Meri Zindhagi (AvNeil – Naamkaran Fan Fiction) (Episode 11)

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Hi friends.I hope you all liked the 10th episode . And yeah I can’t be regular so after the episode I’ll tell when will I update the next episode . I’ll try to give big episodes . if there’s any grammatical errors I’m sorry .Please bear with me as this is my first Fan Fiction . And I might be adding some AvNeil scenes from the serial but it will be a bit different. Hope you all will like it.

I’ll mainly focus only on AvNeil story .

If you have missed the 10th episode here’s the link

Episode 10

Enjoy the episode
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EPISODE 11

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Scene 1:
Mehta mansion – Dayawanti’s room

In the evening

Dayawanti’s room

Dayaben is sitting on her bed . She seems to be sad and she’s seen talking to ashish , deeksha and ketan .

Dayawanti : I don’t know why god has still kept me alive and ….

Ashish : (cuts Dayawanti in between ) ma why are you talking like this ?

Dayawanti : I just feel like ….

Ashish : (cuts Dayawanti in between ) ma please don’t say like this and Don’t stress yourself.

Deeksha : ma just because you got a heart attack that doesn’t mean that you’ll die . Many people are surviving with this and after taking care of themselves now they’re absolutely fine . You’ll be fine too .

Ketan : Just a matter of some days ma . You’ll feel bit tried but You’ll be fine .

Dayawanti : I don’t want to be here .

Deeksha : What do you mean by you don’t want to be here ?

Dayawanti : I feel disturbed . And I don’t want to be here that’s it . I want to go to rajkot back again . I’ll feel relaxed if I go there . Just book a ticket right now

Ashish : ma seriously ? Today morning only you got discharged but you’re saying that you want to travel ?

Ketan : ma but you need to rest

Dayawanti : (signals ketan to stop talking ) I’m absolutely fine . Please just book a ticket for me .

Ashish , deeksha and ketan see each other

Deeksha : ok ma . We’ll check .

Ashish , deeksha and ketan come out of the room .

Ketan : Ashish bhai do you think It will be safe for mom to travel ?

Ashish : even I’m thinking about the same .

Deeksha : I think it’s  better to ask to the doctor .

Ashish : yeah let’s ask the doctor . So that we might know whether ma can travel in this condition or not .

Scene 2:
Khanna mansion and Mehta mansion – Neil’s room and Avni’s room

Neil keeps thinking about Avni .

Neil : how dare that girl Avni Mehta can mess with me ? Thank god her brother took her away and left .

He remembers Aman acting weird seeing him .

Neil : why did that Avni mehta’s brother was acting weird when I said I’m a police officer ?

He then remembers Avni calling her brother Aman .

Neil : wait wait …. that Avni called her brother Aman ….. and … that avni’s sur name is Mehta . Let me recollect Avni called her brother Aman . And her sur name is Mehta . That means ….. Her brother is Aman Mehta !

Neil is shocked to know that avni’s brother is Aman Mehta .

Neil : (keeps his hand on his head) oh god ! How did I just …. That Aman Mehta was in front of me and I just … I missed him ! WHY AM I LIKE THIS !

Neil gets frustrated .

Neeraj and DD enter Neil’s room and they see Neil .

Neeraj : (to neil) bhai What happened ?

DD : sir is everything ok ?

Neil : (sits down and nods no) nothing is fine DD …. nothing . We missed him .

DD & Neeraj : Who ?

Neil : THAT AMAN MEHTA WAS IN FRONT OF OUR EYES AND WE MISSED HIM DD !

DD : (confused) Wait What ? Aman Mehta ? How did we miss him ? And when did we see Aman Mehta ?

Neil : DD remember that girl Avni ? Aman Mehta is her brother!

DD : Sir I’m confused . How is Aman Mehta related to Miss Avni ?

Neil : when I and Avni were arguing she mentioned her full name that is “Avni Mehta” . When her brother came and asked her what is she doing while I was talking with Avni , She called her brother “Aman bhai” . So see Avni’s surname is Mehta and her Brother’s name is Aman .

DD : That means he’s Aman Mehta ?

Neil : yeah DD .

DD : Sir but how can you be sure that Miss Avni’s brother is that same  Aman Mehta who is involved in this case ?

Neil : When I mentioned that I’m a police officer He started acting weird . And he wanted to leave that place as soon as possible so that we won’t doubt him .

DD : Sir we need to do something As soon as possible . We need to catch him and arrest him soon .

Neil : No. Unless we have or get any proof against him we can’t arrest him . We need to talk to Avni regarding her brother . DD you said you have that girl Avni’s number right ?

DD : yes sir .

Neil : give her number to me . I’ll call her .

DD : ok sir

DD gives avni’s number to Neil .

In Avni’s room

Riya , Avni and Aman enter Avni’s room

Avni is upset as Neil threw her bag and she lost some of her anime series .

Avni : I lost everything ! I lost my favourite anime series !

Aman : (rolls his eyes) you’re saying this for the 100th time ! I’ll get you a new cartoon series DVD …

Avni : (cuts Aman in between) OH GOD ! WHY DON’T YOU GET THE FACT THAT ANIME IS NOT CARTOON !

Aman : (gets annoyed) STOP ACTING LIKE A KID AVNI AND STOP YELLING AT ME FOR A SMALL THING !

Riya : CAN YOU GUYS JUST KEEP QUITE (to Aman) leave her alone She’s already pissed off !

Aman : but she’s (he suddenly gets a call and gets tensed seeing the phone) Ah… I’ll be right back

Aman goes out

Riya : (confused) what’s wrong with Aman ? He’s acting very weird these days . Anyways who cares ? now I’m going to my room .

Riya leaves the room .

Avni : (sits on her bed) I’m bored .

Avni gets a call from Tara

Avni : (in call) Hi Tara .

Tara : Hey Avni . Tomorrow are you coming for the wedding right ?

Avni : (confused) Wedding? Whose wedding ?

Tara : WHAT ! You forgot about our friend Maya who was also working with us in School as an English teacher ? How did you forget about that ? She even personally invited us for her wedding !

Avni : oh god ! I’m so sorry . After Daadi fixed my marriage I left the job and i was not in touch with anyone and now I’m just working with music director Vidyut so I …..

Tara : anyways forget that . You’ll come na ?

Avni : of course . Tomorrow morning I’ll come to Sukoon house and let’s go together .

Tara : ok . tomorrow come soon . We’ll be waiting for you .bye.

Avni : bye .

Avni cuts the call .

Avni : oh god how did I even forget about my friend’s wedding ? I need to attend that . But before that I’ll call Vidyut inform him that I won’t be coming tomorrow and if I talk to him for sometime I’ll feel relaxed .

Avni tries to call Vidyut but he doesn’t pick up .

Avni : what happened to this Vidyut now ? I’ll better call Reyhanaa . She might be there in office . She might know where’s Vidyut .

Avni calls reyhanaa .

In Neil’s place .

Neil tries to call Avni but she’s busy as she’s talking to someone else . He again tries .

Neil : oh god this girl …. seems like she’s on another call .

Neil tries to call Avni .

In avni’s room

Avni is talking to Reyhanaa .

Reyhanaa : (picks the call) Avni ?

Avni : Hey Reyhanaa .

Reyhanaa : Hey ! How are you now ?

Avni : I’m good

Reyhanaa : And Sorry …. I head that your marriage didn’t happen .

Avni : Hmm … yeah . I ran away .

Reyhanaa : Really ? And thank god your marriage didn’t happen . When Vidyut learnt that you were getting married he was  ……

Avni : Vidyut was ?

Reyhanaa : nothing . Anyways forget it . But yeah why did you suddenly call me ?

Avni : yeah . It’s about Vidyut . He’s not even picking up my call . Do you know where he is ?

Reyhanaa : Ugh . He didn’t come to office since 2 days . (Some one calls her saying that she should come for meeting right now) Hey Avni I need to go . But yeah I have his another personal number . It’s his new number .  I’ll ask him to call you right now. Ok now bye .

Reyhanaa cuts the call

Avni : but wait … anyways fine .

Avni lies on her bed and stares at the ceiling .

In Neil and avni’s place

Neil is finally able to call Avni .

Neil : (calls avni )

Avni gets a call from unknown number .

Avni : (takes her phone) Unknown number ?

She remembers Reyhanaa saying that she’ll ask Vidyut to call her from his personal number .

Avni : (smiles) I know it’s definitely Vidyut

Avni picks up the call and she starts talking continuously thinking that it’s Vidyut .

Avni : (receives the call) Hey Vidyut ! Where are you man ? You are not even picking up my calls ? Are you that busy ? Thank god You finally called me now .

Neil : (thinks) Vidyut ? Now who’s that ? (To avni) hey I’m Ne…

Avni : Vidyut What happened to your voice ? Anyways who cares about that . You know what ? I want to tell many things ..

Neil : hey listen to me I’m not .. …..

Neil accidentally puts the phone on speaker

Avni : (keeps talking and doesn’t listen to neil) you know I’m in a very bad mood . You know what happened today Vidyut ?

Neil : Let me talk and listen to me first . I’m not …

Avni : I’ll listen to you later . Today I again met that CRACK ACP NEIL KHANNA in the mall . You know because of him I dropped my favourite chocolate ice cream . You know what I did ? I spread that ice cream on his face ! And his face looked like a monkey

Neil gets angry . Neeraj and DD are trying to control their laughter .

Neil : (thinks) why is she saying about this to everyone ! And how dare she call me monkey and crack again ! She’s mad !

Neeraj : (to DD) oh my god she calls bhai crack , monkey ? Nice …

Neil stares at DD and Neeraj .

Neil puts the phone in normal mode .

Neil : (to Avni) can you stop ….

Avni : (cuts Neil in between ) I won’t stop talking and yeah if I see that crack again I would punch on his face for sure!

Neil : (gets angry) OH SHUT UP ! WILL YOU EVEN LET ME TALK ?

Avni : Vidyut What happened to you ? Your voice sounds strange and why are you behaving like this ?

Neil : OH GOD !  I’M NOT VIDYUT ! I’M ACP NEIL KHANNA !

Avni : (confused) WAIT WHAT ??? ACP Neil Khanna ?

Neil : yes it’s me !

Avni : (confused) Then …. I was not speaking to Vidyut Ah ? And you were the one who called me Ah ?

Neil : Yes I was the one who called you now and you were talking to me . Stop acting Dumb .

Avni : Why the hell you didn’t tell that you are mr.crack ? And how did you get my number ?

Neil : Did you even let me speak ? You were talking continuously ! and yeah now listen to me …

Avni : I WON’T TALK TO YOU ! BYE !

Avni cuts the call

Neil : I SAID LISTEN … WHAT THE HELL ! SHE CUT THE CALL ! HOW DARE SHE …

Neeraj : Bhai do you think she’ll talk to you after the Ice cream incident which happened between you both in the mall ?

Neil : (sees Neeraj) Wait .. how do you know about this ?

Neeraj : (points towards DD ) first DD told me . I didn’t believe at first but after what that girl Avni said in the phone I understood that DD was saying the truth .

Neeraj and DD laugh .

Neil : Yaar DD why did you ?

Neeraj : bhai but seriously no one had the guts to behave like this with you . But that girl … she spreaded ice cream on your face . I wish I was there to see your ice cream spread face my bro .

Neil :  Neeraj …. you know what ….. never mind. DD you call her She might listen to you . And put the phone in speaker mode .

DD : hmm … fine sir.

DD calls Avni

Avni : (picks the call) YOU ACP CRACK KHANNA ! NOW CALLING FROM OFFICER DARSHAN’S PHONE ?

Neil gets annoyed and Neeraj keeps laughing

DD : No No relax ! it’s not crack it’s me Officer Darshan Dhawan .

Neil stares at DD when he calls him crack .

DD : I mean it’s not Neil sir I’m officer Darshan

Avni : Thank god its you . Do you know what happened  in the mall today ?

DD : of course I know everything . I was very much present there .

Avni : YOU KNOW WHAT I WISH I COULD PUNCH THAT ACP NEIL KHANNA RIGHT NOW .

Neil gets annoyed .

DD : (sees Neil) Miss Avni …. he’s standing beside me and the phone is in speaker .

Avni : let him hear I don’t care .

Neil : (takes the phone from DD) ANYWAYS ! NOW LISTEN TO ME CRAZY GIRL ! It’s important …

Avni : Why should I listen to you ? And what’s so important that you want to discuss it with me ?

Neil : it’s important .. it’s about .. it’s about a case … so listen .

Avni : (cuts Neil in between) if you want me to listen first ask sorry for behaving rudely with me and thank me for saving your life that day .

Neil : WHAT ! NO WAY !

Avni : if you don’t then bye .

Neeraj : (to DD) seriously bhai won’t apologise .

DD : (to Neeraj) true …

Neil : (to Avni ) OK FINE !

Avni : Good for you

Neil : (in an annoyed tone) Miss Avni I’m extremely sorry for behaving rudely with you and  yeah thanks for saving my life .

Avni : Apology accepted and you’re welcome .

Neeraj and DD get surprised seeing Neil apologising to Avni

Neil : Now listen to me . I want to discuss about an important case with you .

Avni : Important case ?

Neil : yes . I can only talk about that if we meet each other . Can we meet tomorrow morning ?

Avni : Wait Wait Wait …. why can’t you just tell about that in phone ?

Neil : (annoyed) it’s …. it’s important . Try to understand .  So can we meet tomorrow morning at 11am ?

Avni : But I need to go to my friend’s wedding . I can’t ……

Neil : (cuts Avni in between) We are definitely meeting tomorrow ! Or else  I’ll come to your place ….

Avni : NO NO ! Well I’m going to my friend’s wedding at the same time. Before that I need to go to Sukoon ghar too .

Neil : We have to meet ! No excuses . Because it’s really important . I’m requesting you !

Neeraj and DD are surprised seeing Neil’s behaviour .

Avni : Oh My God ! You … Mr. Neil Khanna … You are Requesting me ?

Neil : (rolls his eyes) yes ! I’m requesting you . So Please .

Avni : Hmm … As you’re requesting me a lot I’ll try to meet you before that . Let’s meet At 10am .

Neil : fine then . We are meeting in chamko café , shastri Nagar . Ok ?

Avni : ok then .

Neil : Be there on time !

Avni : I KNOW !

Avni cuts the call .

Neil : (gives the phone to DD) this girl is seriously crazy !

Neeraj : I think She’s not crazy . Seems like She’s kinda kiddish that’s it . And yeah for the first time I’m seeing Mr.Neil khanna apologising , thanking and requesting a girl .

Neil : (rolls his eyes and he’s sits on his bed) Neeraj … I was helpless . Anyways .DD now you go and collect all the information about Aman Mehta .

DD : yes sir .

DD goes out .

Neeraj : ok then . Even I have some work . See you later bhai .

Neeraj too leaves .

Neil : (to himself) I hope this girl Avni helps me .

Scene 3 :
Mehta mansion – Avni’s room , hall

In avni’s room

Avni gets ready for her friend’s wedding and she calls Tara .

Avni : (in call) hey Tara . I’m ready and I’ll come to Sukoon house in few minutes . But before that I need to go somewhere . But don’t worry I’ll come soon .

Tara : ok fine

Avni cuts the call

Avni : I need to met that crack today . Or else he might come to my place too . But I want someone to drop me …… Let me ask Aman bhai .

Avni goes to the hall and sees Aman .

Avni : thank god bhai you are here .

Aman : Avni where are you going ?

Avni : to my friend’s marriage . But before that I need to go to chamko café . Will you come with me ? Please ?

Aman : Umm. Ok . Let’s go .

Avni and Aman leave the house .

Scene 4:
Chamko café

Neil is seen sitting on a bench and he’s waiting for Avni .

Neil : (sees his watch) now the time is 10:02am . This girl said we’ll be meeting at 10am . She’s not punctual and She’s insane .

Aman and Avni reach the chamko café .

Aman : What are you going to do here ?

Avni : I have to meet that crack .

Aman : eh ? who’s that crack ?

Avni : He’s a stupid guy . You wait here or else You come with me .

Aman : Ugh ok I’ll come with you .

Avni and Aman enter the café . Neil sees Avni and Aman entering .

Avni sees Neil and goes near him .

Aman is shocked to see Neil there .

Episode ends

Precap : Neil and Aman have an argument . Neil plans to catch Aman red handedly . Samrat gets a new bike for his 19th birthday . Saisha and other kids requests Avni and Tara to book tickets and take them all for watching The IPL match Chennai Super Kings Vs Mumbai Indians in the Wankhede stadium .

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I’m so sorry for updating late . I was busy with exams and my schedule And I was not in a mood to write 😅😅😅 . If the episode is bad I’m sorry for that . I hope you all liked this episode and yeah silent readers do read , like and comment if you like the episode .

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32 Comments
  1. Deeyaana

    Aww love it and you Ayesha.. 🙂 🙂

  2. Nyc . R u a crket fan

  3. Nice episode

  4. Pavithra1616

    Really superb! Loved it to the core! Do update soon! Best of luck for ur exams!!

  5. ImRagela

    Wow akka..This is so superb episode..I just loved the phone convo between Avneil..So funny and lovely…And ya r u csk fan ?…Me too i am a very big fan..Specially Dhoni ..Waiting for the next ..Love u 💕👍

  6. Lovely episode 😘😘😘😘💕💕💕

  7. Your episodes are really amazing. Waiting for your next update

  8. CSK and mi are my fav teams luved the episode

  9. Ur ff is sooooo good and not boring ok but update soon I was waiting for a long rime

  10. Priyu

    It’s awesome 😍😍😍 loved the conversation between Avneil 😍😍😍 Update next one soon 😘😘 want to what will happen between Aman and Neil

  11. Awesome 😍😘

  12. Sana.

    superb episode. the conversation of avneil is one level up.your ff is not at all boring. update the next one soon.

  13. Hasinasoghra

    Nice episode

  14. Lovely episode 😍 especially avanil convo and nice precap

  15. Very nice

  16. Ayesha_malhotra

    Sorry for the delay . Episode 13 will be posted soo

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