MMZ- Married by Fate- Chapter 14

Hello friends….Sorry for keep you waiting…and thanks for your patience and support now without wasting time…here is the next chapter…I will try posting next one soon…please ignore my mistakes as I wrote this one in hurry 🙂 love you all 🙂

Chapter 14

After reaching Goa all four were dead tired…they took the keys and retired to respective rooms to relax…after resting for an sometime…Neil knocked on the door of Radhika’s room…Prerna answered….Neil asked for Radhika and Prerna told she was the hotel beach….Neil asked Teji to take Prerna to restaurant area for dinner and he will get Radhika…Neil knew she was there hiding her pain….Neil walked through the garden to the beach and found Radhika standing looking in one direction…he walked to her ..and tapped her right shoulder standing on her left….Radhika looked at right and then left….she smiled….

Neil; ‘’So Chasni…share the deep secret that brought you here’’

Radhika; ‘’Nothing just like that’’

Neil; ‘’I thought I am your friend’’

Radhika smiled turned towards him ; ‘’and the best one….Neil I was thinking before joining Samudra I will go for a makeover…I mean a new wardrobe ….a hair cut…something that will make me feel different’’

Neil cupped her face; ‘’Will all this curb your pain….clothes looks can divert you for a day…but after that’’ Radhika tears poured…Neil pulled her in a hug; ‘’Cry Chashni….and I will be here…just pour you pain out…that will help’’

Radhika calmed …smiled; ‘’You are behaving like a parent…lets go aunty and Teji must be waiting….’’

Neil held her hand took her phone and dialled Ankush….Ankush was little surprised to see anew no. he answered; ‘’Yes who is this’’

Radhika; ‘’Bhai choti’’

Ankush; ‘’Choti!!!! Where are you…you know Mom was so worried your old no. was not reachable for whole day yesterday…since when have you become so irresponsible…and why did you change the no.’’

Radhika took a deep breath and narrated everything …and also informed that she was staying with Neil…Ankush closed his eyes his little sister who never grew up for him had proved herself to be an amazing human being…after a pause he spoke ; ‘’Why didn’t you come back…we were angry…but that doesn’t mean you are not my family’’

Radhika; ‘’Bahi I don’t want pity in anybody’s eyes…I want my family to be proud of me…not to cry on my fate’’

Ankush ; ‘’Choti don’t worry take your time…and follow your dreams…I want people to call me Radhika’s brother…now please give the phone to Neil…’’ Neil immediately got the phone off the speaker and moved to a side…Ankush again spoke ; ‘’Neil please don’t leave her alone’’

Neil; ‘’I won’t…that’s a promise…Ankush there is more…Saral was involved in burning Mishra market with Nandini…I knew Chashni won’t speak about it…but I felt you should know…I have the proofs’’

Ankush temper rose….he was waiting for a chance to teach Saral a lesson for harassing Radhika..and now he had a big one; ‘’Neil can you please share those proofs with me’’

Neil; ‘’Sure…I hope Uncle aunty won’t mind Radhika staying at my place’’

Ankush; ‘’No they won’t….rest leave on me…but please don’t leave her alone and thanks’’ Neil wished Ankush disconnected and dragged Radhika for dinner…

Arjun had also called Hrishikesh…but was surprised to know that Radhika didn’t go back to Hrishikesh. Arjun was sitting in his cabin with his head supported on his chair and eyes closed..it was 9 PM and only Arjun and Sam were there in office …he was playing all the things in his head…’Teji resigned but not Neil..Why???…can be two reasons ….Teji knows Radhika’s whereabouts…and he doesn’t want to share with me…I cannot use force or fear on Neil…but Teji…I know what to do’…he called Sam; ‘’Can you please come to my cabin’’

Sam came after some time; ‘’Arjun we are in a mess…we are far behind…last two months I couldn’t pay attention and we lost 2 big accounts…we are short on resources to…need to chalk out hiring plan’’

Arjun gave Sam a glass of water; ‘’Sam I know we are in a mess…But for now…stop focusing on too many big brands…and look for brands who only want us…and rather than hiring fresher we should hire trained ones we don’t have time to train for now….I have a plan… there are 20 odd new advertising firms in Mumbai..…started in last 2 years…some are really good and out of these 20 …2 are self funded they are a small team of 20-30 hard working youngsters… they have good accounts…they cannot run on their own funds for long …Bird Song will acquire them…with that we will gain their accounts and staff too.

Sam blinked…Arjun Mehra the business king was back she smiled; ‘’And why would they sell them off…plus as of now…we cannot invest so much’’

Arjun; ‘’Sam sometimes we need to put up a show…if this news in market spreads that we acquired 2 new firms…we will get a positive publicity…means market will receive a message that Bird Song is going very strong which will leave an impact on customers….second…staff of a new and a small firm will get a chance to work with a big name like Bird Song…and third…our own staff needs a wake up call…they need a competition which they will get from new staff…and don’t worry on money….it will be done…just arrange my meeting with Prism …Dreamz Advertising…ask the legal adviser to meet me…and leave everything on me’’

Sam was still processing everything…she got up and walked to him; ‘’Where were you all these days’’

Arjun; ‘’I came to destroy you and acquire Bird Song…it’s time to repent’…and I need a favor’’

Sam ‘’go on’’

Arjun; ‘’Teji will be joining somewhere…and 70%-80% chances are that they will call Bird Song for reference Check and for this you need to provide the previous company board no.. and manager’s official id..Teji will only provide Neil’s direct desk no or mail ID…I don’t want calls to go directly to Neil for sometime…ask the reception person…to get all the details on every call for teji or Neil…’’

Sam was shocked; ‘’If Neil knows this I am dead…’’

Arjun; ‘’Just for a month or two…and to be on the safer side from now let all the calls go to reception first and then to us…this won’t let him doubt’’

Sam; ‘’But why do you want to know about Teji’s new job’’

Arjun; ‘’because Radhika is not in Hrishikesh…she never went there…and Teji, Neil know where she is …Neil will not speak…but with Teji I know how to get things done’’

Sam; ‘’if they never call on line but reach him out on his cell…then what…and I have Teji’s address..we can directly go to him….why all this’’

Arjun; ‘’because I will make Teji speak what I want to hear ..even if it means using my contacts or threatening him…They will for sure mail on Neil’s ID to confirm that Teji provided right reference…we can get the details from the server’’

Sam rubbed her face…’’you really love her…fine will get the call thing done….’’ Sam walked to the door but stopped; ‘’Arjun…you will be 20% share holder in Bird Song from now…I have already done the paper work’’

Arjun; ‘’It wasn’t needed’’

Sam; ‘’It was…Bird Song needs you and I need my Chashni….I know you will find her…and I don’t want you to run away with her again…and go home its late’’…she left the cabin exchanging a friendly smile with Arjun

Arjun stood by the window…looking at the road…his POV; ‘hide as much as you can…I will find you…’

Neil pushed Teji off the bed…and asked him to be ready…he went and started banging Radhika and Prerna’s room door till they answered….Radhika was all furious; ‘’Neil its 8…we will leave for sightseeing by 9:30 AM…’’

Neil; ‘’Nope …we leave soon after the breakfast we can have more time at the beach in the evening…so get ready ‘’

Prerna and Radhika were pissed…but Neil irritated till they were ready…after the breakfast they left for Goa darshan…visiting forts …churches …once the sun started descending…they visited the beaches…Anjuna’ beauty bowled Radhika over…she stood …near the rocks enjoying …the waves…Neil came to her …and took a selfie with her making funny faces…Teji was constantly ogling at brunet …Prerna warned him…but Teji was flying in new found love….she gestured him to come…and he followed Prerna tried to stop but Teji was walking a if hypnotize ….When Radhika Neil returned…they checked about Teji….Prerna narrated everything…Neil asked Radhika to stay with Prerna …he went in the same direction…but what he saw made Neil laugh….the girl was threatening Teji to empty his pockets using a Swiss knife in a dark deserted corner ….Neil felt pity on Teji….he walked and twisted girl’s arm…she screamed for help….Neil watched her gang approaching he pushed her grabbed Teji arm and ran with Teji clutching his jeans…. They quickly gestured Prerna and Radhika to come fast… got in the car and drove off…Neil laughed narrating the whole incident….Prerna reprimanded Teji for not listening to her….Teji was still holding on his jeans….radhika couldn’t control she finally asked; ‘’Teji why are you holding your jeans like…is it running away’’

Neil; ‘’Chashni …that girl was about to rob his clothes too…she liked his jeans.. seems it was her favorite brand…that when I felt pity on him…and saved him….think how cute Teji will look without his jeans …and he got scared of a swiss knife…kids are better than you’’

Radhika burst out laughing…joined by Prerna and Neil….Teji made a cute face like a kid…Radhika tried controlling …but couldn’t control….she was laughing non-stop…Teji watched her and then smiled…he enjoyed that free spirited laughter of Radhika…Neil winked at Teji…and drove back towards the hotel…they directly went for dinner…the hotel had made arrangements for local artists who were playing guests favorite Bollywood no. on guitar…they were going from one table to another…entertaining guests having dinner…they came to Radhika’s table and Neil requested…and old song of Raj Kapoor movie ‘Pyaar hua Ikraar hua….’ When they started playing…Neil pulled Radhika and did a slow danced with her….they were good…and Radhika was smiling hardheartedly after days…Teji was watching her emotionally…and Prerna she was happy because with Radhika Neil looked more of his old version…once the song finished….Radhika Neil clapped for the artists and the other people clapped for them …. They finished their dinner and went back to their rooms…Radhika was gaining herself back….but she was oblivious of the fact that Arjun was slowly erasing the distance between them… he was slowly demolishing the walls that hid her from him…and he won’t stop till she comes back to her…

Arjun unlocked the door of his house…he took his shirt off and stood under the shower his mind was only working on the ways to get Radhika…he was standing with his eyes closed…and his face towards the falling water…he smiled and whispered ‘’Radhika’’…Arjun came out wearing a track pant…water droplets were still running down his perfect torso…he opened the cupboard to pull a t-shirt…but saw Radhika’ scarf….he pulled it out and hid his face into it ….Arjun walked to his bed…and sat supporting his back….he kept looking at her scarf…he brought it close to his face again and took a deep breath…it still had her soft scent…Arjun felt a kind of calmness….he completely shifted his body into a comfortable position lying on his stomach…he hugged the scarf smiled and closed his eyes…and mumbled; ‘’I love you Radhika’’ before slipping into a deep slumber.

Samudra

The junior HR gave the list of new joiners with their joining dates to the assistant of the CEO…..she read the names and was shocked ….she quickly got up from her place and hurriedly walked towards her boss’s cabin….tip toeing her pencil heels…and her bare legs in her short skirt …she barged into his cabin angrily; ‘’Anuj are you nuts….you hired Radhika Mehra’’

Anuj; ‘’Bonnie its Radhika Mishra….and what’s wrong in that…she changed Bird Song’s fate in 6 months wining them prestigious clients….Samudra will be benefited’’

Bonnie; ‘’She is Radhika Arjun Mehra and will remain the same all her life…Arjun never gives up what he loves…he won’t let her stay…’’

Anuj; ‘’ I hired her as she is intelligent talented…. she took away Maybelline account from right under my nose…plus Arjun went to Bird Song to destroy it… he promised me he will support me bringing Samudra to top….he forgot his promise…now he beloved wife will do that’’

Bonnie; ‘’You invited your destruction…and you have talented people…give me a chance…I am tired doing this assistant work…my job was better in BS…atleast I had the opportunity of exploring my creativity in BS’’

Anuj sarcastically smile; ‘’creativity???? You can have that only with Boys…you tried hands on Neil who never paid attention…Arjun who used you like a tissue….you should be thankful to me that I offered you a job…otherwise you don’t even worth that’’

Bonnie was furious; ‘’If Arjun used me…you are worst…you are using me in and out of office…so don’t raise that finger on me’’

Anuj; ‘’6 months back…A blacklisted girl…who could have been arrested on the case of forgery came to me begging to save her…I did …& being a kind hearted man offered her a job one enough to take care of herself …’’

Bonnie ; ‘’What do you mean’’

Anuj in a threatening voice; ‘’You are not worth any job…yet I gave you one for old time sake…in return you gave me favours…I never pushed you for that…so stop throwing blames on my face…and Radhika Mehra/Mishra ….whatever she is …I don’t care….make sure she gets the best experience of her life…treat her like queen… ‘’

Bonnie walked to the door to leave but before leaving she warned him; ‘’I know…you are going to use her against BS …but as a friend I am warning you …this is a mistake…Arjun will destroy you’’

Sam was busy working in her room…Samrat knocked…these days he hesitant in talking to his family…Sam looked up; ‘’you don’t have knock Pa…please come’’

Samrat; ‘’Sam have you forgiven me’’

Sam got up and stood near the window with her back to Samrat; ‘’Have your forgiven yourself’’

Samrat; ‘’I will never be able to do that’’

Sam; ‘’Why???’’

Samrat; ‘’This guilt… that because of me you could have lost your life ….kills me every minute’’

Sam; ‘’I am safe…but yes you are guilty of breaking Mom’s heart and for not speaking up the day Radhika took such a big step…you could have saved her that day…she went through so much…Pa you always said…that you regarded her as your daughter then why didn’t you…and now we all are living in a guilt…a guilt from which only she can free us…but don’t know where is she’’

Samrat; ‘’What do you mean?’’

Sam; ‘’Radhika did not go to Hrishikesh…her no. is not is not in use…and her family is not ready to disclose any whereabouts…Arjun thinks Teji and Neil know where she is….Teji resigned…and forcing Neil is next to impossible’’

Samrat; ‘’Sam can you forgive me’’

Sam; ‘’I already have…I am too tired to fighting crying…blaming everyone…I lost too much…now no more…but I can’t help you with Mom’s forgiveness …I am sorry for that ….’’ Samart nodded and walked off …Sam kept on watching him and realized…in just few days her father suddenly aged by years…he looked broken…but she was helpless…Piyali had secluded herself from everyone…she needed time to calm down…Sam huffed and went back to her work…

Neil was sleeping on his stomach…when light entered his room…he felt a shadow walking towards him and then lowering itself near his ear….he realized this was Sam…she smiled on his rough cheek and moved her lips to his ear and screamed; ‘’Wake up Idiot!!!’’ Neil got up with a jerk…kicking Teji off the bed…Teji was too shocked…Neil was sitting like a statue…Sam’s thought had scratched all his wounds…he closed his eyes to calm down…Teji walked to him and lightly touched his shoulder…completely Leaning on Neil…Neil opened his eyes and screamed finding Teji so close to him…and Teji jumped like a scared kitten…as if Neil was possessed …Neil realized what happened he walked to Teji…but Teji ran in the corner…’’Don’t come near me…I am trained in fighting all kinds of ghosts and spirits…shoo…shoo’’ Neil smiled and made a posture like a scare crow…scaring Teji to nuts…

They had plan their day at the beach…Neil Teji and radhika went for a banana boat ride…they were able to come up when the boat turned…but when ever Teji tried he would topple everyone down…the
Boat man got so frustrated that…he pulled teji to his boat…making others laugh…but Radhika didn’t realize that Neil and Teji were doing these small things …to keep her happy…they allgot temporary tattoo done…with Teji having all 12 zodiac sign on his body and radhika did Scorpio…but later realized it was of Arjun…Prerna watched Radhika while she was getting the tattoo done..’’ Radhika why one anklet’’

Radhika; ‘’I lost the other one…don’t know where…but since it’s a trend to wear a single anklet I kept this one…looks cool’’

Neil utilized his skill of photography…by clicking numerous pictures …these pictures in future were about to burn Arjun to ashes…Radhika bought herself a midi sleeveless dress from a local market before going back to the hotel…after bathing she quickly changed into that…Mala praised her look…her POV; ‘Why can’t someone like you walk into Neil’s life…and give him some happiness…wish I would have met you before’ after dinner…Mala teji retired for the night and Radhika went for a walk with Neil…along the hotel beach…Radhika had noticed Neil…little upset; ‘’What wrong Neil’’

Neil smiled wide; ‘’Nothing Chashni…just fighting some old memories….but everything will be fine’’

Radhika; ‘’I am sorry…you and Teji are doing so much for me…and didn’t even realized that you are pained too’’

Neil; ‘’Hey its ok…you have been Mother Teresa for very long now behave your age…by the way you look cute in this dress…like a school girl…lets click one picture together…’’ They clicked not just one but many pictures together…using different picture themes making pictures cute..funny..scary and lovable…Radhika and Neil enjoyed like good buddies tickling ,running behind each other…and went back to their respective rooms… Tomorrow it was the last day of the trip…and Radhika had made her mind up to move forward…

Arjun walked into office…and everyone turned mute…Sam had noticed too many Changes in Arjun…he used to dress in formals…but gradually he dressing was going rough…he was wearing a faded jeans with half tucked shirt…and a jacket….girls who were already were in an awe of him…were ready to faint…Sam walked into his cabin; ‘’You changed so much in a week’’

Arjun; ‘’That was a sham Sam..this is real me…’’ he looked up and smile…Sam smiled back and took a chair in-front of him; ‘’Girls are already half dead…god help them’’

Arjun; ‘’ No use…I am already taken…and God save my wife from me …by the way…what about the meeting with Dreamz and Prim’’

Sam; ‘’They refused…now what’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’Fine….now they will…Sam… I have paid back their loan which they took for starting their company…the firm which lend them money is a small one…they agreed immediately…so technically I am their sponsor…I have the papers …now they will do things our way’’

Sam was shocked; ‘’How did you get so much money’’

Arjun; ‘’I am a business man…before coming to BS I had my small e-commerce venture in London I started while I was a student…I still run that…I earned good…By the way any news on Teji..’’

Sam; ‘’Oh yes…seems he is joining Dreamz’’

Arjun smiled; ‘’Just perfect…so prepare to welcome him back..…Sam we are leaving for the meeting in 10 min…time to set things in order’’

Radhika got ready…she was stepping into a new life…she got ready in a simple peach kurti and leggings and left her hair lose…Radhika made a small prayer and was ready to leave…prerna fed her sweet curd wishing her …Neil got ready ; ‘’Chashniji…you chariot is ready…come’’ Neil dropped her to her new office and gave her a wrapped box..’’Chashni…this is for your new beginning….now don’t leave without me…I will pick you up in the evening’’ Radhika nodded and went inside

Radhika after induction was directed to her work station…Anuj called Radhika to his cabin…Radhika was going towardsAnuj’s cabin when she came face to face with Bonnie…

Bonnie; ‘’So Sam kicked you out of BS’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’Leave me think about yourself…I might get you kicked from here too’’ Bonnie stomped and left..Radhika giggled and went inside Anuj…welcomed her with a smile and scanned Radhika from head to toe…his POV ; ‘Not bad…kind of cute…’’

Anuj; ‘’Have a seat Radhika…I hope we are all cool’’

Radhika ; ‘’Yes we are’’

Anuj; ‘’So I will come directly to the point…one the world’s biggest cosmetic brand is laughing their products in India and they have a big competition from local and other global brands in India…you need to design their complete campaign…we will be competing with best players in the market…so we need to give them the best’’
Radhika nodded and was about to leave…when Anuj spoke again; ‘’Radhika I hope you are not here for benefiting BS’’

Radhika turned and replied confidently; ‘’You can take the project back if you don’t trust me…but guess you hired me because you know I am good and honest’’ Anuj liked her confidence..he nodded and Radhika walked out to start her work…

Precap; …BS loses a project to Samudra … ARadhika face off … Mad Arjun…Stubborn Radhika…Sam confesses her love….Neil refuses…confusion begins

Credit to: Gauri

103 comments

  1. nita

    Nice one gauri di….waiting for aradhika face off……are you posting DPO tomorrow????… Love you

    • Gauri

      Thanks Nita 🙂 still writing DPO 🙂 will try and post by tomorrow 🙂 love you 🙂

  2. Hope

    The precap looks cool..waiting 4 nxt update… A very gud mrng..first of all..
    Loving sam n Arjun’s new bond… So my di..is ur project going well? Well..back 2 clg..now i’m not a junior anymore..waiting 4 freshers..hi..hi..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Hope 🙂 congrats for moving to senior grade 😉 enjoy this phase 🙂 my project….I am hell tired of 2 days of back to back meetings…. now back to blore and office….dying for a weekend 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  3. Joona

    Wow..it was amazing di….u just rocked it….teji and Neil…wt a Jodi….ha ha…I loved them…
    Wonderful episode… Keep rocking….

  4. Awesome episode, you took the story in a different direction, well done, it’s really good, eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

  5. Kavya

    Awesome episode gauri di..it was just mind-blowing..want to see aradhika’s faces when they meet once again..arjun missing radhika was soooooooooo niiiiicccccceeeeee..keep on going..god bless you…

  6. Supriya

    Here comes my favourite writer and sweeps me off my feet….this was the line you used to comment on thena’s ff ‘can love sparkle’i am using it to praise you di…..I stole your line but I am a honest thief… Di you don’t know how impatient I was to read this one…..when I saw it that it got updated almost 15 mins of mine were spend in dancing….. I am jumping in happiness…. Mom thinks I have gone crazy…..want to dedicate that crazy kiya re song to you right now……di arjun smoking hot….hardcore businessman srsly…..the way you portrayed him that z commendable….. Love you for that glycerin……Neil teji sweet buddies I love teji too……glycerin now my questions….. Will anuj try to get close to radhika?….will arjun teach anuj a lesson?…..when will Neil share their trip pics with arjun?……will mala push radhika to go back to arjun?…..will you show ankush anger on arjun?…..will bonnie create problems for radhika?….. Good you accepted my suggestion of bringing bonnie…..she will add mirchi masala to ff…..will Neil fake love for radhika to irritate arjun?…..will arjun hurt rads for her closeness with Neil?….will he be mad at her for joining samudra?…..how will be her reaction to all this growing madness?….will Prerna pair up raneil?….when will arjun drag rads to his house?….I mean after how many updates?……will Neil stop him?….next update mein he will know that radhika z staying in Neil’s house m I right?……will you show some party to celebrate samudra’s success?….if so radhika will dance with whom?….I mean Neil or anuj?…..when will you show mala in favour of arjun?…..will you show arjun confessing his love in next update?…..z it a double dhamaka for next one?…..are you updating dpo tom?……will you show rads rude to arjun?……I want to see him suffer more……he should burn to the core…..feeling bad for Sam but she deserves it…..will this people misunderstand raneil as a couple?…..will arjun think the same?…..when z the next update?…..answer all if possible…..I loved it to the core di…..hope you got your rest after you returned home……how are you feeling now?……do update soon let me know the day in your reply…..love you to eternity…… muaaah….. Tc??????????????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Thanks reporter 🙂 now news update 🙂 and bulletins are- yes Anuj will try getting close to Rads to burn Arjun, arjun well one day he will teach Anuj a lesson, pictures Neil will not share but Arjun will come across it accidently… yes Mala will push Radhika 🙂 No Ankush will not shoe any anger on Arjun 🙂 Bonnie will just want her out of Samudra …..Neil and Radhika will not fake anything 🙂 as of now he won’t hurt her 🙂 she will be no reaction 🙂 I don’t know what I will write and after how many updates I just go with the flow so you have to wait 🙂 no part as of now 🙂 love confession and refusal will happen for both the couples 🙂 dpo I am writing …let me if I am able to complete it 🙂 yes RNeil will be miss understood as a couple 🙂 next update should be on Sat 🙂 no rest I went directly to office from the airport now waiting for weekend :)love you loads a big hug for you 🙂

      • Supriya

        Omg I srsly turned into a reporter….maybe I asked you atleast 20 questions in my comment di well thanks for all the answers…. Love them to the core….but one more when will arjun accidentally come across that pics?….will arjun really confess in next one?….will rads undergo a makeover?….r you planning to show short hair on her?…..no I don’t like rads with short hair please I once told you too that never cut your hair….plz no short hair…… When will angry mode start?…..z it a double dhamaka on sat?…..oh gosh I should shut up my questions never end…..you didn’t reply me on messenger….. Take rest darling hug your bed tight when you reach home…..love you to moon and back…..muaaah…. Tc?

      • Gauri

        make over is possible … I haven’t thought anything on future updates 🙂 so have a little patience …and breath 🙂 love you 🙂

  7. shiva

    oh my goodness the epi was too good yaar. liking the changed arjun…. and the precap am speechless…. but will hav to wait for it na which is really difficult for impatient person like me its not fair ya. if u keep on writing like this i can just sit glued to the comp reading your ff. And girl slowly ur writing is becoming too good i love all the satirical expression that urs have.. lol seriously all smiles and bear hugs to u. was awake till 3am but after that i dosed and this is the first thing am doing after getting up. with lots of love.And may i know wat ur doing? coz am new here so just was curious

    • Gauri

      Thanks SHiva for the lovely comment 🙂 well I am a IT recruiter working in Bangalore 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

  8. sammy

    Like precap is giving me goose bumps.di ..picture toh abhi baaki hai mere dost ..lol..Awesome chappy ..teji ..I will date him haha …di you are the best ..one more confession …you write so good ..that I always want you to write something vampires and werewolves story ..when you will write it ..it will be like reading a romantic novel.. 🙂 🙂

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sammy darling 🙂 Vampires…. warewolves I am a fan of such stories specially Twilight Saga and Vampire diaries recently I read a book Frozen on Vampires…but I know it won’t turn out good if I write ….may be because I don’t believe in supernatural stuff …. but I do read that 🙂 but thanks for making me feel so good 🙂 love you sweety 🙂

  9. Another mindboggling chapter come here…always frnds masti is chilling,relaxing…nothing is better than frnds get together…aweee I love raneil n teji bond…precap so good…bonnie is alive??? Lol…always b happy my friend…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rosie 🙂 my fav destination is goa….whenever I plan a holiday I end up there 🙂 yup bonnie is alive…I pulled her out of the grave 🙂 loads of love 🙂 waiting for the dark fiction :)love u

  10. Jessie

    Awesome.. awesome… loved n laughed neil n Teji scenes.. wah.. I love this Arjun.. no more sad n tears.. fight for ur love.. hugs to u for bringing a strong one.. sam’s dialogues were all matured.. good seems sam n Arjun are turning to new direction so fast than RaNeil.. waitinggg for next one.. thanks for a wonderful chappy..loads of love n TC

  11. Gayu

    Gauri di it’s awesome precap really interesting pls update soon and thanks for being regular.

  12. M

    radhika in tunic…wow…..teji lol….he s so cute…..neil……use those pictures man…..arjun….a smart business man…..sam….a strugler to get some love……prerna.
    ..deserve everything best now……such a kind heart!!!

  13. Sv

    This was freaky awesome. Arjun what a kind of a business tycoon is he ?? Gosh has got all kind of tricky things guess sam is not gonna faint. Radhika is soo cute today loved it. Teji oh god sho shoo im laughing like mad. Di you are super when it comes to comedy. Neil a best friend forever and the best in the world. Di make Arjun and SAm burn like anything , they need to do that and bonnie is true in her words and precap is nail biting, ardhika face off yippiee loved it .

    Didi u are a such great writer. Love you soo much and your words. Take care di be strong hope you have a happy and safe journey and bear my hugs and kisses too . Love you

    • Gauri

      Thanks my cutie pie 🙂 love you 🙂 hey I can never write comedy like you 🙂 you won’t believe the banana boat ride incident happened with my frnd she toppled us all atleast 4-5times I guess I drank a litre of sea water…but it was fun 🙂 you are an amazing friend Sv I am blessed to have you 🙂 million hugs for you 🙂

      • Sv

        Di how was the travel all good ?? 1 liter of sea water oh my gosh. Di u rocked evwn there Lol. Take rest and eat and sleep . Love u di . Bear hugs and kisses.

  14. Dhara

    Awesome Gauri. I just wish radhika fulfills her dream. Nothing else. Doesn’t matter what other people thinks about her.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dhara 🙂 yes even I want that she will will fulfill her dream …irrespective of all the obstacles 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  15. Aastha

    Gauri di…………..I’m very sorry for not commenting in ur last week’s updates…………I was in hospital so there was network problems………..but I had read all ur updates………..Neil and Teji are really funny…………..I enjoyed all their funny moments………………Arjun’s new business man avatar is really nyc…………………………what did u mean by ardhika face off ???? I wish ardhika and nesam will unite sooooooooooon………….love u………….TC……….

    • Gauri

      Thanks Aastha and no need for sorry dear ….how is your mom doing … hope she is better please give my wishes to her 🙂 well I will make them fight first and then unite 🙂 tc and stay blessed 🙂 love you

      • Aastha

        Hi di……….mom is recovering………….loads better than last week……………I’ll give ur well wishes…………thanks for clearing my doubt…………..when will u update dpo ??? u must be very tired na……….so no pressure…………….

      • Gauri

        Good to hear she is fine 🙂 tc of her and yourself too 🙂 will update dpo tomorrow 🙂 love you 🙂

  16. Rg

    Wow gauri superb. Finally after a Long wait read mmz. It’s toooooo gud. I loved it to d core. Raneil bonding was superb. Teji was funny and cute. Arjuns answer to Sam of being taken was fantastic. Am Glad they both patched up. So v r going to c raneil and samarj bonding is it? Well I hope so. So d new villain in rads life is anuj and will bonnie too take her revenge? Well arjun s plan to keep teji is gud but will arjun b able to dominate teji as before? I feel sorry for Sam. I feel sorry for piyali too. But am very Glad ardhika is going to meet soon. I can’t wait for d clash of the Titans. Gauri I know u have been busy yet I couldn’t bear the wait for this ff. And finally my impatient wait was paid off. I saw ur ff first thing in the morning and it made my day. Gauri you do seem to have an awesome imagination coupled with magical hands. The combo is a terrific one. You do really enrich my life with ur ffs. I do mean that. Ü r too gud. Now for some questions
    Will d photos taken btw rads and Neil make samarj jealous?
    Will anuj try to get close to rads or will he like her in romantic sense?
    Will bonnie trouble rads?
    Will Sam apologise to rads?
    Will arjun dominate teji as before or will teji too grow up?
    Regarding the tattoo will arjun c it and know? By d way how can Scorpio look like arjun? As I felt u were a bit vague there was it intentional? Did rads started out with writing Scorpio and ended up writing arjun?(pls do tell me this in detail?)
    Will arjun confess his love or feeling? Will he apologise for all d insults?
    Will rads question him with regards to y he treated her tat way? All d questions of Nandini’s misdeed? Flirting with Sam after marriage proposing her? Demeaning her in front of all her frnds and family? Calling her names, behenji, with whom nothing intimate can occur. Calling their marriage a sham… In short everything.. I would love to c his replies as both Sam and arjun had run roughshod over her treating her abominable. Wat they did was detestable and they expect her to forgive and forget. He treated her with loathsome cruelty, only saving grace was that he loved her in his own painfully selfish sadistic may be bitter sweet way. I want this face off gauri. For once I want rads to lose her cool or patience or her tolerance.. Call it wat u will. But pls tell me gauri will she lose her cool for once give back wat she got no not insult or revenge but both Sam and arjun needs to know how detestable they were towards her and tat it isn’t easy to forgive and forget. Pls gauri pls pls tell me this face off is thr.
    By d way will rads have a make over? Would she have cut her hair? Will arjun like her make over.
    Will arjun have something to hope for when he sees her? Will she give herself away as to her feelings for arjun ? I badly want arjun to Guess her feelings.
    Will c d tattoo and C tatit’s his name.
    Oh gauri I know this is soooo many questions but I can’t help it yaar. I missed this one tooooooo much. Will u give a double damaka for mmz? Pls say yes … By d way plz tell me when is d nxt one. I know I’m asking for too much, u r busy too. But am crazy in love with ur ff. You r best. Thanking u for giving such an awesome ff. I can barely wait for d nxt chapter. Do take care of ur health. Stay happy. Cheers to u.

    • Gauri

      Thanks ….Thanks….Thanks…. a million more thanks Rg 🙂 love you 🙂 yes these pics will accidentally reach them making them burn 🙂 yes will try…but only for his benefit 🙂 Bonnie will just want her out of Samudra 🙂 yes am will apologise 🙂 Teji is scared of Arjun that is why he left 🙂 Arjun will use a different path 🙂 Radhika wanted to do her sun sign but ended up getting Arjun’s sun sign as she was thinking abt him….my bad…I wrote in a hurry 🙂 Arjun will confess…starting next and many times… 🙂 Rads will question him fight him…ignore him…. you will have a grand face off 🙂 yes she will lose her cool 🙂 make over …yes might be 🙂 he will guess her feelings 🙂 tatoo no… 🙂 double dhamaka can only happen if I get some extra time to write will have to write dpo too 🙂 love you stay blessed

  17. ab

    Love u sooooooo much di mwaaah?? love this chapter di an amazingly superb awesome fantastic again love u ?

  18. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding, mind blowing episode. …gauriiiiiiiiiiiii my sweeeeeet darling. ..it’s superbbbbb n lovely. ….arjun back to his real self… brooding king businessman….loved it ….Sam n samrat convo was emotional. ..neil teji rads, trio masti n fun was hilarious….teji sooo cuteeee. …the trip to goa was really awesome. …arjun in search of rads…missing her badly…the scarf scene was very heart touching. ..muaaahhh…rads joined samudra….wow…rads n Bonnie convo was really heated…anuj looks fishy to me….rads gave very good reply to him….loved rads confidence. ….neil dreaming of sam…awww….prerna was good too…..neil n ankush convo very good…now he knows saral was behind his store’s fire….good….precap is very exciting n interesting. ….mind blowing narration n dialogues very awesoooooome. ….loved it loved it loved it soooooooo muchhhhhh. …n love you the most…..keep it up honeyyy. .eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . muaaaaahhhhhh. …lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. … 🙂 😉 😀 ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

    • Gauri

      Roma meri jaan…..main tere kurban…. 🙂 I just feel like singing when ever I see your comment 🙂 loads of love and stay blessed 🙂 love u 🙂 a bug hug for you 🙂

  19. roshini

    Awesome Gauri ….I really want to know what will Arjun do once he comes F2F with Radhika 😉
    love you

  20. Sathya

    Its Fabulous Gauri… awesome episode… and i am saying that now it is the time for u to establish as a writer… Raneil nTeji scenes are awestruck… ?. Now arjun has to handle Anuj.. one more in the queue for rads.. already he s pissed of with neil.. am pity for arjun now ???… I loved Rads confidence.. she is really a queen.. no need to treat her like that..A queen will always be treated as a queen.. no matter where she goes.. And Gauri u r our queen now… u will always get a spl love n respect from us.. love u a lot dear.. keep rocking. ???????

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sathya 🙂 OMG ! queen and me….well love you for making me dance in happiness 🙂 loads of love 🙂 and million hugs for you stay blessed 🙂

  21. Kusum

    Super awesome ….wish this could have been the original track………waiting for next update.

  22. Ritu

    wao..it was so cute and adorable….loved raneil and teji’s bonding a lot..and also SaJun bonding..precap sounds superb…eager to see Arjun’s madness…waiting for nxt..post soon..and how was ur trip..hope all fantastic..love u..take care and keep rocking

    • Gauri

      Thanks Ritu 🙂 rip was all official …. hell boring died listening to presentations 😛 🙂 thanks again 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

  23. Di its really gud arjun mastermind n business woww……. Radz& Neil bond i like it……teji dt beach scene was awesome….. Wat will happened when radz & arjun cum face to face ?????? Waiting di pls update soon luv u a lot bear hug fr u ……… 🙂

  24. Gianna

    Awwwwwww I loved it, goa masti was fun and hilarious, teji getting robbed lol i laughed so hard. Loved that raneil had a great time but the real tests begins now. The precap got me more hooked to ur story. Waiting for the nxt one, stay blessed

  25. priya

    amazing episode diiiiiiiiiii………………. precap is awesome ………………….. update soon …………………love you loads ……………… muaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh

  26. You are fantastic Gauri darling..You Never fails to amazed me…i have no words to eulogy you..Neil n teji tactics to make rads laugh was so cute…Today’s epi stole by Arjun is so confident to get her back..n i guess Neil’s rudeness towards Sam..ohh..can’t see sam without neil..Precao..ohhooooo..aradhika faceoff…clash of Titans… my excitement on its peak…so how your client meet gauri!??… Love you Darling.. take care..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dipika 🙂 love to moon and back…. I am thinking of different words to thank you for lifting my spirits up every time 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

      • hey natasha darling sorry for keep u waiting.. i didn’t started writting for nxt as i stuck with some stuff..so will write tomorrow n will try to update on fri or sat..love you so much dear

  27. sreee

    di epi was wonderful….i am glad that arjun is strong…..di make arjun repent and plead for everything he did..so that when he would claim radhikas hand in future after she has accepted..he should do with full rights and pride not with anyones pity…same should go for sam…..they should clean before their beautiful love life star…when is dpo????….love u di…take care..

  28. Jas

    Love this episode. Waiting for next. When. Will you post next? If there will be face off of Ardhika or not? Please write along one. Waiting for your reply

    • Gauri

      Thanks Jas 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 yes next is the face off 🙂 will try a long one 🙂

  29. subha

    mind blowing episode…………eagerly waiting next one….pls pls pls update next one soon.tc

  30. My darling sissy….. So many many many kisses muhaaaaa 😀 its fabulous mind blowing superbbbbbbbb all synonymous of these words 😀 😀 loved each n every part dis ff 😀 I think one business women s hiding somewhere in u wowwwww darling….. 😀 😀 Arjun’s calculate wow simply superbbbbbbbb DAT idea u made s really pakka fabulous 😀 😀 😀 pls knock dat business woman door sure u ll get good result 😀 😀 u r really multi talented darling sissy 😀 😀 😀 love u lot 😀 be happy 😀

    • Gauri

      Thanks Suga 🙂 thanks for calling me business women 🙂 love to moon and back my sister 🙂 bless you 🙂

  31. Jerly

    Oh no!!!!!!!!!!! I think the tension between Aradhika is going to take its strength ….. it would be better if Sam talks with Radz and clear the confusion . OMG !!! I don’t want to see the lovebirds like this…. I want them to be together soon…… plz do something fast Gauri…… update nxt part soon dear……..

  32. Rg

    Hi gauri u told me once tat arjun himself will admit tat he forced rads to marry him? Did u by chance wite tat in any of d previous chapters Becos I think I missed it? If not when will he say it? Also will he apologise for everything? Will samarj misunderstand raneil relationship ? Pls update soon. Thanks.

  33. Rg

    And also will she accuse him abt his flirty ways after marriage? Too. Sorry forgot to write tat.

    • Gauri

      Hey Rg 🙂 yes Arjun will confess everything … he will apologise for all the bad he did …but Radhika will not give in easily 🙂

  34. Waited eagerly for d episode …finally got it…as usual u nailed it out…hope you have accomplished ur wrk successfully..take care..love u

  35. natasha

    gauri hw will u manage to give big updates every i wonder hw will u manage to type
    to type 5 parts of my ff only i became very restless in between i use ask my mumma to help i use to narrate and her use to type but u tho u will update regularly and u manage to giv big updates ur very gr8 dhi really all those who manage to giv big updates are really gr8 becasue typing sooo much its not soo easy mainly lazy heads like me and u giv ur updates wid crcts inverted commas articles full stops capital letters u might have seen in mine i violated all the the rules of grammar i wonder if my english eacher will see that she will hang herself
    ok bye dhi ill stop my blabbering here
    cya dhi tc gn
    luv u muah muah muah muah
    lots of huggssssssssss

  36. Devi

    No words…awesomee epi….waiting fr aradhika face off… and how arjun n sam wil convince radhika n neil n bring tem back to teir lives… be happy ..tak cre…

  37. Wow Gauri dear.. ….no words to describe .. ….u just crushed it…..each an every scenes describe well……I loved it to d core……can’t wait for next episode……oh my God !!!! Ardhika face off iam very excited……keep it up…..love u lot……tc…..

  38. Wowww wowww wooooooowwwwwww…. maar dala.. what a brain you have? mastermind didi??? Kya business ki khoobiyan hai!!!
    The precap is sooooo interesting…. pzzzz upload fast.. cant wait this time.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Roshni 🙂 loads of love dear 🙂 when is your manmarziyan and kindle update waiting for it 🙂 love you 🙂

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