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Episode 40

Hii everyone…!! Now, before we start I want to inform you about something…!! The NEW AUTHOR AWARDS has made videos for all the first prize winners which means that I have three videos posted under my name on YouTube…!! I would love it if you all could just see those videos and share your views about the stories…!! All you need to do is just type ‘New Author Awards’ in the search box of YouTube and you will get all the videos in front of you…!! The three videos under my name are

1) FAN FICTION : Tujhh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai

2) TEEN FICTION : MITWAA – Love Will Find A Way

3) MYSTERY/THRILLER : THE RETURN – A Story of Unending Love

Also about the another competition I was talking about…!! Well, the voting will start from 1st of May…!! We still have some time for that…!! I’ll give you the link and will be back to my begging mode for your votes from 1st May… ??

Now, let’s begin with the next episode…!! I hope you all will like it…!!

Recap: Sanskaar jealous and Swara’s bold avatar…

******** Episode 41 ********

Swara walks out of the room and walks straight to the room where other ladies are discussing about the rituals and the preparations that are needed to be done…!!

Grandma: Tomorrow, we have the haldi ceremony in the morning and after that the Mehrotras have decided to go to their centuries old family temple for praying to their ancestral God…!!

Uttara: So, do we all need to go there…?!!

Annapurna: No, only the married couples along with the bride and the groom…!!

Ragini: That means only the five of us will be staying here…!!

Grandma: Yes…!! But I don’t want any funny business around my house…!! And maybe Tarun will also be coming here as he will be the only person left in that house…!!

Swara: (to herself) Great…!! (sarcastically) Why is everything going so much in my favor…?!! First the challenge and now this Tarun…!!

Sujata: Don’t expect them not to do anything, that too when Sanskaar is here…!! Talking about him, where is Sanskaar…?!!

Swara: He is in the room upstairs…!!

Sujata: What is he doing upstairs when he was supposed to be attending to the guests down here…?!!

Swara: That…

Sujata: (angrily) No Swara…!! I don’t want to listen anything…!! No need to defend him…!! I’m so fed up with this boy…!! Half of the time, he spends strolling here and there, and half with those lifeless things…!!

Annapurna: Sujata, don’t call them lifeless…!! You know how much he loves his paintings…!!

Swara looks at them, quite shocked knowing the fact that everyone in his family is not supporting his passion for painting even though he is so good at it…!!

Sujata: I don’t understand this boy…!! See, now even he has fallen down to the second position…!! Never in his life he saw anything less than the best…!! But now…

Grandma: But Sujata, life is full of ups and downs…!!

Sujata: But these things don’t work out in today’s world Maa…!! Seeing downs only means failures and I don’t know what’s the reason for his failures…!! I seriously don’t know what to do with this boy…!! Swara…

Swara is in a state of shock listening everything Sanskaar is going through in lieu of helping her…

Sujata: Swara…!!

Ragini hits her with her elbow which breaks Swara’s inner monologue and she looks at Ragini who signals towards Sujata…

Swara: Yes…!! Yes Aunty…!!

Sujata: Could you please go and call him…?!! And if possible, please knock some sense in that boy…!!

Swara just nods her head and runs out of the room to prevent everyone from seeing the tears threatening to make their way out anytime sooner or later…!! Wiping off the tears rolling down her cheeks, she makes her way straight to Sanskaar…!!


Sanskaar is about to leave the room and as soon as he opens the door he comes face to face with Swara, all flustered up and staring at him senselessly without saying a single word…!! Even though Sanskaar is a bit confused looking at her, he gives her a naughty smile…

Sanskaar: Wow…!! Looks like my BNG took the challenge seriously…!! What is going on in that little head of yours…?!!

He waits expecting a sarcastic reply or some freshly invented weird facial expressions from her but as a single tear drop shines from the corner of her eyes and rolls down her cheeks, Sanskaar pulls her inside the room closing the door behind…!! He looks at her with worry etched all across his face and cups her cheeks…

Sanskaar: Swara…!! What happened…?!!

Swara looks at him with an unwavering gaze and as her sobs start getting audible, Sanskaar grows more and more anxious…

Sanskaar: Did anyone say something…?!! Something happened…?!! You are killing me…!! Please answer me Swara…!!

Swara: (slowly) I’m sorry…!!

Sanskaar: What…?!!

Swara looks at him from behind the translucent veil of her tears and the next moment she engulfs him in her arms wailing her heart out…

Swara: I’m sorry…!! It’s all my fault…!! If I wouldn’t have been there…

Sanskaar gets taken aback seeing her condition…!! He immediately tighten his arm around the lower of her back…

Sanskaar: Shh…!! Shh, it’s okay…!! Relax…!! Tell me what happened…!!

Swara: It’s all my fault…!! If I wouldn’t have been there, this wouldn’t have happened to you…!!

Sanskaar breaks the hug and holds her shoulders, shaking her out of her trance…

Sanskaar: What happened Swara…?!! Who said all those rubbish to you…?!!

Swara: It’s all wrong Sanskaar…!! I wronged you…!! All you ever did was for me but I… I…

Sanskaar: You don’t need to do anything Swara…!! You are in my life, that’s all I need…!!

Swara: No…!! No, Sanskaar…!! I ruined your life, your relationship with your parents, everything…!! I’m the reason behind your failure…!! You shouldn’t have fallen in love with me…!!

Sanskaar: Excuse me…!! Who are you to decide that…?!! I love you and don’t you even dare to forget that…!!

Swara: Don’t love me so much that I won’t be even able to return it to you…!!

Sanskaar: I don’t love you expecting something…!! I just… love you…!!

Swara: Why…?!! Why do you love me so much that you don’t pay any attention to what others might be feeling…?!!

Sanskaar: Alright…!! Wait…!! First of all, sit down and tell me what happened…!!

He makes her sit on the chair and sits on his knees in front of her holding her hands tightly…

Sanskaar: Now, tell me what happened…!!

Swara wipes off her tears with the back of her hands and tells him everything from the beginning till the end…

Sanskaar smiles wiping the few tear drops still remaining on her cheeks and smiles…

Sanskaar: Bas itni si baat…!! (Just this much) And you are that worried…!!

Swara: But your mother…!!

Sanskaar: She’s angry because she loves me and often… I know, I don’t listen to her also…!! But Swara…!! Just the way I can’t control my breath, I can’t stop living, much the same way I can’t stop loving you…!! The way I feel for you is something I have never felt for anybody…!! Falling in love with you wasn’t my choice but I couldn’t help but fall for you deeper and deeper with each passing moment and by the end I realized that I have no other option but to spend my entire life with you…!!

Swara looks at him blinking away her tears and smiles…

Swara: You want to spend your entire life with ‘Me’…?!!

Sanskaar: Do you find any other girl in this room…?!!

Swara shake her head in a ‘No’…

Sanskaar: Then…?!! When you are my girlfriend then with whom I’ll spend my entire life…?!! (he thinks about something before speaking again) Okay…!! I was planning to do this after this marriage but it looks like I won’t find a time as good as it is now…!!

Swara: What are you talking about…?!!

Sanskaar: Just wait here…!!

Saying this he gets up and walks towards the closet, opens it and takes a small box out of it…!! He smiles and puts it on her lap…!! A small velvet green colored box with a delicate red rose made of the same cloth material resting on the top of it…!! Swara traces the edge of the petals of the rose with her fingers slowly and smiles…!!

Swara: What is this…?!!

Sanskaar: Well, it’s in your hands…!! Why don’t you open it…?!!

Swara gives him a final look before unlocking the box and as she opens it her eyes shine seeing a beautiful piece of art lying inside…!! A wonderfully carved star shaped pendant looking as beautiful as ever rests in there and the shimmering pearl in the center of star gives it an entire different look…!!

Swara: Sanskaar…!! This…!! I… I can’t take this…!! It’s too expensive…!!

Sanskaar: Oh hello…!! Are you refusing the gift I bought for you from my first salary…?!!

Swara: Your first salary…?!! But as far as I remember you don’t have any job…!!

Sanskaar: (shrugs his shoulder) Who said that we need a job for earning money…?!!

Swara: Excuse me…!! Then…?!! Oh God, Sanskaar…!! Have you started conning people…?!! Am I the girlfriend of a thug…?!!

Sanskaar: Tch…!! I don’t believe you girls…!! There is something known as talent…!!

Swara: Talent…?!!

Sanskaar: I did put a few of my paintings in an exhibition…!!

Swara: So, you mean to say that people bought your paintings…?!!

Sanskaar looks at her with gleaming eyes and nods his head…!! Swara smiles widely and throws her arms around him in excitement…

Swara: My God, Sanskaar…!! Congratulations…!! I’m so happy for you…!!

Sanskaar: (smiles and hugs her back) So, will you accept my gift now…?!!

Swara: (breaks the hug) But still there was no need for this…!!

Sanskaar takes the pendant out of the box and unclamps it…

Sanskaar: Swara, this is just not a pendant…!!

Swara: Then…?!!

Sanskaar: (leads towards her making her wear the pendant) It’s my promise…!! You are my precious pearl and whatever may come in the life ahead I will always shine for you and protect you just like the star of this pendant…!!

He clamps the chain and kisses her temple resting the pendant slowly against her skin…

Sanskaar: Now, this way, in the form of this pendant, we both will always lie together right next to your heart…!!

Swara smiles looking at the pendant and kisses it…

Sanskaar: (back to his original mode) But this definitely doesn’t mean that you won that challenge…!! I still think that you are not that hot…!!

Swara: Excuse me…!! I think you just proposed to me…!!

Sanskaar: I didn’t propose…!! I promised…!! There’s a difference and I’m still not going to kiss you…!!

Swara: Huhh…!! Looks like our old Sanskaar is back…!!

Sanskaar: Yup…!! Now, if you could excuse me, I need to go before my mother burns down the whole house with her anger…!!

Swara: Alright…!! Alright…!! I’m going…!!

She gets up to leave but Sanskaar calls her back…

Sanskaar: Swara…!!

Swara: Hmm…!!

Sanskaar: It’s 2:30 p.m. right now…!!

Swara: So…?!!

Sanskaar: You have 22 hours left for the challenge…!!

Swara: Yeah…!! Yeah…!! I know…!!

Sticking out her tongue to him, she walks out of the room…


Same night… In the girls’ room…!! Swara, Ragini and Laksh are having a secret meeting as Uttara is not there…

Laksh: Swara, you have 14 hours left…!!

Ragini: Stop it Laksh…!!

Laksh: What…?!! I’m just saying that it’s 10:30 pm already…!!

Swara: I know that…!! You don’t need to remind me again and again…!!

Ragini: But what are you going to do…?!!

Swara: Laksh…!! Can you arrange a water tank for me…?!!

Laksh: Water tank…?!! What for…?!! Are you planning to kill my brother or what…?!!

Swara: God, Laksh…!! Both these brothers are so dramatic…!! Mr. Laksh Maheshwari, in case if you have forgotten then let me remind you that your brother is my one and only boyfriend…!! So, I have no such intentions of killing him…!!

Laksh: Then why that water tank…?!!

Swara: Have you heard of that Hindi saying “Bin baadal barsaat” (Rain without clouds)…!! Something like that is going to happen to your brother also…!! So, tell me, can you do it or not…?!!

Laksh: I think I can do that at least…!!

Swara: Good…!! So, when is everyone leaving after the haldi ceremony…?!!

Ragini: Around 11:00 am to 11:30 am…!!

Swara: Ragini, can you take care of Yash for sometime after that…!!

Ragini: Yup…!! No problem with that…!! But one thing…

Swara: What…?!!

Ragini: He said he won’t touch you or kiss you, right…?!!

Swara: Hmm…!!

Ragini: Then don’t let him touch you…!!

Swara: What do you mean…?!!

Ragini: I know whatever you are planning, he is definitely going to lose but to make sure of it… don’t let him touch you till the end…!!

Laksh: Oh hello…!! Are you both conspiring against my brother…?!!

Ragini: If you have that much problem then why don’t you go to your brother…!!

Laksh: (keeping finger on his lips) Okay, sorry…!! I’m not saying anything…!!

Swara: It’s okay Ragini…!! I got what you are trying to say…!! And Laksh…!! You have to help me out in reaching the balcony of the boys’ room after everyone leaves…!! But we have to make sure that Sanskaar doesn’t see me…!!

Laksh: So, do I need to stay in the balcony only…!!

Ragini: Duffer…!! You need to go to the terrace otherwise the rain won’t look natural…!!

Swara: You got me babes…!! Get ready guys…!! It’s show time…!!


Next day, everyone in the house leaves after the ceremony for the ancestral temple leaving all the young ones behind…!! Ragini takes care of Yash whereas Laksh helps Swara in getting to the balcony once Sanskaar goes to the washroom to freshen up after playing with turmeric as a ritual…!!


Sanskaar comes out of the washroom wearing a white shirt and white trousers and sits on the bed picking up a glass of water from the side table…!!

As soon as he takes the first sip, the splattering of the rain against the floor catches his attention…

Sanskaar: What the…?!! Rain…?!! But there were no clouds until in went to the washroom…!!

He keeps on talking to himself when he hears someone’s voice, singing a song…

Zara Zara Bahekata Hai, Mahekata Hai
Aaj Toh Meraa Tan Badan, Mai Pyaasee Hu
Mujhe Bhar Le Apanee Baaho Me

Getting a little bit confused, he gets up from the bed and walks towards the balcony…!! Just as he takes another sip, his eyes fall on Swara standing in the balcony and the next moment all the water comes flying out of his mouth…!!

Swara wearing a yellow and white moving colored saree along with yellow off-shoulder blouse tied up at the back is dancing in the rain with water dripping off of the strands of her hair she left open on purpose as Sanskaar likes it that way…

Zara Zara Bahekata Hai, Mahekata Hai
Aaj Toh Meraa Tan Badan, Mai Pyaasee Hu
Mujhe Bhar Le Apanee Baaho Me
Hai Meree Kasam Tujhko Sanam, Dur Kahee Naa Ja
Yeh Duree Kehatee Hai Paas Mere Aaja Re

(As Swara shows her moves Sanskaar starts losing himself and starts making his way towards her)

Yu Hee Baras Baras Kaalee Ghata Barse
Ham Yaar Bhig Jaaye, Iss Chaahat Kee Baarish Me
Meree Khulee Khulee Lato Ko Suljhaaye
Too Apanee Ungaliyo Se, Mai Toh Hu Isee Khwaahish Me
Sardee Kee Raato Me, Ham Soye Rahe Ek Chaadar Me
Ham Dono Tanha Ho, Naa Koyee Bhee Rahe Iss Ghar Me

(Sanskaar reaches just a few inches away from her…!! Swara turns towards him and smiles and those little water drops on her lips are enough to make Sanskaar wanting to touch her but as he forwards his hands towards her, Swara slaps them so hard that for a moment Sanskaar keeps looking at them… but thinking it to be an accident he ignores it)

Zara Zara Bahekata Hai, Mahekata Hai
Aaj Toh Meraa Tan Badan, Mai Pyaasee Hu
Mujhe Bhar Le Apanee Baaho Me
Aaja Re Aa Re

Tadpaaye Mujhe Teree Sabhee Baate
Ek Baar Ae Divaane Jhutha Hee Sahee Pyaar Toh Kar
Mai Bhulee Nahee Hasin Mulaakaate
Bechain Karke Mujhako Mujhase Yu Naa Pher Najar
Ruthega Naa Mujhase, Mere Saathiya Yeh Vaada Kar
Tere Bina Mushkil Hai Jina Meraa Mere Dilbar

(This time Swara throws her arms around his neck and as Sanskaar tries to hug her back she slaps his hands again rolling away from his embrace)

Zara Zara Bahekata Hai, Mahekata Hai
Aaj Toh Meraa Tan Badan, Mai Pyaasee Hu
Mujhe Bhar Le Apanee Baaho Me
Hai Meree Kasam Tujhko Sanam, Dur Kahee Naa Ja
Yeh Duree Kehatee Hai Paas Mere Aaja Re
Aaja Re, Aaja Re, Aaja Re, Aaja.

Finally Sanskaar gets her trick and when she’s not paying any attention, he grabs her wrist and engulfs her in his arms in a flicker which stops Swara from dancing…

Sanskaar: (smirks) Looks like you lost again…!!

Swara: Ughh…!! Leave me…!! This is not fair…!!

Sanskaar: So, Ms. Ahuja…!! Were you trying to seduce me…?!!

Swara: Shut up…!! I wasn’t doing anything like that…!!

She looks towards the terrace and shouts…

Swara: Laksh…!! You can stop now…!! No need to waste the precious water on this stone-hearted person…!!

Laksh: But I’m not doing anything…!! Actually, water ran out a while ago…!!

Swara: (confused) Then, how come this rain…?!!

Sanskaar: Ohoo…!! So you are the reason for this untimely rain…!! But it looks like seeing your hot dance, the rain decided to cool down the environment for a bit…!! See, it actually started raining…!!

Swara: I don’t believe this…!! By the way what’s the time right now…!!

Sanskaar leans a little towards the door trying to see the time on the wall clock hanging inside the room…

Sanskaar: (smirks) It’s 12:20 pm…!!

Swara: Wow, great…!! Now, I lost the challenge also…!!

Sanskaar: But there are still ten minutes left…!!

Swara: What will happen in last ten minutes when I wasn’t able to do anything in twenty three hours and fifty minutes…?!! Leave me…!! I need to go back to my room…!!

She tries to go away but Sanskaar holds her hand and wraps it around his neck…

Sanskaar: We can at least fulfill your another wish…!!

Holding her waist he looks above calling his brother…

Sanskaar: Laksh…!! You can leave now…!! You wouldn’t want to see this…!!

Laksh: Yeah right…!! Even I wasn’t planning on staying…!!

Saying this Laksh runs away and Sanskaar smiles looking at Swara…

Sanskaar: So, shall we begin…?!!

Swara: I don’t want to…!!

Saying this she tries to go away but Sanskaar back hugs her wrapping his arms around her belly…!! Swara closes her eyes feeling the warmth of his body seeping inside through her wet cold skin…!! Seeing her surrendering to his efforts Sanskaar starts rocking their bodies to and fro on the music…

Sun mere humsafar
Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar

(Swara holds his hands which are already wrapped around her waist as Sanskaar kisses the nape of her bare neck and rests his chin on her shoulder)

Sun mere humsafar
Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar
Ki teri saanse chalti jidhar
Rahunga bas wahi umrr bhar
Rahunga bas wahi umrr bhar haaye
Jitni haseen ye mulakatein hai
Unse bhi pyari teri baatein hai
Baaton mein teri jo kho jaate hai
Aaun na hosh mein main kabhi
Baahon mein hai teri zindagi haaye
Sun mere humsafar
Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar
Zaalima tere ishq ch main
Ho gayi aan kamli haye
Main toh yoon khada kis
Soch mein pada tha
Kaise jee raha tha main deewana
Chupke se aake tune
Dil mein sama ke tune
Chhed diya kaisa ye fasana
Oh muskurana bhi tujhi se sikha hai
Dil lagane ka tu hi tareeka hai
Aitbaar bhi tujhi se hota hai
Aaun na hosh mein main kabhi
Bahon mein hai teri zindagi haaye
Hai nahi tha pata
Ke tujhe maan lunga khuda
Ki teri galliyon mein iss kadar
Aaunga har paher
Sun mere humsafar
Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar
Ki teri saanse chalti jidhar
Rahunga bas wahi umrr bhar
Rahunga bas wahi umrr bhar haaye

As the song gets over Sanskaar twirls Swara around and looks at her…

Swara: What…?!! Why are you looking at me like that…?!!

Sanskaar: It’s 12:29 pm…!!

Swara throws her hands in air in exasperation…

Swara: Great…!! I lost the challenge…!!

Sanskaar: You know what I always wanted to do…!!

Swara: What…?!!

Sanskaar: To kiss my first girlfriend in rain…!!

Swara: Why are you telling me… Wait…!! What…?!!

She looks at Sanskaar who smiles seeing her expressions…

Sanskaar: Looks like you won, Ms. Ahuja…!!

Saying this he places his lips on hers pulling them in a soft kiss as he wraps one of his arm around the lower of her back and stokes her damp hairs with the fingers of the other…!! As their lips move in a rhythmic sync fitting each other perfectly, Swara clamps her fingers with his silky hairs deepening the kiss as if her life depended on it…!!


On the other side, Laksh reaches the girls’ room…

Ragini: What happened…?!!

Laksh: I don’t know…!!

Ragini: What do you mean you don’t know…?!! Who won the challenge…?!!

Laksh: Umm…!! First of all, it looked like Swara will win but after that I don’t know…!!

Ragini: (angrily) Then what were you doing there…?!!

Laksh: That’s not my fault, Bhai sent me back…!!

Ragini: Sanskaar sent you back…?!!

Laksh: (rolling his eyes) I think I said the same thing…!!

Ragini: (smiling widely) Then there’s a possibility that Swara might win…!!

Laksh: (shrugs his shoulders) May be…!!

Ragini: Then that means they might be kissing right now…!! Come let’s go…!!

Laksh: Where…?!! You want to go there…?!! And Yash…!!

Ragini: He is fast asleep…!! Now, stop asking questions and follow me…!!

Ragini holds his hand and literally drags him out…


As Ragini and Laksh reach there, they find Sanskaar losing the challenge to Swara and kissing her…

Ragini: (shouts) Sanskaar, stop eating my best friends face…!!

This makes Swara push away Sanskaar in embarrassment who in turn glares at Ragini…

Ragini: (grinning widely) Ha ha…!! I always wanted to say that…!!

Swara tries to run away but Sanskaar holds her, hugging her from the back and resting his chin back on her shoulder…

Sanskaar: Ragini…!! Have you taken the contract for ruining all my perfect moments…?!!

Ragini: Don’t complain…!! You did the same to me…!!

Sanskaar: So, are you happy now…?!!

Ragini: Very…!!

Sanskaar: Then can you please leave us alone…?!!

Ragini: Why…?!!

Sanskaar: Lucky…!! If you don’t take your girlfriend right now, I’ll make sure to follow you on the first night after your wedding…!!

Ragini: You are kidding me, right…?!!

Sanskaar: Now, I’m changing my plans to follow you both on your honeymoon also…!! Lucky…

Laksh: Yes, bhai…!!

Sanskaar: Do you want me to do that…?!!

Laksh: No bhai…!!!

Sanskaar: Then…?!!

Laksh: We are leaving…!!

Ragini: I’m not going anywhere…!!

Laksh: Shut up…!! I don’t want to ruin my first night and honeymoon…!!

Saying this he throws Ragini on his shoulder and runs out of the room…

Swara: God, Sanskaar…!! You are impossible…!!

Sanskaar: I know…!!

Swara: Alright…!! I’m also going…!! Everyone might be coming back…!!

Sanskaar: But wait…!!

Swara: No…!! No…!! I’m going for now…!!

Saying this she too runs out of the room with Sanskaar following her…!! She tries to run so that he couldn’t catch her but instead she bumps into something and before she could fall down she finds herself encased in between Tarun’s arms…!!

Episode ends…!!

Precap: Not decided yet…!!



Hahh…!! A cliffhanger after a pretty long time…!! One thing I like about them… they keep you hooked to the story…!! So, I want you all to guess what might happen after that…!! What will be Tarun’s reaction…?!! And what will be Swasan’s reaction…?!!

The next update will be posted either on Thursday or Friday…!! No…!! No…!! No…!! I’m not taking a leave again…!! This time I’ll be posting an OS on ‘WEDNESDAY’ and that too only on TELLY UPDATES…!! I have been writing MITWAA for quite some time and I thought this OS could be like a refresher…!! And this one will be quite different from what I usually write…!! I know, I say that for every other story I write but I think you might like this one…!! I’ll be posting it on FB also but after a few days…!! So, if you want you can check on TU…!!

Now, all my readers who don’t know Hindi and asked me for the English translation of the songs included, I’m giving the translation down here…!! (all those who know Hindi can skip this one) So, see you all later…!! Stay blessed and happy reading…!!


** With little temptation, full of fragrance
Today is my body , I am thirsty
Take me in your arms
Take oath on my life my love, don’t go anywhere far
These distances are requesting you to come close to me

May the dark clouds keep raining heavily like this
We my love are drained in the rain of love
You try to smoothen my open hairlocks
With your fingers , that is what I desire
In the cold nights we sleep together under one sheet
We two should be alone, there shouldn’t be anyone at home
Take me in your arms
Come,please do come

All your talks make my heart throb
Love me just once even if it is not true my love
I haven’t forgotten our sweet meetings
Making me restless, don’t turn your eyes away now
You will never be angry with me , promise my love
Without you life is difficult to live

With little temptation, full of fragrance
Today is my body , I am thirsty
Take me in your arms
Take oath on my life my love, don’t go anywhere far
These distances are requesting you to come close to me
Come, do come

*** Listen, O my co-traveller,
do you have even a little bit of idea,
that the way your breath moves,
I’ll be there, all my life.

as beautiful these meetings are,
more beautiful than them are your talks.
once I’m lost in your talks,
I’d never want to come back to consciousness.
my life is in your arms.

O brute, in your love,
I’m gone crazy…

I stood there, thinking
how I, a crazy one, was living.
coming silently,
entering my heart,
what a story you started…

I’ve learnt to smile from you,
you are the way to love,
Belief comes from you,
I’ll never come back to consciousness.
My life is in your arms…

I didn’t know
that I’d consider you my god,
that I’d come to your streets,
so much, all the time.

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  1. Awesome dear


  3. Mahisha

    Its amazing

  4. CrazyGirlz

    What to say yaar. It’s amazing and perfect , I find it flawless. And the cliffhanger is superb, can’t wait to know what happens next

  5. Hi Stella..!!
    I just read all your stories last Month but Sorry u didn’t got time to comment in Amy one of them. You are doing a Great job. I am Glad to see your writing skills. Not a single mistake in it neither in Grammar nor in Vocabulary nor in Spellings too..I am impressed!!
    Keep up the Good job. I already saw your videos in YouTube but just of Mitwa. I will try to watch others too. Plz try to Update soon..
    Best of Luck for Your OS..

  6. Sumayyah

    amazing is a very very short word infront of it
    wooaahh Swara won the challenge
    again Sanskar’s understanding nature ufff mar dala ik baar phir
    huhh cliffhanger …I think now Tarun will get to know every thing or may be he again start drooling over Swara making Sanskar jealous
    waiting for the os I’m surely gonna read that ….
    love you dii
    take care

  7. nice dear

  8. Phoniex

    Haha lovely romance sanskar is too sweet

  9. Shiksha


  10. Deeksha

    Wow….!!!!! ????????????????????

  11. As usual amazing…Love it.plzzzz try to post before Thursday.

  12. Nice dear lovely moments of swasan

  13. Independent

    mind blowing as usual

  14. Superb….!!!!
    Stella di u dont need cliffhangers to keep us hooked to ur story….we r alwz hooked to it…..!!!!
    Waiting for next eagerly….!!!!
    Want to see tarun’s reaction after seeing swara all wet in sari in his arms!! But dont let him think too much otherwise sanskar wont leave him….swara is only sanskar’s

  15. I am gonna watch the videos later on
    And just give the link for putting votes

    In the first part I was afraid Swara was going to do something stupid after listening to Sujata
    Sanskar consoling her and gifting her the pendant was sooooooooo sentimental and awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, I mean cute
    And finally Sanskar did lose the bet
    That part was sooooooo funny , lol Sanskar was gonna follow Raglak to their first night and honeymoon
    Finally Ragini had the chance to reprimand Sanskar, hahahahahhahahahahhahahhahahhahahhahhah
    Swasan and Tarun-I’m waiting

    I am waiting for the os and I’m sure I’m gonna love it and the next update

    Take care di

  16. Rabia0032

    Awesome dear…
    Swasan were amazing ❤❤❤

  17. Zabardast ❤?

  18. Mmp

    It was awesome dear…:-* and one more time sanskaar took my heart.. <3 … He can handle any situation… Totally loved that part.. :-*
    And swara's way of getting him out of his control.. is too gud.. :-* haha…Although he loose…he is more than happy to winning the challenge.. 😉
    Hehe…Ragini.. You disturb their beautiful moment… Very bad..:-P but sanskaar is Sanskaar… What a wonderful Reaction .. Haha.
    Opps…tarun…You are gone buddy… 1st by her hot avtaar… And 2nd by his burning gaze…lol
    Waiting for sanskaar's reaction egerly.

    Waiting for ur OS… Keep rocking like this.. 🙂

  19. reading ur ff is bliss…awesome part…loved swasan rain scenes??

  20. Love_forever

    Miss Garuna Singh!!
    What is actually wrong with you? Why are you writing like a typical bollywood scriptwriter, and stealing all our hearts away? You just stole my heart away, and I’m near about dying!?
    Ugh!!! Why Tarun! A BIG ‘N’ AND A BIG ‘O’ MAKES A BIG FAT ‘NO’!!
    I swear I hate this character!! But oh my my! You never give me a chance to stay annoyed!! A one shot!!?
    Seriously, after THE RETURN, I never expected a one shot to pop up anytime sooner!! I legit lubb you for this!❤
    And finally, you used one of my favourite songs!! Humsafar!!❤ Thank you so much!❤
    And finally, I love you!?

  21. Seebu_s

    loved it dear…all the best to ur os

  22. awesome ??

  23. Simin

    Ohhhooo emotional swara
    Hayyyeeee my sherni what a plan haaa
    Clean bold sanskar
    He cant himself from going towards her
    Stay happy…????

  24. nice dear

  25. Sagarikaa

    Di give ur os soon . yes we would get one more masterpiece of Ms. All rounder.
    you nailed the episode.

  26. Soujanya


  27. Stella

    Thank you so much everyone for your lovely comments and appreciations. I haven’t been feeling quite good from last two three days that’s why I’m unable to reply to each one of you. But seriously, your love and support really means a lot to me…!!

    And thanks again for supporting me for the OS…!! I’m working on it and will be posting it pretty soon…!!

    Love you all…!! Stay blessed…!! ??

    1. Sumayyah

      dii I can’t get any type of video you talked about I searched new author awards but can’t find any sort if it
      as I want to see it so if possible can you help me how can I get that??

      1. Stella

        Use the following links:

        And from here you can find the rest of the videos too…!! If you are still unable to find them then do tell me…!! I’ll give you the other links too…!!

      2. Sumayyah

        yay I watched it and enjoyed it too all thanks goes to one and only Stella dii . sometimes you feel proud and happy for others as you think them as your own .
        and I am very proud and happy for you at the same time as I think you as my own family .
        I wishes come true and always be happy
        I really love you
        stay blessed

      3. Sumayyah

        oops I wish all your wishes come true

      4. Stella

        That was really sweet of you dear…!! I’m more than glad to hear this…!! All your love and support really means a lot to me…!! Love you all… ?❤️❤️

  28. Mica

    ugghhh love it love it love it…..

  29. Simi

    Loved it ???

  30. Loved it ❤❤❤❤❤

  31. Vyshu10

    awesome…loved it

  32. nice story

  33. DivzS

    Superb…. Mesmerizing.. Nice romance…

  34. Arshaanya

    Loved it

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