mmz…DARK:an action flick…chapter 1

Mmz…DARK…chapter 1

Hiiii all….thanks for the support u gave….thanks a ton that u people liked this plot and nationalism…this is an intro chapter of characters…itz a lengthy one…so tell me how u all liked their entry…waiting for ur replies…? plz if u get bored let me know….coz as it is first chappy u will get many political moments till all characters meet each other…
Susi ur demand fulfilled now…let me know how u feel about it…?

P.s. National bureau(NB) and secret operational service(SOS) are two bodies…NB is govt organization where SOS is Pvt secret agency…so not to confuse between them…
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[ASSAULT MADE NEW ARRIVALS ]

Year 2016,present days…

It has been passed six years after Adarsh Raizad incident…now a days public already forgot about him…but whenever his name came in between medias, people delivered some hatred comments towards him…this is the problem of our people,they never try to go in depth of the matters rather dance on the tune of media…another big problem is people never show such enthusiasm to remember one’s good deed like they interested in someone’s wrong doing and remember that for sure to taunt in future…but some peoples are still there to find out the real truth…one of them is the recently elected defense minster (DM)…

Yes…in last year election his party won majority of seats despite it’s newly formed …he is the president of the party n wanted to be hold Indian security n defense…he is a former member of national bureau and knew Adarsh very well…present PM is very good friend of him n respect his ideology…they are discussing about the upcoming address session to public at Jantar Mantar ground as they promised before elections and they are going to listen what India’s peoples need and do according to them….the present Indian government promised people to maintain a peaceful relations with neighbour countries and they are going to amend each portfolios n tried to make new healthy negotiations…

Eagle eye (E2) empire:

At a hidden underground abode, black king heard the news and Instruct his subordinates something so they dispersed soon…he mumble himself as a war committing organization I won’t let India to get hold of power in this era…E2 played his card very wisely which will cause a rift momentum in India…

At Jantar Mantar ground,new Delhi

Security forces are supervising the area and maintain a tight security as PM is coming to the ground with other members…peoples were given slogans with exalts…reporters are all set up much before the time…PM reaches on time and move towards the stage surrounded by his guards…camera light flashes randomly on him and questions come like a bunch of blitz…when everyone is busy with PM n interviewing him, DM notice a beautiful girl around 25 with her camera person taking clips of public…she seems least bothered about PM and his interview…that natural tendency make defense minister(DM) to call her…she come with her assistant…

DM: This is the first time I see any reporter seems least interested towards political news…what’s that??

Girl: Nothing like that sir,I just wanted to know what public want from the new system…so that I can interview PM from people’s perspective only…what they want to ask PM…not for trp matter…

DM feeling happy for her bold ,realistic confident answer…

DM: What’s ur name??? Where do u work??

Girl: I am samaira Khanna working for News Day n Night (NDN)…and this is teji xian my assistant ( she pointed towards a guy)…

DM said her to take interview after the session…she thanked and tell teji to set up camera for capturing the address vedio…ten selected people stand to welcome PM by giving Flowers bookies and garlands …PM accept that happily…samaira noticed one person is looking suspicious…she again bend down to confirm that on camera n tell teji to have a close look on that person…As PM start his address people get engage listening him…something is off when samaira notice that person sign something to another one stand near the stage n go away…she is trying to follow him and send teji to tell DM to stay alert…but too late…a sudden burst THUD…everything smashed…people are starting running here and there…security forces checking out what happened after all their arrangement…they find DM fainted with bruises but PM is taking his last breath…they are taken to the hospital immediately but PM declared dead…

After the news come out that PM dead…E2 release a video saying never challenge their black organization…but showing the evidence that neighbour country instigate them to do that…that is the second trump card used by E2 as it wanted to create conflicts between countries…

10 days passed…DM recovered…all channels showing PM dead n an assault happened n all …but not a single channel showing the slightest reason behind it except NDN… NDN media specifically samaira questions on Indian security,what the intelligence system is doing, when PM is not secured then think about a general people conditions…that make DM to think hard…he calls up national bureau head for discussion…but the news NB director give DM it make him shocked,,as the director explained that he already told PM’s secretary about upcoming blunder coz they got that news at last moment…they told to cancel the address meeting for sometime…now DM get the clear vision that still there is hole in system and rats are there…he decided something and ask NB head about their most efficient n eligible agent and want to know about who gave them the information about assault…the director tell undoubtedly it’s Arjun Mehera but he’s on a mission…DM tell him to call him back asap…

An unknown island,somewhere in Indian ocean

Four boats filled with goons pointing their guns sharply into the area of water they’re circling around…it looks like they desperately try to find someone in between…but to their surprise that person come out from water from one side wearing a skyscraper with two guns in his two hands…he shot four of the boat drivers at once n again go inside water…after few moments of hide n seek he killed almost every goons by showing his skydiving stunts except one…he suddenly jumped onto the boat where that one left out goon stand n took him to the island with him…as they reach he gives a solid smack the goon’s face to infiltrate some information…

Goon with a lil bit of fear now: Who u r?? How u know this place??

Person: Wrong question??u should ask Why I m here,right?? Anyway know me before ur last breath…i m Arjun…now don’t waste my time n give my answer…

Goon: Arjun,that playboy…how did u get here?? I won’t let u know anything…

Arjun laughed cunningly: Ur wife,ur girlfriend or ur daughter…whom u want to live with dignity n whom u want to be disgraced…as u say m playboy…u must know what m capable of…

That goon angrily shouted but stop abruptly as he feels Arjun placed his gun on his forehead putting his finger on trigger…Arjun threats him now or never…he gives the information fearfully…Arjun left him n come toward his boat…that man pointed gun toward Arjun but before he can press his trigger the whole island blasts as it was a set up of Arjun n he pressed the remote…as Arjun came out on his boat look at the sky and shouted this one is for the blunder you created six year ago… this is just beginning , I destroyed one part of E2 empire…he informed his bureau chief about his mission success by satellite phone n get a notice to go back asap…

Two days passed…no decision can be made on who will become PM as there is a threat that whoever become PM will face the death…so nobody interested…DM as the president of the party is worried much as he get constant bickering from opposition parties…he decided something n talked with someone…he notify regarding need of a diplomat…many candidates goes but nobody can give a satisfactory answer as it is personally headed by DM…the last candidate of the day come…without asking intro he asked the question regarding happening of politics…immediately the candidate answered in my view ” there is nothing happened in politics regard as coincident,everything was pre planned, be it good or bad”…DM is so much impressed with his one liner answer he give him appointment letter directly …before he make his exit he introduced himself as Ankush Mishra son of former supreme court judge Dillip Mishra…Ankush thought to himself now I am going to find the secret behind misdeed happened six years ago…

At NDN media office

Teji come running to samaira and tell her ur favourite hero made upside down of total Rajasthan n now the whole country…

Teji: each n every media want an interview from him…but u know..

Sam: I know he’s not a media person and none media seen him till now…he is mysterious…

Teji: U r right…something is in Neil Malahotra…btw who doesn’t want to be famous…what if he is an old man n seems ugly and that’s why he doesn’t show his face!!!

Sam: Stop ur stupidity… I like him coz he does his work diligently yet not interested to be famous…m sure he’s not an older person…btw what he did this time….

Teji takes samaira to clips coverage room to show her what Neil did…they saw one of SI of Rajasthan police explained about how their boss caught the culprits of illegal weapons trafficking at border area…

Explanation given by SI
Five to six people were talking about the deal at desert area…two leaders exchange their goods and about to go when they felt someone’s pulling them into sand…”what’s the hell happening here” they yell…they were shocked when they saw a person come out from sand like he came by axing earth…that person is Neil, said ur game is over now and u r arrested for illegal trafficking of weapons…they pulled out their trigger to shoot…but got hard boxing kicks from neil…six person were not a big deal for him…he seized their vehicle with weapons…but goons started laughing n said you don’t have any evidence that we did that weapon trafficking and we have our connection with politicians…Neil said no higher authority can save u from me n about evidence he showed them clips of their talking…n dragged them…now they forwarded to court…

Samaira seems happy and says one day definitely I will able to take his personal interview…

At Rajasthan Police headquarters

DG of police hand over a letter to Neil…he opens n read that …its a transfer order…he is going to join Delhi police as SP…he seems very happy n thank his boss…his boss says finally ur dream to work for central government come true…for the first time he smiles…he thought to himself now nobody can stop me from meet u, I’ll reopen the false accusations case which happened six year ago n do justice…

Ankush come home happily and start calling for angel nonstop…Dilip come out, put a sweet in his mouth n say stop ur yell,else my ear will bleed…Ankush tell he got the job…Dilip say I know that by seeing ur happiness…Ankush ask about his angel…Dilip reply don’t ask me, u completely make her a brat with ur extra love n care and now she doesn’t inform me where she goes n what she does…now it become my habit to listen complaints about her everyday…n now it is like if I’ll not get any complaints about her I’ll faint due to anxiety…Ankush laughed aloud at his father’s statement…he says papa even u no less care about her…u love her more than me n I am happy about that…we taught her many things so no need to worry…we will wait for her…they continue their talkings…

At a trashed building,lil bit away from city some goons try to pull out a girl from their car…they kidnapped her…they try to force on her… Radhika is standing on the 2nd floor of building witness all this…she smirks angrily n think why the hell girls are so weak…it’s end of her patience when she see goons try to force on the girl…she jump in front of them n tell let the girl be free…goons start laughing n pass slangs to her…she punches hard on his face who comments on her…others start fighting with her,she gives each n everyone her good kicks to make all of them fall on the ground…she saw one of them is going to escape…she flips over the car from one side to another side with a jump just before he open the car door…she just warns him don’t ever dare to badeye a girl n give a hard kick on his stomach….

She says the girl to call police n turn around to go…that girl stopped her n thank her n say u will be rewarded for this favour,u don’t know who I am…she replies Radhika Mishra never wants anybody’s favour n reward and m not interested to know u…do one thing, just go straight n learn the defend methods n yes don’t show ur face again to me…radhika goes away…the girl mumble what a jerk…

But radhika doesn’t notice two persons see her in action…it looks like they are scouting her…satisfied smile spread across their face…
1st man: What do u think about her?? Will be she useful to us???

2nd man: I am very much sure about it…i followed her since two months…nobody can compete with her…

1st man: So we should inform our boss immediately…

Radhika on her way to back home senses somebody following her…she turns back to see nobody…near her house at entrance gate she get a letter for her n read it…her lips curls in a satisfactory mode…Ankush comes n lift her up…he says angel I got my wanted job…radhika congratulate him n hug him and say even bhai I got a job …don’t know how it will be..she shows Ankush the letter got from gate…Ankush tell her I know u can do it coz nothing is impossible for my angel…they go inside the home….

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Now when everybody come into picture having their own different motive…but it seems like they all have one motive…to make justice…we will see what future store for them n how they will mingle with each other…

Precap: Unexpected funny clash between fire n ice…new young PM elected…occasion of 26 January…sniper ready to shoot

Credit to: rosie

70 comments

  1. Rosie darling u r such a amazing really really loved it from core 🙂 wowwwwwwwwwww it’s fabulous superbbbbbbbbbbb 🙂 🙂 🙂 I was all smiling when I read ur ff it’s like wowwwwwwwwwww omg no wOrds to describe my happiness 🙂 🙂 🙂 totally awesome 🙂 🙂 🙂 really can’t wait for next ff 🙂 it’s totally diffi n awesome 🙂 🙂 😀 😀 love u 🙂

    • Thanks suga for so much appreciation…i know people generally don’t interested politics,action…but thanks to you ?

  2. Hope m the first one…just came here to let u know I wrote it hurriedly…some sentences missed out…n yes for understanding the whole thing u should have read its characterization n prologue…thanks

  3. Rosie I know its vry tough to write FF based on politics bt u did wonderful job dr…….I luv it yarrr pls continue…..tc

    • Thanks a ton gayathri…yes politics is completely different subjects…i just see around what is happening now a days…so out of frustration wrote this ?

  4. Gauri

    Rosie this was mindblowing…seriously even if I try my brain wont work only….love you for keeping the request well I am waiting for all ur ff…stay blessed…stay happy 🙂 loads of love

    • Thanks a ton abha..i always give credit for writing this to u..only because of ur inspiration n support I wrote it at first place…n what’s that…m on moon now..if I fall down be ready there to catch me ..i know if u write then it will b much more better than this…??

  5. Wow Rosie this story is so good. I like that Radhika is a strong character, Well done. Waiting for the next update. 🙂

  6. Thaku u darling for d update…I too agree with gayathri…this is very tuff to write..but u did it … Hats off to u….I really loved ur efforts …fantastic episode….all characters very different…ankush radhu bond superb…and radhu fight with goons …I like her brave character… I love this full action damaka….precap quit interesting…waiting for ur further episode….once again thank u…big tight hug for u…love u ..tc..muaaahhhh…

    • Waiting for u dear Susi…thanks for liking it n understanding the toughness but u know I just see daily news and get ideas about recent activities n wrote down…seriously politics n terrorism make worst to the world…btw what r u doing?????

      • Ooh…gud luck dear…next one is new dimension…i need to finish that as soon as possible…so that I can concentrate only this one…tc?☺

  7. sundari

    wow what a nice story…………you are just awesome pa.when will be the next update pa…..

    • Thanks a lot sundari…see u after many days…r u k?? v to write new dimension also…about this I have to think about situation as politics n security involved here…need some time…just check with tu…but most probably weekend…can’t sure?

  8. M

    Rosie…….its tough for me…..as it s not my zone at all……i admire u for writting these kind of things….how could u even imagine these…..lol….

    • Yipeee thanks ritu sis a lot…this is easy for me as i always up to date with world news n happening…but one thing don’t u like this?…m practicing how to write love n romance now ?? I’ll take some tips from u my romantic writer ??

  9. Gianna

    Oh Rosie u are amazing such an awesome chapter there is no part in this that I didn’t like wow wow wow. Loved the introductions. I am a big action flick shipper am so eagerly waiting for the next one. Post soon love u tc

    • Thanks a lot Gianna…it means a lot…have u read its prologue n character sketch???m action maniac also….

      When will u update ur ff?

      • Gianna

        Yea I read all of the them at once u write really well. And I have submitted the next chapter already waiting for tu to upload it

  10. aastha

    I loved it………….everyone are so brave and eager to do justice………I loved every1 simply every1………..I always wanted the youth who are selfless and wanted to justice to the country just like the characters of ur story……….I admire every1 of them……….I dont know hw to explain but ur story is the clear cut dream of my India………where every1 works FOR the people……………..one doubt : is Radhika’s job a good one ???? I mean no injustice thing ??

    • Waiting for u aasthu dear…u don’t know how much u r encouraging…ohk I’ll tell u one secret…all are linked with Adarsh…it will reveal next chapter…about radhika job…gud but challenging…thanks a lot ??

      • aastha

        happy that you replied……actually I had gone to my friend’s house….had a small get together…..that’s y I commented late…….b4 going there I only got time to read gauri di’s and deepu di’s epi………..and as soon as I reached home I read urs without even bothering to change my dress………..thanks for the secret……and I’m glad that Rads job is a good one…….one doubt : will our hero n heroins meet each other ??? is there an element of love in this ????? …………love u a lot…..TC…..when r u gonna update the other ff ???? I’ll post mine soon……I need to think abt ardhikas fi8’s……..still looking out for it………soo can you help me by sharing ur fi8’s u had with your siblings we you were young ???????

      • Aasthu…from character sketch u knew Arjun is a playboy..but that is a mask..everybody will fall in love but love is a secondary element..two of them fall early n two later…about fighting with my lil bro..a big no…he is too obedient n displined…kinda boring sometime…tc?

      • aastha

        how old is ur lil brother di ??????? oh I cant imagine a house without fi8 btwn siblings…………when I think of my fi8’s with my sis ow I feel like laughing at my silliness………………

      • He is an engineer now…but he is like that only from childhood…my parents told him at his childhood not to back answers to me coz m elder…

        About ff… one person from each pair will fall first…?

      • aastha

        ……oh come on di…..plzz tell who will fall first ???? heroes or heroins ???? are they going to work together ??? when’ll you post new dimensions ????

      • Aasthu dear I will let u know in next chapter who will fall first….promise…i am going to submit new dimension….don’t forget to read…stay blessed…tc??

  11. ankshi

    hey epi was superb
    really writing anything on politics is difficult but you rocked it

  12. Rosie sorry dear to late comment got stuck in some work.. u nailed it yar..back to back actions…superb…all character r way different n just waiting to meet them each..u hv really very different plot.. loved it..

      • Hollywood actions ?? don’t know why but I don’t like many of it…may b coz of too much violence without a solid reason…i raed ur previous ff chapter…this is me song from camp rock na…u liked that…i liked. PPP…

  13. Shree

    Wowowow!! Mamma!! This one is like totally different!! Enjoying it!! Loved every part… All have their motives…. Loved Ankush and Radhika part… So much love… Awwwiiiieeee.. Post soon..

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • Ayeee my daughter…u came…u read that enough…k no more further disturbance….gud luck…do well…see u after ur internal..??

  14. feby

    diiiiiiiiiiiii….iam sooo sry for the delay..but i informed u to u tat i read strday itself…wait…i know in tis tat every1 r related to adarsh and adarsh will guide the gang…..its becoming familiar…once whn i was in estate such an operation was made….oh god…we were all under threat time time…..well…i shld not say publicly…but secret defence agencies and many military aunties like radhika r thr…i was in a defense estate where guns were produced…and soo…to protect these things lot of forces were there….u know…evrythng seems soooo calm and jovial frm outside but the real tensions r thr…no one frm outside know it….i knew it coz most of the threats was faced by my fathr coz he was incharge of the store which had armed items…but we knew nothing will happn…coz our indians r also not fools….we had tight security forces….lol.. i loved being thr…sooo much thrill we had…. everythng were perfect….and di…tats the only reason y i likes tis ff a lot…..love u loads…iam understanding a lot from tis epi itself..well…iam awaiting for an action thriller too….hahaha…love u loads…

  15. Thanks feby baby a ton…waiting for ur comment dear…what u told About operations this is not a story like that…n Adarsh died already…u will see what will happen in future…i already thought about plot…but need to expand according to chapter….basic summary is ready in my mind but I can’t tell….tc?? thanks for sharing such informations

  16. Bhabya

    bahut badhiya au storyline awesome… Arjun r part ek dum action pack tilha… Srry 4 late commenet

    • Not to be sorry bhabya…but true mu tamaku khojuthili…mu bhabili politics dara re paleila bodhe..anyway thanks a lot for coming ?

  17. Roma

    Omg Rosieeeee. ..I’m totally out of words. ..it’s totally looks to me like I’m watching block buster action movie with lots of special effects. ..the way you narrated this chapter I’m spellbound n overwhelmed. ..the DM n PM intro n e2 plans, then Sam’s entry as a very sensible n brave repoter…the blast n death of PM….ankush’s entry as new appointed PM…..arjun’s action filled entry from water, his tough mission….wow….then neil’s rough entry from sand n his transfer order to delhi…sam’s attraction towards neil is very interesting. …n last but not the our rads our macho girl …
    Wowwww she knocked all the goons out….whoa….but what job she got?…ankush n dilip convo was awesome….rads so lucky to loving family. ….it’s really superbbbb n dynamite story….I’m totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your stories. …rosieee my dear, I can’t even wait for next episode. ..all wanted to get justice for adarsh case…which happened 6 years back…n I’m really very excited for upcoming chapters to know how ardhika n nesam along with ankush solve this political mystery. …n also how the strings of their hearts ties together….wowwww awesome plot n outstanding narration….very unique n blasting story. ..keep it up honeyyy. .. anxiously waitingggggg for the next chapter. ..love you soooooooo muchhhhhh, muaaaaahhhhhh 😉 😉 😉

    • Thanks Roma….me having a Colgate smile now….so much praises for me though m confused if I deserve or not…n Ankush as PM…..no no…he is a diplomat…action…yo yo…block buster lol….m blushing….???? thanks for encouraging me??

  18. Vini

    Rosie seriously this is awesome , how could you think such a plot ?? I’m just amazed with your plot awesome one … Eagerly waiting for next one

    • Thanks a ton vini…did u read its character sketch n prologue???read that…m just pissed off with the whole India n world politics plus terrorism…so it came out as a result…thanks for liking the plot..??

      • vini

        yes i read everything .. am awe struck 🙂 🙂 .. you know i am even reading your other FF New Dimensions 🙂 🙂 i love this more than that 😛 😛 .. post soon 🙂

      • Thanxx dear…reader’s appreciation make writer stronger…so all credit goes to my readers…n a biggggg thanks for liking this plot….??

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