MMZ – Kaisi Yeh Manmarziyan (Shot 9)

Hello lovelies..Here i am again….Jess darling this update is for you..Dedicated to the creator of my Fernandez Sir….

“ He likes you!! You know that, right?” Sam abruptly says shaking the protein shake in her sipper.

Barefoot and wrapped in towels, the two of us walking towards the stream room. There was no one around us. The cold wet floor beneath my foot feels nice. It’s been about ten minutes since we have finished our workout. It’s one of those rare days when Arjun had trained both of us together. The evening before, on our WhatsApp group we insisted Arjun to do that.

In the locker room, while undressing, Sam and I have been talking about Arjun. I know I can’t stop thinking about him since our last conversation and Sam is only talking too much on it…now we have brought the conversation inside the stream room.

We stepped inside the white darkness of the stream room. It takes us few seconds to get used to the dim yellow light of the room. Thankfully, there was no one inside the stream room apart from us..

“He likes everyone…He is dedicated trainer!!!” I said trying to act ignorant about what Sam was intend to say

“Not Like- Like wala Like!! C’mon! you know that what I mean…Like a LOVE wala Like..!!!” she clarifies..she is a sharp woman..nothings escapes her!!

“You have got to be kidding me!!!” I said to throw her off.

But inside, it feels nice to hear her opinion on it…I know I am blushing but Sam can’t see my actual reaction. I have to be thankful to those streams to covering my face from this Detective woman sitting beside me.

She takes her moment to think. I am debating inside whether I should change the topic. But secretly I want Sam to continue and add more to her previous statement. I play it safe and don’t say anything else.

“Really?? You don’t think so??” Sam asks in a minute

“Of course not!!” I pretend

Sam is smart enough to make this out from me…she senses the opportunity and drops the ball in my court.

“I guess you are right..Let’s leave it…” she says and stopped talking.

But I knew she is thinking too…as she was kept shuffling on her side

And suddenly, I wanted to know further..so I ask

“But what makes you say so in the first place?”

“Ohhh..its nothing……”

I hate her for doing this to me..

“But still?” I insist and make it utterly evident now….how I have put my own foot on bare axe!!

“Looks…..like…someone…..is….now…..very..intrested?” Sam drawls out, teasing by pulling every word in a sentence..

Curiosity with denial appears like a good strategy to me ..so I giggle and say “ Nothing like that…you just made me curious..thats it…”

Sam is kind enough not to stretch it further. She knows in a way how I am…so she says

“Chashni, its evident in his eyes, in his body language.. I saw his eyes the way they dance and shines in happiness when you were around him. Look at the way he treats you…!!!”

“what do you mean by the way he treats me?” I ask her

“ Haven’t you noticed??”

“ Noticed what??”

“….how at times he hesitates to touch you while training?”

I think it over. “What are you talking about? Didn’t you see him supporting me when we did the bicep curls? We lifted quite a heavy load today!!!”

“I didn’t mean that he is afraid to touch you in that normal sense, I meant the slightly more intimate parts of your body…”

I try to recall..

Meanwhile, Sam continues “ he didn’t touch you behind the legs to help you how to isolate and contract the hamstrings. Remember? Whereas he touched me without any inhabitation. In your case, he only asked you to feel it. He didn’t touch your waist when we did the twist exercise..but he did mine..”

“Well, that only proves he is closer to you than me…” I say, but in my heart I know she is probably right.

“Radhika, how come you didn’t notice his eyes? There was something in them…shyness..i think…he is courteous to you, extra careful and treats you like a lady..he is too shy to touch you even in a way that will make you conscious…But if you let him…..he will…”

I realize that Arjun’s approach towards his other female clients has been a lot like how he trains Sam..And Sam is right!! I actually didn’t recall Arjun touching me like he touches other…

I recall how initially I felt strange when he touched me while we were training..had he sensed my discomfort back then?? Or is it now that we have talked about things…..? I questioned myself

And the more I think, the more I want to be touched by Arjun..in a more intimate manner!! The thought sends a chill down my spine. I forcefully break it and redrape my towel around my body.

“Really??” I say, only for sake of it..

“You might have you doubts but I know…”

“What do you mean??”

“Arjun has told me about his feelings….”

“What? When? I mean what are you saying?”

“ he made me swear not to tell you this…but I can’t hold it back…” Sam says, completely starling me.

She continues “ Last week we went for drinks in the evening and he confessed he really likes you…I had to try it hard to make him open up to me….”

I don’t know how to react…so, all I ask is “ you guys go out for drinks??”

“Yes..He is Neil’s friend..And we trio met more often..Is that a big deal??”

“No!! but he said to you that he likes…….??”

“Yes!!!”

“Is that all he said??”

“No….”

“Then??”

“ The poor guy also said “ but what’s the point Sam, when she is already engaged?””

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How’s it guys??? i knw its lil bit short as i was busy this days….soon will come with longer..dont forget to share your view….

WoS next chapter link

https://www.wattpad.com/355317701-written-on-the-stars-chapter-21-a-life-changed

39 comments

  1. Sulbi

    Sulbi

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    Dipu darling….. lovely episode…. atlast Sam said the truth about Arjun… so wat Radhika gonna do… so excited…

    WOS i read… am so hurt… Sam lost his dad… now she want her Neil…. really feeling bad for her… So excited for next chapter… NeSam meeting after 3 years…. keep rocking dear… luv u and tc… 🙂

    • Dipika

      Dipika

      |Author

      Sulbi darling thank you sooooo sooooo much..i must triple thank u.. Cos u commented on both stories pkus being a first commentor u made my day happy.. Thanks darling.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

  2. Chashni

    Wow arjun liked radhika.Nice episode di.but she is engaged.uh.it is hellinteresting di.waiting for next. Love you take care

  3. Gianna

    Gianna

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    Oh my darling Dipu, what an update though I have to agree it’s short, and why did you end it there when things were starting to get interesting. I just have one advice for Rads, kick that stupid Saral’s ass and run to the trainer. Eager to know how you will take the story from here, I always enjoy reading your writings they as beautiful as you.

    Stay lovely 💜💜

    • Dipika

      Dipika

      |Author

      Ohhh gia darling soon radz will kick sarals ass out.. Lol.. Thank u sooooo much for for wonderful words.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍

  4. Brin

    Brin

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    Fabulous episode, Sam tells Radhika Arjun has feeling for her, oh that was too good, now what will Radhika do? Eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

  5. Aastha

    Hey ya Dipu di…loved rasam convo..very interesting…yaa it is short but give next longer..
    I was enjoying their convo and at last sam dropped bomb on radz…now anxiously waiting for radz pov…
    loads loads of love di…muaaahh 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  6. arti viswanathan

    Dipika darling superb, outstanding, excellent,marvelous episode…. I loved it… I liked it arjun confessed his love to radhika…..

  7. Gauri

    Gauri

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    Fantastic piece of work Dipu….all the words all expression were so real….Arjun loves Radhika …hmm now I can see firecrakers….waiting to see how will she chuck saral out….I am reading it for the 3rd time but can’t get enough of it 🙂 love u

  8. likii

    Good one dipu. …amazing. ….so arjun finally confessed. ..but to Sam. .hmm waiting for the next one

  9. Jewel

    Jewel

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    deepz, i am reading this again and again….. i loved this chapter….. how u r writing like this…. really beautiful…. waiting for next one…

  10. Ritu

    Wow wow wow Dipika.. 🙂 still cant believe Arjun is shy here 😉 😜 Loved Rads strategy of hiding her feelings while asking about Arjun to Sam..nd loved d way Sam outsmarted her 😉 🙂 eager for nxt..post soon nd little longer plz…loads of love. 🙂

  11. KK123 (Krishna)

    To be honest..I love this story line…it feels like some real person(s) story…I can imagine it happens in relation life that actually people meet their life partner like this…totally awesome…I’m loving it..thank you dipika for posting…waiting on your next one already😀😀😉

    • Dipika

      Dipika

      |Author

      Kk darling thank you sooooo much for amazing words n m soooo happy that u liked it.. Will post soon.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍

  12. Sathya

    Sathya

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    Trainer trainer trainer… I want to join the gym where I can find the trainer as arjun…. Yar cheri what have u done… It’s so so so beautifully written… I loved everything… Cheri I wanna kiss ur hands for writing this beautiful story. It’s superb yar…. Sam is lovely girl yar… Ooooohoiiii my trainer is blurted all… Poor guy… Lol loved it…. Love u 😍😍😍😘😘

    • Dipika

      Dipika

      |Author

      Senorita m so eager to know from u.. N m soooooo much happy. This is biggrst compliment yarrrr…i m always eager to hear from you… Thank u sooooo much for lovely words senorita.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

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