It was a mistake to love you.. Chapter 1

Hello guyz, this is Pavithra here. I am back with my ff, first chapter. Hope you guyz enjoy this… This is dedicated to my dear sissy niyu di, sami,Niki and sanju chechi.. Hope you all guyzz love this one?..


It was night. Keerthi was sleeping and dreaming.
In dream…

Madhav: Miss Keerthi, behave yourself. It was you who made my life worst.
I hate you.

Keerthi: (having tears in her eyes) yes, madhav. (Trying to be confident)
I am the one who made your life worst. I didn’t know that you hated me this much. OK Madhav, I understood. You wait and watch , how I am going to make your life more worser. (Laughs , now rather more confidently)
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Keerthi awakes from sleep. She was sweating so much. She had tears in her eyes.

Keerthi: was it a dream? God, I understood now, it was you who showed me this dream, you wanted to show me how much he hates me. I know god, he hates me as much as I love him. Now, it is time to sleep. I have school tomorrow. I believe this was a nightmare.

She sleeps??

On the other side……

Madhav was very sound awake. He was thinking about something that has been bothering him for the past 2 years – that’s Keerthi.

Madhav: I know its you, Keerthi who is bothering me. I mean you have given me a bothering heart. Because of you I am always sad. I know you hates me, Keerthi. You are my life. I can’t actually live without you. I want you back.

He stopped for a while then he thought –

Back??? Yes, back. I need you back at least as a friend. We were just friends. We were friends when we didn’t have any sensible mind.

After so much thinking about Keerthi, he slowly went to sleep??

PRECAP: Sera: Kevin loves you.
Keerthi: kya??
Mishal and Sera nods
Keerthi: yuck! I don’t love home. I love someone else. And he is…


Hope you guyz liked this one. This was the first chapter. It was the first chapter of my ff – it was a mistake to love you.. The next chapter has new characters which I had forgot to add in the character sketch. I will publish a article named new characters as soon as possible. You wait for my new characters and my second chapter. Hope you guyzz enjoyed this. Hope this brought excitment in you. Please ignore any grammatical and spelling mistake. Do remember this is a sad story and does not have any happy ending( trying to make one) you know, this is my first ff. I need all your love and support. Let me know what you think about this story by dropping in a comment.

By, Pavithra..

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  1. Lovely chapter! Have you introduced any actors or actresses in your ff by an any chance? Waiting impatiently for your next chapter! ???

    1. Pavithra1616

      Thank you dii.. Sorry for this late reply.. as you know i am having exams.. no i havent introduced anyone. I am going to add some characters and i will submit one article named new characters later.. wait for it

  2. Sweetgirl7

    lovely yaar

  3. AIHA19

    Nice start sweety.pls do part as soon as possible love u sweety.????

    1. Pavithra1616

      Thankz dii.. I will update soon.. I am having my exams so busy..

  4. Amazing chapter lil sis….but it’s short….that’s ok for us sweetie….love this eisode & love u too darling .Lots of kisses & a big hug to u sweetie.Do update soon & take care . All the best for exams

    1. Pavithra1616

      Thankzz dii.. I know it is too short… Next one will be a longer one.. thankz di for those sweet worda.. will update soon as possible.. love you lotss

  5. Sissy, so sweet of u darling to dedicatr this one….this is a honour for me sweetie…..Love u sooo much

    1. Pavithra1616

      I have to dedicate this to u.. It is one of the duties of sissyzzz.. Love you too

  6. Anuradha123

    Sorry pavithra… I’m not well.. Actually I recently had fracture in my right leg.. Since two weeks I m in bed.. Not able to move properly.. I just can’t stop reading your ff… It’s too good… Loved it from the bottom of my heart…

    1. Pavithra1616

      Thank you dii.. Sorry for this late reply. I am having my exams… Are you alright now di???is it too painful?? Thank you for yoir comment.. That was so sweet of you.. Thankz

  7. Aleya.marzan

    which serial or non fiction??
    but it was reaalllyy goood

    1. this is non fiction sweetie….

    2. Pavithra1616

      Thank you aluu for commenting.. It is a non serial ff

  8. Nikitansx

    Girl, I’m telling you this chapter is just so lit. Amazing, I can’t even explain. Do update soon

    1. Pavithra1616

      Thankz niki for commenting.. i know it is too short.. will update soon as possible.. Having my exams so busy..

  9. Anilv

    Lovely start Pavithra. Waiting for them to meet…

    1. Pavithra1616

      Thank you bhai for commenting.. thanks alot.. Wait for the next article called the new characters and the second chapter..

      1. Anilv

        Waiting eagerly.

  10. Hey Pavi its me again(Aadila). Chapter1 was superb, I’m waiting for next chapter. I hope that also creative and attractive. Ones again “ALL THE BEST…”

    1. Pavithra1616

      Thankz dii.. you always say creative and attactive!!! No need to mention you again as i know well than anyone.. padicho mathsinu?? Thank you for commenting… love you lotss..

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