Mil jate hai jo bane, EK DUJE KE VASTE (Episode 1)

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hey guys!! if u remember me ,, m really new here.. n dis is my very first fan fiction..
dis is not a sort of new story but just a continuation of current track wid my twists.. 😉 so, here it goes..

the current shadi track of EDKV ..
suman just gives up on shravan n accepts dat he is not in love wid her..
she is heartbroken n decides to just follow wat her nanu asks her to do..
she decides she won’t reveal her feelings to shravan as it will just increase complications..
location : sumans room
preeti comes in ,
preeti : Di!!

suman was lost in her thoughts ..
preeti: Di!??
suman: hmh!!? preeti??
preeti : kha khoye ho aap??
suman : ( stands up n goes to d window ) kuch
nai.. mai thk hun.. tu yha???
preeti : WO… mumy ne apko taiyyar hone ko kha ladke wale aate hi honge…
suman : (gets sad) hmmhh.. abhi aati hun..

preeti : Di ! mai apse ek baat puchu??
suman : (smiles) puch na pretty preeti …
preeti : (comes to her) app… shravan se pyar
krte ho??
suman looks at her,
suman : pagal hai ky? kuch bhi bolti hai,, mai ar
shravan bs…….
preeti : dost hai,, yhi na ?? ye baat apki zaban to
bol rai hai pr aankhen nai..
suman : ( tear drops roll down her cheeks but a smile struggles out) bohot badi badi baten krne
lgi hai tu.
preeti smiles..
suman : haan , krti hun use pyar ,, pr pyar pe to
bad nai h wo to bs ho jata h …..
preeti : to fr ap usse keh kyu nai deti ??
suman : ( rolls her eyes) WO mujhse pyar nai
krta…

preeti : ar ye apko shravan ne btaya??
suman : preeti tu samajh nai rai ,, hr cheez btani nai pdti kuch cheezee bs samajh aa jati h…
preeti : kaaise?
suman : WO…. dekh agr so mujhse pyar krta to kya meri shadi hote dekh itna khush hota??
mai apni feelings bta me apni ar uski dosti me awkwardness nai Lana chahti…
preeti thinks on it,, n suddenly hugs suman
diiiiiii…!!!!!
suman : bas bas ( smiles) taiyyar hone de..
preeti goes ……
suman wipes her tears n looks at her moms photo…
location: malhotra house
shravan was getting ready ,,
someone enters his room he smiles while wearing his shirt..
shravan : sumo tm kbhi knock krke nai aaogi na
n turns to see pushkar ..
pushkar : bhaiyya?
shravan : WO… ahh mujhe lga….

pushkar : sorry I forgot to knock …
shravan : are ,, chore!!!
pushkar : pr bhaiyya fr v sumo…. WO yha kaise aaegi usko to aj ldke wale dekhne as rae hai.
shravan : haan …. WO kaise as skti hai…
puskar : bhaiyya apne socha that it I jldi ase sumo ki shadi fix ho jaegi….???
shravan looks at him
pushkar: I mean mujhe to bohot bura lgega meri dost ase achanak hmesha k lye chli jaegi…
shravan smiles n remember his memories wid sumo…
pushkar : anyways chlo hme chlna h ..
shravan : tu chl m just coming
pushkar goes…
shravans POV
Ye kya ho gya h mujhe , mujhe sumo k lye khush hona change.. bura kyu lg ra h…
he thinks about his love letter for sumo ” is dis love..” no dat was a childish act … I was immature… sumo bs meri dost hai ar kuch nai…
pushkar : bhaiyya !!!
shravan gets up wears his jacket n goes……

next part coming up soon

let me kno how it was please ….
feedback needed ..
critism is also invited.. 😀

Credit to: sumo

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19 Comments
  1. Ohhh..its u sumo..its awesome yaar..so shravu ko bhi bura lagne laga hai??
    superb

    1. thanks abhi ,, some spelling mistakes … auto correct u kno… a lot more to come just stay tuned.. 😋

    2. thanks guys.. 🙂

  2. This was very gud FF of Ek Duje Ke Vaaste & it’s similar to the track being played in the serial…. Very nice… Hope something like this is picturised soon… Keep on writing…

  3. Ncy….

  4. This is truly wonderful and I felt as if reading the epi of EDKV .superb yaar keep writing

  5. Hope this soon gets includeed in the serial…post soon

  6. This was amazing……. I also want this to happen in the serial

  7. Superb sumo……

  8. It was nice…
    Keep up the good work.

  9. Very nice sumo

  10. Fatarajo(KRPKAB n EDKV fan)

    Wow sumo it’s nice 🙂

  11. heena mutreja

    nice update

  12. tysm guys really means a lot !! lot of drama to come
    😛

  13. waw cute episode…loved it… 🙂

  14. hiiii sumo…episode 2nd kb upload kroge…

    1. submit kr dia h ankita.. coming soon..
      thanks for the love… 🙂

  15. Superb. Pls don’t make them confess so soon

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