Meri Manjil Maa ki Sapna Aur Anjan Rishtey Mae Bandh Ho Gayi Meri Kahani Part-3.

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Sorry for late update.

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The story begins :
After surgery :
Saachi comes out and sees pragya,isha and hugs them.
Pragya : Abhae wo…Saanchi how was the surgery bae?
Isha : Saanchi how was the surgery yaar?
Saanchi : Perfect guys.
Pragya,Isha congratulate her.
Just then Dr.Kabir comes out.
Dr.Kabir : U done a great job Dr.Saanchi.
Everything went on perfect.Keep it up.
Saanchi : Thank u sir.Its my pleasure.
Dr.Kabir : Dr.Saanchi meet me at my cabin after 1 hr.
Saanchi : Yes sir.
Pragya : Abhae wo…Isha some one eyes are shining like stars in happiness that to of some ones compliment.
Isha : Yes pragya.After all in our language we called it as Love.Yes or not pragya.
Pragya : Of course yaar isha.
Saanchi : Shut up guys.U 2 started again (angrily).I will kill u both.
Pragya : Kill us afterwards now go to Dr.Kabir’s cabin.Pragya teases Saanchi. Isha laughs.
Saanchi : Ok i will see u 2 later.
Pragya : Haan…ok…see us later after all he is ur 1st priority.
Saanchi gave a angry glance to them.
They ran off.
Pragya,Isha went back to their respective works.
Dr.Kabir’s cabin :
Saanchi knocks the door.
Dr.Kabir : Come in Dr.Saanchi.
Saanchi in her mind : How he knows that it was me?
Dr.kabir : Dr.Saanchi i said u to come in!
Where u lost?
Saanchi : In u sir?
Dr.Kabir : What u said Saanchi?
Saanchi came into her senses and says nothing sir.
Dr.kabir : Ok leave it.I ask u to come here because i am giving u a responsibility of new patient.This is the file.Study the case perfectly and get back to ur work.Is that clear Dr.Saanchi?
Saanchi : Yes sir.
Dr.Kabir : Wait a minute doctor!saanchi are u preparing for ur exams?
Saanchi : Yes sir i am preparing well for exams.
Due to heavy work,she falls down.But before that Kabir comes and holds her by waist.
Dr.kabir sees her pulse rate and thinks oh god this girl be na?How careless she was?She didn’t eat any thing from morning ?
He immediately call ward boy and ordered him to bring some nutrition biscuits and glass of milk.
Dr.kabir lifts her in his arms and made her sit on sofa.He splits some water on her face.
Saanchi : Saanchi suddenly gets up and says pragya,isha help me other wise i will finish in  Mr.Khadhoos Kumar hands.
Kabir laughs and says Dr.Saanchi what r u saying?Who is this Khadhoos ku…mar now?
Saanchi : Nothing sir.Nothing…
Dr.Kabir : Ok leave it.How irresponsible r u Saanchi?U know how to take care of ur Patients, Friends and interns but u don’t know how to take care of yourself.Bad so bad.
Saanchi in her mind : Oh god today u gave me to see Mr.Khadhoos kumar another shade of sweet Gollu ji.I like this shade of him.What i am thinking?
Saanchi : Sorry sir.Wo actually……
Dr.Kabir : Wo…actually… what Miss Saanchi tell me?
Saanchi : Sir actually i am feeling weak because i didn’t eat anything from morning.May i go sir?
Dr.kabir : No.I already ask ward boy to bring some healthy food for u.If not u will eat junk food which is bad for ur health?
Saanchi : No…sir…no…please.
Kabir : It’s my order.
Saanchi : Yes sir.
Saanchi in her mind : Now only i complemented him sweet gollu ji again he changed into Khadhoos Kumar.
Ward boy comes and keep food on his table and left.
Dr.Kabir : Now eat this?
Saanchi : Lag gayi lanka.Sir i hate this milk chee..yaakh..She makes puppy face. Sir this biscuit’s too.
Kabir smiles seeing her antics.But covers.
Dr.Kabir : U will drink or i make u to drink and eat?u r not a child.Come on have it.
Just then veer comes to Dr.Kabir’s cabin.
Veer : Dr.kabir.
Dr.Kabir : Veer.U here is everything ok.
Veer : Sir actually Saanchi mam’s patients r asking about her.So i came here.
Saanchi : Veer.Come we will go.
Veer : Sir,actually mam leaving food here.
Dr.Kabir : U may go.I will send Saanchi.
Saanchi : Sir,but veer wait i will come.
Dr.Kabir gave a deadly glance to Saanchi.
Veer ran out and Saanchi fears seeing Kabir.
Kabir feed her biscuit’s and forcefully made her to drink milk.
Kabir : Now u will be fine.Get back to ur work.
Saanchi doesn’t turn back and ran out.
Kabir smiles.
Saanchi went and check all her patients.
She wished all her patients sweetly and gave a deadly glance to veer.Veer teases her.She left angrily because she doesn’t want to spoil her mood fighting with veer.

Kusum’s entry : Kabir’s lovely mom/maa.
Saanchi : Hi Aunty ji.I am ur Doctor.
Kusum : Hi Doctor.What’s ur name?
Saanchi : I am Saanchi aunty ji.
Just then Kabir comes and stopped to listen his Maa’s conversation with Saanchi.
Kusum : Saanchi beta.I will ask u one question?will u say truth.
Saanchi : Of course Aunty ji.If  i know i will tell u.
Kusum : I listen about Dr.kabir that he is the best doctor in the hospital?is it right or not beta?and tell me about him?
Saanchi : Aunty ji i will tell u about Dr.Kabir but promise me u don’t tell to any one about this?

Dr.Kabir alert his ears to listen Saanchi’s
words.He is curious to listen,what she will tell about him?

Kusum smiles and says pakka promise beta.I don’t tell to any one.
Saanchi : Ok then.Aunty ji Dr.kabir was the best doctor in the hospital.
He is strict in rules and regulations.If any one breaks that rules.He will show his 3rd eye just like Shiv bhagwan ji.
Kusum smiles.
Aunty ji u know what Kabir is a good person but…
Kusum : No if’s and but’s beta trust me i don’t say to any one.
Saanchi : But he is Akadhoo,Khadhoos gollu types.
Kusum try to control his laughter but she can’t stop laughing.She laughs whole heartedly.
Seeing his mom’s smile and laughs.kabir eyes becomes wet.
Saanchi : Aunty ji why r u laughing?
Kusum :  I too call my son as Gollu.
Saanchi : Saanchi laughs.Aunty ji whole girls in hospital loves him.He is the heart throb of 1000’s of girls.
Kusum : Did u love him beta?
Saanchi : Haan i mean i love him as my teacher.
Kusum says ok beta.Where is ur Akadhu Khadhoos gollu?
Saanchi says Aunty ji,if Dr.Kabir listen this he will kill me definately.
Kusum : Ok sorry beta.This secret will be secret between us.
Saanchi : Aunty ji last but not least he is strict,serious from outside but he is good from inside.
Kusum laughs.
Kabir in mind : she really loves me?no,
Kabir what r u thinking?she is ur student.
So she called me as Mr.Khadhoos kumar.
Saanchi wait i give u punishment for this?
Precap :
Saanchi going to fall down but Dr.Kabir holds her.Both shares an eye lock.
Dr.kabir gets angry because Kusum’s health turns worse.All blame went on Saanchi.Dr.Kabir slaps Saanchi.

Sorry for late update.
I am trying my level best to give u a happy smile on ur face.But i promise soon u will get see Twist in tale.I just want all ur support that’s it.Without u all i am incomplete.

I hope u all like it.Please give ur valuable comments.U can share ur feelings & u can give your opinions & suggestions on FF.Any doubt just comment me.
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45 comments

  1. Mishty

    Mishty

    |Registered Member

    Nice concept.
    Oh scary precap hope the misunderstandings get cleared and we get a romantic scene where Kabir apologises to Sanchi

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Mishty.I am Sakash.Thanks for ur comment dear.Yes precap is scary but don’t worry every thing will be alright between kabir and Saanchi but it takes time dear.Keep commenting if u like my FF.
      A warm welcome to my FF💐💐💐

  2. Preetha

    Omg…kabir slap saachi???feeling bad for saachi…i dont want saachi to know kusum as kabir’s mom in nxt epi also please…plzzzz post nxt episode asap yaar and long one…plz post asap….

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Preetha.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.Every thing will be alright between kabir and Saanchi.But it takes time dear.Ur wish accepted Saanchi don’t know about kabir’s mom later i will reveal it.I stop revealing as per ur wish.Keep giving me ur wonderful ideas dear.
      Keep commenting if u like my FF.
      A warm welcome to my FF.Thank u so much for ur support for my last 2 parts.

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Neera.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.Keep commenting if u like my FF.A warm welcome to my FF dear🌷🌷🌷

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Asna.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.Keep commenting if you like my FF.A warm welcome to my FF🌻🌻🌻

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Isha.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.Kabir can’t slap her but situation makes him to take that drastic step.He in his place correct.Soon misunderstandings will be clear between Saanchi and Kabir.
      Keep commenting if u like my FF.A warm welcome to my FF dear🌼🌼🌼

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Shreya.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.Keep commenting if u like my FF.A warm welcome to my FF🌹🌹🌹

  3. Swetatitli

    Swetatitli

    |Registered Member

    Really I started laughing after hearing the names that sanchi gave kabir.really those were very funny.😂😂😂.but I became sad when i read the precap. But ur writing is awesome 😘😘😘

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Swetatitly.Hi Miss Butterfly.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.I am glad u like Saanchi funny names given
      to kabir.Don’t be sad in love fight is common.This will bring them closer.But it takes time to set things.Thanks for your support for my last 2 parts.Thank you so much.A warm welcome to my FF 🌺🌺🌺

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Vasundhra.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.Keep commenting if u like my FF.A warm welcome to my FF🌺🌺🌺

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Ruhi.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.Keep commenting if u like my FF.Actually due to lots of work i post late.I try my best to post soon.A warm welcome to my FF🍓🍓🍓

  4. riya

    hey sakash, u r osm…………loved the episode, don’t want the reveal of kabir’s mom’s character,but looking at the precap it seems like her identity is going to be revealed……..and kabir going to slap sanchi???no yaar……might be its someone else’s fault, hope the misunderstandings get cleared soon and we get back our cute kanchi back…….. waiting for next update asap…..

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Riya.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.Every thing will be alright between kabir and Saanchi.But it takes time dear.Ur wish accepted Saanchi don’t know about kabir’s mom later i will reveal it.I stop revealing as per ur wish.Keep giving me ur wonderful ideas dear.
      Keep commenting if u like my FF.
      A warm welcome to my FF 🍬🍬🍬

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Riya.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.Every thing will be alright between kabir and Saanchi.But it takes time dear.Ur wish accepted Saanchi don’t know about kabir’s mom later i will reveal it.I stop revealing as per ur wish.Keep giving me ur wonderful ideas dear.
      Keep commenting if u like my FF.
      A warm welcome to my FF.

  5. Sandhya

    Kabir forcing sanchi to eat is just awesome.
    I like it a lot. Scary precep ….. hope all the misunderstandings get cleared soon……….

  6. AnahitaAnnie

    AnahitaAnnie

    |Registered Member

    The names invented by Saanchi was awesome.. I have been reading ur ff form the start but due to study pressure and training I couldn’t comment.. But I just wanted to say I am a big fan of writing.. U have an amazing concept and story line.. I know the precap is scary but its all necessary for a fantastic and thrilling ff like urs.. I still am having a little problem with the title.. If u don’t mind or have time could u pls translate it.. But anyways, thanks for taking the time to post this fantastic f.. Will be waiting for the next..

  7. RANdomfANCreationz

    RANdomfANCreationz

    |Registered Member

    Loved this epi a lot and kabir feeding Saanchi oho bechari had to had milk I hate milk too 😢😢 kabir is so caring and sweet 😘 Loved the bonding between kabir’s mom and Saanchi 😊 Precap is shocking 😱😱😱😱

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi RANdomfAN Creation.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.I am glad u like kabir feed milk to Saanchi and sweet gollu caring attitude.

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi RANdomfAN Creation.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.I am glad u like kabir feed milk to Saanchi and sweet gollu caring attitude.Ya precap is shocking but soon every thing will be alright between them.keep commenting if u like my FF.A warm welcome to my FF.

  8. Cocoa#Love

    The best part was Saanchi’s description of Dr.Kabir and the worst was the precap, can’t wait to see or rather read what’s gonna happen next. Good job!

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Cocoa#Love.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.Don’t hate precap.Actually from misunderstandings love blossoms between them.Soon every thing will be alright between them.But it takes time.Keep commenting if u like my FF dear.A warm welcome to my FF😃☺😀

  9. Kashu

    Kashu

    |Registered Member

    Hey..Just read this part and it is amazing..
    Nice concept..Could u please give me the link of previous parts..Would love to read them.. And haa I loved the title of ur story…
    Post next part asap..

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Kashu.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.Yes of course dear i will give u links of previous parts in my next FF.Keep commenting if u like my FF.I am glad u like my title name.A warm welcome to my FF 🌸🌷🌸

  10. |Registered Member

    Wow…Bhaiyya superb,awesome,amazing,
    mind blowing…Bhai u again create magic.
    Now i am happy i know u bring twist-in-tale
    Great story.Hands off to great writer.
    U don’t like appreciation.But i can’t stop myself bhai.Please bhai ASAP i am dying to read.

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Ashwa.My Chottae.Thank you so much dear .I am glad u like my FF.Yes i am bring ing twist in tale.Don’t appreciate me that much.Without u i am incomplete.Thanks for your support Ashwa.

  11. sundari

    wow milk and biscuit scene is so funny..and with auntiji…haaaa…nice..waiting for next

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Sundari.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.I am glad u like biscuit and milk scene & Kusums entry.Keep commenting if u like my FF.A warm welcome to my FF dear💐🌸💐

  12. Pallavishah

    Pallavishah

    |Registered Member

    Wow dear
    It’s amazing and left me speechless
    I am commenting here for first time because I read it now
    Like the talks of kusum and sanchi and Kabir was listening them
    All was superb
    Precap is shocking
    Plzzzz post soon 😊

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi Pallavishah.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.I am glad u like kabir listening his maa and Saanchi’s conversation scene.Keep commenting if u like my FF.A warm welcome to my FF

  13. Sakash.

    Sakash.

    |Author

    Hi Annie.I am Sakash.Thanks for your comment dear.Keep commenting if u like my FF.I am glad u like names given by Saanchi to kabir.I am glad u like my FF & thanks for giving ur precious time to read my FF.Title Meaning : “My Target is to Fulfill my Mom’s dream And i strucked in unknown relationship”.

    • Sakash.

      Sakash.

      |Author

      Hi VINAL.I am Sakash.Thanks for ur comment dear.Vinal i already post 4th part read it dear.From 5th part love war starts between Saanchi and Kabir.Keep commenting dear if u like my FF.I am glad u like my FF.A warm welcome to my FF.

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