MMZ – Kaisi Yeh Manmarziyan (Shot 1)

Hello Darling….Your Dipu knocking Again….So I’m here with Aradhika…..

My cutiepie nanad wants me to write on aradhika..but I kept this story on hold..But today is her birthday so I thought to give this gift..you wanted aradhika in pov style, right?

Wishing you verrryyyyyy veryyyyyy happieeeee Birthday my cute sweet innocent and adorable nanad Sree…….the only girl consider Arjun her bro…

You always supported , motivated and loved me by showering your cute and sweet words..You made me blush hard by teasing me by ur bro’s name…God I just loves that very much…

I wish all the happiness,success and sweetness for you..May almightly god keep you happy , healthy and smiling always…MUHHAAAAA…

Shot 1

Radhika’s POV

On that afternoon, driving up the spiraling ramp connecting the basement car park to the exit, I lost my new found confidence as a driver. It was my first time driving up a steep incline. The problem wasn’t much of inclination but the car who stopped abruptly before me. Damn!! I cursed and applied the brakes..

The car in front of me began moving when it halted again a few feet ahead. I tried the same but I failed miserably and as I realized the brakes to press accelerator, my car began rolling back. Immediately I applied the brakes to stop the car..HUshhhh!!!

I realized this is going to be tricky. You need to be quick with whole shifting from brakes to accelerator thing..I told myself..
With my every attempts to go up, my car was rolling behind..God this race against Gravity..!!!

A sheer fear heats me when another car come to halt behind me..OHHH GODDDD!! NO…This couldn’t happen with me.

When the car in front of me moved world behind me expected me to do exactly the same. But I was on slope. On a spiral slope of mall basement.

Mother earth..swallow me!!

Suddenly car behind me honked. And then there were a few more honks, one after another. In rear view I can see trail of car behind me…Shit!!!
Its time….You can do it Radhika…!!!

My figures were trembling in fear while my palms sweating badly. I felt sick. I wanted this over.

“I have to do it……I HAVE TO DO IT…” I motivated myself repeatedly..BREATH IN AND OUT.

And then to my car “Okay clutch done…Now, first gear..okay..now…”

“Ganesha….bacchaaa lena….(It’s now up to you, GOD….) I promise I will give garland of 21 coconut at heel temple…..”
And then I let go…

Two sec later I felt the thud…BANGGGGGG!!!!The front of the car behind me was dented, it’s number plate bent.
And guess what? It had a temporary hand written number on it and it white, pearl finished body was glowing under the ramp lights which clearly indicate it was brand NEW CAR…

Even the Ganesha had not saved me….

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“W-H-A-T? You rolled back into a brand new car?? “ Sam appeared to be shock before she burst into round of laughter. She was amused listening my ordeal from day before yesterday. I wasn’t sure if she was laughing on situation or at me. I stayed quite; when she noticed my sad face she stopped laughing.

“Oh Darling, I was just imagining the whole scene….” She said grinning and trying hard to control her laughter as she adjusted the hem of her towel she was wrapped in.

The two of us were in the steam room of gym.

Sam aka Samaira was my best friend from childhood. She is bold and beautiful. I really admire her as she carry herself..her attitude..she is fearless girl..do what her heart wants. Do what as her MAnmarziya told her…She is the co-owner of Bird song with her boy friend Neil…On other hand I’m simple girl having very low confidence. I always stayed under orders by my family. Ever since college days I know I fated for arrenge marriage..there is no love in my life.

My family is rich but conservative one where chances of love happening were zero. I didn’t stayed in hostel. I couldn’t travel in buses or local trains. Neither had I seated at the back seat of bikes holding on tightly to guys and didn’t caring about rest of world around…. In my life was driver and luxury car that would drive me to college and back home. My weekends were spent with family watching movie on home theatre. I was away from fun weekends. I was different from other girls in class..Boring one…
Now yesterday I joined this gym where Sam already is member from 4 months. As my marriage got fixed I wanted to get in shape before my marriage with Saral…Yeah..I’m engaged to Saral by my father’s wish….He is businessman…But badly workaholic….
Sam is the only person to whom I can talk freely always.

“ I feel sorry that it was a brand new car. I only realized when I stepped out of my car to see what I had done. He was already out of his by then…” I said

“HE? “ Sam asked with twinkle in her eye.

I blushed …” the guy in the car behind me…” I clarified “ forget about what you are thinking Sam..I was guilty and I kept apologies even before he could say anything….”

“Okay..did he abuse you?” she asked in concerned

“ Nope..Surprisingly he didn’t..he was very calm…”

“Really? That’s odd….” Sam said with disbelief in her eyes.

“ yes…In fact…not only he didn’t shout at me but when he found my problem, he offered to drive my car up the ramp….”

“W-H-A-T?” I saw naked shock in her eyes.

“You lucky, beautiful girl….” She winked
I blushed. I knew what she was trying to imply. But it was illogical she was trying to connect the dots..

“he didn’t have any choice Sam..” I blurted out

“how he looks like?”

“umm….tall..about 6 ft…well built..he wore a cap matching his red slim fit T-shirt with pair of straight fit denims and sneakers..i guesss…he was dressed casually..but smartly….but that cap thing was odd…who wore cap now days…I still wonder if cap wearing fashion is in….” I told her what I could recall of the stranger..

“OHHH…may be he likes to wear cap…tell me..wasn’t he upset? I mean this was his brand new car, right? “
She couldn’t hold her curiosity

“Oh..he was.. I saw disappointment in his eyes…but he didn’t lose his cool….that was quite amazing about him..he drove my car and handed me my keys back..i even offered to get his car fixed….” I replied

Sam asked quickly “ what did he said?”

“ He said he would claim insurance…”

My answer gave her 420 volt shock…
“Such a gentleman you drove your car into…” she chuckled

“I felt guilty…I am even now..i wished I can do something for his damage…he must have gone through much difficulties because of me “

“C’mon Radhika..it’s okay..you apologized and you offered to get the car fixed..what more you have done…?

“hmmm…” I sighed but I still felt guilty.

Neither of us said anything for a while..A loath of stream blocks our vision to see each other..so leaned on back wall and made myself feel relaxed.

“ Do you think he didn’t get mad at you but helped you because you are beautiful..” Sam asked suddenly..she still was struck up there….

“Beautiful?” I let out a laugh “ C’mon Sam…You are exaggerating…look at me..I’m plump..fat girl…KUCH BHI….”

“Well, you have beautiful face with sharp features and gorgeous skin..your long dark hair complements your fairness..AS far as weight concerned, you have joined this gym to lose it…it will happen eventually….” She said

“Thank you for saying but I wish I could be like you bold and fit..like you are…”

“HAHA..well I shamelessly accept the praise..you have to believe on yourself for boldness Radhika…” She said

“Hmm..” I sighed again

“ hey why don’t you enroll for personal trainer program..its really good..i achieved my goals than I could have..Arjun..My trainer is quite good..you should ask the receptionist about the personal trainer program..” Sam said as we got out of the stream room.

“ I will…” I said before leaving for changing room…. Sam hurriedly left for office after changing into regular cloths

Outside the ladies room, I bumped into familiar face. I didn’t able to recall the face instantaneously. We sort of blocked each other’s way. I quickly moved right. So did he.then he moved back left. And so did i.

I got nervous. I looked at him.

Underneath a sporty navy blue sleeveless jacket, he wore collard white t-shirt. Navy blue track pants and spots shoes completed his look. Right side of his jacket below the collar his name was printed but I couldn’t able to read it.

He looked at me trying to recognized something and then he said “ I’m sorry..” and moved to give me way.

I nodded and smiled as I walked away.

I guess he smiled when we passed each other. Mysterious one. Once I had seen that smile. Once that had made me nervous before.

I kept my eyes I glued to the ground and I realized who was him..As i reached the reception desk I turned back to see him.

He too turned around. We were looking directly at each other. He was still smiling. My heart grew faster. My eyes must have told him that I had recognized him. Yes…it was HIM, whose car I broke.

It suddenly struck me that I should inquire about that he had got his car fixed or not…but before I could say, he waved me his hand, turned around and left for the men’s room….

The back of his navy jacket read- Arjun, Personal Trainer….!!!

So how’s it darlings? Gym wala pyar..Next chap will take some time to get posted..Plaese to forget to drop your reviews ..I’m nervous….

Love you all…

49 comments

  1. arti viswanathan

    Dipika why are nervous dear. U are excellent writter darling. And about this episode i loved it… Will be waiting for next episode. I hate that saral a lot…. I loved the way arjun helped radhika in car parking…. And finally he is the personal trainer of sam… And he smiled seeing radhika and radhika too smiled omg… I loved these kind of stories dear…..

  2. Brin

    |Registered Member

    Outstanding shot, love it to the core, don’t be nervous, your story is excellent, Dipika you nail it, well done, eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

  3. Chashni

    Nice dipika sister.I read your lot like love ,never let you go,my little bride and this story has a different theme.Thank you.

  4. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    OH my god…!!! DeeeeeppzZzzzz……maar daala…..!!! How can you do this to me???? Batao…..!! Behana….you know isn’t I stopped gym…lol….am like….male trainer and Arjun!!! Lol….rofl…..girl..why we have to wait…no way….post now….you know my love for…..________ (u know the answer too)😍😍😉😂God…

    I did imagine the car scene…he wasn’t angry….wow…I told na deepz…Arjun is a good boy!! Lol….and steam.room chat….haah1 that’s a fun ya….and Radz life..beautifully said…she was there to get into shape..heeh…That’s how they say na….😉😉 Ardhika meeting in gym…😍😍😍😍sweet…I just loved it….realistic..Rads is like me…poor memory…lol..she forgot the person whom.she was talking about but noticed the dress…😁😁now am more eager for this one…

    Sree chella…thanks for encouraging deeps…happy birthday chella kutty….my gift is yet to be updated….I posted yesterday night…

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Jessssss darling u knw very how to make me. Laugh hard huhh… I did to make u join gym. Once again.. How i wish we should be in same gym.. Kitana majja ata.. Lol.. N yeah.. I took inspiration from u to make arjun good boy.. Lol.. Mummy’s boy.. Lol.. Ha our arjun is good only.. I will tru to come fast with another chap… Love u lots darling.. Meri cute judawa behena..😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

  5. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Baht accha Hai dipu….. Wowowow… Madam I have a question? Answer truly OK? Is this really a story or in ur gym is there any guy named with arjun? Lol… Dipu what have u done yar…. Mind-boggling one…. I just loved the first meeting of ardhika….. He was soooooo cool to handle ur tension…. Wowwwww only arjun can do that. Just loved it to the core…… U r toooooooo good girl…. Love u sear

    • Sathya

      |Registered Member

      It looks like a real story… Tell me if u not driving the car means… Have u bumped to someone on ur two wheeler…. Lol… Have u find any person who behaved exactly like arjun with soooooo cool… Lol… M so eagerly waiting for ur answers

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Satzzzzz darling u knw m. Blushing hard by ur words.. U knw me so welll.. Lol u caught me huhhh… Thank u sooooo much yar making me smile wide… If anything progress happen i will let u knw first.. Lol… Aisa hone nahi wala vo alag baat hai.. Hahaha.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

  6. Myra

    |Registered Member

    Dipu diii….you toh are on fire….blockbuster pe blockbuster…..the several accolades winning written on the stars and now the super stress buster kaisi yeh manmarziyan…wow!

    Gym vala pyaar….interesting…and i guess, its completely unique as well….no body has tried this kind of a stroy line before….nhi mostly, its around bird song or mehra group of industries….chalo…fresh story we have….
    The ramp story and the way you took off was brialliant….instant fan i am…
    Desperately waiting…update both your ffs soon…
    Love you….😍

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Myra darling thank u so much m on cloud 9 now.. Yeah i myself got tired of making bussinessman n rude… I want a normal story. Like we livr everyday life.. Thank u sooooo much for ur love.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

  7. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    dipika, I missed ur ardhika stories, when I saw this I was so happy. I am a big fan of ur LLL. Now I can read one more story on ardhika. The starting, that it self is excellent, her confusion, fear, u described that beautifully. Actually this will happen, and I experienced something like this. Bt there was no one like him for me☹…😃😃. And there meeting in the last part, his smile, I liked that a lot. Radhika and her family, poor rads. Arjun as her personal trainer. Waiting for their love story in gym. Plz try to post soon….

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Jewel darling thank you sooooo much for showering ur love on. Me always.. Your words encouraging me like anytime.. M so happy reading it.. I can’t even express it.. Yeah iys going to b normal one… U gonna love it.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

  8. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Dipu loved it…gym wala pyaar….amazing….so Arjun is Sam’s trainer and he is going to train Radhika wow….waiting for that…and also how radhika brks off from Saral that name irks me…. last part took my hrt….the way they looked at each other and Arjun smiled ….staraight to the heart …waiting for next 🙂 u write rocking loads of love stay blessed 🙂

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Gauri angel i m soooo waiting for ur comment.. Bcos it always very special to hear from you.. Thank u sooooo much darling.. Don’t worry saral will itself help hrr to recognise her love indirectly.. U liked tht smiles na… Like my angel.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

  9. Nayan

    |Registered Member

    Wow nice start …hope saral won’t be a villain in ardhika’s love story .. I felt sad for radhika … she has a caged life… arjun is personal trainer … I think he is from good and rich background … otherwise which personal trainer has a brandnew car …. ardika’s characters are really different from other ff … arjun was business tycoon and radhika was chubby bubbly girl… but here they have different colour shades … it’s really interesting to watch them in new avatats … waiting for the next update …. plz update soon and stay blessed 😀 😀 😀

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Hey nayan dear thank you sooooo much for for amazing words.. Are its a high teck gym.. U gonna see it in nxt chap.. N arjun ki salary acchi hai.. Lol.. N imagination me kuch b ho sakta hai na.. Hahaha.. U caught correct pt.. N saral will. Not b villan here..juat a catalyst. N yeah yarr. I personally fed of arjun bcom businessman n tht rude avatar.. So gave casual avatar to him.. U gonna love him… Love u lots 😍 😍 😍

  10. Meen

    |Registered Member

    I second Myra ….dips…..this one is really a blockbuster…… Amazing….I loved it…..Arjun a personal trainer….. I’m drooling……..I’m sure he will bring light in radhika’s dark world….. Muuuuuha

  11. Crazy Girl

    Amazing… really unique concpt… gym wala… so good…. i enjyd each n evry line… radhika exprsn was cute.. n moreover to the surprise ARJUN looks so calm… dat was awsme… i luvd it deepu… waiting fr nxt part… tc…

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Hey darling thank you sooooo much much for lovely words..u liked na arjun’s sweet avatar… Thanks for ur love darling.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

  12. Fanficoholic

    |Registered Member

    Amazinggggggg one. I am waitingggg fr the gym wala payyar. So in this sam is the bold one coooooo.. I think radhika needs a break. She is being bold in tooo many ffs. I am eagerly looking fwd to the nxt episode. Is arjun a rich guy as usual or is it gn to be diff. Bt i love arjun wth the swag of his. He lookkkkkksssss coollllllll wth it. Radhika is under confident. Well but i am confident that u r gng to make her confident in the due course of ur ff.

    I am in class 11. R h elder than me? If so plz tell. I wll call u di. I love haivung didis.

    Love u 😘😘😘😘😘

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Hey dearyyy m sooooo overwhelmed by ur encouraging and sweet words… Yeah thts y turned aradhika’s characters.. No arjun is not rich here.. He is working guy as simple as us.. I m gonna make it simple story.. No billionaire n all.. Yeah.. Arjun will make her confident.. N yes m elder thn u… But pls no need to call me di.. M ur frnd right??
      Thanks yarr for sharing ur words.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

  13. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    Arjun is soooooooooooooooooo sweet……….oh god….he smiled at her!!!!!!!! Had it been me in Rads place I wud ‘ve fainted…………Arjun definitely looks very smart in T-shirt and cap na?????? Deeppppppppppppuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu tell me the truth….weren’t u blushing when u wrote about Arjun ???????????????? I don’t want her to get married to Saral…….but I have no worries…..u’ll only unite ardhika………………..deepu read my reply in wos…………I got a topic to write on……………..its smething diff……..marital rape………..

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Asthuuuuu darling yeahhh u r so right.. I was hell a lot blushing after writing thid.. Cos i too go to gym n. I hav crush on one guy there who. Looks like arjun.. Lol.. So i thought to add my imagination n make a story.. Lol.. Crazy me.. Tht door blocked scene is real
      Haha.. Thank u sooooo much for dearyyy.. N wow tht topic us really grt.. For sure u should write on tht.. I m. Eager to read abt it.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

      • Aasthu

        |Registered Member

        OMG !!!!!!!! I’m sohappy that I was able to pull this out of your system….OMG he looks like Arjun?????? can I also join you????? does he have any idea????? door block scene…..was it ur exp???? ok did u meet this guy like in the story itself?????

        hmm……when I searched on it…I found that there is no punishment for marital rape in India !!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was shocked…………even in Somalia it is punishable………but I’ve doubts regarding that……..I tot of asking Myra…..isn’t she a lawyer??????

        love u toooooooooooo……………….

      • Dipika

        |Author

        Lol asthu i hav just crush on him.. Haha.. No he doesn’t hav any idea abt my crush.. Lol.. M like teenager.. Hahaha.. N many characters r based on reality.. Haha.. N yess tht is sensual topic… N m kinda afraid of it yar.. I m so proud of u tht u taking step to write on it.. I hav lil bit abt it… N i guess u should ask sweetie she is pursuing law… She might helpful to u…. Love u lots 😍 😍

  14. Roma

    Wowwww awesome my sweeeeeetheart darling dipsssss. …gym wala pyaar…..just loved it soooooooo muchhhhhh. …don’t be nervous my lovely sis. …ur doing phenomenal job….mind blowing narration n dialogues very awesoooooome. ….loved rasam bonding here n rads bumped arjun’s car…ooopsss…but he helped her instead. ..wowwww such a gentle man…..rads intro was superbbbbb, her conservative family n her timid nature…n sam very humble bold and sweetheart. …..arjun will be rads personal trainer. ..wowwww. ..im very excited for upcoming story. …keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ lots of kissesssss. .. 😉 .

    • Dipika

      |Author

      Ohhhhh di i was eagerly waiting for ur comment n here i got it.. So happy veryyyyyyy happy.. Thank u sooooo much di.. Its going to b Awsome journey of love.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

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