MMZ- Married by Fate- Chapter 11

Hello there lovely people….thanks for all the support and love…here is the next chapter 🙂 hope you enjoy this …. do let me know how was it …your comments matter a lot 🙂 next on on Tuesday or Wednesday 🙂 Happy weekend folks

Chapter 11

As soon as Radhika stepped out of the lift to enter the Bird Song…someone caught her elbow and dragged her to the corner it was Neil…Arjun who saw this was mad with rage…but couldn’t do a thing as he didn’t wanted Sam to notice that…Once Arjun left Neil spoke; ‘’Where is your phone’’

Radhika; ‘’Arjun Sir heard me talking to you…he broke it’’

Neil; ‘’Ok I have a spare one…listen your wedding celebration party is on Friday evening this week…lets plan’’

Radhika; ‘’Neil …. I will join in you in your cabin…but after sometime….anyways there are so mant stories building up about me and you’’

Neil; ‘’I don’t care…do you?’’ Radhika nodded negative….Neil patted her cheek and walked to his cabin…

krutika was entering ofiice and saw this; ‘’Radhika …aren’t you ashamed of yourself …going around with so many guys…’’

Radhika folded her arms to chest smiled and replied; ‘’Did I stop you? No…but the problem is you don’t have guts to impress even one’’ Radhika walked off leaving Kritika speechless….

Piyali called everyone for a meeting…Radhika as usual was kept aloof….Neil came to her desk…held her arm…and dragged her to the meeting room….with all the staff watching them… surprised….Neil was the last one to enter…he pulled Radhika in ….Arjun clutched his pen tight…Piyali frowned and Sam just tried reading Arjun’s expression….Neil pulled a chair…and asked Radhika to sit…she simply took the chair without looking at anyone…she was tired of the hatred in their eyes…Neil took a chair next to her….Neil watched her nervously fidgeting….she tightly clutched her kurta ….Neil moved his hand and kept on Radhika’s….she calmed…Arjun dropped his folder and bend down to pick it up…Arjun’s anger was on peak now…he was going mad looking and Neil-Radhika’s hands together in Radhika’s lap …and above all she was watching him with a smile…. Piyali started the meeting and briefing about the client….but everyone were busy in their own world…

Sam’s POV; ‘’Whom should I trust Arjun or Radhika’’

Arjun’s POV ; ‘’Neil is taking advantage of Radhika’s situation….to hurt me he is trying to be close to her… she is innocent…I cant let anyone harm her’’

Neil POV; ‘ I will end this drama…this Friday…I will make everyone apologize to Radhika’’

Radhika POV; ‘After 2 days…I will finish this story..and will leave everything behind…but why does my heart pain so much ‘ Radhika eyes met Arjun’s …he was watching her without blinking….Arjun read pain on Radhika’s face…he just wanted to pull her into his protective embrace…kiss her tears away…and give her all the love and happiness she deserved…They were sitting at distance and unaware of their reactions…Arjun’s curled fingers started opening as if moving to Radhika to hold her….and Radhika she unconsciously curled her fingers back….retrieving back from Arjun’s life

Samrat entered looked at everyone and spoke; ‘’Sorry for interruption…I am throwing a party this Friday…to celebrate Arjun-Radhika’s wedding…all of you are invited’’This sentence left everyone shocked accept radhika and Neil.. but they did not show that….after Samrat left …Piyali dispersed the meeting and left to speak to Samrat… Neil gotup; ‘’Chashni….come to my cabin now’’ radhika nodded and followed him…

Radhika entered Neil’s cabin and he locked it…Teji greeted Radhika with a smile…all the 3 discussed their plan…Neil wanted Nandini to handed over to the police…but Radhika decided to get her punished by Arjun or Sam…after The y finalized their plan…Teji lefdt the two alone…Neil turned to Radhika; ‘’You will leave Arjun’s house the moment all this end…promise me’’

Radhika; ‘’Yes I will’’

Neil; ‘’are you going back to Hrishikeah’’

Radhika; ‘’for now I have nothing in my head just want a break and forget everything that happened in last few months…I am planning to focus on my dreams…after all this is what I came to Mumbai for’’

Neil smiled; ‘’that’s like my girl’’

Arjun called Nandini…’’Nandu when are you coming back’’

Nandini; ‘’Why do you sound stressed?’’

Ajun; ‘’Samrat Khanna is throwing a party to celebrate my marriage…’’

Nandini was shocked; ‘’What??? Is he out of his mind….fine I will be back by toady evening…meanwhile just push Radhika to sign the divorce papers…this is the only option’’

Arjun; ‘’Nandu but??’’

Nandini; ‘’Iknow you love her…you can go back to her once we are done with our revenge…I will myself get you married to Radhika’’

Arjun calmed; ‘’Thanks Nandu…you are the best sister’’ Nandini disconnected and smirked…she had been in Panchagani for 4 days and it appeared to her a theft…as money jewellery and some small appliances were missing and everything else was left scattered…well this was too planned by Neil…she asked Rana to prepare for her departure

Arjun called Radhika to his cabin…she knocked and entered; ‘’Sir you called me’’

Arjun threw papers on the table ;‘’Sign these and end this drama…I don’t want celebrate a sham…’’

Radhika looked at Arjun teary eyed…she recalled the moments between them…the way he held her, hugged her after breaking the bathroom door…their missed kiss…and now it was a sham for him ..Radhika’s POV; ‘Yes it’s a sham…don’t know why my heart started dreaming….stupid me ’ Radhika picked up the papers and looked at Arjun…’’Have you signed them?’’

Arjun; ‘’Yes’’

Radhika smiled; ‘’Fine Sir…I will sign it in 2 days…please be my husband till the end of this party…or I should say my farewell from your life’’ Radhika left his cabin…leaving Arjun heartbroken and pained…he wanted time to stop now…Radhika quickly went to her place pushed the papers in her bag and ran to the terrace to cry her heart out…Neil followed her…he found her crying vigorously and hugged her; ‘’Chashni enough….we will end this’’

Radhika wiped her tears and looked at Neil…but tears were still pouring out and her voice was shaky; ‘’Yes it should end….Promise me Neil…you will drag me out of his life after the party…even if I don’t agree…I give you this right… will you do this for me’’

Neil smiled wiped her tears…;’’Chashni…I would have done that even if you wouldn’t have told me…he doesn’t deserve you…now be brave and wipe your face’’ Radhika nodded…Neil gave her one bear hug and took her back…Arjun-Sam were busy is some conversation…Neil gave a hateful look to Arjun…he made Radhika sit on the chair…patted her head and left for his cabin. Radhika ignored Arjun completely for rest of day…she left before him and Neil dropped her…Nandini was home by then…she smirked looking at Radhika’s gloomy face…Radhika picked her pillow and left the room…without giving a glance to Arjun…Arjun couldn’t sleep..he kept twisting and turning all he could remember was Radhika he got up and came to the hall…Radhika was standing in the hall…with tears in her eyes…she felt his presence and turned…both had immense pain in their eyes and heart..only silence spoke…Radhika turned her face away.

The day of Party

Nandini asked Arjun to leave and she will bring Radhika along….Radhika dressed in a simple Anarkali..but Nandini mocked her attire…she gave her a dress; ‘’If you want to come…dress in this Arjun wanted you to wear this…if you don’t want to wear this don’t come…and yes your husband has send a car for you’’
Nandini pushed the bag inRadhika’s hands….Radhika looked at the dress and felt disgusted…she decided to wear it to end Nandini’s game…Radhika steps out of the car…uncomfortable of her uncovered skin…people stare at her….some with greed and others with disgust at her attire…Arjun who comes out to take a call is stunned to see her attire…he fumes looking at a man trying to close to Radhika and pushes him…Arjun reprimands her for wearing such clothes…Radhika realizes it was Nandini’s plan to embarrass her..she ignores is words and walks ahead…Arjun pulls Radhika in a room…and ties a long wrap aroung her waist giving her dress an elegant look….he looks into her eyes cups her cheek and softly says; ‘’I know I am the worst man born on this earth…but you are my wife…and my respect and pride lies in your repect’’ Radhika tries to read his eyes her POV; ‘Is this the truth…or a sham again…please sir…I am already half dead…don’t make it difficult’ Arjun wraps an arm around her waist…and enters the party leaving nandini stunned…Neil who was accoimpained by his friend Sharon had already disturbed Sam…Nandini ask Sam to snatch what belongs to her Sam looks at Arjun and then Neil…but her eyes stays on Neil.

Neil comes forward and welcomes then and turns to radhika ; ‘’Chashni you look really pretty…I haven’t danced with you till date…will you dance with me…’’ Radhika smiles and takes his hand…making Arjun restless…Neil-radhika dance beautifully…never breaking the rytjym… leaving Arjun Sam on flames…Nandini gestures Arjun to go to Sam…but he fails to understand due to his concentration on Radhika…Neil winks a Teji

Teji; ‘’Neil Boss this party is to celebrated Arjun Sir’s wedding so please let the groom dance with the bride…’’

Neil smiles…and spins radhika to Arjun…Arjun’s hold her waist tightly…and possessively…He pulls her close and beings his dance…least caring about the guests and their rolling eyes on Arjun radhika’s close dance…Radhika turns her eyes away but Arjun digs his fingers into her flesh…making her look staright into his eyes…Neil ask Sharon for a dance…but Sam pulls him for a dance; ‘’First dance is only mine’’

Neil; ‘’Sorry today you are second…I gave first to Chashni…she is looking so pretty’’ Sam stomps his foot and pulls him for dance…

Neil; ‘’well me and Chashni gave you a chance to grab Arjun…but you missed it’’

Sam; ‘’I will get him any way’’

Neil; ‘’So why not now…what are you doing with me…Sammy I am a human too…and you are aware of my feelings for you stop hurting me..I am moving forward …want to fall for a girl who will love me conditionally’’ Neil leaves Sam and goes back to Sharon…Sam turns and finds Arjun radhika dancing…Radhika breaks Arjun’s stance by making him aware of Sam’s presence…Arjun moves away from Radhika unwillingly and Radhika gives him a mocking grin….Neil gestures her to follow nandini to the garden…Radhika provkes Nandini…’’Nandini di…now I will never sign divorce papers…Arjun Sir seems to like my company…and today he kept my requrst…I told you I will break your Sam is safe…you won’t be able to touch a hair on her head…and all your plans went in drrain

Nandini retorts ; ‘’I will have my revenge by hook or by crook..if you think you can stop me you are wrong…If I can plan to kill Sam I can kill you too…well I almost did but Arjun and his stupid feelings…he saved your family when I got your fathers shop burned to make you leave…but Arjun…he even stopped your marriage with Saral…which was my idea…I instigated Saral and Sam against you…but he saved you…you are lucky…but for how long….Samrat will pay for rejecting me and breaking my heart…I have been waiting for 18 yrs…I invested in Arjun so much…I will not back out so easily’’

Radhika; ‘’He considers you his god…and look at you…are not even human…’’

Nandini; ‘’No I am not and whats wrong…he would be in an orphanage if not for me…I made him something in life…in return he will have to go by my terms’’

Radhika; ‘’He should know this’’

Nandini; ‘’And he will belive you???…No not in million years…you said he has a heart of gold…he worships me…you will never be able to defeat me…’’

Radhika smirked; ‘’You are right…I won’t but you yourself will….’’ Nandini gives Radhika a confusing look and then is shocked hearing her confession out loud…she runs to the hall and finds …her and Radhika’s recent conversation being played again and again…Nandini looks around trapped and hold Radhika’s throat…’’should have killed you on the day of Arjun-Sam’s marriage when I got you kidnapped’’ Arjun frees Radhika…who tries to catch her breath…he pushes Nandini…Nandini moves to Arjun…but he gestures her to stop…Arjun moves backwards staggers and falls…completely shattered

Neil wraps an arm around Radhika; ‘’Sam…Piyali ma’am and others…I think Chashni proved herself…so we are done…Samrat Sir…please enlighten everyone…this girl who was hated by everyone for more than 2 months…saved your daughter without uttering a single cuss word…yet she got many…now what…you guys were so quick in blaming her but nobody is apologizing….Why????….Ashamed…and Arjun….she could have easily trapped you or send you to jail with your sister because we have enough proofs…but she proved that you were innocent…and even refused to file a complaint against your sister…leaving everything on you…say something…all of you…why the hell you are Silent..!!! no you can’t … Zubin Kritika… you guys pointed fingers at her character…without even looking for a reason……’’

Neil wanted to speak more but Radhika squeezes his hand…he looks at her pained face…and pulls and envelope and places it on Sam’s palm…’’Radhika’s resignation…happy Samaira Khanna! and Mr.Arjun Mehra…here your freedom….she has signed the papers…’’ Neil moves closer to Arjun and whispers a warning; ‘’Stay away from her…I know what’s going in your head’’ Arjun moves his gaze from Neil to Radhika…for once he wishes that she lifts her beautiful brown orbs and look at him…for once he wanted her to see how much he wanted her… loved her and needed her…but Neil covers his view …clearing stating that he was in between him and Radhika…Neil walks to Radhika; ‘’Come Chashni’’ he drags Radhika with him…without giving anyone a chance to speak or repent…Sam crashes on the floor sobbing

Arjun walks out lifelessly with Nanini in pursuit…Piyali gives Samrat a questioning look…Zubin walks to Teji but he walks out…Prerna receives a message and leaves…

Once inside Neil’s car…Radhika breaks down completely all her pain comes out in form of tears…Neil puts an affectionate hand on her head …Radhika hides her face in Neil’s chest and cries…Neil comforts her; ‘’Cry all out Chashni…tomorrow will be a new beginning…leave all the pain behind…He waits for her to calm down…’’Chashni…you are coming with me’’

Radhika wipes her face; ‘’Pick me tomorrow morning…I need to go back tonight…gather everything that’s mine..and give back what belongs to Arjun Sir’’

Neil; ‘’Arjun will persuade you to stay back….he has feelings for you’’

Radhika; ‘’It’s too late for that…I have made my decision tomorrow morning I will come with you…nothing will change my decision…please drop me home’’

Neil agrees; ‘’Chashni remember one thing if you refuse tomorrow…I will drag you …I mean it’’

Radhika smiles and softly replies; ‘’Thanks Neil…for everything…I am lucky I have you’’

Arjun who didn’t knew for how long had been walking…felt someone sucked life out of him…his sister…his God betrayed him…she never cared for him….he was just a toy…and Radhika she was his life…only girl he loved …he gave her so much pain insult…today when he wanted her to look at him…she turned her eyes away…she promised…she will end the relationship….and she left him…Arjun crashed on his knees and screamed….’’RADHIKAAAAAAAAAA’’

Precap; Sam’s repentance …Arjun pleads Radhika to stay …Radhika leaves sleeping Arjun behind with Neil

Credit to: Gauri


  1. ❤?Natasha?❤

    Awesome…..amazing….fabulous…eer…i’m out of words…….its really out of the world……luv ya 4 giving such an ff???❤❤❤

    • Dhara

      I think was last week of dym u covered it in 1 episode. Well looking forward to see what’s there in store.

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dhara 🙂 yes I did that….it was a mix of original and my idea…now I will write completely
      about what I felt should have happened 🙂 love you

  2. its really toooooooo goooodddddddd darling sissy??? i never felt dis much emotion even am watchng dat part in my lap?? but the way u explained d emotions s toooooo good n fabulous?? specially raneil bond?? which i dont have words to explain wat i felt while. am reading ur ff?? am really happy being ur fan?happiness sadness proud excited all emotions are rolling in my hear?? u r such a beautiful writer darling sissy?? am really proud to b ur sissy?? lpve u lotssssssssss??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Suga 🙂 thanks for being such an awesome support you are a swt hrt 🙂 love you 🙂

  3. sammy

    Wao this time radhilka left with Neil …that’s sounds great di ..pls update next chappy soon di:-) 🙂

  4. Hi Gauri Gud Morning ma ?

    Thumbs Up ? for todays epi.

    Gauri, Actually i questioned u at last episode, i think u dint checked it so now i ask u
    Is there any connection between Married by Fate & A journey of Love & Friendship?

    & Happy weekend ☺

    • Gauri

      Thanks Naaga 🙂 guess I missed it ….in a way yes…but in that Radhika immedietly left with a new character…but in this story I will try and make use of all the characters which were not used in the Manmarziyan….so slightly different 🙂 happy weekend 🙂 love you 🙂

  5. Jessie

    Eager to know..wat happens next with Nandini.. Sam.. Awesome’s a pleasure reading ur stories… loads of love..TC..

  6. Sathya

    Gauri.. u know what.. i really want the directors of mmz to rewrite the story after marriage by adopting urs… this far far far better than original… ???????love u a lot dear…

    • Gauri

      Thanks Sathya :)loads of love such an amazing compliment 🙂 loads of love dear stay blessed 🙂

  7. Rg

    Wow gauri fantastic. I loved d twist, unmasking of Nandini’s tyranny was a treat. I loved Neil and his chasini . Perfect. I loved rads answer to Krithika.. I hope Sam and arjun get oodles of pain which they rightly deserve… Arjuns insult of rads ws tooo much. I hope she doesn’t allow them to treat her like shit any more. Poor rads I feel so bad for her. They way arjun called their marriage as sham it just became one. Rads love him, started dreaming abt them but he killed it with his words. And I hope arjun and Sam both recollect their shitty things they said abt her and repent and pay for it. I hope each time arjun things of rads he will b tortured wat all nonsense he did her… And I hope rads, Neil and teji doesn’t forgive them both tat easily.
    Few questions
    Does arjun suspect rads feelings for him
    Will arjun confess b4 rads leaving him
    Will rads b tempted to stay back
    Will Neil,teji, prernas and rads stay together and will Neil and teji resign too?
    I hope Neil treats Sam like shit.
    Wat will b Malas reaction to rads leaving arjun? How will dilip react? Wat will dadaji say
    Where is rads, Neil and teji leaving too.
    How Long will arjun and Sam b tortured?
    Gosh am being b*t*hy… But I can’t help it. Sam and arjun had a easy time of it.. Neither said a sorry.. I think rads deserve her anger and hurt.
    By d way how will rads stay without arjun if she loves him? Does she realise tat she has feelings for her Husband
    Hey wat abt d unopened box in rads and arjuns room which she tried to open but couldn’t . Iam way too curious abt it.
    So will there b any new entries as rads will have to search for New job
    By way as a temporary reprieve where is she going to go….
    Am way curious as to how rads and arjun love story going to shape up. And Aldo Sam and Neil. Will Sam and arjun pair up asthey r forced to stick together to get back their loved ones… Wow…
    I really hope piyali hits samrats head with tea pot. Wats going to happen to Nandini.
    More over I badly want to c rads and arjuns chemistry. As arjun never gives up.
    U r awesome and fantastic. I could barely wait for today to come. Pls update by Tuesday. I don’t think I can wait until tomorrow let alone Wednesday …. Pls gauri… Pretty pls. I know u need time but sorry I can’t help it….

    • Gauri

      Thanks Rg 🙂 wow I must say you read with lot of attention…yes that box is important to Arjun…he will himself open it soon 🙂 now your answers 🙂 no Arjun doesn’t suspect her feelings 🙂 He will plead her to say…indirectly conveying his feelings 🙂 for a moment yes….but Neil will drag her this time 🙂 Radhika will stay with neil for Now….Arjun won’t let Teji go to get hold on Radhika 🙂 Neil will be rude to Sam 🙂 her family’s reaction will be a mixed one …but Ankush will stand for her 🙂 Neil will stay to tourture everyone …you will have a lot more coming…nothing will be easy… neither forgiveness nor reconciliation …wait for the next one 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  8. Supriya.

    Ohh di I had been waiting since last night….. I am touched after reading this….you won’t believe but now my brown eyes are shedding tears after reading arjun’s last part……srsly I m feeling as if I have just watched it live……I don’t have words to praise….. m not deserving enough to praise you…..many things r going in my head r8 now…..I don’t know m not able to explain my feelings in words….I am just emotional r8 now……di Radhika z a true woman srsly everything proved no one can be radhika….. I don’t know but today I feel you wrote the best of all…..I am sorry if you don’t feel so but this z my opinion….. I felt to share with you…..di you don’t know but I was awake whole night…..although I was studying till 4 am I had a restlessness to read mmz…..srsly I have cursed Tu many times since last night…….di now my questions….. When will arjun know rads left him to go to Neil?……how he will react after that……will he take it out on her?……di what will Sam do now……di r you going to show Sam coming to arjun’s house early morning?….. Like they showed in serial……will Neil accept her now?…..will rads play cupid in bringing nesam together?…….I have guessed arjun will tear the divorce papers…..I hope m r8…plz answer this one……how will rads fmly react to all this?……will mala aunty push rads to go to arjun?……I hope they don’t pair up raneil…….di I have to many questions…. But I have to comp my homework but it z not a escape from me……you know I won’t leave you…..I will catch you on chat… you sooooooo muchhhhhhhhh……muaaaaahhhhhh….. Tc????????????????????????????????

    • Gauri

      Hi Supriya 🙂 thanks for calling it best 🙂 now do sleep in the night update wont run away 🙂 Arjun will know it soon…he will serach for her like crazy 🙂 yes Sam will come to Arjun’s house ….no Neil will not accept her easily 🙂 family reaction wait for the next one 🙂 love you to koon and back 🙂 Stay blessed 🙂

      • Supriya.

        Thanks for all your answers glycerin…..di plz update it on Tuesday I don’t think I can w8 till Wednesday…. Di plz plz I m so curious r8 now…..loads of love?

  9. Sv

    This is what it should be. Neil is always at his best. Di I was able to feel the pain of pf radhkka. Donno why but I dont want radjika tp be woth arjun. Neil should pull her out as she needs a break. And that eye lock scene of ardhika was intense. U make mw feel that I was around all those situations and I can visualise the scene and even the pain. I wish everyone has a true friend like neil and teji coz a true friend always stands by wvery situations.

    Love u di and ur words .Take care. Love u too. Bear hugs and kisses. Muuhhhaaa.

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton SV 🙂 whenever I read your comment I feel you are sitting next to me 🙂 a big bear hug for you and millions blessings 🙂 love u 🙂

      • Sv

        Di no di you will always pull the inner feelings with your words. I want more and more from you . I was once again reading the journey of love and friendship . In tat you made me to feel that Arjun and Radhika should be together but when it comes to this i wanna make radhika go away and live in piece leaving Arjun as Arjun and Sam has made her suffer a lot. Love you di . Pls write more and wanna cherish those moments more with different perspective. You are a versatile writer. Love you di

  10. Amazzzziiiiiiiinnnnnggggggggg Gauri……IT was like a rollercoaster ride though we knw what going to happened but my heart was pounding within….Just lived with more magic which was the best epi of mmz…pls pls pls nxt one in which radhika console Arjun pls made it more spl with your spl ingredient of writting..want to watch by your style…love you untill ants wear pants…take care..stay blessed

    • Gauri

      Thanks Dipika dear 🙂 next everyone’s true emotions will be out….irrespective of their anger towards eachother or situations…I am writing an emotional one… pain suffering guilt…betrayal lost love… hope you will like it 🙂 stay blessed 🙂 love u muhaaaaa 🙂

  11. Served right…to hell with this Sam n Arjun…idiots…Zubin n kritika….nerves of those…cut down their nerves …rascals…nobody will be more happy that me when radhika leave with Neil…Arjun n sam need more punishment…piyali get hell out this lady…samrat snap his neck…everything started coz if him,yet act like a saint….aaaargh…nandini…no words for her….??

    • Sv

      Rosie twin ur right. I would also join u . Coz radhika has faced a hell. Di dont spare samrat. Still keeping his mouth shut. And pls do spare no one. Radhika’s tears should be answered. Dont show her face . Roday is the forst slap for arjun by not seeing him. Omg why am I spaekinh this hard I donno but spare no one di . Love u di and also u my twin .

    • Gauri

      Thanks a ton Rosie 🙂 I will make them suffer 🙂 they will have pain suffering …. guilt everything 🙂 they will not get forgiveness easily 🙂 loads of love 🙂

  12. Roma

    My lovely sweeeeeetheart darling gauriiiiiiiiiiiii. …it’s mind blowing and superbbbbb episode. ..raneil bonding is marvellous…u showed raneil in the perfect way….neil’s support n care for rads really very heart touching…..I wish I had a best friend like neil who can bring me out from any disaster….I felt their true unconditional friendship n touched by immense affection….nandini played her evil game with rads by giving that short dress but arjun’s care n words proved his good heart to rads……..wowwww. …reneil dance…I really wanted to see this in serial but your lovely flawless talent made it real here….I was literally watching everything….ardhika dance n nesam dance….neil’s feelings for sam n his pain was in his words…..n the biggest twist of this party….trap for nandini…in which rads very brilliantly made nandini accept her deeds…..breaking arjun’s God idol – his sister….shattering sam n all others…..loved this scene soooooooo muchhhhhh. …neil burst out his anger to all n took rads with him….rads immense pain n her broken tears I felt in my heart…’re such an awesome writer my sweeeeeetheart ….each n every word u wrote from the bottom of ur heart n we could feel the intensity of it….in last para arjun’s state was miserable….ahhhh… darling gauri….even we saw everything in serial before but reading in your words, in your imagination, is giving true meanings… rads will go to neil…how will arjun take this…will he accept the divorce???what sam will do now? Will arjun n sam ask apology from rads….rads should not forgive them easily. … mind going crazy for this story 😉 …I should stop now. …keep it up honeyyy. ….eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. …muaaaaahhhhhh….keep writing. …bear hug…. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡…

    • Gauri

      Thanks a million times Roma for the lovely comment 😀 I can’t express my feelings after reading your comment …Roma thanks for making my weekend a million one 🙂 Rads will not forgive easily 🙂 love you loads 🙂

  13. Gianna

    U made me speechless don’t know what to say. Like a rollercoaster, so many different emotions very well written. I applaud u Gauri u are a rare talent. God bless u my dear. Amazing update loved it so much. Loads of love u to u ???

  14. In the original Manmarziyan I wanted Sam and her family to here Nandini truth also but after reading this you have out done it, this is much better than the original. Hats off to you, you nail it, well done. 🙂

  15. Ritu

    awesome was breathe not finding words to describe my excitement..jst loved it..waiting 4 u..

    • Gauri

      Thanks Neetz 🙂 no darling its not ending 🙂 its beginning 🙂 love you 🙂 bless you 🙂

  16. natasha

    gauri dhi as usual i am searching for words to praise u
    u jst nailed the epi dhi w8ing for nxt update

  17. Di its reallyyyyyy awesomeeeeee. Loved it. Now what will arjun do?? Will he get radhika back??? . I think its going fast !!!!!

    • Gauri

      Thanks Archana:) first he needs to repent 🙂 now his suffering begins 🙂 love you 🙂

  18. chandan

    Superb epi Gauri…eargerly waiting to read next parts as it is going to be your way now…keep rocking…tc

    • Gauri

      thanks Maandey….yup it does 🙂 loads of love … how r you ? missing your updates 🙂 love u

  19. anu

    Whoa whoa whoa…. This was just awesome yaar u have put it amazingly… This part was beautifully written. I am overexcited about the next part. I wanna see how the events will take place.. And again this was mindboggingly and freaking awesome yaar. I don’t know how u do it? Managing two stories at the same time and that too two awesome stories… Hats off.. Elder sis… And truckloads of goodwishes, luck, love and tight hugs…..

  20. aastha

    Its superb di…………..I got too emotional reading this…………plzzzzz update sooooooon………..

  21. Tanya

    The length of comments being longer than ur ff shows how good ur ff was. amazing… love u gauri or gauri di ????? lyk i am going to 12th wat abt u? wats ur age ….

    • Gauri

      Thanks Tanya dear 🙂 well I am done with my studies … I am an MBA and working as a Lead Recruiter in bangalore 🙂

  22. priya

    Sry for d late cmntng dear….finally truth revealed u rocked dis in ur own style as usual my word queen..what abt Neil will he forgive sam??will Neil allow for aradhika relation?? Will samrat be punished by sam nd piyali?? How would arjun deal wid na ndini? Will Neil send radhika to rishikesh??will he accept Sam as n when she repents??

    • Gauri

      Thanks Priya and no need for sorry 🙂 no one is getting forgiven any soon 🙂 you will know rest in the next one 🙂

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