mmz love for eternity (Part 5)


Chappy dedicated to my lovely hari. Thank u so much. How u found out its me, its still a mystery to me. Thank u for ur support dear.

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Nandini gives a hug to arjun before he looses his calm and says” please arjun. They just wanted to talk to you. Its been a long time. Please just listen to them. Only once. For me. Please.”

Arjun” Aunty please why are u making me do this. You know i cannot say no to you. But this im sorry. I can’t do it”.

Neil” Arjun please. Only once.” and places his hand on his shoulder.

Arjun closes his eyes, takes a deep breath and says” ok. Fine. Only this time. Tell me what u want to. After that i dont want to see anyone here.”

Sam moves forward trying to speak something but arjun raises his hand indicating not to say anything. Anil seeing this says” So kids. Can we please sit so that we can talk. Arjun my son please come n sit. ” And please listen calmly what they have to say. Ok.”.

Arjun ” chachu please. Not you too. I will try to be calm for your sake. I just want this to end once and all.” By saying this he turns to see all those who are present there. He notices ash, stares at her. Turns towards neil and nandini and asks why is she here.
Time 2.10 pm
After talking with arjun, ash was antsy searching ways for solving this mystery. She checks her tab thinking who could help her out of this problem. A ray of hope arises after seeing neil’s name. She met him at a event and was friendly , maybe he can help. She is praying god for help and dials his number.

At the same time
In nick(nikhil) and sanjus residence. Neil n nikhil are sitting on sofa watching tv. News is being telecasted on the ongoing event and arjun is awarded with businessman of the year title. Both r so happy seeing this. Neil hears footsteps coming towards them, turns off the tv. Sam and sanju are coming from kitchen.

Sam says” Neil you don’t have to hide it. I know arjun is the winner this year and he will attend the event. And i also know it is the reason you are not at the event now.”
Nick” Neil we have do something. We cannot just leave him like this. Someone has to make a move first.”

Neil” Im trying but unable to understand how to approach him and get to talk.”

Their convo interrupted with a phone call. Neil receives the call.
Phone convo::::
The girl on other line ” hello. Can i speak to neil malhotra. Please”
Neil” yes. Speaking. ”
Girl” Neil. Thank god. Im ash. U dont know me well. But i need your help. Its very important. Please dont say no.”
Neil mumbles ash and raking his brain who this girl is.
Ash” please neil. I will explain everything clearly once we meet. Where are you. I can come there and meet”
Neil” sorry . Im at some friends house. But i will call u once im free. We can meet then.”
Ash ” No.No. It is urgent. Friends house. Sanjana. Are you at nikhil sharma’s place. I can come there”.
Neil just stares at his phone thinking how do she know but replies” yes we are there. U can come.”
Ash ” Thank you so much. I will right there asap.”
phone call end::::::
Ash enters the living room of their house with mark trailing behind. Neil, sam, nick and sanju are waiting for the stranger. Ash introduces herself. Neil and Nikhil recognized her instantly as they have already seen her in some business event.

Ash ” sorry for this sudden visit guys. Im aware that u dont know me. But i need help. I asked arjun too but he is not listening to me.”
As soon as they heard arjun’s name. They stared at ash and ask to continue.

Ash tells all the details and things happened from sid and her relationship to how he try to convince sid and arjun. They just listened to her in silence.
After a long silence ash continues” I know sid is doing this for repentance and as a punishment for his guilty conscience. But he is not understanding it will just make his life more miserable.”

Nikhil asks her why is she so against marrying sid. Ash ” Coz i know he hasn’t forgot his love yet. So how do u think he will love me again.”

Neil ” Then why can’t you just go to ur dad and stop this. It is so easy without all these prblms.”

Ash” Do u think if i have that option, i would wait this long running after strangers whom i didnt even met once before. My dear daddy has used his triumph card and made me fall in this loop.”

By seeing their blank faces she continues” sorry. I will explain clearly. I was acting as a brat n dad thought i cannot handle all the business on my own. He selected sid as his son-in-law who was son of his friend cum business partner. Dad asked sid for his view n he said yes. Then he put on a fake drama of heart attack, made me promise on my mom. And i have to accept this proposal. He knew i won’t go beyond my moms promise. So here im stuck with all this. And it is getting on my nerves now. Please. Please help me. ”
So here they are at Nandini’s house expecting nandini can change arjun’s mind.

Arjun ” So what do u want to talk.”
But everyone is silent. After sometime he glares n asks” neil u asked me to stay for talking. So what happened now. Is it about sid”. At the silence he continued ” Hmmm. I guessed it would be about that matter. So what now. What do u want me to do. ”

Sanju ” Arjun please just be calm.we know u dont want to talk but it is really important. Till when do u not want to talk to us. Im fed up of being a stranger to u all. I want my friends back.”

Arjun ” lo… sorry. Sanjana im not a friend of you. Why just u people understand this. N leave it. And please let me live too.”

Sam ” Arjun please. you cant just say we r not friends like that. We can solve the matter. Please talk to us and try to see through our point too.”

Sanju moves towards arjun trying to touch him. Arjun just places his hand front stopping her attempts. Nandini who is watching all this couldn’t bare anymore yells to stop all this. And asks arjun” please arjun. Why cant u just let it go.”

Before arjun can say anything nick speaks ” Arjun i know. You are not ok with this. But please we dont want to loose you my friend.”

Arjun chuckles and says ” Nick bro. How are you. Oh god i missed you so much.” With voice laced with sarcasm.

Nick ” please arjun not today. We just complied what you wanted at that time. See where we are standing now. I would have never listened to you first.”

All are just staring at nick and asks” what are you talking about.”

Nick thought it would be better to just tell truth ” Actually arjun was never out of this place. He just wanted to be alone. And i thought he would feel better. So i lied to you all that he moved to london.”

Sanju ” How could you do this. You have seen me break down but you didnt tell me his whereabouts. Just dont talk to me nikhil.”

Nick ” what did i do. He made me promise. So i left it. Please dont be angry with me sweetheart. Please.”

Arjun” so if everything is cleared can i move now. I have much works to do.” turns to ash and says” what did u achieve doing all this.”

Ash was about say but neil cut her ” It has nothing to do with her. we especially I do u hear me. I wanted to talk to u. So i came here. But after coming here i just realized it is one of my most stupid decisions ever made. I thought u have changed arjun. But u are the same arrogant, rude person infact u just improved to be better rude now. Do u have any idea how we felt when we heard u left. No. U were always thinking about urself. What about us. We just lost our best friend coz of ur stubborn head. Do u know how guilty sid felt. No. How guilty sam felt. No. U never thought about us. We used be unbreakables. But u just scattered us all. I didnt see sam for 2 years. Now i dont even know she ever wants to get married or not. But what is there for you. Right???. Sid . You both used to be shadows of each other. Now what happened to that relation. It faded away. Right??? Ohhh arjun how easy it is for u to just forget our childhood friendship. Did u even think of aunt nandini and uncle anil. They always thought u as their son. But u didnt give ur whereabouts to them too. How could u do this arjun. How could u. And what are u saying to sanju about fake concern. Do u even know she is pregnant. And she is carrying baby for whom u would be god father n radhika god mother. All the promises we made. How could u easily forget. I thought i can change.But i was all wrong. We all are repenting for that single mistake. But it seems you are not concerned anymore. Do u have any idea how much we suffered just coz u dont want to talk with us n left us without any word.”
( ufff neil. Emotional kar diyaaa)

Arjun was just staring at everyones teary faces with his own glassy ones but quickly turned aside masking his emotions and replies” so im the culprit here. Then why do u want to talk with me. Im the same arrogant, obnoxious, stubborn headed arjun. There is nothing i can give u. Im happy with my life. I dont want any problems now. ”

Nandini breakdown sat on a chair holding her head in her hands. Anil stood beside her placing his hands on her shoulders providing support.

Neil ” You are right Mr. Arjun Mehra. Sorry for wasting ur precious time. We will now leave you now. Just wish we can get our old friend back” saying this he left.
Sam, sanju, nick and ash followed him outside. Neil was standing at his car, placing his hands on bummer, eyes full of tears. Sam moved towards him and places both her hands around his body as a back hug and cried her heart out.

Nick was holding a vulnerable sanju, trying to console her. But she was not stopping crying.
Ash eyes were welled up too not able to speak anything. After some time she found her voice and asks” so what we do now”.

Neil was the first to answer” Nothing can be done now. Im sorry ash. We couldnt help u. Just pray for a miracle to happen.”

Mark comes to ash saying they are getting late for dinner. And her dad is calling. Ash just nods her head. Turns towards them” Thank you so much guys. U really tried ur best to help. Im sorry for all that happened. I have go now.”and bids her bye by giving them hugs.
Time 10.00pm
Ash,sid and nandeesh were having dinner, discussing the details of the press conference where they are going to announce the merger and their engagement.

Ash asks her dad “sid should announce the engagement. It will prove that the announcement is true without any hurdles. What say dad??”

Sid just glares at ash with his jaw tightened containing his anger. Nandeesh nods his head and say “its a good idea. Sid.”and turns to sid.

Sid just mumbles a yes.
After the dinner. sid drags ash with him outside at the car parking and asks” what are u playing at. What do u want.”

Ash gives him a sweet smile ” what am i playing at?? I dont have any idea what u r talking.” and turns to go.

She turns again to sid and says” I warned u. But u didnt pay any heed. U r hell bent to make me suffer. So you need to suffer too. I would love to see u going through all the heartbreak . Good bye.”

She goes to mark and says something for which he nods his head.
Hello my deariesss. Finally the day completed. Ufff. Another day remaining. Thank u for your support. Waiting for ur lovely comments. Take care.

Credit to: M

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  1. Awesome episode, waiting for the next update. 🙂

    1. Thank u so much brin. I will update soon. Loveee u.

  2. Dipika

    Its awsome manha. Yess veru true Neil ne emotional kar diya …wht happen with arjun n sid. N eager…i like the bond of friendship. How they desperately trying to get their friend back. Loved it

    1. Thank u soooo much my darling dips. Ohh u dont know how happy im. friendship is the main part in the story. Thank u once again. Haha. Next part bharat milaap. Lovee u.

  3. Sammy

    Nice episode manha ..pls give precap too ..lupdate next soon 🙂 🙂

    1. Thank u sammy. I will try to give precap. Loveee u.

  4. Jessie

    Awesome chappy dear.. yup.. Neil made it all emotional.. such a good gang of frnds.. hope something happened 2 Rads.. story is all interesting.. eager 4 nxt update.. update sooon…??

    1. Thank u jessie for the constant support and liking the story. I hope it will keep you interested further too. Loveee u.

  5. Sweetie

    Awesome episode dear.. 🙂

    1. Thank u sooo much sweetie. Loveee u.

  6. awesome episode………..arjun past ? eagerly waiting next one…

    1. Thank u soo much subha dear. Past. Hmm. Its not only arjun’s past. It is their past. Stay tuned. I will update soon. Loveee u.

  7. Shree

    Omg!! What did you do to Neil?! Such an emotional Neil … Ayee… why is Arjun being so hard?! Chaaa… Ash okay…. So much suspense… “The unbreakables”.. Where did that come from? ?? … So much past is there…

    I Loved it!! The way you carry it is amazing!! I’m waiting… Post like real quick.. Muuaaahh to you??

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling … Bear hug??

    1. Ayeee shreee. Thank u sweetheart. Hmmm. What did i do to neil. Ssshhh. Dont tell anyone. Its a secret. ???. Lol.

      Reason why arjun is so hard. Yet to be revealed. yep the unbreakables. Thank u for giving. ????.

      Thank u for loving it. Loveeeeee u soo much. Muahhhh.

  8. Manhu meri sakhi

    fab part manhu dear

    hey so many answers left

    why rads god mother I mean I understand neil being emotional and god father

    but where is rads
    and what happened to rads

    what are the secret what u have hide dear

    whats up clear the confusion

    or else confusee ho jaake itnaa bhejaa fry karungeee

    keee Omelette ban jaayegaaa

    Janta jawab mang rahee hai manhu the writter

    where is rads

    give us a hint dear what happened to her and where is she


    on the other note hmmmmmmmmm arjun is getting stubborn now and more rude and emotional too

    I like it dera but I love it when I read about rads a mmore make her add manhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

    love u keep smiling

    fab part total paisa vasool

    waiting for some more fun update quickly love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

    keep smiling

    manha the saviour

    1. Aasthu

      Nishuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu where are u dear ??????? How are u ???????? when will u be free again ??????????????? …………lub u………TC…………..

    2. Thank u manhu ki sakhi. Lol. Nishuuuuu thank u sooo much dear. Loveee u so much. K i will reveal all mysteries fast. Omelette bana dogi. Tum kuch bhi kar sakti ho sweetu. Bas aise hi rehnaaa meri jaan.

  9. M very happy manhu dear seeing ur update…n very sorry for late..morning my health is worse…so couldn’t check my phn…why so much suspense??? When will all reveal…u told me in next chapter all will reveal…k m waiting…m scratching myself now

    1. Thank u rose dear. Take care of ur health. please dont be sorry. U just focus on ur health. It is important. Yes all will be revealed soon. loveeee u.

  10. Hey Manha, my sweet friend finally read all ur updates. n wat is this, u r giving me tat weight feeling all over the update. ufffff. thr wr arj chuckles n talks sarcastically to Nick. like ‘nick bro’. whoa, tat emphasis on bro, it was really sarcastic. haha i just love ur dialogues framing. cudnt find out anything. like why they friends r carrying so much grief n pain. one thing i’m fr sure tat u r up to something. Hmm, lemme see. waiting my dear. Keep it going.

    1. Thena my honey. Thank u sooooo much. Awieeee im flattered with all the lovely comment. Feeling overwhelmed. Lol. Thank u for reading n liking. Ohhh next part will be full on masti . Loveee u.

  11. superb epi Manha..Neil he made me cry…but his words are still echoing…loved their bonding..their freindship is really adorable..but still clueless about the past….where is rads..plz dont make her dead..???waiting for

    1. Thank u sooo much ritu for the lovely comment. past will be revealed soon. Will update soon. Loveee u.

  12. Aasthu

    Manhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu do you remember me ???????????????? I just read all the updates………I was busy with my internals……it just ended today………….I liked ur ff…………but I’m very confused………..why is Arjun behaving like a total stranger b4 his friends ????????? Why is Sanju full of guilt ???????? What happened in their lives that changed everything ?????? and more importantly where is Rads ????????????? I’m all confused………so pls help me out……………………and do reply…….otherwise I’ll be cuttice……………

    1. Aasthuuuuu ofcourse i remember u my dear. I was actually waiting for u. Ahhh exams. Soo busy. How did u write them. Hope it would have been all well. all ur questions and confusions will be cleared soon. In next two updates everything will be revealed. Thank u for the comment dear. Loveeeee u.

  13. S.v

    Neil is acyually emotional but always he covers it with his smile . And j made hi.m to burst out which was actually required . That was a touching update and they where thick and thin but now it is like all are different directions that hurts as no one can fill the gap of a best friend and u made that right. What is ash upto and why is radhika is not seen . I am a bit more curious to know about it. I know im asking a bit too much but pls do spare me for that and superb emotional ride manha superb. Next part soon please.

    1. Thank u soooo much. S.v dear u r too sweet. Thank u for all the lovelyyy words. Secrets will be revealed soon. will update soon. Loveee u

  14. Woww…thank u dear for the dedication.Awesome episode dear. Neil made everyone emotional. No one could replace best friend’s place n neil n others trying to get back their friend is really touching… What happened to them in the past that changed their life and who’s sanju n what’s her relation with arjun.Where is rads ?? U said I’ll get all my answers in this update but this chappy increased my questions??? u want to maintain suspense…k…I’ll wait for next updates. Sorry for commenting lately??….

    I want to dedicate this song for today’s episode…???☺☺☺

    Apne roothein, paraaye roothein
    Yaar roothein naa..
    Khwaab tootein, waade tootein
    Dil yeh toote naa..

    Ho.. apne roothein, paraaye roothein
    Yaar roothein naa..
    Khwaab tootein, waade tootein
    Dil yeh toote naa..
    Roothe to khuda bhi roothe
    Saath chhoote naa..
    Roothe to khuda bhi roothe
    Saath chhoote naa..

    O Allah waariyan
    O main to haariyan
    O tooti yaariyan mila de oye..

    O Allah waariyan
    O main to haariyan
    O tooti yaariyan mila de oye..

    Udte patangon mein
    Holi waale rangon mein
    Jhoomenge dono phir se yaar

    Udte patangon mein
    Holi waale rangon mein
    Jhoomenge dono phir se yaar
    Waapas to aaja yaar
    Seene se laga ja yaar
    Dil to huye hai zaar-zaar

    Ho.. apne roothein, paraaye roothein
    Yaar roothein naa..
    Khwaab tootein, waade tootein
    Dil yeh toote naa..
    Roothe to khuda bhi roothe
    Saath chhoote naa..
    Roothe to khuda bhi roothe
    Saath chhoote naa..

    O Allah waariyan
    O main to haariyan
    O tooti yaariyan mila de oye..

    O Allah waariyan
    O main to haariyan
    O tooti yaariyan mila de oye..

    Reh bhi na paaye yaar
    Seh bhi na paaye yaar
    Behti hi jaaye dastaan

    Reh bhi na paaye yaar
    Seh bhi na paaye yaar
    Behti hi jaaye dastaan
    Umra bhar ka intezaar
    Ik pal bhi na karaar
    Ungli pe nachaaye dastaan

    Ho.. apne roothein, paraaye roothein
    Yaar roothein naa..
    Khwaab tootein, waade tootein
    Dil yeh toote naa..
    Roothe to khuda bhi roothe
    Saath chhoote naa..
    Roothe to khuda bhi roothe
    Saath chhoote naa..

    [O Allah waariyan
    O main to haariyan
    O tooti yaariyan mila de oye..] x 4


    Love u manha….keep smiling n update next one soon…????…

    1. Hariiiii sweetu. Thank u so much. Uffff song dedication. Thank u dear. Loveee u soo much. U will get answers for half of ur ques in next update. Wait for it. Haha. Yess all secrets will be revealed soon.

  15. Awesome one manha 🙂 Neil emotional talk ….he s totally difficult today but superbbbbbbbb 😀 😀 waiting for rads 🙂 loved it 😀 love u 😀

    1. Thank u sooo much suga for liking it. Loveeee u.

  16. hey aasthu me fine dear how r u my sweetheart and where is my search in you

    hey dear I too love u all and missed u all so much

    I came on manha ff till that time till its possible we can meet here or

    we can meet on ur ff whereever u want

    love u aasthuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu keep smiling meri jaan

    and yeah love u roma shree laxmi harisha

    and love u all so much missing naty badly in all

    god knows where is she ??????????????????????????

    keep smiling


  17. Awesome, wowwww manha….its,marvellous superbbbb episode. ..lots of mysteries n past events need to reveal…it’s very interesting n brainstorming to figure out the reason behind arjun’s behavior. ..n where is rads…neil was really awesome…all his words so powerful. …loved it very much. ..keep it up honeyyy. …love you loads. …muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂

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