Hi friends.I hope you all liked the 8th episode . And yeah I can’t be regular so after the episode I’ll tell when will I update the next episode . As I’m currently in 11th grade and I have exams now so I can only post short episodes. I’ll try to give big episodes . From April 3rd I’ll try to give big episodes . if there’s any grammatical mistakes I’m sorry . Please bear with me as this is my first Fan Fiction . And I might be adding some AvNeil scenes from the serial but it will be a bit different. Hope you all will like it.
If you have missed the 8th episode here’s the link
Enjoy the episode .
Scene 1 :
Mehta mansion – hall , Avni’s room and Aman’s room
In Aman’s room
Aman again gets call from the person again
Aman : (in the call) hello … umesh see … let’s do one thing . If you really want to discuss about the dealers let’s meet In Phoenix at 1pm ok ? Now bye . Let’s meet there .
Aman cuts the call and leaves the room
In the hall
Avni comes to the hall
Avni : did Daadi come ?
Ketan : not yet .
Aman too comes to the hall .
Dayawanti returns from hospital and everyone are happy seeing her.
Dayawanti enters the house
Avni : (gets happy seeing Dayaben) Daadi …
Dayaben smiles seeing Avni and everyone . Avni hugs her.
Ketan : ma I’m so glad that you’re fine .
Dayawanti : yes . By god’s grace I’m fine .
Dayawanti sits on the chair .
Hetal : ma how are you feeling now .
Dayawanti : good .
Hetal : now you need to take medicines properly on time . Take care of yourself
Dayawanti : yeah yeah …. Asha Now take me to my room I feel bit tied .
Asha : ok
Asha takes Dayawanti to her room .
Aman goes near Avni and tries to talk to her
Aman : Avni ……
Avni angrily stares at Aman and she goes from that place .
Aman feels bad . Riya sees this .
Riya : (goes near Aman) now what happened to her ?
Aman : I just shouted at her . And she got angry . I need to do something so that I can change her mood.
Aman and Riya go to avni’s room .
In avni’s room
Avni is seen watching anime on her computer . Aman and Riya enters avni’s room .
Aman & Riya : Hey Avni (sits on her bed)
Avni : hey Riya .
Avni sees Aman and gets annoyed
Aman stares at Avni and he smiles
Aman : Avni I said hi .
Avni pretends as if she didn’t hear Aman .
Riya : what are you watching ?
Avni : Death note .. I love this anime a lot
Aman : (laughs) Avni are you a kid ? You still watch cartoons ?
Avni : (stares at Aman) that’s Anime !
Aman : yeah that’s what I meant . You still watch cartoons like kids .
Avni : (stands) Do you have any problem if I watch anime ?
Aman : eh… Avni I didn’t mean that …
Avni : (cuts Aman in between) and yeah Anime is not cartoon ! Now leave from this room and let me watch the anime peacefully !
Aman : (rolls his eyes) Avni … (holds his ears) I’m sorry . I didn’t mean to hurt you .
Avni stares at Aman .
Aman : I’m sorry .
Aman does 10 sit-ups . Avni smiles .
Avni : Apology accepted .
Aman : (gets relieved) thank god .
Avni hugs Aman .
Riya : what about me ? Did you guys forget me ?
Avni : offo Riya .. come on join
The trio hug each other .
Avni : (breaks the hug) but still . Why did you cut the call when I entered ?
Aman : (thinks) what to say ?
Riya : even I noticed . You were acting suspicious Aman .
Aman : Erhh … pla … plan !
Riya & Avni : plan ?
Aman : umm… actually we all were busy these days and we didn’t have time to talk or enjoy … so I planned to take you all somewhere like trekking or ..
Riya and Avni see each other . They get excited and they start jumping and shouting . They hug Aman
Riya & Avni : (in excitement) YAYYYYY! (They hug Aman)
Aman closes his ears
Aman : Stop shouting … and don’t squeeze me !!
Riya and Avni break the hug . Deeksha comes inside
Deeksha : My god ! Aman , Riya , Avni … stop shouting ! If you keep shouting like this we all will become deaf one day !
Aman : I was not shouting deeksha bua !
Deeksha : I don’t care about all that . You all just have in mind that your Daadi Dayawanti Mehta is a heart patient . She needs to rest . So don’t shout .
Deeksha leaves from that place .
Riya : Aman you could have told us .
Aman : I wanted it to be a surprise . That’s why .
Avni : So tell me . Where are we going ?
Aman : I want you guys to decide . But before that let’s go and shop right now .
Riya & Avni get surprised
Riya : Aman … are you serious ?
Aman : yes !
Avni : You are talking about shopping and you’re planning to takes to shopping
Aman : Yes ! And yeah if you ask another question again I won’t take you for shopping .
Riya : ok fine we won’t question you anymore . But you have to pay all our bills .
Aman : (rolls his eyes) ok fine ! now let’s go and get ready .
Avni : yeah ..
Riya and Aman leave avni’s room
In Aman’s room
Aman : (to himself) I’m sorry Riya and Avni . I lied to you guys again about the trekking thing . If I take you guys to the no one will doubt me . I’m so sorry . But what to do i’m helpless .
Aman , Avni and Riya get ready and they leave the house .
Police station and Neil’s home
Neil reaches the police station and he goes to his place . Neil’s team (DD,Suketu,Kamal,jaspreet , nishant )enters the room and they salute Neil .
Neil : DD so did you get the information ?
DD : yes sir
DD gives the file to Neil . Neil starts reads the file .
Suketu : So sir …
Neil : (cuts Suketu in between) don’t disturb me when I’m reading .
Suketu : Sorry sir.
Neil reads the file and keeps it on the table .
Neil : hmm .. so as DD said … it’s about stolen bikes are being sold illegally by some group of people . Right?
Jaspreet : yes sir . A person who’s name is umesh Gupta got caught and he’s a member of that gang .
Suketu : And we made him say about what all he knows about this group .
Jaspreet : A person named Karan Kukreja who is also know as K.K is the leader of the gang .
Neil : K.K …. now Give me the details of the other people who are in this gang involved in this .
DD,Suketu,Kamal,jaspreet , nishant look each other
Neil : (rolls his eyes) can anyone give me the details of the gang ?
Nishant : Sir we don’t have any other information about the gang .
Neil stares at everyone .
Kamal : b.. but ..
Neil : (cuts kamal in between) What ba ba ? Tell properly kamal .
Kamal : Sorry .. I mean we do have some information about another guy about whom umesh told us now . We told him to make a call to that person and talk . We tracked them on call and we got some information . Seems like they were planning to meet in phoenix shopping mall today at 1:00pm and they were talking about that .
Neil : any other information about them ?
DD gives a file to neil
DD : we just collected the information about these 2 . The details are in the file .
Neil takes the file and starts reading
Neil : So The 1st one is this Umesh Gupta and the 2nd one is …. Aman Mehta . So DD I need all the information about Aman Mehta . And yeah we need to go to Phoenix mall soon …. And yeah do you think Aman Mehta knows that umesh Gupta got caught by us ?
Nishant : no sir . He might not know .
Neil : good then . I guess we need to go to phoenix mall soon . And yeah let’s were casual outfits go there so that we can catch him easily .
DD,Suketu,Kamal,jaspreet , nishant : yes sir .
Neil : ok then . Now the time is 11:00am. So let’s go home , have lunch and change our outfits and meet at 12:00pm
DD,Suketu,Kamal,jaspreet , nishant : ok sir .
Neil , DD,Suketu,Kamal,jaspreet , nishant leave to their place .
After changing their outfits they meet again and they start leaving to the mall .
Scene 3 :
The police team reach the mall . They even bring umesh Gupta with them so that they can catch Aman .
Neil : (to his team) guys see … if you find anyone acting suspicious . Inform me .
Team : ok sir .
Neil : (to umesh) hey you . You remember what you have to do right ?
Umesh : Ugh… yes sir .
Neil : if you plan to do something … you know what will I do .
Umesh nods .
They enter inside and they act casual and they start roaming here and there .
Here Avni , Aman and Riya enter the same mall .
Avni : finally we arrived .
Riya : now let’s go and shop .
Aman : you guys go and shop . I’ll come in few minutes .
Riya : Aman are you planning to escape ? Because you don’t want to pay the bills .
Aman : (rolls his eyes) Riya … don’t worry I’ll pay your bills but (shows his little finger) it’s urgent .
Avni and Riya see each other and start laughing
Aman : What’s there in this ? It’s natural !
Avni : now you go and come soon !
Aman goes to washroom
Aman : (thinks) while Avni and Riya are shopping . I need to talk to umesh .
In the store Riya and Avni are seen choosing some tops
Riya : (takes 2 tops) Avni … tell me which looks good on me ? The baby pink one or the red one ?
Avni : Hmm… I think the baby pink one suits you better …
Riya : even I think the same
Avni : (feels hungry) Riya I’m feeling hungry . I’m planning to go and get something to eat . Will you come with me ?
Riya : Ugh … no . I’m not feeling hungry . But still get me an Ice cream and French fries . I’ll be here .
Avni : ok then I’ll take your bag .
Avni takes riya’s bag goes to food court .
Avni : (goes and orders food) so … I would like to order 2 ice cream cones . one chocolate and one raspberry and … yeah … one pizza , 2 French fries and 3 vegetable sandwich and one lemonade .
The guy in the counter : mam seriously you ordered too many things . So are you planning to eat everything?
Avni : (stares at the guy ) why ? I’m feeling hungry and I’m placing the order . Do you have any problem ?
The guy in the counter : ugh … no mam . Pay 900 rupees
Avni : (pays the bill) and yeah just pack the French fries , pizza and sandwiches . Now bring the ice creams and lemonade .
The guy in counter : that’s 30 rupees more .
Avni : oh god ! why didn’t you tell me before !
The guy in the counter : you just now told me to pack the food !
Avni : (rolls her eyes) fine then .
Avni pays the extra amount . The guy packs and brings avni’s order French fries and all … she keeps the food parcel in riya’s bag .
She then takes the ice cream cones in her right hand and lemonade in her left hand .
Avni starts walking but suddenly she collides with a person and the chocolate ice cream falls down .
The person turns out to be Neil . Neil and Avni get shocked seeing each other . They stare at each other .
Precap : Neil and Avni start fighting . Neil gets angry . Neil gets suspicious seeing Aman’s behaviour .
I’ll update the next episode tomorrow evening or night .
I hope you all liked the episode . And sorry if it was bring .And I won’t drag it , I’ll try to end it soon And silent readers do leave your feedbacks .