Mistake or Realization (OS)

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Hi guys. Back wd another os. Really thankful to all of you for your comments for my previous writings and sorry that I hadn’t replied to you guys but I have read all ur comments. Ignore mistakes in this os too
Background is Thapki and bihaan support each other, have feelings of love but haven’t confess their love. They are returning from a party and little bit wet because of rain.
(Assume the dresses they were wearing in their sangeet)
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Bihaan removes his coat, shirt and tie and moves his fingers in hairs.
Thapki: thank god we are not that much wet. . Then she looks bihaan who was busy in drying his hairs.
thapki (mindvoice): OMG he looks damn hot without shirt and his messy hairs makes me dead.
Bihaan glares thapki and lifts his one eyebrow (expressions) what?? Thapki feels embarrass and looks on other side.
Thapki: don’t you have any shame. Why you have removed your shirt. I am also with you in this room.
Bihaan: o madam this is my room. I’ll move as per my wish. If you have any problem so you can close your eyes or shifts in other room.
Bihaan sneezes. Thapki moves towards bihaan.
Thapki: (worriedly) bihaan are you ok??
Bihaan: o Chuk chuk gari don’t show extra concern. I am B for Bihaan Pandey.. B for Babber Sheer..I’ll manage. Your help no need..continue sneezing
Thapki : then go to hell.
Thapki remembers how bihaan took care of her whenever she is ill and she thinks to make karha for him. She makes karha and poured in glass. she starts washing vessels. Then sharddha enters in kitchen holding a vine glass.
Sharddha (in low tone): such a strong vine…. Its one sip makes dhruv totally out of control and tonight he ll be mine….. she places the glass on shelf where thapki has already placed her glass. Thapki ignores sharddha and by mistake takes vine glass and moves to her room.
Sharddha: today I am so happy so ignore this th..th….thapki…
Thapki:Bihaan… take this.
Bihaan: what is this? Poison? wants to kill me???
Thapki: I wish I can…. but unfortunately not possible now… this is karha.. have this you ll feel better.
Bihaan: dekha.. I was right you want to kill me by this karha. You know na it tastes so bad and you are compelling me to drink this. I won’t. BTW why are you showing so much concern? ummm
Thapki: o please doesn’t get wrong ideas… I don’t allow you to spread germs in the room by sneezing. I don’t want to catch cold. So stop talking and drink it. Otherwise I’ll call maa.
Bihaan: no no I am having it. (Bihaan takes one sip) thapki its so yugggggg.. not tastes like karha.
Thapki: bihaan don’t make excuses. Drink it quickly. Bihaan makes bad faces but finishes it.
Thapki removes her earrings, bangles and hair pins. Then suddenly she fells something on her belly. Bihaan wraps his hands around her belly and places his chin on her shoulder.
Bihaan(drunken voice): thapki you know you looks so hot in saari and he placed a soft kiss on her shoulder.
Thapki was totally shocked. She pushes bihaan
Thapki: bihaan what are doing? Are you in your senses? why are you behaving like this? You are….
She takes the glass and smells.. OMG how vine comes in this glass..(Confusingly) I made…bihaan hugs her from back..
Thapki: (try to make herself free) bihaan please what are you doing.
Bihaan opens her blouse dori and makes her hair open on back by removing her hair pin. He puts her hairs on one side and kisses her back, shoulder, neck and ear. Thapki closes her eyes. His touch is making her crazy.
Thapki(mindvoice): what are you doing thapki? Why are you allowing him to touch you?
Thapki makes her free from bihaan’s hug and moves fowrad but he hold her pallu. She stops. Bihaan closes the distance between them and wraps the pallu around her shoulder. He slides his hands on her arms, intertwines his fingers with hers and moves his nose on her face.
Thapki: (moans) bihannn.. please
Bihaan:shhhhhhhh
Thapki turns his face towards bihaan. Bihaan lowers his head to kiss her but she puts finger on bihaan’s lips. Bihaan grabs her finger and tries to kiss but thapki moves back.
Thapki: bihaan this is wrong. You can’t do this to me.we don’t have this type of relation..
Bihaan pinned her to wall and holds both his hands above.
Bihaan: wrong. Why?? We are husband wife and I have complete right on you.
Bihaan kisses her right cheek then left and then forehead. Bihaan lowers his head to kiss her on lips thapki closes her eyes and he pecks her lips.
Thapki(mindvoice): why are losing control thapki. You can’t cross your limit. You can’t move on with bihaan like this. Bihaan is drunk. In morning he ll forget everything. Then what ll you do
Thapki pushes bihaan.
Thapki: bihaan you are not in your senses. Come. Lets sleep. You must be tired.
Thapki takes bihaan to bed. Thapki’s foot stuck in her saari. Both fall on the bed..thapki is on bihaan. Thapki gets up quickly and composes herself. She tries to move but bihaan grabs his hand and pulls her on him. Bihaan takes turn and now bihaan is over thapki. He removes the hair from her face to get a clear view of her beauty. Bihaan from his eyes takes her permission.
Thapki: (mindvoice) no thapki this is wrong. bihaan is not in his senses. It’s a mistake. You’ll have regret in future…
Thapki: (to herslf): I don’t know whether I have regretted in future or not but my heart is saying that I am doing the right thing and if it is a mistake that it would be the most beautiful mistake of my life.
Thapki smiles and blinks her eyes to say yes. Bihaan switch off the lights and moves the blanket over them so not no one can witness their romantic night.

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20 Comments
  1. How romantic ….😍😍 … Way too awesome . . Loved it ❤❤ … Plz write os like this …. This was amazing

    1. Alm.Abi

      thnx alot for ur love….

  2. Thank you for your lovely story, but seriously how could u make this a one shot, the cliffhanger is killing me 😆😆😆

    I forbid you to stop! 😣😣😣

    Please continue…pretty please 😁
    Would like to know bihan point of view 😁

    1. Alm.Abi

      thnx alot for appreciation… nd about nxt part yr seriously i hve ff idea n my mind nd this os is extracted frm it…. nd if i ll update the nxt part as per my ff idea then u guys ll through chappals on me… but if i’ll come up wd better idea then ll surly update… thnx once again

  3. Exlnt os ,plz try to change this os to TS plz plz plz
    Thahaan m lea
    Hum intzaar k r ge
    Thanks for this type of os
    Plz accept my request

    1. Alm.Abi

      thnx alot for ur love… nd about nxt part yr seriously i hve ff idea n my mind nd this os is extracted frm it…. nd if i ll update the nxt part as per my ff idea then u guys ll through chappals on me… but if i’ll come up wd better idea then ll surly update… thnx once again

    2. Alm.Abi

      this is ur real name?? if so..then really beautiful MashAllah…

  4. oh my God…..so romantic….plz made it atleast two or three short…..plz plz….upload nxt epi….i want to knw the bihan ‘s behaviour whn he get to know abt their romantic night…

    1. Alm.Abi

      thnx alot for ur love… nd about nxt part yr seriously i hve ff idea n my mind nd this os is extracted frm it…. nd if i ll update the nxt part as per my ff idea then u guys ll through chappals on me… but if i’ll come up wd better idea then ll surly update… thnx once again….

    2. Alm.Abi

      thnx alot for ur love and support… nd about nxt part yr seriously i hve ff idea n my mind nd this os is extracted frm it…. nd if i ll update the nxt part as per my ff idea then u guys ll through chappals on me… but if i’ll come up wd better idea then ll surly update… thnx once again….

    3. Alm.Abi

      r u pakistani????

  5. Great one but why so short ? I would love to know about Bihaan’s reaction in the morning and even thapki’s reaction after seeing bihaan’s . Although it was short , it was a happy , romantic and beautiful one.

    1. Alm.Abi

      thnx alot for ur love… nd about nxt part yr seriously i hve ff idea n my mind nd this os is extracted frm it…. nd if i ll update the nxt part as per my ff idea then u guys ll through chappals on me… but if i’ll come up wd better idea then ll surly update… thnx once again

  6. Vinni7

    Awesome! 👏👏 but plzz make it two or three shots …we really wanna know what happened next 😂 stay blessed ❤

    1. Alm.Abi

      thnx alot for ur love….I am so happy tht u hve commented… big fan of ur ff…. nd about nxt part yar seriously i hve ff idea n my mind nd this os is extracted frm it…. nd if i ll update the nxt part as per my ff idea then u guys ll through chappals on me… but if i’ll come up wd better idea then ll surly update… thnx once again

  7. Amazing.

    1. Alm.Abi

      thnx alot..

  8. Superb!!!!!please upload next episode….

    1. Alm.Abi

      thnx alot.. ll try inshAllah

  9. Did u already wrote your ff? What is the title and where I could find them? I really excited to read it..

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