MMZ – My Lost Love (Two shots – Part 1)

Hi All, This is your Sathya aka Satz…and Firstly i say, A many many happy returns of the day my dear sweet cute little NITU aka NATASHA darling. I wish you from the bottom of my heart that all your wishes should come true this year and you should get all the happiness in your life ahead which you deserve. A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY NITU πŸ™‚

This below FF is dedicated to NITU a bday baby and it is of two shots. I have given one today and next will be on tomorrow will be the last one. JUST CHILL AND ENJOY NITU…LOVE YOU

MMZ – My Lost Love (Two Shots – Part 1)

“I LOVE YOU RADHIKA” by saying this he extends the rose to her and looks eagerly at her face to know the answer. She gives an attitude look at him and says, “What is Arjun? I never expected that you will have this kind of cheap thoughts in your mind like this. But i am sorry to say this, first of all I don’t even like you then how can i love you?”

After 2 years,

Radhika lost in her own thoughts and gets disturbed by a phone call. She takes her mobile and attends the call.

Rads, “Hello Dadi, sorry dadi….i stayed here for long time. I will come home soon. I am starting now”

Radhika takes an auto from her home to the place where she is working. She gets down from the auto and looks at the name board it says “Brindavan” and she murmurs, “It is really Brindavan only which gives me peace and safety”. She enters into the house and looks for some one. She sees an old lady who is coming from pooja room and greets her with a broad smile saying, “Radhi ma, y u took so long to come back. I was waiting for you so long. Chalo now take this prasad”. Radhika smiles at her, takes the prasad and gets blessings from her.

Rads, “Sorry dadi, i forgot myself after seeing my home. I remembered about my pasts there”

Dadi, “It’s ok beta. I felt alone here when you are not with me, that’s y i called you. Come we have our breakfast together”

Radhika gets happy tears thinking that some one in the world is there to care for her. She silently follows her. After having the break fast, dadi takes her to her room and gives her the envelope. Radhika denies getting it but dadi reminds her, “Radhika, i know you don’t like to get money from me since you are not doing this as your job, you are taking care of me like your real very lucky to have a girl like you to look at me but now it is my turn to safeguard you. Once my period is over you need something to steady your life. I know you will not get this money from my hand, that’s y i asked the manager to deposit in your account. It is for your future beta..pls don’t refuse it”

Radhika hugs her and says, “Dadi, its my luck to work here with a person like you. You never treated me like a servant and you given me all the rights here. I stopped thinking about the loss of my father after coming here. Thank you dadi”

Dadi, “Ok ok.. its enough now…go and get me my medicines”

Radhika wipes her tears and starts doing her work. Her work is to take care of dadi, yes she is a care taker for dadi who spends her life in this big mansion alone. Its been 2 years now she came here to take care of dadi. Initially she comes in the morning and leaves in the night to her home. But one day, it becomes so late and when she was travelling, some 3 to 4 goons follows her and tries to molest her, to safeguard her she runs on the roadside shouting for help. The people sleeps in the platform hears her screaming and goes for her help. They beaten the goons badly and pacifies her. When they asked her about the details, she told them her home address and the brindavan address also which is nearby. Among them , some 3 persons goes with her to drop her at the Brindavan. Once they reached and she informs the watchman about the problem and he allows everyone inside. Dadi came out and gets worry seeing radhika in a dishelved state, then she gets to know everything about from the people and thanks them for saving her. Then she decided and orders radhika to stay with her only from that day onwards. Radhika initially refused but later she also thinks it to be the best for her safety. Its been 2 yrs passed she starts staying here but often she goes to her home and arranges the home properly and cleans it, after all it is the remembrance of her father and mother after they gone from her life. It is a treasure for her, so she did not sell it or for rental it. Likewise she went to her home that day also but unlikely she remember about Arjun that day and gets restless thinking about him.

Her day goes as usual giving instructions to the cook and other servants and taking care of dadi. The servants are always obeys her words and respects her and they never disrespect her. So everything goes on smoothly till dadi gets a call from overseas. Yes, dadi receives a call from her daughter who stays in Singapore with her family. Dadi talks in the phone very happily and her faces starts glowing. Radhika also happy seeing her excitement and asks, “Dadi, what made you so happy like this anything special?”

Dadi, “Haan radhika, i am so happy today. you know why? My daughter is coming from singapore to meet me after a long time. With her my grand children also coming. I am at cloud nine now”

Radhika enjoys dadi’s excitement and gets to know that when they are coming. She tells her that she will take care of all the preparations. She gets to know dadi that they are coming day after tomorrow and starts giving the instructions to the servants and she herself arranges the rooms for the guests.

After 2 days, Dadi is so excited at brindavan but alone. Radhika went to her home as usual and promises dadi that she will be back soon. After 2 hours, Radhika rushes inside the home and hears some 2 to 3 voices, she hesitates to go inside but still composes herself and enters inside the home. There she finds 2 new persons with dadi, one who is of middle aged and another girl also will be of her age within 20 to 25. They also notices her and greets her with a broad smile. The girl goes to her and gives her a warm hug and introduces herself as Samaira. Radhika also introduces herself and goes to kitchen to check the food for everyone. Once all the formal talks over, they had their food and goes to their respective rooms to take rest.

Radhika also about to go to her room but dadi asked her to arrange one more room beside hers only. Radhika just nods and is about to go but dadi stops and says, “Will you not ask y?” Radhika smiles and asks, “Y another room dadi?”

Dadi with so much of proud, “One more special person is coming…”

Radhika smiles seeing at her excitement and goes to arrange the room for that new person. It’s just beside her room. After the whole day work, she got tired and slept off early aftre giving the medicines to dadi and makes her also sleep.

Next morning, Radhika gets disturbed by some voice which looks familiar to her but she couldn’t guess it who it was. she goes to washroom, finish bathing and comes out by covering herself with a towel. Then she finds the door is open and is about to put the knob but the door is getting opened and before she understands what is happening she falls on the floor and finds a overweight on top of her. She closes her eyes due to the pain and slowly opens it to see what is that and gets shocked and speechless seeing the person on top of her. She feels her whole world is spinning fastly and finds the person starring her continuously.

No Precap….next is the end of this Shot.


  1. natasha (nitu)

    my b day is tmrw u guyzz are making it spl frm today only tank u so much sathya akka gimme 10 mins ill read the ff and ping u luv u for this gift akka
    tu frnds made my b day very spl

  2. Shruti

    Pls don’t end it soon. I know that it’s arjun. Pls make her daughter and her family stay there forever. I wish that ardhika fall in love.

  3. Aarti

    Its lovely sats..though I m a silent reader here but I check mmz everyday read every ff..but m curious about something..plz don’t mind it but I noticed that everyone wished Sammy on her bday xcept are u guys not on talking terms..plz don’t mind dear I just said what I felt as I don’t witness u both commenting on each others ff..

    • Sathya



      Aarti.. Actually u made me laugh like hell….seriously yar…u know what though am writing so many ffs… Actually I m a silent reader for most of all the ffs… Only few I used to Comment…I would have missed reading the ffs on her bday… And nothing more than that…

    • Sammy


      |Registered Member

      Sorry that h got posted lol …actually aarti ..sathya is writing earlier than me …I have just joined TU like on may …so at that time we didn’t registered …okay let me explain with you example …I have never read never let u go written by dipika …but when she ended then I started reading those .. same with sathya .. I have starting reading her impossible love …so first I thought I should complete …her old ones …and it is nothing like that …then I will comment …I was about to ask her about other ffs ..and there is no war like that ..never can be …she is far ..I mean much more better writer than me ..I can only learn from her ..aarti trust me sathya di and me both are laughing …and in these months my counselling and admissions are also there ..honestly I was hestitating to comment on earlier chappies as she has updated them long back …and trust me one can think that ..that she is commenting so early ..nothing like that dear me all will kill me for fighting with sathya di πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

      • Sammy


        |Registered Member

        And yeah just now remember that I have commented on her new ones …start …pls check that ..hehe πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  4. rossy

    Happy birthday nitu…may god bless u n hope all ur wishes come true…
    And sis wrong time to stop the shot…next one is tomorrow

  5. S.v


    |Registered Member

    Wait wait wait let me guess is that arjun na ?? Awww I knew it would be arjun only him. a different type of radhika and arjun lovely my arjun lovely. Fine where is our story ?? Just 2 of us ?? Update that soon. Its a friendly demand from me dear plsssssssss. Lovely shot and where on earth u come up with these kinds of things ?? Lovely sathya soooo lovely.

    • Sathya



      Thank u SV dear…. Yeah it s arjun only… Dear our story will be on Monday for sure… Y friendly request…. U r my Radhika na so u have right to order me…. 😍😍😍

  6. Dipika


    |Registered Member

    Satzzzz m tooo angry on u..u stopped at mean..atleast who is tht person who fall on rads..Arjun….ohhh..its soooo gooddddd……when u gonna update nxt shot….pls sooon update it…wht happened with Rads… M so eager….Nice gift to nitu….loads of love…muhha

  7. manha

    Sathyaaaa. u should hav continued it. Plzzzz jaldi update karo next part. Oh boy arjun’s reentry was rocking yaar. Like aasmaan se gire khajoor me atke. Lol. I guess that new guest is arjun. I wish it is true. Hmmm why did radz say no to arjun??? Any serious reason. Why. Why. Give solid reason. It is arjun yaar. How can u say no??!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰. Loved it . Loved it. It was superbbbb.

    Hey my chitti chelli. Happy bday nitu. Loveee u my sweet sis. Stay blessed. Wish all the luck n happiness. Enjoyyyy.

    • Sathya



      Thank u Manu darling… Yeah arjun only… Actually her rejection reason will be a flashback dear… She has the reason but don’t know whether it gonna be a solid reason or not… I ll update it today

  8. Brin

    Fantastic shot and that Brindaven is close to my name wow I feel bless, waiting for the next shot. πŸ™‚

  9. Sweetie


    |Registered Member

    Satz dear..That was a lovely shot..Aww!!That person is Arjun right??Waiting for the flashback why Rads left Arjun..Stay blessed and keep smiling.. πŸ™‚

    Happy B’day Nitu dear..May God give you all the happiness you deserve.. πŸ™‚

  10. Gauri

    Awesome Sathya ….such a wonderful shot…loved each and everypart of it waiting for the next one πŸ™‚ loads of love πŸ™‚

  11. Shree


    |Registered Member

    Akka semma!! Loved it so much!! Dadi ia so nice.. why she rejected Arjun? Wow.. dadi so exited.. special person Arjun!! Obviously!!

    Akka really.. you have a lot of positivity in all your stories.. it feels so good..

    God bless.. Love you 😍😘

  12. Naaga

    Hi Satz, adhu arjun nu ninaikiren.

    And story padikkum podhu yennaku ‘Seedan’ movie niyabagam ma .

    And sorry for the late cmmt, inga net kojam problema irukku adhu dhaan ma.

    OK now im waiting for ur next shot ☺

  13. Roma

    Wowwww satz. …awesoooooome. ..I just can’t believe…. you guys r having such a Devine powers to think of so many different plots n stories…I’m amazed. ..every single story is having its own beauty next uniqueness. …I’m just spellbound. …keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads my sweeeeeetheart. ..muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ™‚

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