mmz love for eternity (Part 1)

A man is sitting in a chair at the corner of a posche restaurant facing the window admiring the view outside. He is handsome, charming who can win you just by his looks, adorable smile which tugs at his lips and eyes shining with a gleam whenever he is happy. Girls can die for a single glance from him. You can say he is prince charming. Rich , successful, born with silver spoon, friendly. He has it all which he desires for. Yet there is a longing look in his eyes as if implying a part of him is missing. N now he is determined to get back that part and to be complete. His eyes shows it all determination, longing, slight fear and tension. But his face doesnot show it , it is as blank as a paper which is not used. You can say it is the practice of long years which made him such impassive and he is not happy with his present life. And he is willed to change it at any cost.
A waiter comes and asks ” sir what would you like to have”.
He turns around to see her with his cute dimple simple which is enough to make the girl faint at the spot. Straightens his armani suit and replies ” could you wait for some more time. I am actually waiting for someone”.
The girl says ” ofcourse sir. I will be back when u r ready to give ur order”.
You can see how his eyes lit up when says someone as if that person is meant to be his world. Its true that person is his world. And he is dying to meet after a long time.

A cab comes to halt and the driver turns to his passenger who is sitting on back seat and tells that they arrived their destination.
But the person is looking at the side of window as she is clearly reminiscing some old memories n is in trance. When she hears the driver saying they reached the place she moves out of cab , pays the driver and turns around.
She is standing at the door of a restaurant fiddling her fingers showing that she is nervous, a smile tugs at her lips making her eyes shine. she is beautiful in every aspect, confident, try to achieve what she belief. Her eyes showing the longitivity and a glint of happiness that finally the wait is over. She places a hand on her heart, it is beating as if she has completed a marathon.
She mumbles to herself ” ok you can do this. You can do this. ” she is chanting it as a mantra. Finally gathering all courage she takes a final look at herself. She is wearing a pink floral skirt which reaches below her thighs. A peach color stole which adored her neck which is hiding a necklace which has a cute locket that keeps on peeping. Diamond studs which are looking absolutely stunning. And with jimmy choo shoes which are looking as if made for her legs and her flowing along with the wind which completes her look in a mesmerizing manner. she is every bit ur dream girl.
She moves her fingers into her hair, straightens her locks gives an all over look to herself. Turns the door knob and enters the restaurant. The restaurant is calm and has patrons all over places but it is not full. Beautiful chandeliers hanging gives it a rich feel. The tables placed at far away from one another to give privacy from one another. Candles lit up which gives you a cozy feeling. She scans the place and spots a person sitting at the far end seeing outside from the window.
A small smile tugs at her lips and she moved towards his direction when she is just behind the person. She taps his shoulder to get his attention with her long fingers which have lovely nailart and a ring on her fore finger with letters NS.

He turns around and their eyes meet, it is as if the world has stopped spinning and the people around them are visible. Only the two are present there. After a comfortable silence of several minutes and an eyelock which shows the deep love they have comes out of trance and the man moves forward towards the girl to embrace her in his arms for conforming that this is not a dream but it is happening in real.

After a lovely long hug which they were missing for long years and are content and happy in each others embrace breaks the hug to see at each other. The man caresses girls cheek with his knuckles so softly as is she us fragile, his eyes showing his love for the girl infront of him. His doll, his girl, his world, his love.
“How r u my love” says the man.
“How r u ” says the girl. At the same time.
The girl blushes at his endearment and both laugh for asking the same question.
After their laughs subsides the man gives a cheeky grin and says” How am i ?? How will be i without u. Its like im breathing but not living”.
The girls laughs at his reply and says ” cheesy much. Not at all changed Mr. Neil Malhotra”.
Yes he is the heir of The Malhotra empire. The most powerful and biggest companies in the world. Son of Mr. Sahil malhotra and mrs. Prerna malhotra. Lovable parents and adorable couple.
Neil laughs at her reply and says ” kya kare Ms.Samaira Khanna. If i will change how will this world survive. Huh? ”
Yes she is our sam. Daughter of samrat and piyali khanna. who owns the biggest event management company in newyork. Apple of the eye of her family.
They smile at each other and eyes showing their long lost love which can never be diminished.
Neil moves forward places his hands on her cheeks and gives her a chaste kiss on her lips and says ” I love you sam . Always have and always will. WILL YOU MARRY ME ? “

Credit to: who am i ???


  1. S.v

    |Registered Member

    Again guessing yaar I guess it would be my pyari pyari is that u sammy ?? If not sry . But a superb start . Wanna read more pls update soon

    • Sammy

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      Sv this one is not mine …you know in my ffs lovers had to face many hurdles …then they become one ..I think she is sathya ….

  2. Brin

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    Awesome episode, waiting for the next update. ๐Ÿ™‚ I not going to guess, I just not good at it ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. Suga

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    Aashtha is dat u???? ๐Ÿ™‚ but loved the amazing proposal ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ and the way u explained about Neil is superbbbbbbbb one ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  4. Gauri

    Awesome…. my guess went in drain… I thought it to be Sathya … now pls update the next one ๐Ÿ™‚ love u

  5. dipika

    hey it was awsome….at first place t too thought its sathya. bt now going fir asthu. .

  6. Aasthu

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    It’s not me guys………………maybe Maandey di…………..I already am in a confusion as to how I’ll do justice to the characters in my 3ff’s…… I won’t risk another one……………..I go with my guess……………

  7. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Wow!!Lovely one dear..Even I thought it to be Sathya..The story is really awesome..Please post next one soon..Stay blessed and keep smiling..?

  8. Roma

    O my goodness. ..manhaaa….I’m just jumping in the happiness. …awesoooooome, marvellous, outstanding start…the description n narration of each n every expression of the characters, the features n the decorations of the place made n sketch in front of me …I could imagine n see everything in my mind n praising you at your wonderful talent of writing…brilliantly narrated…loved it to the coreeeee. ..and I love this couple to the eternity…nesam….n specially neil is my favorite. ..kya baat hai meri jaan….I’m very very glad to see you writing ….it’s my Eid gift from you….thank you sweetheart. ..Eid Mubarak to you. … ๐Ÿ™‚ …stay blessed n healthy always. …keep smiling n writing. …love you loads. .muaaaaahhhhhh. … ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜€ โ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™ก

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