mmz love for eternity (Part 9)

Chappy dedicated to my dear jessie. Jessie darling. Im 100% sure that im not ekta fan. So i assure you. You wont see all the drama. Lol. But thoda drama toh banta hain. So wait for it. Thank you so much for your lovely comments and support. Muah. Tight hugsss.

Enjoy reading…………….

All were seated in the living room of Agarwal residence and discussing about the engagement. But the discussion doesnt seem to end at any time. Everyone has a different mind and they are having different ideas. And no one is agreeing with others ideas. All were getting tired of it but dont want to loose. It surely was depicting a war field now. Atlast the desperate groom screamed to stop them all. They all stopped for a mere second and soon voices started muffling and they started raising again.

Neil was now thinking ” would it be best to elope and get married. In this speed my marriage can never happen.” This thought made him quiver. He turned his gaze to arjun who was busy playing with his phone . He cursed under his breath and send a message to help him getting out of this situation.

Arjun phone beeped with notification, he saw the name of the sender and his eyes searched for neil who has pleading him with his eyes. He opened the inbox, reading the contents of the message smirked at neil and nodded his head.

Arjun stood up and said ” so it is decided. Engagement will be on next saturday.”

Neil shouted ” yeah. Im in. Finally its decided. ”

Voices erupted all around the hall. ” How can we do in such a short span of time??”

” No way. I have not yet selected my dress”

” what!!! It is impossible ”

” Invitations will not be ready ” ” There are many persons to be invited ”
and sooo on.

Arjun” Every thing will be taken care of. Bua please trust me.” he said looking at prerna.

All the gang said yes in unison. Nandini ” But arjun only 2 days are left. How can we manage??”

” Trust me bua. I will make everything right.”

Nandini asked ” so ash. Will you be able to stay here beta. It will be helpful. ”

Ash ” but aunty dad will never agree. And i will be here early in thr morning. So dont worry. ”

Prerna ” Nandeesh will never say no to us. You leave that matter to us. Either way you have to be here for spending more time with this paagal gang. So it will be good oppurtunity for you too. You can know them better ”

Neil ” come on ash. It will be fun. If l leave it to these dumbos they will make it a boring event.”

All shouted ” heyyyy. Idiot.”

Ash chuckled and said ” Ok. I will be here. I will sure get some experience from this.”

They all started making preparations for the engagement.

Neil and sam were holding each other in embrace tightly. Sam leaned her head on neil’s chest. Neil put his chin on sam’s head and kissed on top of her head. They were savouring their perfect moment forgetting surroundings. Soon they were startled when shouts echoed throughout the room. Sid and nick lunged at neil, resulting all three landed on the ground.

Neil grunted loud, and tried to free from the wrestlers. Remaining were laughing hard seeing them rolling on the floor.

Sam was being dragged out by naina and sanju. When neil tried to object they said ” we will be in arjun’s room. We have discuss the dress. It is more important. ” and without listening another word they moved out of the room.

In arjun’s room which was previously radhika’s.

All 4 entered the room. It was a beautiful room painted in pastel colours. The view from the balcony was amazing. You could see the entire backyard from it. There was a big glass door seperating the balcony and room with light pink curtains tied at the corners. There was a big king size bed. Floored with wood and a walk in closet. It would easily potray a princess room. A potrait hung at the wall behind the bed. It was arjun’s favourite picture of radhika.

Ash ” wow. It is so damn beautiful. I feel like im in princess world ”

Sam, sanju , naina nodded their heads giggling at ash’s surprised face.

Sam said ” yes it is definitely a princess room. Arjun personally decorated it for his princess. ” with a dreamy face.

Sanju ” And sam. You remember he didnt allow us to enter till the room is completely renovated. ”

Sam n sanju remembered incident where they were pestering to see the room, but arjun being adamant locked the room so no one could enter it. They both laughed at their own antics trying to sneak into the room.

Naina ” And he was angry when he radz brought me here once and i was sleeping on the bed. Oh i cant forget his glare which was clearly showing he wants to kill me.”

Sam ” And radz has to make him understand. She really held power to control him. Only after that he allowed us to be here. ”

Ash ” wow. So much possessiveness. ”

Sam ” you hadnt seen anything ash. Every girl in uni was jealous of radhika. Bcoz she was the first girl in arjun’s life. ”

Sanju ” And no doubt the last girl. ”

Sam n naina nodded their heads with a sad smile.

Ash ” you really miss her so much. Dont you?? ”

All 3 nodded heads mumbling “yes. We miss her so much.”

Ash ” she sure is a great person. Even after her death she is in your memories unscathed.”

All were surprised at ash words, and sam asked ” How did you know she is not here?? No one knows about that. ”

Ash ” I did a background check on all of you. And i came to know about her. But really it was so hard to get any info on her. Dont know how hard mark tried to get info about her death. ” ” sorry if it hurt you. I was not aware of all this. ”

Sam ” No no. No need to say sorry ash. We are grateful to you. Bcoz of your persistence we are now here. But radz is a sensitive topic. Not many know about her death. And arjun has kept her alive till date. When any one ask him about her, he just divert the topic.”

Ash nodded her head understanding not to pry more on this. So she changed the topic ” so what are you planning to wear. Do you have any ideas??”

Sam gave a small laugh blushing and answered ” Actually im under sanju’s supervision now. It was decided that she will design my dress. And you see what else do i need the top designer making your dress without payment” and winked.

Ash ” yes i forgot. I have to ask you to design a dress for me. I was shocked when i learnt that you are the MD and creative head of Sobha creations.” Seeing sanju.

Sanju waved her hand dismissing it. Naina ” oh common sanju. You should take some credit girl. ” turned to ash ” Actually no one would have believed it if they have seen sanju early. The ultimate tomboy turned into fashion diva. ”

Ash was boggled at the new info and mumbled” Tomboy “. Sam n naina nodded their heads and sanju was blushing listening.

Sam ” yes its true. Tomboy. Dont know what magic nick did. We got see a girl in her. ” and laughed.

Sanju ” sam please yaar. Not now. Else i wont make you dress. ”

Sam ” ok. Baba. Im sorry. I will not say a word now. ”

Ash ” wow. I think im missing a beautiful love story here. ”

Naina ” Not beautiful. Crazy love story.”

Sanju ” Not more than you naina. You and sid were the craziest couple.” What say sam.

Sam nodded her head laughing. It was so good reminiscing past memories. Sure they all have crazy love stories.

Naina blushed but commented ” Oh no. The first place goes to arjun and radz. No one can beat them.”

Sam n sanju shouted yes in unison. Ash ” Arjun and love. He seems more arrogant in the whole group. And that too crazy love. ”

Sam ” oh ash. There is lot more what your eye catches. Arjun was crazy for radhika. Their love story was epic one. Lot more crazy than you think. ”

Three laughed when past scenes flooded through their mind. They were really golden days. They can never forget them.

Sam n sanju were sitting on the bed. Naina and ash were sitting on the couch with a big list and papers on the coffee table. They were so busy in the preparations.

Nick entered scowling at his wife with a bowl of soup in his hands. ” sanju do you know the time. Why cant you take care of urself. Love you should eat very often.” and thrusted the bowl into sanjus hands.

Neil and arjun entered the room and occupied the seatee infront of the couch. Sid came muttering ” Nick i have never dreamed of a day like this man. Nikhil sharma turning into a henpecked husband. No one will believe if they hear it.”

Neil n arjun chuckled. Nick glared at sid and said ” shut up sid. We will see dude. Just wait till your marriage. Then i will ask who is henpecked husband. ”

Naina blushed listening. Sid and nick glared each other. Arjun came to sanju and gave her chocolate ( oh girls plzzz fill it with your fav) Dairy milk silk and ruffled her head. Sanju giggled, showing her tounge to nick started eating choc. Nick rolled his eyes and said ” Arjun plzz yaar. She is not listening to me now. And if you do this then forget it. She will never listen to me “.

Arjun ” whatever nick. How will she eat that tasteless soup. It is so bland man. She will be unhealthy with all that food. And choc us healthy food. Dont worry. ” Sanju smirked at nick’s silence and ate the choc.

Nick muttered ” idiot.” Arjun asked ” did you say anything .”

Nick ” what will i say. Nothing. I know you stubborn headed people very well. So im saying anything. ”

Sanju said ” ok. Ok. Now stop .” Turned to sam n said ” Now the last thing. Which colour do you want??”

Ash shouted ” pink.” Naina ” Red” at the same time. They looked at each other and laughed.

Sam ” No they are regular colours. Why not try something new.??”

Naina ” New. As in.”

Sanju ” I dont know. Sam you should decide the colour. I know you better. If it is not your choice then you will make raccus on this. And i cant afford that now. ”

Nick ” yes i dont want my wife to work hard. So decide whatever you want. ”

Neil asked ” well i can give suggestion.” Naina ” Neil no one asked you for advice. So just shut up. ”

Neil ” what. Im the groom here. I have the right to decide. And barbie please i know your taste. So you shut up. ”

Naina ” Neil dont you dare call me barbie again. I will kill you. ”

Neil snickered ” oh yeah. Then kill me. Wait i called you barbie yesterday. You didnt say anything. What happened now??”

Naina ” I was not in my mind yesterday. I was baffled by seeing you there. I didnt notice what you said. But now dont .”

Neil ” whatever. You are barbie. And will always be barbie. ”

Naina was about to get up when ash hold her hand and said ” please guys not now. We are discussing colour. So neil which colour do you like??”

Neil ” see and learn from her. She is more mature than you. ” and said orange.

Sam ” Ewww. No way. Im not wearing orange. ”

Nick said ” k. Then green. ” All were thinking when sid blurted ” Gray.”

All were holding surprised expressions. Then soon all started laughing. Ash ” seriously sid. Gray. What the……” and was continuing before but smirked at sid and said ” Tell truly. Are you fan of christian gray. ???”

All laughed more hard listening this. Sid took a pillow and threw at ash which she missed by ducking her head down. But continued by standing up ” Dont worry. I will personally design gray dress for naina on your wedding night. ”

All laughed harder. Naina flustered listening and was blushing hard. Sid jumped from the bean bag and tried to catch ash. Ash ran out of the room trying to escape sid.


Arjun was laughing hard but soon he was in his own beautiful world.


Arjun and radhika were strolling in a shopping mall. Trying to buy a dress for the party. They were eyeing different shops when a pink dress caught arjun’s eye. He stopped radz from moving forward by her elbow. She turned and asked ” what ”

Arjun moved his gaze to the dress infront of him. Radz followed his eyes and saw the dress. It was beautiful. But she will not buy that now. So she shook her head as no.

Arjun ” why not. It is beautiful. It will be good on you radhika. Lets go. Buy that. ”

Radz ” Arjun please. Not again. I hav min 20 dresses in pink colour. It is like i dont wear another colour. Every alternate day i wear pink
And now you want another pink dress. There are so many dresses. Lets buy something else. Please. ”

Arjun ” what is the problem in this colour. Im telling you it will look good on you. ”

Radz ” what is with pink and you. Why is it your favourite??”

Arjun was about to answer but he composed himself, smirking said ” you see i have seen a girl wearing pink at one time. And she was looking like an angel
So from then it became my fav.”

Radz was jealous now, but she will not give him the satisfaction by showing it. ” ohh. Who is the lucky girl. By seeing her you made a colour your fav. ”

Arjun shook his head negatively. ” Nope. Thats my secret. Im not telling you.”

Radz ” What?? Why not ?? Ok. I will buy that dress. And you will say the girl name. Deal??”

Arjun dragged her to the shop, they bought the dress. Radz ” ok now. I bought the dress. Now tell the girls name. ”

Arjun smirked ” I wont tell you. And besides when did i promise to tell. ” pulled her nose. And left smiling to himself leaving a frustated radz behind.


Arjun was so busy in his thoughts, he didnt notice ash n sid fighting like children with pillows. Nick n neil were trying hard to seperate them but all in vain. Sam, sanju n naina were laughing clutching their bellies. They were having teary eyes coz of laughing. Soon all engaged themselves into a pillow fight. Arjun left them and moved out of the room with his beautiful and lovely memories of his love.

Ufffff. Finally. Girls thank you for your comments and threatenings. But im a good girl here. So i will reveal that radz will be entering soon. When i will keep it suspense. But for now. Lets celebrate nesam engagement. It wont take much time. May be next update the engagement will be completed. So stay tuned my dear loveliessss.

I will be waiting for your lovely comments. Thank you so much for liking it.

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  1. Kavina

    Loved it

    1. Thank you Soo much kavina dear.

  2. I love the story. Keep on writing . Is this your version of mmz?

    1. Oh ginger. Thank you so much dear. My version. Lol. Thank u for this. May be yes.

  3. Brin

    Awesome Radhika entering in the story, I can’t wait. πŸ™‚

    1. Thank u brin. Yes radz is coming soon deary. Loveee u.

  4. Rg2015

    Wow so rads will b entering soon? Soooooo gud. Am happy. You y
    Told me rads is really dead. You also mentioned in ur precap tat arjun and ash get closer. I hope they r just frnds. I rrally hope. Pls tell me will it b triangular love story? Thank u for making rads alive.

    1. Ramya radz is really dead. I mean to the outer world. But she is alive. How she will be coming back. N how she is alive. U have to wait for it. Nooo love triangle. Ardhika has many more things to worry. I dont want this to add more burden. Thank u so much dear for liking it. I will update soon. Next epi will be dhamaka. im trying hard for it. Loveee u. take care.

  5. RituM

    its beautiful….arjun and radhika moments gazab!!

    1. Thank u ritu. Haha gulabi moments.

  6. Shree

    Manha ki bacchi!! What was this?! Omg!! Truly amazing! Neil wants to elope.. lol.. such a love stricken puppy.. Arjun helping Neil… Awww… Radhika’s room.. Ash does have some brains.. Nick is being a good husband.. just like my Dev.. but I pop in and feed her chocolate cake and Channa batura… Lol.. everyone hates me for this.. people and the colours.. Rammaaaaa… Christian Grey!! Are you serious?! I’m like literally lmaoing now.. rotfling… Anything that comes into your head.. I’m still all sleepy and laughing… I loved the memory part.. lol pink.. seriously I too hate pink at times the way Mango tells Deepu yeh pink wala kaisa hai? I literally roll my eyes in frustration..

    I loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it!! Muuaaahh to you!! Keep writing.. post soon

    Love you ??

    1. shreee lovee u my doll. Hehe. Yep how was my dimaag ki khicdi. Lol. im laughing here like maniac reading my own. Lol. Dont know how i wrote them all. Pink yaaa mmz effect kya kare. I dont want to change his fav colour. So i just kept it. ??????. Kk. Loveeeeeeee u soooo much. Thank u for the lovely comment. Take care.

  7. Rossy

    R u tasting my patience my lovely friend resham??????????????….katti…loved Arjun’s flash back and girls memories…see u later in my way?????

    1. Rose what is this yaar. Im saying radz will be back. n u r still angry. ufff. Theek hain i will bring back sooo soon. Ok.

  8. Sammy

    Radhika alive πŸ™‚ ..hehe I thought ash and arjun but its okay …this was amazing the convo between friends is always awesome πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    1. Sammy u r the only one who is ok with ash n arjun. But sorry it was already decided. Ardhika eternal. So no change in it. Thank u dear for the comment n liking it.

  9. Sathya

    Manu darling…. Firstly a tight hug as n kisses for u…. ????????? what as episode… I loved each phrases… Awww so cute when Neil thinks to elope for marriage.. Ha ha ha… I m missing rads here in this group like arjun… Pls don’t take more time… Get her back soon… I can’t see arjun without Radhika…. Love u so much manha… Keep rocking

    1. Sathyaaa thank you sooo much. Loveeee u dear. Yep will bring back radz soon. I too miss her sooo much.

  10. S.v

    Finally my prayers are answered. Radhika will come. Fwwww. U dont know how desperate i was for radhika. More than arjun. Lil. Today it was soooooooooooo cute. As it was full of their masti and what is upto arjun and pink ?? Always pink. Lovely update manha i was waiting for it. Finally read them. All are in full firm to tease each other. I love when someone teases and the other joins. That would be a masti time. Lovely update manha and happy for nesam’s engagement. Ash is easily mingling. But thank god that radhika’s death is suspense which means she will come back. Gish im speaking too much. Sry. But lovely update.

    1. Thank u s.v . Haha. No u r not talking much. I like to hear all ur thoughts. thanks for the lovely comment. Yaa masti times. Ik. wishing for friends like the. ??. Pink yaa tooo much pink. World is in pink now. Lol. K. Will update soon. Loveee u. Take care.

  11. Jessie

    Yay!! Manhaaaa…..!! Radz is alive!.I thought I will get flashback today..but so eager 4 Rads entry.. Arjun is so possessive! And their moments..superb..Radz thought its some other friends bond ..awesome.. .Christian grey..hahah..Arjun is cho ..chweet… tomboy turned as a!!u dedicated d chappy for me..Thank u..Thank u…! Feeling so happy..!
    Yaar.. Sam too says Rads is not der bt Arjun keeps her alive..u are maintaining a big suspense…eloping idea of Neil.. it twice.. will read it more if u bring Rads alive..??eager 4 chapter which will say Rads is alive.. tight bear hugs n loads of love dear.. TC..pls post nxt one soon

    1. Thank u jessie dear soo much. Yaaa neil has gone mad. U will get answer abt ur confusion in next one. Loveeee u.

  12. Dipika

    Manhu darling u said that just after one update rads is going to be enter.. But nxt chap will cover nesam engagement…can’t wait for rads anymore… U torturing my Arjun…hehe…janata maaf nahi karengi…hehe..samajhi…n this epi is so cute… Aradhika gulabi memory.. Wow…lovely… Neil,sam,sanju,nick n ash cute fights r awesome.. Felt like m there….love u girl…pls nxt time want double dhamaka….muhhaa

    1. Thank u dips. Lol. Arjun ko rulaana abhi shuru kiya kahaan hai.????. Lol. Radz ke liye thoda aur intezaar. Plzzz. Take care. Loveee u so much.

  13. _Ritu

    Wow episode Manha dear…frnds masti I always adore that and u r too good in showing that.. πŸ™‚ Rads will be back..yipee m so happy but somewhere sad also coz I thought u will pair me wid Arjun πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ArDhika’s flashback was amazing Gulabo Arjun πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€ ..Neillll..what to say about him… πŸ™‚ now desperately waiting for nxt..plz post soon otherwise we will start again wid our threatening.. πŸ˜‰ lol…love πŸ™‚

    1. Haha. Ritu yaa i thought abt pairing u with him. But all these ppl threatened me to bring radz back. What to do. So sorry dear. Thank you so much.

  14. Myra

    Manha dear…its awesome….radhika ko vapas laao naa please……just bring radhika back…..really soon…next ep? Update soon…love you πŸ™‚

    1. Myra thank u soooo much dear. Not in next epi. But jaldi hi. Wait for it.

  15. Lakshmi05

    Awesome chappy manhaa…loved friends silly fights…arjun’s pink world …lol…he’ll make her mad with his love for pink…waiting for next one… Luv u…tc…

    1. Hariiii thank you dear. Lol. Arjuns pink world. Hehe. Thank u. Take care. Bye. Loveeee u sooo much.

  16. Gauri

    Manaha darling loved it πŸ™‚ and I am so happy to read the update with rads….so finally you got scared with all the threats πŸ˜› LOL I am glad it worked and I got rads waiting for next post soon πŸ™‚ love u

    1. Manha

      Lol. Thank u gauri. Yaaa ur threatens worked. Haha. No it was already decided. Radz entry with a dhamakaaa. All their happy going life would change drastically. Kisi ne socha bhi nahin hogaa. Aisaa hone wala hi. ????.

  17. Sreee

    Manha so sorry that am commenting late…and the Epi was beautiful… sooo lovely…arjun’s love, is sooo truly enchanting..ΰ₯€i loved the way u have described it…love u di…thank god di radhika is alive….i really would have been heary broken if arjun comes to love any other…thank u didi…now am sooo waiting for the next update…pls post soon….love u……muahhh

    1. Manha

      Heyyy sreee. Thank u doll. No need to say sorry. Ur comment worth waiting. Im glad u liked it. Yep sure radz will be back With a bang. That too sooon. Loveee u tooo. Next updaTe full on masti.


    1. Manha

      Thank u subha for liking it and for your constant support.

  19. Sweetie

    Yippie..Rads entry.. πŸ˜€ Episode is superb dear.. πŸ™‚ Loved all the people here,crazy friends.. πŸ˜€

    1. Manha

      Sweetie my sweetu. Thank u sooo much for ur lovely comments.loveee u sooo much.

  20. Jnana

    My god I really thought radhika died… Later now it is fine she is alive. U see we can’t just imagine our fav characters dead right. It was really awesome.

  21. Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. …manha my darling I just loved it to the coreeeee. …very interesting n lovely plot. …loved the frivolity jhok n arjun having fun listening it….flashback was cuteee…arjun n his love for pink dresses for rads….lol….so beautiful narration. …wowwww very interesting. …keep it up honeyyy. you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug πŸ™‚ β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ™‚

  22. Salaam Manha ..!!
    Ur update was awsum..Well I was a silent reader but now I started to comment on ur posts for encouragement… Well I was also thinking that there will b sum cnnction btwn arjun nd ash hihi but I was wrong Aradhika will alwayz together.. And colour choosing was funny..ufff Allah Christian Grey us ki desires Astaghfirullah..well now m waiting for Rad’s entry I mean reentry..and for ur next chappy..Gud luck

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