Meri Zindhagi (AvNeil – Naamkaran Fan Fiction) (Episode 18)

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Hi friends.I hope you all liked the 17th Episode . And yeah I can’t be regular so after the episode I’ll tell when will I update the next episode . I can only give short updates but I’ll try to give big episodes . if there’s any grammatical errors I’m sorry .Please bear with me as this is my first Fan Fiction . And I might be adding some AvNeil scenes from the serial but it will be a bit different. Hope you all will like it.

And I’ll mainly focus on AvNeil.

I can only give short updates . Sorry for that ..

If you have missed the 17th episode here’s the link

http://www.tellyupdates.com/meri-zindhagi-avneil-naamkaran-fan-fictionepisode-17/

Enjoy the episode
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EPISODE 18

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Scene 1:
Police station

Aman and Dushyant are taken to police station .

They see umesh Gupta who was their colleague in robbing the bikes , who is now in jail .they get shocked seeing umesh .

Suketu comes near Aman and dushyant and he takes their mobile and their belongings from them and keeps it in the locker .

Suketu : (in an angry tone) (to Aman and Dushyant) You both sit down there . Neil sir will be coming and he’ll question you both .

Aman and Dushyant See each other and they sit down .

Dushyant : (to Aman) What can we do now Aman ? No one are willing to listen to us .

Aman sees DD .

Aman : (to dushyant) we were helpless . We need to tell them the reason . (To DD) sir please listen to us once ….

DD : (cuts Aman in between ) (in an angry tone) Keep quite until Neil sir comes and explain everything to him .

Aman gets disappointed .

Neil comes there and He Sees Aman and Dushyant sitting down .

Neil : (to DD) DD go and open the lock up . And bring that umesh Gupta here .

DD : ok sir .

DD opens the lock up and brings Umesh Gupta out . Umesh Gupta sees Aman and Dushyant .

Neil : (goes near umesh Gupta) See them (points towards Aman and Dushyant) he’s Aman and he’s Dushyant . You might know them . They’re involved in the same illegal business in which you were also involved right ?

Umesh looks at Aman and dushyant . He sees neil . He stays silent

DD : (to umesh Gupta) Hey you ! Neil sir is asking you something . Were Aman Mehta and this dushyant involved in the bike robbery and were you working under That gangster K.K ?

Umesh stays silent .

Neil : (in an angry tone) I guess you won’t tell anything . Fine then . (Puts his arm around Umesh Gupta) DD Let’s give our special treatment to Umesh Gupta in jail . You and others take this umesh Mehta to lock up again and give him as many lashes until he says everything to us .

Neil takes his hand away and sees Umesh . Umesh Gupta gets terrified when Neil says this .

DD : (smirks) ok Neil sir .

DD is about to take Umesh Gupta to lock up again .

Umesh : (terrified) ok …. ok fine ! Don’t do anything to me ! Plea … please … please …. I’ll … I’ll say ….. I’ll say …….. Yeah . They were my colleagues and we were asked to rob the bikes by K.K sir’s order .

Aman and Dushyant see each other helplessly .

Neil : so it’s now confirmed that these two are criminals . (To kamal and nishant) kamal , nishant come here .

Kamal and nishant come there

Kamal & nishant : yes sir ?

Neil : now take Aman Mehta and this dushyant with you and put them behind bars together with Umesh Gupta .

Aman and Dushyant get shocked .

Kamal and nishant take Aman Mehta and dushyant .

Dushyant : sir we’re not criminals . Please listen to us ….

Aman : Mr.Neil try to understand us please …. please give us a chance to explain . We were forced and helpless to do this job . Trust me

Neil : Aman , We May try to understand you . but law does not . you both are criminal in law’s eyes . And you both were caught red handed . All the evidences are against you both .

DD : Neil sir is right . You both were involved with gangster K.K in an Illegal business . You both did a big mistake . so you both deserve this punishment .

Neil and DD arrest Aman and Dushyant .

Neil : Kamal , put them in lockup and prepare papers against them .

Kamal : yes sir . I’ll prepare the soon .

Kamal leaves .

Aman and Dushyant are behind bars .

Neil : (to DD) DD , We need to find where this K.K is staying . And yeah K.K and his gang members should not come to know that we caught Aman Mehta and dushyant . Or else we won’t be able to find them .

DD : Ok sir .

DD goes

Aman : (thinks) I hope Neil Khanna gives us one chance to explain so that we can prove that we were helpless to do this job . God . Save us .

Aman feels bad .

Scene 2:
Mehta mansion

Avni enters the house .

She’s shocked to see her aishwarya bhabi in Mehta house .

Avni gets tensed .

Avni : (tensed)(thinks) aishwarya bhabi ? Here ? Seems like she came here to meet Aman Bhai ! But what will I tell her now ?

Everyone are seen enjoying and happy as aishwarya came home after a long time .

Asha sees Avni near the door .

Asha : hmm …. finally she’s home . (Goes near Avni) how long will you take time to come home ?

Deeksha : Avni , We all were waiting for you . Now see your bhabi is here after a long time .

Ketan : yeah finally Avni you too came home .

Ashish : Avni where were you ? We were waiting for you for a long time .

Avni sees aishwarya happily talking to everyone . Aishwarya sees Avni and gets happy .

Aishwarya : (smiles) Hey Avni !

Aishwarya comes near Avni and hugs her . Avni is tensed

Avni : (gives a fake smile) hi bhabi (sees aishwarya’s belly) how’s your health ? And how’s baby ?

Aishwarya : (smiles and hold her belly) I’m absolutely fine and the baby is also fine .

Avni : bhabi how did you come here suddenly ? And what’s the reason ?

Aishwarya : Hmm . Yeah I forgot to tell you . I wanted to meet my stupid husband Aman . And As I said Nowadays he doesn’t even come to meet me . Even I got bored sitting idle at my home . That’s why I came here . And why ? Should I not come here ?

Avni : bhabi this is your house too . You can come here anytime .

Aishwarya : (smiles) Ok Avni . And yeah where’s Aman ?

Avni gets tensed

Riya : yeah where’s Aman ? We didn’t see him in home since morning

Hetal : Aishwarya Beta you better call Aman . Then we might know where Aman is .

Avni : (tensed)(thinks) What will I tell them ? And what will I tell to aishwarya bhabi ? She won’t be able to take it if she comes to know that Aman is under police custody . She’ll panic .

Aishwarya : yeah . I’ll call Aman .

Avni : No bhabi . Don’t call bhai .

Aishwarya : (confused) why ? I’ll better call him and ask .

Avni gets tensed

Aishwarya tries to call Aman but Avni takes aishwary’a phone .

Aishwarya : (confused) Avni what are you doing ? Why did you take my phone ? I want to talk to him . Give my phone back

Asha : Avni what are you doing ? Why are you acting like this .

Riya : Avni why did you take aishwarya’s bhabi phone ? And why are you not letting her talk to Aman ?

Avni : You can’t talk to him right now bhabi . I mean even though if you call he won’t pickup .

Aishwarya : What are you trying to say ? Do you know where Aman is ?

Avni doesn’t answer .

Asha : Avni just tell . Where’s Aman ?

Avni : (tensed) I know where bhai is . And I can’t tell you about that .

Aishwarya gets suspicious seeing Avni’s behaviour .

Aishwarya : Avni what do you mean by you can’t tell ? Please tell . Is everything fine ?

Ashish : Avni . Now you should tell where Aman is . Please tell .

Avni sees everyone .

Avni : (tensed) ok fine . I’ll tell . But please don’t panic . Aman Bhai is in police station and He’s under police custody .

Everyone get shocked when Avni says this .

Asha : (shocked) WHAT !

Ketan : (shocked) Aman is in police custody ?

Aishwarya : (shocked ) (laughs) (goes near Avni ) Avni it’s not the time for joking . Tell where Aman is !

Avni : aishwarya bhabi I’m saying the truth . Aman Bhai is in caves road police station and he is under police custody as he was involved in an illegal business .

Everyone are super shocked when Avni says Aman is involved in an illegal business .

Ashish : (shocked) Aman ? Under police custody ? Why would he get involved in illegal business ? I think there’s s misunderstanding . He can’t do such stuffs .

Asha : (shocked) No . I can’t believe this . My son Aman can’t do such things.

Aishwarya panics .

Aishwarya : (panics) No ! This can’t be true . Aman can’t do this . He won’t do such cheap stuffs .

Avni : bhabi that’s the truth . Even at first I didn’t believe but police caught him red handed . I even saw that .

Aishwarya : no . As ashish papa said even I think there’s definitely a misunderstanding . Avni you said Aman is in caves road police station right ? I’m going there to meet Aman now . And I’ll even talk to police and prove that My husband is innocent .

Aishwarya leaves the house . Everyone tries to stop her

Avni : bhabi please stay here .

Hetal : Aishwarya don’t go beta please listen to us .

Aishwarya doesn’t listen to anyone and she takes an auto rickshaw and she leaves the house to meet Aman in Caves Road police station .

Deeksha : wow . Wow . Wow . I don’t know what’s happening in this house . At first Avni ran away from her marriage . And now Aman is under police custody as he was involved in illegal activities . I wonder what Riya will do after this .

Hetal and ketan stares at deeksha when she comments about Riya .

Ashish gets angry but he keeps quite .

Ketan : (in an angry tone) Deeksha can you stop talking now ?

Deeksha : thank god ma went to rajkot . If she comes to know about this I tell you she would have definitely got another major heart attack .

Ashish : (in an angry tone) (shouts) CAN YOU SHUT UP DEEKSHA !

Deeksha gets scared when ashish shouts at her .

Deeksha : ashish bhai I was just …..

Ashish leaves from that place .

Avni : I need to do something . I’ll better go to police station now .

Asha : (tensed) I’ll also come with you . Aishwarya went there alone . And I want to meet Aman too .

Avni : no ma you be here . I’ll bring bhabi home soon .

Asha : (tensed) okay

Avni too leaves the house and she goes to police station .

Scene 3 :
Police station

Aishwarya comes to the police station .

Aishwarya tries to go near jail but 2 lady Constables stop her . Aishwarya gets annoyed .

Lady constable 2 : excuse me madam who are you and where are you going ?

Aishwarya : I want to meet my husband Aman now . Let me in .

Aishwarya tries to go in but the lady Constables block her way .

Lady constable 1 : we can’t let you in mam

Lady constable 2 : you need to wait .

Aishwarya : What do you mean by I cannot go in ? Let me in !

Aman hears aishwarya’s voice

Aman : (thinks) Aishwarya ? Here ? How did she come to know that I’m here ? Avni might have told her.

Lady constable 1 : mam you’re not supposed to go near the jail cell without permission

Aishwarya : (annoyed) Let me meet my husband now ! Right now !

Lady constable 2 : mam you please try to understand . You need to get permission to visit if you want to meet someone who’s in jail .

Aishwarya : (annoyed) I don’t need anyone’s permission to meet my husband ! Let me go in ! I want to meet my husband Aman !

Aishwarya again tries to go in but the lady Constables stop her again .

DD sees this and hears Aishwarya saying that she’s Aman mehta’s wife .

Lady constable 1 : Madam please be patient .

DD : (to himself) Aman mehta’s wife ? Here ?

DD goes near Aishwarya .

DD : (to Aishwarya) mam Is there any problem ? What do you want ?

Aishwarya sees DD

Aishwarya : (in an angry tone ) problem ? Yes ! You people are not letting me to meet my husband Aman Mehta .

DD : oh you’re Aman mehta’s wife . mam if you want to meet your husband you need to get permission from ACP Neil sir . He’s the one who’s handing Aman Mehta ‘s case . So please wait .

Aishwarya : Ok fine ! Call your officer Neil and Give me the permission .and I won’t leave the station until you make me meet my husband .

DD : fine mam . I’ll call Neil sir . You talk to him .

DD enters neil room

DD : sir Aman mehta’s wife is here .

Neil : Aman Mehta’s wife ?

DD : yes sir . She’s saying that she won’t leave the station until we let her meet Aman Mehta .

Neil : Does she know that her husband is involved in an illegal business ?

DD : I don’t know about that sir but seems like she knows that Aman Mehta is in jail . You come and talk to her please .

Neil : Fine . I’ll come there .

DD : Ok .

Neil : (thinks) I think Avni informed her family members about Aman Mehta . I need to call Avni and tell her that her bhabi is here .

DD goes out .

Suddenly Neil gets a call from Avni .

Neil : (in call) hello ? Avni ? I just thought of calling you now .

Avni : (tensed) Mr. Neil Khanna , I’m coming to police station now . my bhabi came to know that Aman Bhai is under police custody . My bhabi got shocked and she left the home and she took a auto rickshaw to meet bhai in police station .

Neil : yeah I know . She’s here . DD said that your bhabi not listening to anyone and she won’t go from the station until she meets your brother .

Avni : ok I’m outside the station now . I’ll come in .

Neil : fine then . Come in .

Avni : okay .

Avni cuts the call and she enters the police station .

She sees Aishwarya in the station.

Avni : bhabi ?

Avni goes near Aishwarya .

Avni : bhabi What are you doing ?

Aishwarya : I want to meet Aman and police are not letting me meet him . I won’t go from here until I meet Aman .

Avni : bhabi I understand . But rules are rules . We need to get permission and only meet Aman Bhai .

Aishwarya : I don’t care about that ! I won’t move , eat or do anything until I meet Aman .

Avni : bhabi please don’t do that . Now please don’t strain yourself . It might affect your health and baby’s health too .

Neil comes sees Aishwarya

Neil : (goes near Aishwarya) Excuse me ? You’re Aman mehta’s wife right ?

Aishwarya : (sees neil) Yes . I’m Aman mehta’s wife aishwarya .

Neil : I’m ACP Neil khanna .

Aishwarya : (in an angry tone) oh so you’re The one who arrested my husband . And yeah why did you put him behind bars when he didn’t do anything ? He’s innocent !

Neil : mam please stay calm . And please sit down . Your husband is behind bars because he was involved in an illegal business under a gangster . We got 3 guys arrested from The gang . Your husband was one of them .

Aishwarya : (in an angry tone) no way ! He can’t do this !

Neil : unfortunately he was involved in this illegal business . He was caught red handed . Avni saw this too .

Avni : (in a sad tone) yes bhabi . Officer Neil is saying the truth . Aman Bhai stole bike from Sukoon ghar , the orphanage we run . He’s doing this illegal business under someone .

Aishwarya is super shocked .

She stumbles but Avni holds her

Avni : bhabi are you ok ?

Aishwarya : (In shock) No ! You both are lying . Aman can’t do this . He can’t …… he can’t … he can never do this to me …..

Aishwarya is in tears . Neil and Avni feel bad seeing Aishwarya in this state .

Avni : (in a sad tone) Aishwarya bhabi please don’t cry .

Neil : Avni , please make your bhabi sit on the chair .

Avni : yeah .

Avni makes Aishwarya sit . Aishwarya cries a lot .

Neil : Aishwarya mam I know it’s hard for you to accept the truth . But Please try to understand .

Aishwarya : (in tears) I never thought Aman would do such a cheap thing . I hate myself for trusting him . He’s such a cheater .

Aishwarya cries a lot .

Neil : Aishwarya mam please don’t cry . Have some water .

Neil gets Aishwarya a glass of water .

Aishwarya : (in tears) no I don’t want it .

Neil : mam you’re pregnant and please don’t stress yourself . You need to take care of yourself . Please drink a glass of water at least .

Avni : bhabi please .

Aishwarya : No I don’t want .

Neil : mam please ?

Avni : please bhabi ?

Aishwarya : (nods yes) fine .

Aishwarya drinks water .

Avni : bhabi I understand your feeling . Even I felt so cheated when I got to know about Aman Bhai . I felt betrayed .

Aishwarya : Officer neil please let me meet Aman once . Please . Please . I want to talk to him .

Avni : even I want to meet Aman Bhai .

Neil : ok Aishwarya mam , Avni . You both can meet him . But You can meet Aman Mehta only for few minutes . Is that Okay ?

Aishwarya : (wipes her tears) yeah fine . I’m okay with that .

Neil : (To the lady Constables ) take both of them to the cell where Aman Mehta is . And yeah they can only be there for few minutes .

Lady Constables : yes sir .

Lady Constables take Aishwarya and Avni to the cell .

They see Aman in jail with 2 more guys (Umesh Gupta and Dushyant)

Aman sees Avni and Aishwarya and gets up .

Aman : Avni , Aishwarya .

Lady constable 1 : (to Aman ) hey you . You only have few minutes to talk with your wife and sister . Make it soon .

Aman : (nods yes) ok .

The lady Constables go

Aman : (in an angry tone) Avni why did you tell Aishwarya about all this ?

Aishwarya : (in an angry tone) why are you shouting at her Aman ? You did the mistake and why are you yelling at her .

Aman : Aishwarya ….

Aishwarya : (in an angry tone) And yeah you wanted to know how I came to know about this right ? I came to Mehta mansion to meet you but I couldn’t find you . Avni came there after sometime and she seemed to be tensed . We asked her does she know where you are . She got more tensed and she was not telling where you are . Finally we made her say where you are . We came to know that you’re arrested .

Avni sees Aman .

Aman : Avni , Aishwarya …. Listen to me once …… I was helpless to do this …..

Aishwarya : (cuts Aman in between ) aren’t you ashamed of doing all these Aman ? I never thought you would do some cheap work like this . You’re such a liar and a cheater .

Aman feels bad and He hangs his head down as he’s feeling ashamed .

Aman : just listen to me once …. I want to say ….

Avni : (cuts Aman in between) bhai you know how much bhabi cried now ? Why did you do this to us ? Why did you lie to us ?

Aman : (shouts) can you both listen to me ? Why no one are trying to understand us ! Even police didn’t even ask us why we did this work ! We were helpless to so this work under that gangster K.K .

A constable comes there

Constable : (to Aman) hey you ! Don’t raise your voice !

Aman : I’m sorry .

The constable leaves from that place .

When Aman says police didn’t interrogate Him and he was helpless to work under gangster K.K Avni starts thinking .

Avni : (thinks) why police didn’t interrogate bhai and they directly put them in jail ? And why bhai was again and again saying he was helpless . I need to talk to ACP Neil Khanna about this .

Aishwarya : Whatever it is you did a mistake Aman . You could have told us or ashish papa or ketan kaka . We all would have helped you .

Lady constable comes there .

Lady constable 2 : Madam , time is over . You both need to leave from this place now .

Avni : (to the lady constable) ok mam .

The lady constable goes

Avni : (to Aman) anyways . we’ll try to get a lawyer and bail you out . (To aishwarya) Now let’s go bhabi

Aishwarya : yeah let’s go home now .

Avni and Aishwarya are about to leave but Aman stops them .

Aman : Avni , Aishwarya …..

Avni and Aishwarya turn around and see Aman

Aman : I know you both are very angry with me but trust me I was helpless to do this job .

Avni and Aishwarya doesn’t say anything .

They come out . Avni sees Neil doing some work .

Avni : (to aishwarya) bhabi you sit here . I’ll come in 5 minutes .

Aishwarya : Ok but where are you going ?

Avni : I want to talk to officer Neil . I’m planning to bail out bhai . So I want to talk to him regarding this .

Aishwarya : Ok fine.

Aishwarya sits in the chair .

Avni goes near Neil

Avni : mr. neil ….

Neil turns around and sees Avni behind him

Neil : yes Avni ?

Avni : can you come aside ?

Neil : (confused) for what ?

Avni : actually I want to talk to you .

Neil : okay ? Say ?

Avni : actually I’m planning to bail out my brother .

Neil : oh yeah I wanted to talk to you about this too . I’m sorry Avni but You cannot bail out your brother .

Avni : Why ? What’s the reason ?

Neil : actually the court is closed today . You can only come tomorrow with the lawyer and bail your brother out .

Avni gets shocked and disappointed at the same time .

Avni : (shocked and disappointed) What ! Isn’t there any other way ?

Neil : there’s no way Avni . I can’t help .

Avni : (disappointed) oh …. and yeah I wanted to ask you something .

Neil : yeah ? Ask ?

Avni : I and Aishwarya bhabi Met Aman Bhai in jail . He said no one didn’t interrogate him . Is that true ?

Neil : We don’t put anyone behind bars before interrogating them . We give everyone a chance to explain .

Avni : But he said you all didn’t let him explain even once .

Neil : actually I didn’t interrogate Aman .

Avni : (confused) huh ? What do you mean ? You’re the one who said you won’t put anyone behind bars unless you give one chance to let accused person explain ? Then why did you put my brother behind bars without interrogating him ?

Neil : Avni I meant I was not there in police station while other officers were interrogating Aman . Wait , I’ll call DD (Calls DD) DD come here .

DD comes there

Neil : DD you know that I was not here to interrogate Aman Mehta and dushyant . Did you , suketu , kamal , and others who are in our team interrogate them ?

DD : Sir I’m sorry but we thought you interrogated them . So we didn’t interrogate him .

Neil gets surprised and shocked at the same time . Avni is also shocked .

Neil : (shocked) DD . How can we be so careless . You know we need to give a chance to explain to those who accused right ? How did you forget about that ?

DD : sir I’m sorry .

Avni : (in an angry tone)(to neil) why you people are so careless ! And you neil Khanna …. can’t you do any work properly ?

Neil : (signs Avni to stop talking) stop it . I’m talking to DD . I know we were careless but now I know what I’m doing . Now We’ll now give Aman Mehta a chance to prove himself . So keep your mouth shut .

Avni stares at Neil

Neil : (To DD) ask Aman Mehta , Dushyant and Umesh Gupta to come to the interrogation room when we call them .

DD : okay sir .

DD goes .

Neil : now we’ll give your brother Aman a chance ! And yeah tomorrow come with the lawyer if you want to bail your brother out .

Avni : okay . I’ll come tomorrow .

Avni goes and she leaves the police station with aishwarya .

Neil : (thinks) Now I need to interrogate Aman and dushyant make them tell all the informations which they know about K.K and his gang . I need to find this K.K soon and arrest him .

Episode ends .

Precap : Neil asks Aman , Umesh and dushyant why they were doing this job under K.K . Aman and Dushyant tell everything to neil how they were forced to do this job . Aman and dushyant give an information about some thing about how they were trapped by gangster K.K . Hearing that Neil gets shocked . Neil understands That they were helpless. Neil tells about this to Avni . Next day Avni comes with lawyer to release Aman . Dushyant , Umesh and Aman ask Neil to release them . Neil agrees but puts a condition .

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I’m extremely sorry for not posting the episode . I was very sick for the past few days . Now I’m better but I still have fever . And sorry . I know that today there were no AvNeil nok – jhok . But in upcoming episode you can see many AvNeil nok – jhok scenes . Sorry if you find the episode boring . I’ll try to give more interesting episodes further . And yeah I hope you all liked today’s episode . Please do read , like and comment if you liked the episodes and I request silent readers to read , comment , like . It’s a humble request .

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48 Comments
  1. Very interesting Epi …. I am so excited to see what neil do to catch that kk and take care of ur health 😘😘😘

  2. So nice episode😁💐💐plz continue to write. Waiting for next one.

  3. Nice

  4. AryanBhattacharya

    Nice episode. Take care of yourself

  5. Very good episode

  6. Sonia13

    Good one ayeshu…Post soon…Loads of love

  7. nice episode update soon
    i want to see what neil will do to kk and how neil ad avni will fall in love
    take care of you health

  8. Nice episode and please post soon Ayesha

  9. Niyati

    Awesome dear … Hope u are feeling better now ….Update soon 😍 😘

    1. Ayesha_malhotra

      thanks . and my heath is better now

  10. It is a very nice episode please tell when you are going to post next

    1. Ayesha_malhotra

      thanks . i’ll post soon

  11. Poor avni and Amen’s wife I think Amen is innocen ibtresting epi

  12. Nila_27

    Nice update Ayesha👌
    Take care😊

  13. It is so interesting 😍😍😍😍😍 waiting for the next episode 😘😘

  14. Deepsholic

    Oh my goodness dear. This is just fantabulous. I just loved it to the core 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. Do continue….

  15. ItsmePrabha

    Fabulous Epi…Will be waiting for the next..Do share the link when ever you post it..

  16. Mishaal

    It’s such a good episode. Loved it. 😘

  17. Lasyashree.10

    Good article!! I love the way how the whole episode went!! I read all your others episodes too..!! I couldn’t comment on all the episodes… but I liked your FF a lot!! Looking forward for next episode….hope u will update it soon!!!❤️😍😍😍

  18. Jasminerahul

    Aman n dushyanth got arrested.They were trapped by KK?Waiting to nknow what made them do it.shocking that KK is negative here.Surprising that here Aman is married.Which actress is aishwarya?She is so broken.Goo that avni made neil realize that aman wasnt allowed to give explanation.waiting 4 neil to find out truth

    1. Ayesha_malhotra

      Everything will be revealed soon 😊. Thanks

  19. Avneil_adiza_fan

    Sorry for the late comment…I had my exams…but anyways great episode and hope you are okay now ☺

    1. Ayesha_malhotra

      I’m fine now . Thanks .

  20. Gopika.S

    loved it yaar…..😍😍
    its soo good😍😍😍…. fantabulous. 😍
    eagerly waiting for the next…
    sry for late comment…
    take care….
    love you loads😍😍😍

    1. Ayesha_malhotra

      Thanks 😊😊 I’m waiting for your update too .

  21. Nice .to exciting to see whats nxt.
    Waiting

  22. Very nice episode.Want to know what happens next.
    I’m waiting..

  23. TUFriendsForever

    The epi was interesting i loved the way u wrote Aishwarya going to station the entire scene was natural not so cheesy it was depicted well and finally Aman gets a chance to explain and hope the culprit and the reason will be out soon
    Keep writing

  24. Pavithra1616

    Fantastic dear.. Superb!Update soon..

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