’

Arjun; ‘’Our house….which you left in your stupidity’’

Radhika; ‘’That was never my house…please stop the car or I will jump’’

Arjun tightly held her wrist; ‘’If you try to do any such thing…I will make you sit on my lap…the audience on the road will have a free show…till we reach our destination…choice is yours’’ Radhika gulped….he had capacity to do anything…she just bowed her head and sat quietly….once he reached his house …he held out the passenger door for her…she stepped out all grumpy and followed him…once inside…Radhika spoke; ‘’Now tell me the reason for bringing me here’’

Arjun loosen his shirt…and moved towards her making her retreat…she walked back till her back collided the wall…her face was pink…and nervousness was evident on her face…Arjun kept an arm on the wall and leaned; ‘’So you said you don’t have feelings for me…but why are your eyes speaking something else’’

Radhika; ‘’My eyes are not speaking anything…you are imagining things’’

Arjun smiled at the way she retorted…he held her chin and lifted her face up; ‘’then say this looking into my eyes’’ He made her look straight into his eyes…Arjun could hear Radhika’s madly beating heart….he sweaty forehead…and her fists which were holding her dress tightly…Arjun leaned more…and whispered ‘’Speak Radhika…or I might do something which won’t allow you to even breath forget speaking ‘’

Radhika was breathing hard…she cursed Neil for being late…she tried walking out of his caging arms but he caged her again; ‘’Sir please let me go…I am begging you….’’

Arjun rubbed his rough cheek on her soft one….his whispered against her heated cheek…. ‘’I never wanted you to beg….I wanted you to demand…like I am doing right now….be mine’’

Radhika felt helpless….and her eyes gave up…tears started pouring out…she knew if he moved a inch more closer to her…all walls will crumble in a sec…she had to stop him…but was helpless and scared of this proximity which her heart demanded and mind refused…she was still thinking when Arjun cupped her face and kissed her cheek warmly…Radhika pushed him and screamed; ‘’How dare you…I guess you don’t understand polite language…don’t you dare touch me again’’

Radhika kicked her heels turned around to leave…but this didn’t go well with Arjun he held her tightly… ‘’ you dare me…fine then let me show you something’’ he lifted her up and dumped her on the bed…coming on the top… ‘’ If I want…I can claim my right on you any day…But I don’t want to insult you…I want you accept me with your heart…want to spend my life with you…please come back’’

Radhika; ‘’Insult??? Did you think about me…when I was insulted every minute….did you care for my feelings then…I was blamed for forcing you to marry me…did you ever accept that I never forced you….Sir you can’t even imagine the scars my heart has…and now you want all forgiven in a day…you couldn’t forget a revenge for so many years…yet you want me to forget everything in a day…’’

Arjun looked into her pained eyes; ‘’I know I was wrong…punish me..but don’t leave me.. I love you…I always have and I always will’’

Radhika looked at Arjun all wide eyed…she wasn’t ready for this confession…but her mind wanted to hurt him.. she smirked; ‘’You love me…guess it’s the same way you loved Sam… am I right???…this was the same way you got intimate with her and now you are trying same thing on me…but sorry Sir this won’t work…I will never come back to you…because I can never trust you’’

Arjun was hit straight into his heart He kept watching her face…his eyes started watering…two drops escaped his eyes and fell on Radhika’s forehead…Arjun smiled between his tears; ‘’Only you have the power rip me apart…and you have the strength to keep me intact…I don’t know how to convince you…but I am sorry…’’ Arjun leaned again and scared Radhika pleaded ; ‘’No Sir Please…’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’Don’t worry nothing will happen against your wish…but I promise you one thing…I will make you mine for life…by hook or by crook’’ …He leaned and buried his head in her neck…and softly spoke; ‘’Just stay still….let me inhale your scent…it will keep me alive for few days’’ Radhika turned her face to the other side..but Arjun cupped it and turned towards him…’’I love you …I really do…please come back’’

Radhika reached her house and Prerna asked her to come for dinner…Radhika smiled and quickly went inside the washroom…she sat with her back to the door..covered her mouth and cried….every time she wanted to go to him… she would recall the way he was close to Sam…the way she got insulted…why was she expected to forgive everyone so easily…Why??

BS

Neil was still busy…Sam watched him from the glass door and smiled….Neil her buddy her best friend one person who stood by her…wiped her tears…made her smile…Sam’s POV ;’ I always thought I loved Arjun…but I can’t spend a single day without talking to you or thinking about you …how foolish of me that I wasted so much of time which could have been my best …yet I kept running behind a mirage …but not any more today I will open my heart to you’ Sam walked in a stood across the table watching Neil..he was busy with his laptop…Sam smiled….Neil could sense her presence ….he looked up; ‘’You still are here…its late ‘’

Sam; ‘’So are you…so Idiot can we have dinner together …’’

Neil smiled but it did not reach his eyes; ‘’Some other day Sam…need to leave mom must be waiting’’

Sam; ‘’Neil you haven’t called me Samrunder Singh for so long…I miss you’’

Neil ; ‘’Even I miss myself…but as said change is the only constant…slowly we all will get used to this change’’ Neil got up to leave but Sam held is hand…Neil turned around and looked at Sam…she was holding his hand…her eyes had tears and hope..her lips were slightly stretched into a gentle smile….Sam was pleading through her eyes….Neil held her by shoulders and made her sit…but Sam was restless that she leaped and hugged him her feet were dangling in air…Neil held her to support…but before he could break the hug Sam whispered… ‘’ I love you Neil’’ Neil froze….he could not say a word…he gently placed Sam on the floor…He wasn’t looking at her…Sam wrapped her arm around his waist and another arm around his neck…Sam went on her toes and deeply kissed Neil’c cheek….he did not respond….he stood there like a stone statue….Sam moved forward to kiss him when Neil jerked her; ‘’Sam…just stay back’’

Sam was shocked; ‘’Neil…did I do something wrong…’’

Neil; ‘’Yes very wrong…why do think that you can just mold me any way you want….yesterday you were madly in love with Arjun….you rejected me for him…you were ready to go any length to have him in your life…and today you are telling me that you love me….why Sam…you love for Arjun died…or the trust died…you are scared that he might again betray you…Oh now I get it…you are trying to return CHashni the favor she did…but Sam please spare my heart…. I am tired of pain….’’

Neil walked out of the door….Sam stood there but then ran behind him…she tried getting into the lift but couldn’t as Neil didn’t stop it for her…Sam ran down through stairs and stood infront of his bike…she sat on her knees ; ‘’Neil… Please trust me…give me and my heart a chance ‘’ Neil without a word drove off making his way from the side…leaving Sam behind…he was driving but the vision was not clear…tears were blocking his sight…Neil increased the speed…he just wanted to be locked in his room….

Radhika was worried…it was 12:30 AM and Neil was still not him…Radhika had earlier asked Prerna to sleep as it was late … Radhika was walking in the garden area waiting for Neil

Arjun was restless….Radhika was so close yet so far…he picked his car keys he just wanted to have a glimpse of her…he knew it was late…but he wanted to take chances who known…she might awake just like him…Arjun with a hope in his eyes and smile on his face got inside his car and drove off to Neil’s house…

Radhika’s patience gave up she picked up her mobile to call Neil when she heard his bike…Radhika took a sigh of relief… ‘’Neil where were you…?…..I….’’ but before she could complete Neil hugged her tightly he was sobbing like a broken child…Radhika was confused…and worried..she hugged him back pacifying him….Radhika rubbed his back…but Neil was just crying…Radhika was worried he always smiled and made others smile…why was he so broken…Radhika held her beloved friend waiting for his tears to stop…But Radhika was not aware of the two eyes which were also shedding tears but angry ones…and the heart that burned to see her hugging Neil…Arjun got inside his car and turned towards to give glance to Radhika….his POV; ‘I won’t let anyone take you from me…no one’

Precap : More confusion ….The award ceremony….Arjun publicly shows his right on Radhika

Credit to: Gauri

86 comments

  1. MONU

    fabulous Di …u r awesome 🙂
    sorry i m sill busy with my exams n counselling stuff …so unable to comment regularly
    n what about ur book ? completed/writing …eagerly waiting for it too …r u going to make a blog n post it ..r u will post it here only?

  2. Shree

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    Wow di!! Commenting on your post after a very long time… I’m always bowled over when I read your update..

    My goodness… Radhika is right… You just can’t forgive in a day.. And Arjun is like one obsessed stalker.. I know he loves her,but this is too much… Oyi stop hurting my Neil .. Give the poor kid a break… Sam I’m not saying anything… Mala aunty please stop throwing tantrums… Anuj get ready for your destruction.. Boney is so right this time …

    Di I’m out of words.. No one can write like you .. Post soon please..

    Love you loads.. Tc. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Shree 🙂 you bought a big smile on my face 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂 love you

  3. Sammy

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    Omg omg ..now iam doing jhingalala ..stuff on moon …arjun ..wild ..Neil shocked ..and our radhika always rocked …yaar main apna naam radhika karlo ..and then ..arjun ..Neil …anuj ..saral….Sab boys ki attention mere pe .. lol ..best option …amazing update gauri di 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks a Sammy daring :)….I feel you are pattkha type …pls pardon me if you felt bad…but every time i read your words I feel this 🙂 but love you loads….I think I would prefer you as Sammy 🙂 life is lot better without guys 😛

  4. Joona

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    Oh God… I don’t know what to say…gauri di…u r the best writer.. Seriously.. Wt an imotional episode… Neil is completely broken… I can’t see him like that…and Arjun ,he completely lost his mind…I hope radhika will handle our Neil…i want his dimple SMILE back…and I missed my teji di…
    Today’s episode was rocking… I loved it di…keep writing… Have a good day…love u…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Joona 🙂 don’t worry sweety Neil will smile soon 🙂 loads of love 🙂 stay blessed

  5. Dhara

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    Super part Gauri.. I just the way Arjun shows his love 😛 I know Radhika will not give up easily and Arjun ko bahot papad belne padenge 🙂 Poor Neil.. Just can’t look him like this..

  6. Sathya

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    Fabulous one. Amazing episode gauri dear. U r toooooooo gooooooood. I m n loss of words now. Have to find a new creative words to praise u.
    ????? u rocked it.. Keep rocking as always. Love u

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Sathya 🙂 you made my day 🙂 blessed to have you as my friend 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂 loved ur profile picu r pretty

  7. Gianna

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    I don’t know what to say Gauri this is just amazingly amazing, loved every single part. With every update I fall in love with this story more and more. Loads of love to u, u are simply amazing ???

    • Gauri

      Gianna all I can say is thanks don’t know how express my gratitude 🙂 I am waiting for your new story stay blessed 🙂 love you

  8. Rosie

    Why it’s short or only I feel that coz I immersed so much in reading n it ended….as usual abha u need to find words for u…coz I can’t say Same words again n again…yeh dil maage moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee….anything on mmz plot was superb…smile…don’t take tension…stay happy n calm

    • Gauri

      Rosie you don’t need many words but thank you so much for the lovely comment 🙂 I am trying to keep my cool …. just want a vacation 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  9. Jessie

    This is fabulous…Arjun all stubborn n wild..Rads one sentence to get him off track,,!! Waiting 4 this Anuj 2 be smashed… loved Ardhika scenes a lot… thank u.. Sam’s confession is something really touching., dint expect she wud kneel1 b4 his bike. But I felt Neil is d show stealer today.. His dialogues n everything was jus awesome.. love this kind of Neil.. Sam needs 2 prove n Arjun needs to make Rads free of all accusations she had.. Thanks 4 d fantastic chappy.. All eager 4 next update..

  10. Rg2015

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    Hi gauri finally. I was so impatient to read this one. Tu updated it finally. Well if I should tell u in one word it was awesome . I loved it to d core. Rads and arjuns confrontation was all I imagined to be and more. You beautifully justified rads anger and hurt. Sweetly enough even arjun got hurt this time. But his tactfulness in dealing with rads was beautiful. He was ready to pay any price for her to come back. His words of how only she can make him or break him was poignantly sweet and painful. Yet he is guilty of all d ones she accused him off. Wished he had known wat he was going to lose once he lost her. Their chemistry was a treat to behold. Despite d show being wrapped up u bought it on live once again. It was seriously tooooooooo gud. I loved it to d core. He had no answers to give her for her accusations ? Will try to give her answers? Well Sam and neils pain was portrayed just as perfectly too. Despite her spitefulness I really feel sorry for her. Enough of my blabbering now to pamper u with questions… ? I mean pester.?…
    Has arjun realised tat rads has feelings for him?
    When will Neil slowly start believing tat Sam loves him and not arjun?
    Will rads again accuse him of d fact of calling their marriage a sham?
    Will she again and again accuse him abt being intimate with bonnie and Sam simultaneously ? ( I really request u to try and if possible answer this) and if this is there wat justification is arjun going to give her
    Will arjun try to explain things to her.
    Will arjun keep on continuing his I ❤️U litany to rads?
    Has anuj really fallen hard for rads?
    Does arjun toooo doubt his rads with regards to Neil or is he only insanely possessive abt her? Unlike Sam who can’t differentiate d two. Can arjun understand tat Neil and rads only share only frdship nothing else and will he also help Sam understand tat?
    One question tat keeps on cropping up. Is if Sam couldn’t forgive rads how can she forgive this easily.( pls definitely give me ur pov)
    Will arjun find out abt d tattoo soooon pl tell me?
    Enough of these.
    I loved arjuns heartfelt confession. Will rads b happy he said l❤️U to her?
    I hope her anger doesn’t cool toooo soon. Pre cap looks hot.

    By d way gauri this one was as usual fantastic.. But I felt it was a bit small compared to your normal ff length. ( am not sure wether am right or wrong. It’s just my pov) generally I feel ur chappys r slightly more lengthier. Am not complaining dear. It was merely an obsevation. I hope u won’t get hurt.I Guess u r really busy with off work and yet you have taken time to give us such lovely chapter which is way beyond our expectations. So thanks a million for tat. Am really sorry if ur pressed for time dear gauri. Yet my heart felt gratitude for giving me such an amazing chapter. Gauri you r sweet and a cute person. Best of d very best. I really enjoy writing thez comments which I hope really conveys my appreciation to u, Becos no matter how much I say u r gud , I really don’t have d write words to express it to u . You r brilliant writer and all my appreciation isn’t enough to tell u how much this mean to me. Once again thank u for giving us such a brilliant lovely story. Hugs to you. Take care. Cheers.

    • Gauri

      Rg I don’t know how good I am but you make all my updates special so a big hug for you 🙂 now your answers Yes Arjun doubts that Rads has feelings for him 🙂 Neil will take some time but he will realize Sam’s love 🙂 Yes Rads will accuse him and Arjun will accept all his mistakes to get her apology 🙂 She will question him on his closeness with Sam and Bonnie 🙂 Arjun will answer all her questions… 🙂 yes he will continue with his ILU till she accepts 🙂 Anuj has fallen for Radhika …. Arjun doesn’t doubt R-Neil but he his mad about his wife 🙂 Sam is guilty and scared….she is ashamed to face Radhika…I was planning to write her apology to Rads but couldn’t ….and she scared to lose Neil….but this fear is about to reach its peak 🙂 Sam has forgiven Arjun ….to get forgiveness for herself 🙂 loads of love for such an amazing comment Rg love you from the bottom of my heart 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  11. Rg2015

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    I meant if Sam can’t forgive rads easily how can she forgive arjun easily. Sorry for typo. Also wil rads keep on heaping accusations on arjun and how will arjun give justifications for all.

  12. Suga

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    Tears flowing down my cheeks wen I was reading oh god darling I don’t have words but still its amazing one 😀 😀 rads n Neil oh god man each one paying for der deeds no words lovedddddddd itttttt 😀 live u darling 😀 u r such an amazing darling sissy 😀 😀 😀 love u 😀

    • Gauri

      Suga darling thanks for the lovely comment 🙂 bless you 🙂 love u….a big hug for you 🙂

  13. M

    ahhhgh….its a wow…….staying on mt. everest…..useless drama…..lol…poor teji…..

    awww……neil…crying……feel bad but yeah….it is all so called life…..n u cnt smile everytime…..

    arjun….not so easy dude….u hv to pay alot…..

    sam…..keep it up…..n b clear with ur thoughts……

  14. Harani

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    Di,you are amazing .the way you portray emotions are really fabulous..I just admire you di..waiting eagerly for next update …
    Sam and Neil and ardhika,it is true di ,every scar couldn’t be soothed in a day or the pain and insults cannot be just forgiven soon ..you make justice to every character ..love you loads di 🙂

  15. Sweetie

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    Fabulous episode di.. 🙂 I don’t have any more words left to praise you.. 😀 Keep smiling and stay blessed.. 🙂

  16. shreya

    Omg I m going mad at this …….Arjun is being very passive day by day yaar ……..there is no words for niel n radz bond ……..n love you for being so amazing writer ……..is anuj going to be a vilean or hero in aradhika’s love story ……….stay blessed and keep smiling

  17. Supriya

    Hii di….now let me tell you one thing before commenting I have read atleast 20 times…..it was emotional nd heart wrenching update dear….I don’t know why but today I felt it was a bit short usually your updates r lengthy….. maybe m greedy abt them…..now let me tell you my fav part….the one in which Arjun’s tears fall on radhika’s forehead….. That was just too much awsme…..I loved his that line stating that only radhika has the power to rip him apart and only she has the strength to keep him intact….that was the best line ever…..muaaah to you for that…..I felt really bad for arjun today…..srsly he z in pain too hope he gets a relief soon…..Sam I don’t know what to say…..if she was not ready to forgive radhika then how could she expect forgiveness so soon from everyone…..this z a bit selfish….. Radhika z right she can’t forget Arjun’s mistakes in a day nd live with him normally….. She needs time but her physo husband won’t leave her alone….. Neil z a true rockstar…..he hides his tears….his pain….to bring smile on everyone’s face…..nowadays m liking Neil more than arjun…..but he z all yours?
    Di time for my questions…..
    1)will arjun understand that rads nd Neil only share pure friendship?
    2)does he doubt them or this all z his possessiveness?
    3)does anuj has fallen for radhika?…
    4)will manya create troubles?
    5)when will arjun confess all his mistakes?
    6)when they will announce radhika’s name for award….what will be her surname… Mishra or mehra?…
    7)how will anuj react when he will know that radhika z still Arjun’s wife?….
    8)will you show Prerna cold behavior towards Sam?….
    9)when will you show samrat repentance?…
    10)when will Radhika forgive sam?…
    11)z arjun going to turn into physo stalker nd a overpossesive husband?….
    Enough for today di….if I think more I will pester you later….that’s a promise….
    Di every word…every inch….every sentence was screaming out loud that you are the best writer ever…..I love the way you handle emotions with glorifying words….the technique you use in winning my heart z different nd unique every time……you are the best di…..I really want you to write atleast 50 novels in this lifetime…..hope my wish comes true someday…..answer all my questions if possible….. Love you di….muaaah… Tc??????????????????????????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks Supriya darling 🙂 and an additional thanks for not eyeing my Neil 😛 now your answers 🙂 yes Arjun will understand RNEIL relationship 🙂 this is all his possessiveness 🙂 yup Anuj has fallen for her 🙂 yes manya will create troubles 🙂 soon he will confess 🙂 wait for the award ceremony 🙂 anuj…shocked deafted 🙂 prerna will be neutral 🙂 Samrat will repent you will see that in coming updates 🙂 Radhika will forget Sam but there is a twist…. 🙂 Arjun is possessive but not phsyco …. 🙂 😀 50 novels god if Ican 3 good ones I will be blessed 🙂 love you sweety

  18. Sv

    Di my heart beat got raised when i was reading this update. Everything was in the place and im unable to speak up anything at all. This was perfect and no not perfect beyond perfect. Arjun is good but he was also pained but it doesnt mean that radhika should get convinced as she also has heart which was pained and hurted by him but she loves him . thats also true and i love the way neil spoke to sam it was his pain but so true.

    Same concept if we are punished for the mistake which was not committed by us and when time comes the truth is revealed for which we need to accept them immediately dont we have heart which would have gone for a toss ?? they will speak bad about us then after the truth is revealed they should be apologized soon . How could that be possible . Let samraj also feel the pain the way raneil had gone through.

    Didi you make me always get blown up by your words, Love you di and your words. Love you lods and bear my hugs and kisses too.. Muhhaaaaa

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton cutie pie 🙂 you know ur words and comments breath a life in me every time 🙂 thanks for appreciating all the words I have written till date… sometimes they were not that good yet you supported thanks a ton SV 🙂 love you from the bottom of my heart 🙂

  19. Ritu

    amazing ,awesome ,fabulous ,mind blowing fantastic..not getting more words to praise…just loved it dear…Arjun’s madness is superb…waiting for nxt…post soon…and what is the progress of ur book…waiting for that too..love u..tc

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Ritu 🙂 its like a breather for me 🙂 bookis going on it will take some time will post soon 🙂 love you

  20. subha

    awesome episode…….raneil pure friendship bond super……eagerly waiting next one………tc

  21. vini

    Gauri .. that was mind blowing .. loved it so much .. i pity Niel , he is broken 🙁 🙁 i don’t want both radhika and niel to give up so easily towards arjun and sam 😛 🙂 🙂

  22. Naaga

    |Registered Member

    Nice Gauri ? i love Arjuns (Gauri) Business Tactics, really he is (u r) cross minded fellow, big round f Applause for ur creativity mind ????? & asusual Ardhika portions u nailed it. Interesting precap ? now I’m eagerly waiting pls post soon ☺

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Naaga 🙂 thanks for loving my business tactics 😛 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  23. roshini

    Gauri this was one of the most emotional episode…loved it and bless you for giving us such beautiful words and stories … love you

  24. Brin

    Awesome episode, brillent writing, love the direction the story is going, your always nailing it, well done. 🙂

  25. Raaga

    al 4 are very papa dii …:-( it was very emotional
    🙁 thank you for such an emotional episode di love u ..

  26. dipika

    Gauri Darling it is block buster episode.. super duper hit one…I didn’t blink while reading this chappy..n cursed customers who came to my counter n disturbed me while reading..you r beyond the amazing.. no words….Anuj that vile how dare he eyed on rads..Bonnie ans is slight slap on his face..haha..n Aradhika moment..omg..my heart to raced for moment… Nesam moment was amazingly touchy…sam’s praposal was too emotional..pls this too much for arjun yar..rads knws that he did that all bcs nandu’s instructions n he was too unaware of hrr plans na..so should understand him..pls make rads come to him na..can’t see arjun crying..n precap..what mess going to happen.. oh..i hav to wait for it..love you darling.tc

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dipika darling 🙂 bless you for all these amazing words .. wish I could meet you right now I would have given you a big pyaar wali japphi 🙂 love u…. love u … love u 🙂 Rads will come to him but once he confess his mistakes and makes her believe he is really sorry 🙂 love you and a million hugs for you 🙂 stay blessed and keep smiling

  27. shiva

    oh girl i hav just lost words to describe this.As usual u nailed every thing spot on.But please unite ardhika seen am a die hard arjun fan so cant see him in pain.Though i understand that rads and Neils feelings are justified so make these 2 crazy ool realize their mistake how much they hurt their dr ones, U knw i dont want rads to forgive him easily instead he should be tested many more times same with sam but at the same time i cant see them sad alsowhat to do hope everyhing gets well soon. And this anuj dare he to get close to radhika. really am getting more pissed.Hope arjun teaches him a good lesson.
    and sorry for not commenting regularly as my sems r going so i just read ur ffs during travel only so cudnt comment. Got to tell u ur last update ofDPO was also very awesome.
    Luv u dr..TAKE CAre
    well when is the next update waiting eagerly for that.Ok BYe

    • Gauri

      Thanks SHiva 🙂 Arjun will finish Anuj…. no need for sorry all the best for your sems 🙂 will post soon 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  28. chashu

    Hi di you may think i am an new one to you but without you and your ffs i cant cut even a single day.And im from chennai my native place is pudukkottai. And im an very big fan of all the ffs at mmz page. This is the first time im commenting. I love both your ffs and also the ffs of sathya akka; gianna di ;supriya di ;rosie di ;brin; sv?, akka ……sorry if i left anybody oh yes sammy di;and mandey di.
    PLEASE REGULAR UPDATE KARO.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • chashu

      And haan i just wanna ask one more thing now im studying biomaths what can i do after this what are the scopes of this field if any body have an idea means then share it with me and one more thing i dont want mbbs and bds.Just one last question to supriya di and sv di from where do you get stamina to write this much big comment and sammy di please continue the horror track which you wrote im commenting on this page so that my comment can be noticed by all of you…..bye im getting sleeeeeeeepppppyyyyyyyyyyy……. bye tc love you loads have a nice sleep and start your everyday that something special is waiting for you today byeeeeeee.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Chashu 🙂 if you have taken BIO Maths – with bio u can have amazing career in microbiology , Bio tech…with Maths u can have a good career as an architect other than engineering 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  29. Roma

    Awwwwwww….awesoooooome, marvellous, outstanding, mind blowing, dhamakedaar episode. …gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling. …I’m just spellbound….not finding better words to praise your amazingly awesoooooome talent. …fantabulous….ardhika were breathtaking. ..arjun confessed. ….oooo my goodness. ..it’s was really very beautiful and heart melting scene…..rads nervousness n arjun’s immense love for her….dialogues were like shooting arrows….wowwww….BS getting on glorious heights….anuj getting hard time with arjun’s strategy n plans in business. ..first time i loved Bonnie’s words…so true…Sam confessed to neil…ahhh very heart wrenching scene… neil’s harsh words ..uffff…arjun n sam deserve this…last scene was really full of emotions…poor neil…rads consoling her bff n arjun burnt standing there…in anger, jealousy, n possessiveness……kudos my sweeeeeet darling friend gauriiiiiiiiiiiii….I’m blessed to be here n enjoying this remarkable, outstanding, overwhelmingly impressive, spendid….awesoooooome story…bow down appreciation from me….keep it up honeyyy. ..eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . Muaaaaahhhhhh. …lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. . . 🙂 😉 😀 ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Roma 🙂 I think I will frame your comments and hang on my wall 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  30. priya

    Awesome update..don’t know how it was happened I haven’t seen d update yesterday…I am thinking that u were busy nd so not updated…but when I saw today nd u updated yesterday..??.I missed it..but finally happy now…awesome update…love u to core…now what is confusion??for what as radhika will get award??will arjun misunderstand radhika and neil??what abt sam and radhika??is radhika ready to accept her apology??what abt anuj??how is arjun going to tackle him??will radhika go back to bs??

  31. Gauri

    Thanks Priya 🙂 a lot of confusion ….regarding RNeil 🙂 best copywriter for Maybelline 🙂 no Arjun won’t misunderstand her but will be madly possessive about her 🙂 Sam will aplogise Radhika will forgive but a twist is there..Arjun will be drowning Anuj …. Radhika will go back but later 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂

  32. natasha

    gauri di only 1 wrd suits u ur ridiculous hw can anyone write like tis di its an amazing epi plz unite ardhika and nesam fastly nah plzzzzzzzz
    luv u tc muah w8ing for dpo

  33. sreee

    di it was a amazing chappy…..really wonderful…wowww the best part was arjun confessing…neil breakinf down…sams step towards neil…and at last radhikas pov….she is indeed right…y is she to b forgiving everything so soon…she too is a human….but di i thinking neil is so helpless.radhika has neil to care and support….sam has arjun..arjun has sam and mala….but neil…insidehis facade is slowly deterioting….i am an ardhika fan….but still couldnt take neils tears…am madly waiting for his chasni to take the space become detective again but now for her neil…for the one who has always stand by her side….atleast for the sake of neil everything should fall in place…..i soon want arjun to confess his mistakes….eagerly waiting for that…but di one q arjun showing his right on radhika would he misbehave with her by his over possesiveness…or would embrass her before everyone….but di u know she is already very hurt and i simply
    wish no more…
    btw di ur dp is awesome…i forget to tell u that..and who is ronit roy as sid ….and seriously anuj catayst r u a che stud di…
    and i just wanted to tell u onething…and that is that u r an amazing writer di when it comes to ones feeling…i could seiously feel their anger and pain just within me by reading ur words….and that is truly amazing…to put on someothers shoe and to feel is truly a gift which u posess u r making me jump for their happiness and cry for their pain..that is truly a gift…bless u…love u….bear hugs and muahhhhh
    sorry for my late comment di

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sreee 🙂 Ronit Roy is one who is acting in Adaalat as KD Pathak… 🙂 and no need to aplogise 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂

  34. esme

    I think the jealousy of arjun is better shown in ur updates thn in di real show.u have excellent 2 the power of infinity writing skills.
    By d way guyz any kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi fans.plz ans

  35. Esme

    |Registered Member

    I think u have written the jealously of arjun excellently.it is better than that shown in the show.gauri u r a excellent 2 the power of infinity writer.hw many of u agree wid me??
    By d way any kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi fans plzz comment.

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