MMZ : what was my fault….?? Few shots part 5

Hey guys sriya here with 5th shot……happy danteras and choti diwali to everyone enjoy your diwali holidays………..and twin (sweetie ) you’re one shot was fabulous…….. I commented there too……..okay now sit back and enjoy….
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Present……..
Radhika cries and slept there only……….the next day…………arjun comes there to see sam…..and saw radhika sleeping on floor….his heart ached a bit…..bt he didn’t give any damn to her……..and gone to sam…..
He sobbed in front of her and said ‘I am sorry Sammy….. I couldn’t save u I am a very bad brother…….plz get up kill me hate me for that but don’t be like this it kills me every moment seeing you……………and don’t worry Sammy I will take revenge whoever made u like this…. I will not leave anyone…….they have to pay…..this is arjun mehra promise to u Sammy…..plz get up for your parents for me Sammy pls….’

Radhika got up and saw him and felt bad for him………….but she was angry on him for punishing her without any fault for separating her from her fiancé and parents……so she composed herself….and left to prepare a hot coffee for her……she had it and saw the time on her watch…..so she took her bag and left for orphanage……..………arjun took a bath….and changed into a white shirt blue coat and black jeans….and left for office……..radhika goes to orphanage and distributes chocolates to children and they hug her tightly…………..she pampers them a lot….and they play many games with her…..she had a great time….with the children….all this time two pairs of eyes were watching her smilingly…..it was the great arjun mehra……..radhika turns towards him….but he hide behind the tree………she took her bag and bid bye to the kids……and left for home………arjun also left in his car……………
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Past: –
After making fun of neil…..these trio………helped him to get up……and they all did some pranks and masti on others…..and left to their homes………nesam left together…..and while radhika was leaving on her scooty….the tyre got punctured……she was walking alone in the streets….when some boys come and tries to misbehave with her……she closed her eyes………when she opened the next moment she saw them lying on the floor….blood coming out of them…..she saw arjun with burning flames in his eyes…….he beat them out of hell…..they got scared and ran away……tears come out of her eyes……she hugged him tightly……..he was shocked with sudden reaction bt he too hugged her……..he made her calm down….and dropped her to the apartment….and gently kissed her forehead with full of affection and care….and bid bye to her………

Precap : give me idea guys……
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So guys how was it…? Do let me know through comments love u loads take care……

27 comments

  1. pia

    what about neil’s whereabout…. it’ll be nice because we got to know about aradhika and Sam.. but not about neil

  2. Jessie

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    So…Arjun loves Radz a lot….!!! Nice Sriya…am already crazy on breakup song…am chanting it like mantra….love ur dp yaar…. ” clg ke sahelion se catch up kar1 liya..jinko mil na paye unko watsapp kar liya…” wah…am like singing it again..
    Precap….tell abt Neil…hmmm..Ardhika in clg time….and wat Radz family thinks or decides abt her now..hope this may help u…..Sriya dear…..Happy Diwali….TC n loads of love….

    • S.v

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      Jessie baby break up song god yahan bee ?? lol but those words are my fav too thanks to u for making me go crazy with that song. he he he .

    • Sriya

      |Author

      maybe jazz di lol me too crazy on breakup song hi fi our thoughts match……so i will call u twinnie………yup i will think upon your suggestions…..it will help a lot………happy diwali u too…….will tc…loads of love………

  3. S.v

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    Sroya super awesome cutely penned the past and present and dp wwoooo rocking ardhika andfor the future say about present neil and a small pinch of what is the reason of sam today. Lovely and eagerly waiting for ur update. continue rocking.

    • Sriya

      |Author

      thanks s.v di……yup ardhika looking damn cute…..okay will think upon your suggestions……….will try to post asap……sure i will keep rocking…..lol…….tc…..

  4. Rossy

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    Superb sriya…m too curious about Neil…why this Arjun did this if he liked her in past…but I don’t think rads loved him in past..only friendship…otherwise why she was going to marry someone else…and remembering her fiancée

    • Sriya

      |Author

      have patience rose……..u will get to know in upcoming episodes……maybe not…..i can’t reveal u then suspense will be not there na….and i like to keep so much of suspense and mystery in my writings…….anyways thanks a ton di…….love u loads….tc……and guess about fiance also maybe u will get to know who is that guy ‘wink’ …….a small hint…….bye di…..

  5. arti viswanathan

    Sriya I think u should make Sam alright and unite ardhika together and u should reveal who did it to Sam like she is in coma…. And u should bring lot of twists in it dear.

    • Sriya

      |Author

      maybe arti…..but then there will be no fun……..but ya i will make them unite soon as it is few shots only then i will continue with my ff………will bring lots and lots twists but heart attack aayaga toh meri responsibility nahi hai…..’wink’ love u loads….tc….

  6. Roma

    Awesome episode, need to know neil’s whereabout. …story getting more and more interesting. …keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ 😉

  7. Sweetie

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    Twin,really sorry for this late reply,you know that I’m stuck up.. 🙁 And this chapter is awesome,got to see Ardhika in intense and also cute moments.. 🙂 And thank you so much again for loving the OS sweetheart.. 🙂 Love you loads and take care.. 😀

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