MMZ- Jealous, Betrayal, Mistake, Redemption- introduction in POV

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Radhika POV

Today is my sister and my best friend wedding, I remember when we were little, I was bullied a lot, my friend would always save me from the bully, when I cry, he would always comfort me, he was my rock my everything, he knew my favorite color, my favorite ice cream, my favorite hobbies, and what I wanted in my future career, I saw Arjun, yes my best friend as my potential husband, but I was wrong. I was going to propose to him, but I didn’t know how to tell him, I was very nervous to approach him, Neil he is also my friend, I told Neil about my growing feelings for Arjun, he said imagine me as Arjun and propose to me, so I went on one knee and said, I love you so much, you are my world my everything will you marry me and Neil said yes. I ask Neil will Arjun want to marry me, he said, I’ve seen how Arjun cares for you and the way he looks at you, he’s in love with you. I thanked Neil for giving me the confidence. I thought I would propose to him next day, I wish I had propose to him right away, because after getting out of the bed, I knocked on my sisters door and open it and saw my sister Bonnie and my best friend Arjun in bed naked, my heart broke to pieces, how could my sister do this, she knew how I felt about Arjun. I ran to my room, locked the door and cried. Now they are going to get married and it is too late for me to confess my feeling for him, I’m trying to be strong but this is killing me inside. All I know is I need to leave far, far away from them, and never come back.

Arjun POV

Today I am getting married, but I’m not happy about it. Outside I am showing my smile face but inside I’m broken. The one I really wanted to marry was Radhika, I was going to propose to her but when I saw Radhika propose marriage to Neil, my heart shattered, I was jealous how could Radhika do this to me, but then it was all my fault, I should have confess my feeling to her along time ago, I ran off and bumped in to Bonnie, she saw tears in my eyes, she ask me what was wrong, I was too shatter to speak, she took me to the room, she said, I know what will make you feel better. She takes an alcohol bottle under the bed, have a drink, she said, it will make you feel better, so I drank, what a big mistake that was, when I drank I saw Radhika she was seducing me and I let her, I so desperately wanted to make love to Radhika, only I didn’t know I was making love to Bonnie, you know how alcohol clouds you mind, that’s what happen to me. When I woke up, I saw Radhika’s shatter face, I realize I was naked and made love to the wrong girl. Radhika ran off to her room, I wanted to go to her and say sorry but then I thought about how Raneil were going to get married. I told Bonnie this was a big mistake, this should not have happen, I put my clothes on and left. Now I have no choice but to marry Bonnie, my life is ruin, I am marrying the wrong woman.

Bonnie POV

I didn’t plan this, it just happen, we were both drunk, you could say destiny gave me the opportunity to break Ardhika up, he was telling me that he was going to propose to Radhika but she loves Neil and they are getting married, but that could not be right because my sister told me she was going to propose to Arjun, I know I could have clear this matter to Arjun, but I thought this is the chance, I can get Arjun to sleep with me and break Ardhika’s bond. So I seduced Arjun, he thought I was Radhika, I didn’t care, I let him make love to me. You want to know why I did this, well I was jealous of Ardhika bond, I always felt like a third wheel. Arjun was taking my sister away from me. I was craving for my sisters attention, I wanted her to focus on me rather than Arjun, I wanted that sister bond, I felt Arjun took my sister away so that is why I did this, When my brain was clear, I say my sister’s shatter face, she ran off to her room, I really felt guilty but what can I do I was jealous it took control of me. Arjun said this was a mistake this should not have happen, he put is clothes on and left. I was crying why this jealous is controlling me, its not like I love Arjun, I want attention not from Arjun but my sister, and now she’ll never talk to me.

Precap: Bonnie is pregnant with Arjun’s child, Arjun learns the truth from Neil.

Will Ardhika be together or will they be broken forever.

I know you will not like this, but I want to try something different, see how you will react, negative comment is welcome. I really want to here from you, please tell me if I should continue with this story. Love you all, bye now ta ta….

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46 Comments
  1. Jeall

    Wowowowowowowowowowowow.

    Continue!!!

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Jeall, I will update soon, stay blessed .๐Ÿ˜˜

  2. something interesting……….but u r a one usual one to make the chapter very effective ….every time u rock on….very nice yaar…hope for the next one so soon………..

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Sundari, your comment means alot, I will update soon, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  3. Nice episode I don’t know how to call you .anyway nice theme you have applied.because life has full of misunderstandings.thanks.loved it

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Chashni, you can call me Brin di, I will update soon, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  4. Hiii…..I’m Ritwika.I’m a silent reader…. 1st tym I’m commenting in a ff….yah story is different n i like it very much….plz post next part soon

    1. Brin

      Welcome Ritwika and thank you so much for your comment, it means alot, I will update soon, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  5. Jessie

    Brin…..is this the first part or prologue kinda…well…what you asked…!! Am angry now…bring it on girl….so much doubts having Jessie around…Not fair…!!! I want this new kinda story…try different..!! Yes…u should as you always does that….I love you for that yaar…where s mothers diary update….what’s tiffany upto….

    Loads of love….TC and do continue this story….we have Nesam isnt

    1. Brin

      Thank you Jessie for your support, I will try to update mother diary next, the story was an introduction, I will start it with first ch soon, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  6. Nayan

    Wow what a twist … waiting for the next update eagerly .. very interesting precap .. I’m sure after hearing truth from neil arjun going to feel guilty about not clearing his doubt with talking to radhika … bonnie is soo selfish .. I never thought she will step this low because to will radhika affection … plz update soon .. stay blessed ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Nayan, your comment means alot, I will update soon, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  7. arti viswanathan

    Brin very nice story… But don’t separate ardhika and i think neil and bonnie are one team.. So that they can separate ardhika…..superb, excellent and marvelous episode brin darling….will be waiting for next episode

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much arti, your comment means alot, I will update soon, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  8. Sulbi

    Quite intresting and different too… but cnt see ardhika seperation… eagerly waiting fr nxt update brin…

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Sulbi for your comment, it means alot, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  9. Sangee

    Hey Brin undoubtedly it’s fantastic girl… Go on…. Bonnie pregnant with Arjuns child ๐Ÿ˜ฎ shock of the year for me…. Waiting for next one… Post soon… Take care… ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. KK123(Krishna)

      Lo.lol..I loved your comment

      1. Sangee

        ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ KK123 seriously shock of the year for me ๐Ÿ™‚

    2. Brin

      Thank you Sangee for your comment, it means alot, I will update soon, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  10. KK123(Krishna)

    Brin..it … quiet diff…arjun and bonnie๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•…sims odd..but I will wait for your nbext one..thanksโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Krishna, your comment means alot stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  11. Brin this is awesome…. Oh what will Arjun do now, bonnie is pregnant and he understood that rads lov him, this bonnie is so selfish, how can she destroy her sister’s life…. This is interesting brin…. Waiting for next one. Brin post mother’s diary also….

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Jewel, your comment means alot, I will update soon, stay blessed.๐Ÿ˜˜

  12. Kavina

    Loved it

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Kavina, I will update soon, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  13. Hi brin. ….nice story. ….something different. …pls continue. ….but feeling bad for ardhika. ..

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much likii, your comment means alot stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  14. wow its cooool brin..go ahead..goood start..post soon ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much neetz, your comment mean alot, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  15. Viprida Annuru

    Hi Brin!! From your previous stories I read, I kinda had a feeling that this will be your FF!! A very different and interesting plot this is!! So happily continue this story!! Please update the next one soon and Take care Happie day!!

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Viprida, your comment means alot, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  16. Hemalattha

    awesome part dear.

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Hemalattha, I will update soon, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  17. Sathya

    Oh No…Brin what’s this shocking one yar. Arjun & Bonnie…oh my god i can’t even imagine but am sure you will keep some twist and turns to have Ardhika. Pls don’t say no dear. I can’t bear arjun with anyone else. This is hooking one yar..so intriguing to know more further. And many many sorry for late comment but i always comment for you without fail …love you ๐Ÿ™‚ and pls post mother’s diary …eager to read further.

    1. Brin

      Thank you for your support, it means alot, I will update mother’s diary soon, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  18. Meen

    Brin….what an amazing twist…..u r queen of twists & turns …..splendid…..I was shocked……eagerly waiting for d next girl….muuuha

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Meen, your comment means alot stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  19. Aasthu

    Its nyc Brin…….I wish ardhika would unite……..but it seems to be a hard task……plzzzzzz update the next part soon……

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Aasthu, by the way rectify:manmarziyan epilogue is updated, I will update soon, you stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  20. Sweetie

    Brin di,this is too aawesome yaar..Lol,Bonnie is pregnant,what will she do now?It’s not that like she loved him,right??That’s why asking..Anyways,waiting for the next one..Love you and take care.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Sweetie, no Bonnie doesn’t love Arjun, she feels like Arjun is taking her sister away from her, she is jealous over there bond, but there is more to the story, which will be revealed later, I will update soon, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  21. Gauri

    Brin this is so wonderful….just loved it to the core ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Gauri, your comment means alot, stay blessed. ๐Ÿ˜˜

  22. Awesome, very interesting story n different plot…keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug โ™กโ™กโ™ก ๐Ÿ˜‰

    1. Brin

      Thank you Roma, a big bear hug to you and stay blessed. ๐Ÿ™‚

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