A misunderstanding Four Shots ~ Maria (shot 1)

One girl is shown instructing many other girls. The other girls are shown in a tensed state.
Girl: you, she points one girl, you will call on this number.
The girl is shown, her beautiful eyes which were facing down as she was standing in front of her boss. She obeys her order. Her face is revealed and she is none other than Twinkle!
Twinkle: yes ma’am. She calls on that number,
Boy: yes, whose this?…

Twinkle is taken aback by his words rather by his voice. She doesn’t reply, but there are tears in her eyes, she somehow manages to stop them from falling.
Boy: hello??? May I know whose this?
Twinkle cuts the call. Everyone is confused. The boss gets angry.
Boss: what was that Twinkle? Why did you cut the call?
Twinkle: he was not picking up the call.
Boss: ohk.. try another number!
Twinkle: ma’am actually I need to go to the washroom. Please!

Boss: ok.. you can go but be quick!
Twinkle nods and runs to the washroom and cries a lot, she sits down crying and remembers, fb:
It was her first day in college, she stepped inside and as she was walking, she didn’t notice water spilt on the floor. And she was about to fall when she is held by two strong arms. She closes her eyes out of fear and when she opens them she finds herself in the arms of a handsome, well built man! That man was still lost in her eyes and she was also lost in him. It was love at first sight for both of them. None of them was ready to get up and leave each other. But unfortunately the bell rang and they both came back to their senses, they both stand straight. Twinkle turns and leaves from there. That boy keeps looking at her but she didn’t turn.

In disappointment he turns his eyes when Twinkle looks back to him and smiles.
All the newbies sat in one class, a teacher comes and addresses them. Twinkle was busy listening to her until she turned to her left and saw the same boy sitting on the next bench who was just staring at her. Twinkle looks down and blushes and that boy quickly turns towards the teacher and laughs at his foolishness. Knock knock… Twinkle comes back to her senses,
Twinkle: yes I am coming, she wipes her tears quickly and washes her face so that no one knows she was crying. She wipes her face with her handkerchief and says this is all because of you! Because of you I have to work here! I hate you! I just hate you so much! saying so she goes out.

The scene changes to Mumbai,
The face of the boy who had received the call is revealed, he was none other than Kunj Sarna.
Kunj’s pov: why do I feel her presence? As if she was the one who was on the phone. I can even feel her breath. I will have to find out! After all I am searching for her from so many years! And now I have got some ray of hope.
Usha: beta till when will you wait for her? It has been five years now, forget her! She will never be back.
Kunj:I will never lose hopes, he says having tears in his eyes. It was all my fault maa.. I will never forgive myself.
Usha: even she would have forgotten you. You also forget about her.
Kunj: no maa.. I can never forget her, and I have a feeling that alike me she also still loves me.
Usha’s pov: please god help my son find her, I cant see him like this day and night. He has become a body without a soul in it!
Usha leaves. Kunj calls someone,
Kunj: please find out who is the owner of this number. The one on the call searches and says: this number is registered on the name of Sharvari Dixit, the owner of a call centre in Delhi.
Kunj: Sharvari Dixit?? Give me her address.

Man: but sir, we cant give you her information like this.
Kunj: I will give you huge sum for this but please give me her details. Its very important.
Man: but.. ok sir. He gives Kunj all the information. He thanks him and cuts the call.
Kunj pov: does my Twinkle work in the call centre? No..no.. this cant be possible!But I will still find out about this Sharvari Dixit!
He looks determined. He books the tickets for Delhi.

Its night and Twinkle has returned back to her so called house, where she just has to bear all tortures from her uncle and aunt. But she bears all of it just for her ill mother. She goes to her mom,

Twinkle: mom don’t worry one day we will get out of this hell for sure. I have applied for better jobs, I hope that they accept me!
Leela: who will not accept my daughter, uh? I am very sure you will get a job. I am proud of you beta.
Twinkle gives her the medicines and makes her sleep.
Twinkle’s pov: please god help me to find a better job. Please god.

She goes towards the window and looks at the black sky, there were very less stars that night. The moon was also not shining brightly. Twinkle remembers how she, her mom and dad were travelling in a car to Delhi. When suddenly a truck appeared and her dad could not control his vehicle. The truck crashed. Nothing happened to her but when she turned, she saw her parents bleeding to death. She tries to get help from some one but unfortunately she found no one. She tried to start her car and finally it started, she drives them to the hospital. The doctor checks both of them.
Doctor: Ms.Taneja, its too late we couldn’t save your dad, but your mom is stable but she is suffering badly as the commands of her brain do not reach to her lower body. Her lower body has paralysed. I am so sorry!

Twinkle was shattered! She was numb. She was feeling helpless. She was the daughter of Taneja Companies. Her dad had a big business firm. But at the same time he had many debts. And now as he had died, all his property was taken away to clear off his debts. Twinkle had no money for her mothers treatment. But one fine day her maternal uncle called her Delhi, he agreed to treat her mother. Twinkle was very happy, she and her mother went Delhi and started living with her maternal uncle and aunt. Her mothers treatment had started she was very thankful to her uncle and god. As the days passed by her uncle started treating her badly, he asked her to do the maids work, her aunt was no less, she used to beat her if anything went wrong. In return they were just letting her stay with her mom, and bearing all their expenses. Her uncle even tried to get close with her in the absence of her wife. Twinkle was always successful in running away. But her mom didn’t know any of these. Like this their days were passing.

Twinkle had tears in her eyes,: I miss you papa! I miss you so much. The scene freezes.
What do you think happened between Kunj and Twinkle? Why does Twinkle hate Kunj so much? Does she really hate him or shows that she does? To know that keep reading.

So basically this is my second fan fiction or say a short story on Twinj. i hope you all support me in this also.

So done with the first part! how was this part? Shall I continue with it? Please tell me through your comments.



  1. Zuha Fatima

    Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maria,
    I enjoyed it to all the extents! I have no words for this. The life of Twinkle really is painful 🙁 Anyway I am eagerly waiting for the next shot as the suspense is killing me like hell! Loads of love and support ♡♡♡

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

  2. SidMin23


    |Registered Member

    Good intro and I think twinkle just pretend to be hate kunj and may be kunj has done some mistake that why twinkle hate him or may he unknowingly make an accident of rt just a guess. Love the intro maria wating for episode.

  3. Sohi


    |Registered Member

    The plot seems interesting looking forward to read more and one more thing sharvari is the name of rashmi right in jasmin’s new show if iam not wrong do tell me post soon bye

    • Angel20



      Thank you so much Sohi. No I don’t know anything about Rashmi or Jasmin’s new show. It’s my own imagination. Well I write an ff named ‘It was not my fault’ Do have a look at it

      With Love💕

  4. Ramya


    |Registered Member

    Maria it’s just amazing Superb loved it
    Plsss do post soon I’m waiting
    Such a lovely episode bit feeling bad fr twinkle
    Love u

  5. SidMin


    |Registered Member

    Loved it Awesome 🙂 Wonderful plot 🙂 And feeling sad for both Twinj hope they unite soon 🙂
    Post soon 🙂
    Love you 🙂

  6. Ria


    |Registered Member

    Guess what!! I was going to tell you to post ’The Voice’ over here and her you are.. yay!! I legit loved this story you know. Even though I didn’t read it again because I already what’s gonna happen, but I love this story a lot.


    • Angel20



      Oh wow what a coincidence! Thank you so much! I’m really glad you loved this story. Okay as you know the story, don’t reveal it to anyone🙊 Anyways thank you again.

      Loads of love to you💕

  7. Priya23

    Omg….maria its just amazing….very nice plot superb….love it very much…plzzz post next epi soon dear…
    Keep smiling…

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