A misunderstanding Four Shots ~ Maria (Shot 4)


In case you missed the previous shot,

shot 3

Twinkle runs and hugs Kunj. And she cries. Everyone see them. Kunj pushes her and she falls down and says
“Get away! Stay away from me. All of you, do you know what kind of girl she is? Never ever trust her even once in your life. She only knows to play with someone’s heart. She is a cheater, a sl*t! one night she sleeps with me and the other with that bl***y Aditya. She is a very dirty minded girl, I don’t even have words to describe her! She is…”

Twinkle: Kunj believe me please! Trust me Kunj, she says sobbingly. I only love you.
Kunj: oh just shut up! Trust you!! Forget it! That was the biggest mistake of my life! You were the biggest mistake of my life! I hate you! I don’t believe in love anymore, and that’s because of you! And he leaves.
Twinkle cries a lot: KUNJ… please trust me…
All the students present in the canteen laugh on her. One boy comes to her and sits down,
Boy: hey Twinkle! I also love you please can you be with me for one night? And he touches her shoulders.
Twinkle: leave me, and she stands up. He again touches her, she slaps him. He was more angry on her now he twisted her hand
Boy: how dare you, uh? Now you will have to pay for this. Twinkle was struggling in pain.
Twinkle: ahhh.. leave me. He leaves her and she runs away. As she was running one more boy stops her and says

Twinkle only one night please. Twinkle runs away from there crying.
The whole night she cries. She remembers all the moments with Kunj and also the canteen scene.
Twinkle: why? Why? Why did you do this to me Kunj? And she cries a lot.
I hate you Kunj! I hate you!! She wipes her tears,
No more tears for the person who has insulted me, who didn’t trust me!! I hate you! I just hate you Kunj Sarna!!!

She leaves the college because of what Kunj did! She decides to leave Mumbai and go Delhi with her parents. And after two days as they were going, they met with an accident. And her hatred for Kunj increased even more. They come out of their flashbacks.

Kunj has tears in his eyes.
Kunj: Twinkle… even Twinkle has tears in her eyes and she turns away. Kunj goes to her.
Kunj: I am sorry Twinkle. I misunderstood you.
Twinkle does not say a word, she just cried recalling all the bitter moments. His dad’s death, accident, her mom’s state.
Kunj: look at me Twinkle.. please! I am really very sorry. I didn’t trust you, that was the biggest mistake of my life. Trust me I am very sorry.
Twinkle does not say anything she turns to go but Kunj holds her hand. She frees her hand from his grip and runs away. Kunj was crying seeing her not answering him. He runs behind her and he remembers,

Aisha came back from her village after a month, and she came to know about Twinj’s breakup. She was shocked. She talks to Aditya.
Aisha: Aditya.. what was all this? Nobody even cared to inform me?
Aditya: its all because of me! Kunj misunderstood her.
Aisha: but what about that card which Twinkle made for Kunj?
Aditya: even I don’t know where that card went?
Kunj listens to them,
Kunj: because there was no such card! Its all over!
Aisha: but listen Kunj,..
Kunj doesn’t listen and goes from there.
After the college, Aisha goes back home and as she was keeping all her clothes in the cupboard she sees the card made by Twinkle for Kunj. She smiles and says
Thank god I found this, now I will give this card to her. He will believe Twinkle then. Thank you so much God!

Next day she goes to college and shows the card to Kunj. Kunj at first was not interested but when he saw the card he was surprised, shocked and what not! The card was a flashback of all their memories. All the selfies they had taken together with HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY LOVE written in bold letters.
‘If I did anything right in my life, it was when I gave my heart to you. I love you because you make me feel like I mean something to someone. I don’t want anything from life except you are next to me! I love you to the moon and back! I love you so much Kunj! Please don’t leave me ever. I cant imagine my life without you. I love you!! I love you so much! Happy Birthday! From your and only your Twinkle!’

Kunj had tears in his eyes. He misunderstood Twinkle so much. He was feeling so guilty. He kissed the card and cried. Aisha consoled him.
Kunj: I did so much wrong to her. I am so sorry Twinkle! I am so sorry.
He takes the card and runs from there to her house but finds it locked. He searches for her everywhere but couldn’t find her. He waited for her for five years and now finally he found her.

Present scene,
Kunj runs behind her and they reach outside the office.
Kunj: please listen to me Twinkle. He holds her hand, he was facing her back
Kunj: If I did anything right in my life, it was when I gave my heart to you. I love you because you make me feel like I mean something to someone. I don’t want anything from life except you are next to me! I love you to the moon and back! I love you so much Twinkle! Please don’t leave me ever. I cant imagine my life without you. I love you!! I love you so much!

Twinkle had tears in her eyes remembering how lovingly she made that card for him. She turns back, for a second she forgets everything but when she sees his face she remembers how he insulted her, the accident! And she frees her hand.
Twinkle: and I hate you so much Mr. Kunj Sarna!
Kunj was stunned by her words: Twinkle…
Twinkle turned and cried a lot remembering everything.
Kunj holds her hand and pulls her towards her, she falls on his chest. He hugs her tightly, Twinkle tries to get rid of his grip but Kunj was not ready to leave her. Somewhere in Twinkle’s corner of heart she felt good. She felt peace. But the sight of the accident and everything disturbed her, with full force she got rid of him. She slapped him hard.

Twinkle: how dare you? Its so easy to say sorry na! I hate you! I hate you and will always hate you.
Kunj: please don’t say like this! It hurts.
Twinkle: it hurts you! And what about me? It didn’t hurt me? Are you trying to say that? I have had a lot just because of you! Just get lost from here.
Kunj: I know I have hurt you a lot! And I am repenting for that. It was not at all easy to stay without you these five years. I am sorry. Please forgive me.
Twinkle: I cant forgive you she says crying loudly. I hate you… and she kneels down crying.
Kunj could not bear her crying so much. He sits down with her.
Why?? I know you still love me.
Twinkle: you don’t know what all happened because of you. She tells him about the accident.

Kunj was shocked. He was feeling more guilty.
Twinkle: because of you my dad is not with me, because of you my mom is in such state, because of you I could not complete my studies. Because of you I have to work as a slave in my own house. All because of you. Saying so she beats Kunj on his chest. Kunj couldn’t believe what all had happened and all because of him. She had to bear so much just because of him. Twinkle keeps on beating him and finally hugs him as she needed someone to console her. She had poured her heart out. She couldn’t resist, her body turned weak and therefore she hugged him crying. Kunj reciprocated back and tightly this time. Both Twinj were crying, one crying because of guilt the other because she had lost her life.

Kunj: I am sorry Twinkle! It was all my fault! I am really sorry! Please forgive me.
Twinkle was not in a condition to retaliate or even reply him. She felt weak. It was the first time in these five years that she spoke her heart out. All her pains, everything that she was bearing from these five years. She could not say anything.
Kunj: Twinkle… she didn’t reply that’s when Kunj realised that she had fainted.
Kunj: Twinkle.. get up.. he takes her to his hotel and sprinkles water on her face. She slowly opens her eyes and sees Kunj in front of him.
Twinkle: (in a low voice) Kunj.. go away.. leave me alone. I …I
Kunj keeps his finger on her mouth and nods in no.. Twinkle tries to get up, Kunj helps her.

Twinkle: why did you do this? What was my fault in all this? was loving you my fault? Was it the biggest mistake of my life?
Kunj: no Twinkle.. not trusting you was the biggest mistake of my life. You are not at all at fault. Forgive me once. I will always trust you. Please come back Twinkle, come back in my life.

Twinkle cries a lot. Kunj wipes her tears and says: now you will not waste a single tear, they are all mine. Twinkle melts down and hugs him tightly and says,
“I love you Kunj! Please don’t leave me again. I love you a lot.” They break their hug, Kunj goes close to Twinkle and kisses his forehead, he slowly moves down kissing her cheeks and finally he goes to kiss her soft lips. He pushed his rough lips against hers and they had a passionate kiss. All their sorrows flow down through their tears and two bodies once again become one soul. They depart due to the lack of oxygen. Twinkle feels shy and so she hugs Kunj hiding her cheeks which had turned red or pink! And they both unite forever!
The story comes to an end.

So how was this? I hope you liked the end.
I’ll try to post the last part of It was not my fault’ as soon as possible. So stay tuned. And I’m sorry that I reply you all as I’m out and don’t get time, neither have I read the recent articles. I’ll read it when I get time and I’ll try to comment on them.

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  1. Zuha Fatima

    Hey Maria,
    Firstly I’m really apologetic as I wasn’t able to comment on your previous shot because of a marriage in my family.

    Also these 4 shots were damn amazing and I enjoyed them to the core. The dialogues were superb and the ending was spectacular. Good job! Keep up the same pace of work!
    Loads of Love and Support!
    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  2. RUTU.....

    What an amazing episode and emotional too you’re a nice writer yaar really loved your os ???

  3. This is just mind blowing…. I have no word’s to tell…..it’s very emotional and heart touching episode….. I had tears in my eye’s while reading it…..really it’s great…just love it……but now its finished filling very sad..I will miss it so much….
    Ur sach a great writer.. So….plss come back with ur another amazing ff….will be waiting 4 it….pls post ur other ff also….
    Stay happy and keep smiling….
    With lodss of love to u……
    Super Mario….

  4. Ramya

    Woww Maria amazing
    At start I didn’t like kunn in dis episode bcoz wt he had do e to twinkle
    But it’s so cute a end lovely
    Loads of love keep smiling

  5. Aanya_pandey

    Such an amazing end yrr. Loved it

  6. Presha

    Hey maria its just awesome yaar such an super end

  7. Maria, it was just amazing!!!!! Sry 4 not commenting before, as my xams r goin on.. Bt hv read all ur ff’s…
    Luv u loads…. ???? swtheart

  8. Simiyy

    Hey Maria
    I loved your shots
    The ending was good
    Post your ff soon
    Loads of love ?

  9. Chiku

    HEy maria
    Woaaah!! It ssoo lovely❤️❤️❤️I loved it to the core. It soo sweet. U write so amazingly. Ahhhh its one of my ss now. I was spellbound by ur work ????
    U r just amazing. ….. its fabulous. Its just out of the world❤️
    Loads of love❤️

  10. Adya

    Hey di…
    Well I must say that you are indeed a fab writer… A huge round of applause for you…. I mean.. the whole of this was amazing…
    I love it… I’m soo happy that needing was a happy one..
    Plss try to post your ff soon… And write more of these ss…
    Love you !

  11. Mindblowing episode maria I loved it

  12. Kritika14

    Hey Maria,
    This was outstanding! I loved the confrontation! Overall, it was amazing! Do come up with more things like this!

    Lovess! xx

  13. Wow it’s amazing you made me cry loved it

  14. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing emotional epi

  15. SidMinTwiNj

    Hey maria
    All the four shots were just fab… Loved it to the core… Do come up with new ff or SS…


  16. SidMin

    Loved it 🙂 Awesome 🙂
    Love you 🙂

  17. Baby

    maria……….. 😀
    as always bindass…….
    loved it sooo vry mch fabulous cute emotional………
    lluv u lods♥♥♥

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