MERI PYARRI BEHAN -SWATTARAGINI

Guys I am giving the links of my first ff meri pyarri behan
intro
Introduction
episode 1
Episode 1episode 2
Episode 2episode3
Episode 3episode4
Episode 4episode 5
episode 5 episode 6
Episode 6episode 7
Episode 7episode 8
Episode 8episode 9
episode 9episode 10
Episode 10episode11
Episode 11episode 12
episode 12last episode
Episode 13
Guys , I hope you liked my ff. please give me feedback about my ff. It helps me to rectify my mistakes. my user name is Balaji and dp is Lord Krishna.
please give a clear analysis about my story baseline, the way of portraying characters and the way i shown their bond and my way of writing. please it’s my humble request.
Thank you.

6 comments

  1. sanchami

    U r really awesome balaji in ever episode u rocked with ur writing skills I hope you u return with another ff

  2. Dafsi

    |Registered Member

    Awesome stpry really loved it from the beginning to end rverything in it was really well expressed abput the realtions and all loved it come up with a new ff

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