Milke rahenge jo bane edkv (episode 1)


Story starts after the death of nanu 4 which sumo blames shravan and leave him .
Hi I m kittu from edkv page nd it’s my first attempt ,hope u all will like it.
As I said, Nanu dies nd sumo with his whole family went to America to his bro Anuj and settled there and become the top chef of the world (I mean the best) .
I wanna clear something, sumo nd shravan r now separate as unka divorce ho gaya.Shravu married with Urvashi nd has a son name Harshit.
He is good looking nd want to take over the property of shravan bt shravu knows that he is not a good guy.

And here sumo is in America with his family and 3 children .2 daughters nd a son that son is of her best frnd poorna, she adopted him after his parents death.Only her family knows the truth not the two girls.
This story is abut how shraman meet once again by their children. And remember Harshit is not shravu ‘s son bt of urvashi nd her 1 st husband. Sumo is now prosperous nd the chief of the Union of NGOs in America nd a honourable personality.She is now just like Hitler Didi ,koi kuch nahi bolta uske saamne.Not a single word even Mami bhi darti h bt pyaar sab karte h sumo se nd hate shravan a lot .
This story is after the leap of 20 years.
All r changed now by their look.

Preeti lives with puskar in Malhotra house bt don’t talk to anyone becoz se thinks ki Malhotras ki vajah se hi use uski family chodke chalk gayi.And preekar has a daughter name priyanshi.She is elder than shraman’s children . Priyanshi is in America nd is doing hotel management. And one day she meet Ms.Tiwari who is Sumo , as she is her icon.Sumanshi now know each other very well.And priyanshi calls her Badimom and she also treat her as her daughter bt don’t know that she is also a Malhotra. Here everyone in India is happy becoz it is priyanshi’s marriage.
No one knows here that she knows sumo very well.
Priyanshi invites Ms.Tiwari with his family .So denies as there is some work nd as we know sumo is very conscious towards her work. But says that her family will surely come.
Remember twins r shraman ‘s daughters.But girls knows that their father nahi h.

One girl name Suhani nd another Sreshtha from shraman name( as u can guess) .Suhani is elder than sreshtha and like his father same height bhi nd mind bhi.BT our sreshtha is like our sumo( school time sumo).That adopted boy name is pulkit.Sreshtha nd pulkit have a good bonding they only create problems nd everyone enjoy BT not sumo and suhani ,bas ek cheej me ma pe gayi h.Preeta is also in America with sumo nd now is the manager of Grand PCT.
Suhani hates her father BT is very careful towards her family nd bro,sis and want to prove her in front of world ki WO suman Tiwari ki beti h.

She is very ambitious. And wants to become world’s best lawyer. Well twins r of 19 years old nd pulkit is of 23.Sumo loves her children a lot BT shows that she don’t care them bt all understands her that how good she is.
Now all r coming to India but don’t know ki WO apne Ghar aa rahe h. Malhotra house is not that but now changed. So none of Tiwari have any idea regarding this .BT r happy ki itne saalo baad India ja rahe h. They came 2 that address nd everyone is in shock to see each other .Children went to their room nd are enjoying. Then Mama clear out everything nd says ki hame jaana h bt preeti stops them.They tell ki ye unki granddaughter ki shaadi h .BT all r tensed ki agar sumo ko pata chalega to kya hoga.priyanshi now knows ki ye sab kya h nd go to her maternal family nd greet them.Then shravan get to know that ,the twins r his children bt still considered pulkit as sumo’s son means sumo nd her second husband’s son.well pulkit is very careful abt his maa as like Dev in KRPKAB .And here only on sumo’s zid.And is very strict like present sumo.

Well I hope u all will like nd please give comment. I tried my best .As it was my 1st attempt .I m tired now ,hope to comment soon. BT plez give reply ,I want to write many things bt haath dukh gaye .Anyways batana kaisa lava.Hope to come nd complete this soon.Agar koi bhul chook huye ho to maaf karna.

Credit to: kittu

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  1. Wow amazing loved every 1 🙂

  2. It is very confusing.. I mean.. Who is sumo’s daughters father.. And what not..! I am really confused.. Pls sort it out

    1. So shravan does not know that pulkit is adopted?

  3. Thnx sameera.

  4. He is none other than shravan.Hope I cleared it

  5. No shraman, he don’t know that pulkit is adopted, he consider him as sumo and her second husband’s son.

  6. It’s great dear…..keep it up and keep going
    But I have a lil confusion regarding the characters especially the kids…. But anyway I think it will get clear itself as the story will proceed…… And post the next part soon yr……I will be waiting… It’s quite unique??

  7. Its amazing kittu. U done a great job.really nice.eagarly waiting for next ff.

  8. Thnx khushi, it’s all becoz of u.I’ll surely proceed it soon nd shall clear all your lil confusion. Thanx 4 commenting.

  9. Thnx Bhagyashri.

  10. Keep commenting here.

  11. I m happy as u liked it

  12. Good concept… Keep it up..

  13. Thnx Bhoomi

  14. Awesome

  15. Hope 2 complete it soon

  16. Thnx Anoushka

  17. Kittu it’s very confusing.Who is whose son. But I understood the story. Nice story. Keep it up.

  18. Thnx shalini, well l’ll surely make it clear in my episode 2.

  19. Awesome

  20. @ Dhara ,thnx yaar

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