mmz love for eternity (Part 3)

Chappy dedicated to my sweeet rose for her faith in me. She said it was her dream that i write my own FF one day. Lol. so here im living her dream , dont know for how much time. Rose ” tumbhangku dhanyabada. Tumoku bhala paaye mu meetha hrudaya.”

A silver lambhorgini Gallardo enters the pathway leading to the mansion. Either sides of the pathway is filled with various shrubs. The mansion is in the center surrounded by greenery. It is a replica of person who is a conversative environmentalist. The car comes to halt at the end of driveway. Neil jumps out of the driver seat comes around and opens door for sam placing his hand for her. Sam takes the hand , both moves towards the front door holding their hands, entwining their fingers. The door opens and sam is pulled into a tight hug from a lady n the lady says” how i waited to see u”. Neil rolls his eyes and says” mom please. leave the girl. She is die of oxygen loss”.
Prerna releases sam from the hug turns to neil n says” neil will u please shut up for while. Let me see my daughter in law. Dont u know hw i dreaded to see her again.” Neil mumbles under his breath” bollywood drama queen”but the ladies hears it. prerna opens her mouth to say something but sam comes forward n says ” Aunty how r u. Yes after a long time we r meeting again”. Prerna says ” sam start calling me mom. Im fine. Now come i made Gahar ka halwa for u”.
Neil ” Gajar ka halwa. Mom how many times i asked to cook but u never made. But now for ur bahu it is being made.”. ” looks like bahu is important than beta”. The ladies giggles and moves into the living room of the house. Prerna says” ofcourse DIL is more lovely than son. Then why not”. Neil” marriage has not taken place and u too r making me stranger. What will happen to me after marriage. Dad plzzz help.”
Sam moves towards sahil malhotra n gives him a hug. Sahil pats her head n asks how is she. Sam says” im gud uncle.” Turns to neil n says “uncle too is in my side. Right uncle”. Sahil chuckes n nods his head. Neil rolls his eyes n shrugs his shoulders mumbling ” Fine. Fine” and goes into kitchen to eat. Sahil, prerna and sam follows him.
At the dining table sahil asks ” so how are piyali and samrat”. Sam answers” They r gud uncle. Actually so busy with the upcoming award function. It is too hectic. They want it to be perfect”.
Sahil nods his head n asks” so are u gng to the function neil. I cannot attend it. I will be travelling to italy tonight”.
Neil says ” No dad. Not interested to go there. Will ask Mr. Roa to attend to represent our company there.” Sahil nods. Prerna comes with dinner and says ” ok. Now leave business aside. Eat food first.” And all involve with their dinner.
Day 1 Morning 10
A couple strolling around in central mall. The boy gets a call. He moves aside to pick up the phone. The girl sees a coffee stall at the corner and tells him that she will at the shop. Boy agrees with this by showing his thumbs up n asking her to go ahead”.
Girl goes straight to the counter asks for her a hot chocolate. The same time sam too orders for the same. They both look at each other and a recognition flash between them. Both r standing mum n just seeing each other like they r in shock. A voice shrieks from behind and they turn towards it. Neil is standing with shopping bags in his hands, by seeing the girl leaves the bags on the ground and shouts ” SANJUUUU!!!!!”
Sanjana just runs towards neil and falls into his embrace. After a tight bear hug they move from each other. sam comes from behind places her hand over sanjus shoulder to grab her attention. Sanju turns towards sam and they both hug like long lost sisters and both girls r in verge of tears.
The boy comes to the shop and seeing the scene infront of him , a smile adored his perfect face. He moves towards them. Neil turns towards him, pulls him into hug, patting their backs. ( uffff.??????).
Neil asks ” How r u nikhil”. Nikhil nods his head turns towards his wife and says with concern in his beautiful gray eyes ” Honey why r running like that. Plzz dont do this again”. Sanju nods her head n mumbles sorry. Neil frowns ” nikhil why r saying like that. Is there any problem with her health”. Nikhil says” Neil its nothing serious. Just have to be cautious for safety ” . sam n neil in unison asks safety. Nikhil has a proud smile plastered on his face and seeing her wife adorably replies” yes. Safety for her n the baby”.
Sanjana giggles at this n she is again pulled into a hug from sam n neil. They r shocked but happy n full of tears. They r happy for the couple n the baby.
Soon all 4 r chatting n reminiscing their pasts with happy faces.
At the same time, Arjun standing in his office situated at the 30th floor of Mehra Enterprise building corp with his right hand on the glass which is covering the window pane watching the hustle bustle of traffic on the road. His eyes r glued to the road but his mind is wandering somewhere. He is in deep thoughts, heart is beating in a fast rythm. Its so unlikely for him as he is always calm but today he is not able to find why he is feeling so uneasy.
Peter enters his office after knocking the door and informs him the car is ready to go whenever he wants. Arjun turns towards him and nods his head saying he is ready to go. Arjun enters the private lift with peter trailing behind, peter presses the ground floor. He turns towards his boss observing n asks whether he is ok. Arjun nods his head that he is fine dismissing him but thinks ” why am i feeling so uneasy. Its like something big is going to happen today. I wish it wont affect my life again.”
( authors note : it will change ur perfect life into 360 degrees. Dont worry i will see to it. ??)
Thank u for all ur love and appreciative words. I know it is sooooo boring with all these. But kya kare all r important for this story. So plzzzzz bear with me. waiting for ur reviews and comments. Thank u once again. Love u allll.
P.s. sorry my dear lovelies. I wished to write the whole day in this update but it will be so lenghty that u will be bored to death n i dont want that. And this is just a filler chapter. So plzzz wait for the next update.

Credit to: M


  1. Rossy

    Awwww…sweetheart m overwhelmed,obliged,happy emotional n crying…mixed emotions running inside me …and u just tried to write n convey ur feelings in odia to me…awwww…soooooo sweet of u..kitna rulaogi mujhe….me too same…tamaku dhanyabaad,tumaku mu bhalapae ei meetha hrudayaru…tame Mora ….loveeeeee u a lot…n I won’t diclose ur name until n unless u want…and i kbow next chapter will fill every gap….

    • m

      Rosiee thank u so much darling for liking it. Thank u so much for ur beautiful words. Loveeeeee u. Tight bear hugs.

  2. Rossy

    I m greatful coz even if u don’t know odia but u still said those lines in odia to me…i love that very much….u know I like my language soooooooo much

  3. RituM

    |Registered Member

    here u r……..mmmmmm…….chapter s amazing…with nesam stuff nd what….u will nvr bore us…at all….update next one today plz

    • m

      Hey ritu. loveeeeee u yaar. Thank u so much for liking it and thank u for the lovely comment.

  4. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww lovely marvellous. ..manhaaa…my lovely sweeeeeetheart darling. ..why saying it’s boring ….it’s really very interesting n I love allllll the details to know how exactly what happened to them.’s very important to know to get the feel for the characters pov n authors narration. …it’s just loved it from the bottom of my heart…it’s just can’t tell you how happy I m to see you writing….u know whenever I was reading your comment in the ffs, it made me so overwhelmed with your analysis on the story n the episode. …I always wondered if you write a story how would it be like….so here we are..reading your lovely amazing story. …it’s really superbbbb n intriguing. ..keep it up my sweeeeeetheart. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . Muaaaaahhhhhh ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜€ โ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กlotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. ..and EID MUBARAK. …take care sweetie n stay blessed…

    • m

      Romaaaaa di. ufff dont have words to thank u. love u love u so much. Thank u for such lovely n boosting words. Thank u so much for liking it n appreciating. Eid mubarak. lots n lots of love.

  5. dipika

    Manha darling first of all lil pinch to you calling it boring…samjhi…n its lovely chappy n how can u call it boring…i love prerana n sahil welcoming their bahu with soooo much love..mujhe b aisi mil chahiye..haha…Sanjana n sam meets really felt the two friends meet aftr gap..n Arjun..mystery.. Wht going happn to chnge his lyf 360 degree..curious… Love u..want longer

    • m

      hey dips. Thanks for the comment darling. u can pinch me. Beat me. anything u like. Love u loads. Yep mujhe bhi waise in-laws chahiye. will pray for our wishes to be true. take care.

    • m

      Bhabya sorry dear. I dont know odia. Its just i wrote for rosie. Thank u so much for liking it.

  6. Supriya.

    Lovely…. Awsme…. mind blowing….superb….no words to express my happiness… have caste a spell on my heart…..the way you narrated di that’s just phenomenons….. I loved it from the bottom of my heart…..eid Mubarak have a nyc day……love you di…..muaaaaaaaah….tc????

    • m

      Hey supriya. Thank u so much darling. Hayeee itni achi baatein. I feel like crying now.loveeeeeee u loads n loads. Biggggg tight hug to u.

  7. Shree

    |Registered Member

    My senior!! Please update soon.. you’re killing me with this filler… I want more…

    Loved it to the core Manha… Drama of the Malhotras… So cute… Nikhil and Sanjana too are cute…

    Everything in it’s perfect place .. post soon please

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • m

      Hey my super brainy shreee. hey dont die. If u die who will read my ff. So no i wont kill u with filler. Next update bigggg wala hogaaa. Wait for it. Thank u soooooo much. Loveeeee u.

  8. Gauri

    Manha isthat you ๐Ÿ™‚ I am so glad to see you back ๐Ÿ™‚ this was mindblowing …please go on ๐Ÿ™‚ love you ๐Ÿ™‚

    • m

      yes its me gauri. Oh thank u so much for the appreciative. These words coming from the top inspirational writer. im so happpy. Thank u for liking. Loveeee u.

  9. Suga

    |Registered Member

    Manha where were u all these days ๐Ÿ™‚ superbbbbbbbb one ๐Ÿ™‚ nesam part with fam cute ๐Ÿ™‚ nikhil’s care superbbbbbbbb ๐Ÿ™‚ arjun intro loved it ๐Ÿ™‚ waiting for the twist ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ loved it ๐Ÿ™‚ love u ๐Ÿ™‚

    • m

      Suga darling thank u sooo much. Well it was a gud question. hmmm. seriously i too dont know where was i all these days. Loveeeee u soo much. Thank u for liking it.

  10. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Hi dear..Lovely episode it is.. ๐Ÿ˜€ Loved the way Sahil and Prerna welcomed Sam..Sam,Sanjana,Neil and Nikhil’s equation is superb.. ๐Ÿ™‚ Arjun’s life is gonna take 360 degrees..Hehe.. ๐Ÿ˜€ Waiting for the next chappie..Stay blessed and keep smiling.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • m

      Sweetie thank u dear for the lovely words. thank u for liking the friends part. Hope u like the next updates too. loveee u. take care.

  11. Yours sakhi nishu

    heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy manhu

    I never though I see u once again that to it will be a surprise for me

    I always wish you and roma will write one day . and me reading

    My wish comessssssssssssssss true

    you know the last time I almost pleaded you by writing horror story that please write a story it will be fun

    and now wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

    how cool and good u write I mean its amazing

    by the way whats the suspense of arjun life change to 360 degrees

    tell tell don’t worry I didn’t tell anyone secret

    he he he

    and yeah nesam scenes are too cute

    but my favourite scene is aradhika in garden when she run and lost in the garden all are I think arjun dreaming or some past thing you didn’t mention naa confused

    but really loved that part too 2nd episode

    and the first one awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww all nesam scenes are so cho cho cute.

    neil proposing sam for marriage awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I loved it

    and yeah where is rads missingggggggggggggggggggggggg

    eagerly waiting for next one dear

    you know


    Naam hi kaafi hai read karne ke liye curosity apne aap hi aa jaate hai

    Manha naam mein hi wazan hai bosss

    my sweethearttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

    where is ammu and love u romaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    shree laxmi, love u all friendssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

    after so long I see u all very very happy today

    keep smiling loveliesssssssssssssssssssssssssss

    Once a friend always a friend

    • manha

      Hamari pyaari sakhi nishuuuuu. Aap ke toh ham meherbaan kadardaan hogaye. Omg!!! thank u for the love sweetheart. Kya comment hain. nishuuu jaan le logi tum meri ek din. Par tumhare liye jaan bhi kurban. thank u soooooo much. Loveeee u alot. Alll ur ques will be answered my dear. next update ke liye intezaar karlo thoda sa. ?????????

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