Mil jate hai jo bane, EK DUJE KE VASTE (Episode 2)

Hey all u lovely people thank you for appreciating my story.. Means a lot … So here we r wid d second part..

Sharavan leaves for Tiwary villa..
Location: Tiwary villa
Shravan n pushkar reaches..
Nanu: tym pr aa gae tm dono … Wo log bhi aate hi honge …
Pushkar looks at preeti n smiles..
The khurannas reach..
Nanu: ( happily) aaiye aaiye..
Mr. Khuranna hugs him ..
Mr. K : bohot acha lga apse milke Tiwary ji…
Nanu: mujhe bhi … Kitne dino baad mila hun tmse..
Ye… Tumhara beta?
The ” groom to be ” touches his feet..
Nanu : jeete rho… Kya naam h beta tmhara??
Groom : prem sir, prem khurrana ..
He greets evry body n all of dem sit down to have a chit chat.. Shravan looks at prem
Nanu : preeti,, ja beta suman ko le aaa…
Preeti : ji,,
Preeti goes to suman ..
Here suman was wearing a navy blue suit n her hair curled.. N was lookin gorgeous..
Preeti : bohot pretty lg rae ho..
Suman smiles..
Preeti : di ldka bohot handsome h ,, bilkul hero jaisa.. ( den looks at a sad suman) ar di shravan v aa gae hai…
Suman looks at her..
They leave … While going to d living room suman was staring at the ground ,, so dat she could not see shravan..
Here shravan was looking at suman n thinking how beautiful she was looking..
( ek duje ke vaste .. Plays)
Mrs k : maanna hoga Tiwary ji,, bohot sundar h apki suman…
Suman touches dere feet n den sits down..
She again stands up to serve tea to everybody..
Wen she gives it to shravan he looks at her dey share a small eyelock..
Suman sits down n all start to talk ..
Suman looks at prem who was smiling at her already..
Shravan notices it..
Mrs k : Tiwary ji,, agr apko thik lge to inn dono ko aapas me baat krne de,, akhir shadi to inhe hi krni h..
Nanu: kyu nai,, bilkul .. Ja suman prem ko garden me le ja…
Mrs k : waise aplogo be ek baat notice ki!! Dono k naam prem ar suman ( everyone laughs except shravan.) ( * prem n suman .. D Maine pyar kia jodi*) jaise ek dusre k lye hi bne ho …
Suman looks at a hurt shravan ..
Prem shys n all of dem smiles..
Suman moves forward but her duppatta gets stuck in the sofa.. She was about to fall shravan gets up in concern but prem holds suman …
Prem : tm thk ho?
Suman : haan mai thk hu..
Thanks…
Shravan was insecure but could nt understand his own state..
Suman n prem go to d garden..
Prem: amm… Aap … Ahh samajh hi nai aa ra kya kahu..
Suman : amm.. Mujhe v..
Prem: mai apne bare me apko kuch btaata hun..
Naam to mera bilkul filmy hai .. Pr mai hu bohot simple sa… MBA kia hai job krta hun.. Ar bohot choti choti kwahisen h meri ..mom dad k sath khushi khushi rhna..
Zindgi ko simply beautifully jeena…
Ar ek asi partner Jo bilkul.. ( he luks at suman who was listening to him carefully) apki trh ho..
I mean… Amm.. Suman smiles…
Prem : bohot bol dia Maine ab aap apne bare me kuch btaie…
Suman : mai… Kya kahu.. Mere ma papa nai h iss duniya me..,, nanu ne hi mujhe sambhala h… To ab Jo v nanu chahe…
Prem : to iska mtlb kya aap iss rishtey se khush nai h!?
Suman was stuck she remembers shravan … N she gets numb ..
Prem : dekhiye agr aap iss rishtey se khush nai hai to koi pressure nai h.. Apki khushi se zada kuch ar important nai h…
Suman : nai.. Aisi.. Aisi koi baat nai hai…
Prem gives his hand to suman …
Prem : koi v decision lene se phle suman ,, kya aap meri dost bnengi!?
Suman smiles n shakes his hand..
Prem : trust me jb v apko lge k ap iss rishtey k lye taiyyar hai tb hi haan khiyega.. I ll wait for u..
Suman smiles …
Prem : ab chle?
Suman : haan..
They come in… Everyone was staring at dem…
Prem : kya??
Everyone looks here n dere ..
Prem : nanaji mai apse kuch khna chahta hu..
Nanu : haan kaho ..beta..
Prem : mere samajh se shadi ek bohot bda faisla h.. Ar itne important faisle ko hme soch samajh k lena chahye… Mai kehna chahta hu ki mujhe ar suman ko ek do baar ar milna chahye..
Everybody was stunned..
Mrs k : prem ye kya keh ra h tu!?
Nanu : nai ,, ye bilkul sahi keh ra h… Hm 21vi sadi me reh rae h,, ar itna bharosa to hme apne bchho pe krna hi chahye… Koi chota mota faisla nai hai jeevan bhr ka faisla hai..
Bht samajhdaar h apka beta…
Everybody was happy ..
Suman looks at shravan who gives a thumbs up to her…
She is pained..
She bids a bye to everyone n goes to her room…
Tiwary family was happy wid d proposal..
Mamiji : ab jld se jld suman ki shadi nipta dete hai taki hmari preeti ki v shadi ho sake…
Suman hears dis n is really upset..
Suman locks herself in d bathroom n cries … ( agar tum saath ho plays… She turns the shower on n cries her heart out n remember her moments wid shravan .. )
Suman : aksar jisse chaha usse kho dia Maine..
She cries … After some time she goes out n sees herself in d mirror she is all wet..
Someone enters her room..
Suman : preeti plz mujhe abhi baat nai krni..
She turns to see shravan ..
Shravan : ( concerned) sumo.. Ye,, kya haalat bna li hai tumne apni …
Suman : WO… ( tries to control her emotions)
Mai.. Wo fresh .. Fresh hone gai thi…
Pr shayd .. Mmm.. Shower ka nal kharab h.. To ye sb …
N turns her back to him..
Shravan goes to the bathroom n sees everything is fyn…
Shravan : sumo stop lieing ,, ar kya hua h btao mujhe..
Tmhe WO ldka psnd nai aaya.. Tm mujhe btao mai abhi..
Suman : asi .. Asi koi baat nai h sh.. Shravan … Mujhe prem bohot acha lga.. Wo bohot acha ldka hai.. Usne mujhe smjhne ki koshish ki… Ar bohot suljha hua h … Bilkul mujhse ulta…
N she smiles ..
Shravan is hurt after hearing dis from Suman..
Shravan : ab tm itni tareef kr rai ho to hoga kuch to khas usme…pr fr tmhari aankhon me aansun..
Suman wipes her tears n takes a step forward facing her back to shravan …
Suman : asi koi baat nai hai shravan …mai to..
Shravan holds her hand n pulls her to himself.. They were now close to each other..
Shravan : jhuth mt bolo sumo..
They share an eye lock … ( hothon pe Teri shikwon ka shor hai .. Plays)
Sumo gets out of his grip n goes towards her cupboard..
Suman : asi koi baat nai h shravan .. Ar ab tm jao yha se mujhe change krna h..
Shravan luks at her …
Den leaves ….
Suman cries…
Night
Location: shravan’s room
Shravan was trying to sleep but could not …
He was remembering prem wid suman…
How he held her..
Shravan : ye.. Ye kya ho ra h mere sath ..
Itna restless ar ajeeb kyu feel ho ra h..
Jaise koi bohot important cheez mere hathon se chuth rai ho…
(He remembers his eyelock wid suman..)
To kya mai ..sumo se…
( he thinks about sumo n smiles) Jo bhi ho jb tk mujhe pta nai chl jata meri anxiety ka reason mai sumo ko shadi to nai krne de skta… ( n he smiles)

Next part coming soon
Dis part was full of drama..
Next will be light hearted..
Plz keep ur comments coming n share with ur frnds too..
Actually I want pursue a career in writing…
Plz let me know if m apt for d job n u guys rock… Really…. :-* ๐Ÿ™‚

Credit to: sumo

16 comments

  1. Oendila

    Very good progress… & very good story… Well I feel something like this to be telecasted soon… & u can be a very good writer…. But plz unite Shravan & Suman in ur story… Earnest request…

  2. I really wish ki serial Mein bhi aisa kuch ho…I really loved it..u described it very well,..Eagerly waiting for the next part.. ?

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