Meri Zindhagi (AvNeil – Naamkaran Fan Fiction) (Episode 9)

Hi friends.I hope you all liked the 8th episode . And yeah I can’t be regular so after the episode I’ll tell when will I update the next episode . As I’m currently in 11th grade and I have exams now so I can only post short episodes. I’ll try to give big episodes . From April 3rd I’ll try to give big episodes . if there’s any grammatical mistakes I’m sorry . Please bear with me as this is my first Fan Fiction . And I might be adding some AvNeil scenes from the serial but it will be a bit different. Hope you all will like it.

If you have missed the 8th episode here’s the link

Episode 8

Enjoy the episode .
Scene 1 :
Mehta mansion – hall , Avni’s room and Aman’s room

In Aman’s room

Aman again gets call from the person again

Aman : (in the call) hello … umesh see … let’s do one thing . If you really want to discuss about the dealers let’s meet In Phoenix at 1pm ok ? Now bye . Let’s meet there .

Aman cuts the call and leaves the room

In the hall

Avni comes to the hall

Avni : did Daadi come ?

Ketan : not yet .

Aman too comes to the hall .

Dayawanti returns from hospital and everyone are happy seeing her.

Dayawanti enters the house

Avni : (gets happy seeing Dayaben) Daadi …

Dayaben smiles seeing Avni and everyone . Avni hugs her.

Ketan : ma I’m so glad that you’re fine .

Dayawanti : yes . By god’s grace I’m fine .

Dayawanti sits on the chair .

Hetal : ma how are you feeling now .

Dayawanti : good .

Hetal : now you need to take medicines properly on time . Take care of yourself

Dayawanti : yeah yeah …. Asha Now take me to my room I feel bit tied .

Asha : ok

Asha takes Dayawanti to her room .

Aman goes near Avni and tries to talk to her

Aman : Avni ……

Avni angrily stares at Aman and she goes from that place .

Aman feels bad . Riya sees this .

Riya : (goes near Aman) now what happened to her ?

Aman : I just shouted at her . And she got angry . I need to do something so that I can change her mood.

Aman and Riya go to avni’s room .

In avni’s room

Avni is seen watching anime on her computer . Aman and Riya enters avni’s room .

Aman & Riya : Hey Avni (sits on her bed)

Avni : hey Riya .

Avni sees Aman and gets annoyed

Aman stares at Avni and he smiles

Aman : Avni I said hi .

Avni pretends as if she didn’t hear Aman .

Riya : what are you watching ?

Avni : Death note .. I love this anime a lot

Aman : (laughs) Avni are you a kid ? You still watch cartoons ?

Avni : (stares at Aman) that’s Anime !

Aman : yeah that’s what I meant . You still watch cartoons like kids .

Avni : (stands) Do you have any problem if I watch anime ?

Aman : eh… Avni I didn’t mean that …

Avni : (cuts Aman in between) and yeah Anime is not cartoon ! Now leave from this room and let me watch the anime peacefully !

Aman : (rolls his eyes) Avni … (holds his ears) I’m sorry . I didn’t mean to hurt you .

Avni stares at Aman .

Aman : I’m sorry .

Aman does 10 sit-ups . Avni smiles .

Avni : Apology accepted .

Aman : (gets relieved) thank god .

Avni hugs Aman .

Riya : what about me ? Did you guys forget me ?

Avni : offo Riya .. come on join

The trio hug each other .

Avni : (breaks the hug) but still . Why did you cut the call when I entered ?

Aman : (thinks) what to say ?

Riya : even I noticed . You were acting suspicious Aman .

Aman : Erhh … pla … plan !

Riya & Avni : plan ?

Aman : umm… actually we all were busy these days and we didn’t have time to talk or enjoy … so I planned to take you all somewhere like trekking or ..

Riya and Avni see each other . They get excited and they start jumping and shouting . They hug Aman

Riya & Avni : (in excitement) YAYYYYY! (They hug Aman)

Aman closes his ears

Aman : Stop shouting … and don’t squeeze me !!

Riya and Avni break the hug . Deeksha comes inside

Deeksha : My god ! Aman , Riya , Avni … stop shouting ! If you keep shouting like this we all will become deaf one day !

Aman : I was not shouting deeksha bua !

Deeksha : I don’t care about all that . You all just have in mind that your Daadi Dayawanti Mehta is a heart patient . She needs to rest . So don’t shout .

Deeksha leaves from that place .

Riya : Aman you could have told us .

Aman : I wanted it to be a surprise . That’s why .

Avni : So tell me . Where are we going ?

Aman : I want you guys to decide . But before that let’s go and shop right now .

Riya & Avni get surprised

Riya : Aman … are you serious ?

Aman : yes !

Avni : You are talking about shopping and you’re planning to takes to shopping

Aman : Yes ! And yeah if you ask another question again I won’t take you for shopping .

Riya : ok fine we won’t question you anymore . But you have to pay all our bills .

Aman : (rolls his eyes) ok fine ! now let’s go and get ready .

Avni : yeah ..

Riya and Aman leave avni’s room

In Aman’s room

Aman : (to himself) I’m sorry Riya and Avni . I lied to you guys again about the trekking thing . If I take you guys to the no one will doubt me . I’m so sorry . But what to do i’m helpless .

Aman , Avni and Riya get ready and they leave the house .

Scene 2:
Police station and Neil’s home

Neil reaches the police station and he goes to his place . Neil’s team (DD,Suketu,Kamal,jaspreet , nishant )enters the room and they salute Neil .

Neil : DD so did you get the information ?

DD : yes sir

DD gives the file to Neil . Neil starts reads the file .

Suketu : So sir …

Neil : (cuts Suketu in between) don’t disturb me when I’m reading .

Suketu : Sorry sir.

Neil reads the file and keeps it on the table .

Neil : hmm .. so as DD said … it’s about stolen bikes are being sold illegally by some group of people . Right?

Jaspreet : yes sir . A person who’s name is umesh Gupta got caught and he’s a member of that gang .

Suketu : And we made him say about what all he knows about this group .

Jaspreet : A person named Karan Kukreja who is also know as K.K is the leader of the gang .

Neil : K.K …. now Give me the details of the other people who are in this gang involved in this .

DD,Suketu,Kamal,jaspreet , nishant look each other

Neil : (rolls his eyes) can anyone give me the details of the gang ?

Nishant : Sir we don’t have any other information about the gang .

Neil stares at everyone .

Kamal : b.. but ..

Neil : (cuts kamal in between) What ba ba ? Tell properly kamal .

Kamal : Sorry .. I mean we do have some information about another guy about whom umesh told us now . We told him to make a call to that person and talk . We tracked them on call and we got some information . Seems like they were planning to meet in phoenix shopping mall today at 1:00pm and they were talking about that .

Neil : any other information about them ?

DD gives a file to neil

DD : we just collected the information about these 2 . The details are in the file .

Neil takes the file and starts reading

Neil : So The 1st one is this Umesh Gupta and the 2nd one is …. Aman Mehta . So DD I need all the information about Aman Mehta . And yeah we need to go to Phoenix mall soon …. And yeah do you think Aman Mehta knows that umesh Gupta got caught by us ?

Nishant : no sir . He might not know .

Neil : good then . I guess we need to go to phoenix mall soon . And yeah let’s were casual outfits go there so that we can catch him easily .

DD,Suketu,Kamal,jaspreet , nishant : yes sir .

Neil : ok then . Now the time is 11:00am. So let’s go home , have lunch and change our outfits and meet at 12:00pm

DD,Suketu,Kamal,jaspreet , nishant : ok sir .

Neil , DD,Suketu,Kamal,jaspreet , nishant leave to their place .

After changing their outfits they meet again and they start leaving to the mall .

Scene 3 :

The police team reach the mall . They even bring umesh Gupta with them so that they can catch Aman .

Neil : (to his team) guys see … if you find anyone acting suspicious . Inform me .

Team : ok sir .

Neil : (to umesh) hey you . You remember what you have to do right ?

Umesh : Ugh… yes sir .

Neil : if you plan to do something … you know what will I do .

Umesh nods .

They enter inside and they act casual and they start roaming here and there .

Here Avni , Aman and Riya enter the same mall .

Avni : finally we arrived .

Riya : now let’s go and shop .

Aman : you guys go and shop . I’ll come in few minutes .

Riya : Aman are you planning to escape ? Because you don’t want to pay the bills .

Aman : (rolls his eyes) Riya … don’t worry I’ll pay your bills but (shows his little finger) it’s urgent .

Avni and Riya see each other and start laughing

Aman : What’s there in this ? It’s natural !

Avni : now you go and come soon !

Aman goes to washroom

Aman : (thinks) while Avni and Riya are shopping . I need to talk to umesh .

In the store Riya and Avni are seen choosing some tops

Riya : (takes 2 tops) Avni … tell me which looks good on me ? The baby pink one or the red one ?

Avni : Hmm… I think the baby pink one suits you better …

Riya : even I think the same

Avni : (feels hungry) Riya I’m feeling hungry . I’m planning to go and get something to eat . Will you come with me ?

Riya : Ugh … no . I’m not feeling hungry . But still get me an Ice cream and French fries . I’ll be here .

Avni : ok then I’ll take your bag .

Avni takes riya’s bag goes to food court .

Avni : (goes and orders food) so … I would like to order 2 ice cream cones . one chocolate and one raspberry and … yeah … one pizza , 2 French fries and 3 vegetable sandwich and one lemonade .

The guy in the counter : mam seriously you ordered too many things . So are you planning to eat everything?

Avni : (stares at the guy ) why ? I’m feeling hungry and I’m placing the order . Do you have any problem ?

The guy in the counter : ugh … no mam . Pay 900 rupees

Avni : (pays the bill) and yeah just pack the French fries , pizza and sandwiches . Now bring the ice creams and lemonade .

The guy in counter : that’s 30 rupees more .

Avni : oh god ! why didn’t you tell me before !

The guy in the counter : you just now told me to pack the food !

Avni : (rolls her eyes) fine then .

Avni pays the extra amount . The guy packs and brings avni’s order French fries and all … she keeps the food parcel in riya’s bag .

She then takes the ice cream cones in her right hand and lemonade in her left hand .

Avni starts walking but suddenly she collides with a person and the chocolate ice cream falls down .

The person turns out to be Neil . Neil and Avni get shocked seeing each other . They stare at each other .

Episode ends.

Precap : Neil and Avni start fighting . Neil gets angry . Neil gets suspicious seeing Aman’s behaviour .

I’ll update the next episode tomorrow evening or night .

I hope you all liked the episode . And sorry if it was bring .And I won’t drag it , I’ll try to end it soon And silent readers do leave your feedbacks .

  1. What death note one of my favorite anime I the world.i am big fan of L and light yagami.never thought i gonna listen seeing animes in this forum’s but animes are really cool compared to this serials,shows and films.
    Thanks you so much Ayesha considering death note in this episode.u too like to see anime especially Japanese animes

    1. L and light are soon intelligent no one can beat them

    2. Ayesha_malhotra

      Yes . I’m a anime lover . Thanks

  2. Not even Neil can beat them.

  3. Nice episode

  4. Interesting

  5. awesome epi
    i love it
    update soon

  6. Nice episode

  7. Sana.

    Nice episode. Waiting eagerly for avneil’s nok jhok. Precap is awesome. Waiting for the next episode. Update it as soon as possible.

  8. ImRagela

    Nice episode yaar…I loved Aman ,Riya and Avni scene ..So nice..Keep going ?

  9. Wow super anime is life Neil is … uff ????

  10. Hasinasoghra

    Nice episode and I hope there will be more Avneil scenes together in next episode

  11. Interesting episode

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