THE MISTAKE WHICH CHANGED OUR LIVES (2)

hey guys!! kritika here!! with part 2 of the ss..
the mistake? which is the mistake which changed their lives!? u wanna know that nah!! this part reveals it!!
and the role of risha is played by hiba nawab aka amaya mathur of tere sheher mein,,if you have someone else..you can suggest!
PART 1 LINK
http://www.tellyupdates.com/mistake-changed-lives-1/

episode 2
‘the mistake’
Once, risha and her friends went to the bar section in THE BEROI GRAND..for common party..risha had invited sanskar also..
Both got drunk…soo much…
Which resulted in….? this-
Yeah!
Arey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
Chull chull chull..
Arey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
Chull chull chull..
THEY BOTH WENT TO DANCE FLOOR AND STARTED SINGING MADLY.. HE HELD HER WAIST ON EITHER SIDES BY BOTH HIS HANDS AND DANCED MADLY LIKE A TEENAGER…WHILE SHE THREW HER HANDS UP AND DANCED MADLY TAPPING HER FEET IN THE FLOW OF THE MUSIC..

Yeah..
Dekh tera rang saawla hua baawla
Ladki nahi tu hai garam maamla
Bolti bandh meri, kahun kya bhala
Kuchh bhi kaha nahi jaaye
IT WAS NOT AN INTENSE DANCE…IT WAS A DRUNKEN DANCE WHICH TOOK PLACE WITHOUT THE NOTICE OF RISHA AND THEIR FRIENDS..THEY CHANGED THEIR STEPS..HIS HANDS WERE NOT TRAVELLING RIGHT, THEN TOP , THEN LEFT..HER HANDS FOUND THEIR WAY TO HIS SHOULDERS…HER LEGS WERE JUMPING..!!
Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
Chull chull chull..
Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
Chull chull chull..
In the drunken state they moved towards the reception and booked a room..while the receptionist thought them to be husband-wife..
opening the door of the room, swara found her way to bed and layed abruptly on the bed..still humming the song..
sanskar closing the door, also wanted to rest..he went to the bed, fell on swara..
their face was soo close to each other..swara couldn’t think whats right..whats wrong..she was just hypnotized by his touch..so was he..
Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Aayat ki tarah

he pinned her on the bed.. He lowered his lips to her neck, kissing and licking her neck.. he then brushed his lips on her and kissed her softly.,,to which she responded.
Kaayam tu ho gayi hai
Kaayam tu ho gayi hai
Rivayat ki tarah
Rubbing he back while kissing, he opened the chain of her dress..
He broke the kiss and looked at her with desire filled eyes..they heard a click-type sound as he opened her b**
Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Marne talak rahegi
Marne talak rahegi
Tu aadat ki tarah

He then went down to her cleavage and kissed there…climbing to the neck, he sucked there…leaving a love bite.. “ahh” she moaned..then to sooth her, he sucked the bitten area..and kissed there…
Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
O tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Aayat ki tarah
After some time, teasing her…he gently thrust his manhood into her…
The response was a scream high-pitch tone…!
************
The sun rays fell on his face, disturbing his sleep..he felt something soft under his hand..it took time to realize that he was sleeping naked hugging his foe…
He was shocked, guilty..he quickly got up, without disturbing her sleep, and started changing..
Till then, she also got up..and was shocked to see herself naked and sanskar wearing his shirt…she quickly brought the quilt to her shoulders..
“it was a mistake” he said, genuinely..
“there’s nothing new in that…oh shit man! I lost my that to this jerk” swara said..
they decided to avoid each other, parting their ways after a hot-headed argument..like that, 1 month passed..
Swara was in Kolkata for some more months…why not? She was nominated for the best fashion designer in india!
Her first branch, settled in india, second in dubai, third in London and fourth in Belgium..
Swara walked towards the stage, receiving her award from HIM.. the man who took her virginity.. one and only the sanskar maheshwari..
She received the award..said 2 lines in the pleasure of having that award..
feeling suffocated, she went outside to have some fresh air..
Hanging up a call, liking the weather, he also decided to stay outside..
Feeling dizzy, she leaned on to her car..
Seeing this, sanskar ran towards her to held her..his heart pained to see her fainted..
“congrats mr. maheshwari..your wife is pregnant…but please be careful..and extra causious..she is a very young and slim to carry the baby” the doctor said and left the cabin..
Both looked at each other with horror…shock..

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i am sooo sorry guys, if its too much!! but please,,bear it and give ur reviews,,if its tooo much, then i wont write like this again.. and tvisha, i have send uh fb request…reply me here..so that i can add you,,!!
acha ok! now wait for tomorrow guys, nezt part will be amazing!!
#kritika

Credit to: kritika

66 comments

  1. tani

    it’s d sweetest mistake….m enjoying dis ff…m sure next episode will b more rocking….pls update next part soon…

    • First, u copy my ff… Then, u praise me for the next episodes…then, u ask me to add u as admin in MY SWASAN PAGE…then, say these bl**dy idiotic things..,god! By doing so, u are making me more powerful..u r 18! Right? I’m 13..five years smaller than u! Still much more mature than uh! ?? that’s why u always shows off that u live in USA on ur page too!! Stupid girl!

      • And nd I never asked u that I wanna become admin of ur page.!! I think u got a dream! Now I see,,.ohh!! U
        Hate me coz..u first copied my ff, n I made people hate uh! Ohk dear! There’s none my fault in this.. I don’t care if anyone likes me n my ff or not! I always have my #di with me whenever it comes to swasan!

    • ria

      Then y are you commenting here. Don’t bash a writer because because i am pritty sure you won’t be able to right two lines of a story and Kftitika its a beautiful story yar

  2. Shagun

    Awesome
    If anybody says that they don’t like ur ff and u r downmarket then those people are dumbo and down market
    And ur writing skills are just fab
    Awesome ep
    Plz update epilouge of perfect for each other

  3. Hey Kritika it’s awesome dear my mouth hung open reading ur ss I’m new to ur ffs they are really good u just lately ended one I read last epi will read from starting soon I got interest in ur ffs yaar….and this ss it’s also fab dear….. I’m waiting for next part upload soon ??

  4. sanskriti ( die hard fan of swasan )

    Hi kritika it was just out of my imagination damn superb cant wait to see next epi…. ya don’t feel bad about Tvisha’s words we all r their with u anyways u just rocked today’s epi upload soon…. Luv u loads ??

  5. Harani

    It’s Awesome dr ..Swasan …loved it ..was it a mistake 😛
    for swasan it’s not 🙂

  6. ❤?Natasha?❤

    Superb yaar…u keep me glued to ur story…….can i call u kriti??????????……if u dont lyk u can directly say it to me………..

    • tysm nats..!! (can i call you that?)
      and my all swasanian frnds call me kriti only..!! call me anythng..!! i will be happy!!

  7. Special901

    This is superb yaar n such a beautiful mistake. U’r really good I should have just get you to do my creative essay ?

  8. Kavya

    Hi kritika you’re ff is really good but tht offensive comment which was posted on tvisha’s name is fake someone else is just using it to bash u so please don’t get angry. Tvisha is my frnd nd she herself told me tht she had not sent it please understand?

      • Oh hello…now I’m gonna take a strict action against uh…my request to tellyupdates won’t be denied..n yah..according to uh I’m from village nah,.OK..I’m from a village.. Hpy!? I’m proud to live in a village..it shows I’m a true Indian..I think the words you r saying are taught by ur mom! Huh! Pata nahi kaha kaha sr as jate hai…tu much bhi bol saare log mere hi side me hinge..I,e. Truth ke side me..!! My mom says let whatever say, the same thing applies to them..,
        N whatever my standard is, its far better than uh!
        I don’t feel angry or emotional coz of ur saying, I feel pity on uh..u might be so taken aback by my answers no!
        N I’m 13 n still writing it..I don’t think there’s much mature content in it!
        U have a chance to improve, why don’t u use it? Is is what you have been taught in ur school???

      • Tvisha

        you idiot dont mis use my name and didnt ur parents give u name to use ur name anyways it was me who complained and ur comment is deleted anf if u do it again i am sure i can take action without asking you i swear really and yes i am from usa but an indian citizen yet i lived in all these years and am a south indian i speak indian language and eat india food and yeah you dont have rights to describe people you dont know i just cam in usa and i am proud to be an indian usa i had to come for transfer of dad or else i didnt have any mood shifting from india and yeah I AM 13 STUDYING IN JUNIOUR HIGH NOT AN ADULT TO WRITE SUCH THINGGS!!!

        KRITIKA I REALLY LOVE YOUR FAN FICTIONS KEEP GOING AND YES LEAVE SUCH STUPID PEOPLE WHO COPY OTHERS NAME AND MISUSE THEM AND BRING THE PERSON LEVEL DOWN AND YYEAH I SENT A FB REQUST AND I .LOVE UR FAN FICTION ON UR PAGE PLEASE POST NEXT PART AS SOON AS POSSIBLE I CAN WAIT FOR IT!!!!!!

  9. Nive...

    I dnt knw wat happened here… TU deleted her cmnt so i guess she said something fishy… dnt bother about her dear… 🙂 🙂
    coming to ur epi its awesome… pls post next epi asap… 🙂 🙂

  10. Tvisha

    SORRY KRITIKA BUT IT WASNT ME BECAUSE I JUST CAME FROM INDIA TO USA AND EVEN I AM 13 AND I NEVER COMMENT SUCH THINGS IF U WANT TO CKECK UR FB PLEASSE CHECK I PROMOMSIS I NEVER MISE USED WORDS!!!!

    • I’m really for for all these mess
      .actually she might have used ur name because our relation is not that good..I’m sorry u have stuck here…n the fake Tisha.. If u change ur name also, then the logo will be same..if I see u anywhere offending, I am gonna ban u frm tellyupdates! Get that straight!

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