MMZ – Kaisi Yeh Manmarziyan (Shot 4)


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The First Touch

It’s my first day of workout with Arjun…

After about seven minutes of brisk walking on treadmill, my body has warmed up. I am ready to exercise. At the juice counter, Arjun has been reading newspaper, waiting for me.

I walked up to him. I am excited. I look forward to executing what we had planned a day before.

“Ready to go?” Arjun asks me the moment he notices my arrival at his table.

“YES!!!” I nodded in enthusiasm.

“Great!! Let’s begin then…” he stands up, folds the newspaper and places it back on the stack from where he had picked it.

“Come with me….” He commands

I followed him to the other side of gym, towards the functional area.

“After the warm-up before the workout, it’s important to stretch…..” he says and goes on to explain how it safeguards the body from any muscle injury during the workout.

I listen him carefully and registered it in my mind.

“This is TRX” Arjun tells me he holds the belt in his fists and demonstrates what he supposed to do.

He places his left foot ahead of his body, stretches his arms out, nicely parallel to the floor, and leans in his upper body to the front.
His feet are firmly placed on the ground.

The next moment, I follow suit.

I try to stretch my chest muscles. But then my posture isn’t exactly what Arjun wants me to hold. He takes the belt from me and shows me how to do it one more time.

I fail to do it, one more time.
I am not sure what exactly is wrong. It looks fairly simple when he does it.

In order to help me, Arjun places himself behind me.

“Ma’am don’t drop your elbows…” he says and the same time he places his palms underneath my elbow.

I sense his touch on my skin. A chill runs through my spine, which I tried hard to conceal. This is first time Arjun touched me. I didn’t see it coming. I wasn’t prepared for it.

Arjun’s hands on my arms disrupt my focus. I am not used to a man’s touch. Not of ones aren’t a part of my family or not even going to extended family for that matter. This is strange feeling.

No, it’s not bad touch at all. In fact, in the life situation am in, It is a much needed one. It’s the touch between the trainer and his client. But then, it also between a man and a woman. And I am aware of it. I can’t say about him.

Arjun continues to explain something to me. But the voice has become background sound now. Nothing register in my mind., except the consciousness that I am being touched by a man I haven’t known for long.

Still, it’s not an uncomfortable feeling. But I am not perfectly comfortable either.

What it is then? ?It’s something complicated.

Something that’s not normal to me.It’s different. I am not sure whether it is positively different or negatively. Arjun is not at fault. There is no fault here. He is doing only his job. I am the who asked for his service. I am the who needs to upgrade my mindset. I realize I have to get used to it.

“Do you feel it, Madam?”

Arjun’s slightly lauder voice brakes through my thoughts and I have to pay attension. I guess he has repeated himself this time.

I nod my head in acknowledgment, worried that I might say something.

“You should feel the stretch in your upper chest, close to your shoulder….” He tells me

I focus on the said anatomy part and realize that I am indeed feeling the stretch. “Yes, I am” I say this time.’’

After holding the posture for ten seconds, Arjun drops his hands…

“Relax….” He says..

My body does. My mind can’t.


As I am about to get down from his car, after our dinner, Saral held my hand. I stopped opening the door and looked into his eyes. He caressed my hand and placed his hands on my cheek. Then he leaned and kissed my cheek. That’s’ how Saral was.

“Good Night Radhu..” he said and looked at his phone to check it. It means now he did said good bye and I have to get down from the car. It was always the same routine. Good bye kiss. This time I forget this ritual.

Probably, it was his way of saying that he loved me. Once again, it didn’t matter what I wanted.

As got in to my room, I went to bathroom and flash some water on my face.

I wipe my face and rested my back on the soft bed.

For a while, I couldn’t sleep. My thoughts went to the gym, to Arjun. I recalled the way he had touched me earlier in the day. How that too had come unannounced, just like this one. Yet, unlike the very recent touch of my fiancé , that gave me goose bumps. Even though I had felt conscious at that moment, that touch wasn’t against my wishes.

The intensions behind these two touches of the two different men were very different. And they triggerd completely different response in the depths of my heart.

The non-sensuous one aroused me and the one that was meant to be sensuous was…….Dead!!

Then my thoughts took me in another direction.
Was this the right way to think? Am I turning into a bad woman? The characterless one?

This sudden introspection disturbed me. I kept comparing the two different touches, while guilt continued to spill on my thoughts and spoil the fun. I don’t remember when exactly sleep took over me.

How’s it???? I wrote it in haste..within an hour…so share your reviews…

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  1. it was super duper…but i do have question for you work out?? you have written perfect words to describe positions. thank you dear…i will be waiting on your next one…

  2. Brin

    Awesome episode, Arjun touch has affected Radhika, that is too good, I would like to know how Arjun is affected, eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

  3. confused Radhu. haha cool one.

  4. Kavina

    Loved it

  5. Jewel

    Deepz, this chapter is really nice… The part where he explaining to her and she is in some other world, u wrote that very nicely. And she comparing both touches and feels guilty for that, that too…. Liked the chapter a lot…. Waiting for next one….

  6. super…u nailed it..her thoughts wow..its just beautifully said …am always ur ardhika story fan..not that i don like wos ..but i donno 😉

  7. Vasuraj

    Nice one…
    U portrayed welll

  8. arti viswanathan

    Dipika darling awesome episode.. I loved the way arjun touches radhika she feels awkward that time.. And when saral touches she doesn’t like or something.. I feel satisfied with ur work dipka darling… loadz of loves and teddy hug to u from me….

  9. Sathya

    विलक्षण – understood Dipu. I wrote it in Marathi. Hope you find the meaning. Well i just love the complete part and the feelings of Radhika after his touch..his first touch…it s so beautifully written. Her thoughts are so realistic. our Arjun is like DUTY DUTY DUTY…stupid fellow..might be it was not his first touch though 😛 lol 😛 :P:P

    How dare Saral kissed on her cheek? Tell Radhika that next time not allow him to kiss..ok? Totally a beautifully narrated episode it you darling 🙂

  10. Jessie

    Deepzzzz…..this is super awesome….muaaahhhhhhhh….to you on your cheeks..and wanna pull ur cheeks too….girl…this is cute…where…the place she thinks Arjun is not at fault…in fact no fault…analyzing the touch when he spks abt the strech…I simply love this trainer…so duty conscious…hehehe… and she wonders why she dint find saral’s kiss sensuous…no…dead!! Wow!! You said in one word…saral babu..tere kissie se koi matlab nahi hamare Radhu ko,bas Arjun ki ek touchie se saare matlab hain…!! Judwa behana….this Arjun boy is unaware of all this chemical reactions his touch made to Radz….this is so sweet deepzzz….poor Radz….buddu handsome.bandha….?????Radz pov of wondering what went wrong…real exp…hahaaha….

    Love u loads….My JB…Take care

  11. Rossy

    Heroine after reading it back to back I can only thinking about one thing…u may be guessed it…is it ur story??? Tell me the truth….lol…..awwww….i imagined u in place of radz n ur version Arjun….uuuuooooyyyyyiiiiiii so much heath and healthy charts….ooooooo….i prefer to eat everything…lol….and one thing I told u thousands of time…ur way of writing is very transparent and natural dear…i loved it most?

  12. Gauri

    wow wow wow Dipu….so beautiful 🙂 the way your are writing this POV is making me feel the story more….and they way Radhika keeps thinking about Arjun…he had found a corner in her heart. it was so natural when she compared the two touches…and then chided herself for thinking about the other man. Best apart about your stories are they are siple natural and straight from the heart loved it 🙂 love u 🙂

  13. Nice yaar

  14. Sooooooo gooooood.
    Amazing story…..
    Yaarian you have so much knowledge about zym ‘s work out….
    Really impressive…..
    Liking Radhika hesitation…. Arjun’s free handling….

  15. mindblowing update …

  16. Sangee

    Deepz… Super dear… Last part was simply awesome…. How she compared two touches… Feeling guilty… Thinking as character less… U just nailed it dear…. Her thoughts reflected the emotions of a normal girl.. Simply superb yar… ????????????????????
    Take care…

  17. Sulbi

    Dipu darling… it was awsme dear.. its so natural… i loved it… keep going… tc love you…

  18. Hi dipika. ….this was too good……awesome

  19. _Ritu

    Dipika…its brilliant dear. 🙂 well u have great knowledge on workouts 🙂 kahin Jiju Kisi Gym k owner to nahin 😉 😉 ? loved d epi dear…every part was written so well as if m watching it live 🙂 ? waiting for nxt…loads of love. 🙂

  20. Meen

    Amazing dipika….loved it…..muuuuuha

  21. Sorry dipika di for late comment.that explanation of feelings was you take care

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