Meri jaan tumme hai (os)

I m again here with a new is my fifth os.Thank u for loving my first four read this.

Our sumo was standing on beach. .She was seeing the beauty of sea.A boy comes and hugs her from back.
The boy is shravan.
Shravan:yess sumo.
Sumo:jaad hai kaise tumne mujhe is beech pr propose kiya tha.
Shravo:nhi.bilkul nhi.
Sumo:shravooooo!!!how bad.
Shravo:bilkul jaad hai my chipkali woh yehi jagga hai yaha pr meri zindagi tabah ho gyi thi.
Sumo:shravan!!leave me.
She brokes that hug and goes to other side.
Shravo:oh ms suman malhotra rudho mt hmse woh suhana pal tha and I cant ever forget it.
Sumo:OK 1 sharat PR.
Sumo:u have to propose me again as u did that time.
Shravo:what??phirse aafat ghale dhalon.
Shravo:sorryyy joking.
Sumo:so propose.
Sumo: start.
Shravo:oh miss suman malhotra noo noo that time tiwari .again.oh miss suman tiwari tujhe dekha tu mujhe ho gyi bulne ki bimaari,kya tum hmesha ke liye banogi hmari.
Suman I love uuu.will u marry me??
Sumo:aww nooo.
Shravo:u r already.
Sumo:shravo u still remember.
Sumo goes and kisses on his cheek.

After some days.Shravan was sitting in office.He got a parcel.he was shocked seeing something.
He was in dilemma not knowing what to do.
Shravo:yeh sumo ko pta nhi chalna chiye.but mai uske sath aisa nhi kr skta.we both have to seperate
He went home.he get in fight with sumo.he was not happy but he did.sumo was not able to understand what suddenly happened but she controlled herself.
Now shravo fought daily with sumo.sumo cried but she loved shravo and never wanted 2 go away from him.
But shravo want her to stay away for her happiness.
He one day brought divorced pprs.
Sumo:shravan yeh kya hai.
Shravo:I m tired listening u.I m fed up.I don’t want to stay with u.u r a problem for me.
Sumo:shravan!!!wht r u saying u can’t do this.I love u.
Shravo:just shut up sign the papers.
Sumo:shravo we could discuss..
Shravo:just sign I don’t want to listen.
Sumo: say this looking in my eyes that u don’t love me.wht is issue .u r not telling me.u r lieing to me.
Shravo:don’t say anything.
Sumo:I want least pls tell me the truth.I m ur wife.
Shravo:I don’t love u.
Sumo:u r lieing say this looking towards me.
Shravo was not able to say.
Sumo:why quiet .pls tell me truth.
Shravo was quiet.
Sumo:tell me..
Shravo:tum bs chup rho and sign pprs.
Sumo: tell me truth.
Shravo:I can’t.
Sumo:u have to.
Shravo:i want divorce.
Sumo:I want answer.
One voice comes.
Voice:mai btata hoon.
Shravo:ram sir u here.but u can’t .
Ram:I can.listen sumo ur husband is a undercover agent.
Shravo:sir what u was not in our rules.
Ram:but wht u did u r breaking ur relation.
Shravo:for my country I could do anything.
Ram:pr suman ko.
Sumo:shravo yeh kya hai.
Ram:actually he agent he was in mission when he fall in love with he have to go for a mission related to terrioism and if they got to know about family relations ur life can be in endangered.
Sumo:(emotional)shravo itni c baat for u anything.
Shravo:sumo but.
Sumo keeps finger on his lip.
Sumo hugs him.
Sumo:I love u.
Shravo:me too.

After some days shravo went to mission.sumo was afraid.everyday she had nightmares.she was not having enough relief.
One day sumo was standing on beech (same beach). She was remembering her moments spend with shravo.
One boy comes and hugs her from back.
Sumo knows he was shravo .she was overjoyed.
Sumo:I know u will be back.
Shravo kisses her for head.
Sumo:shravo I m proud to be wife of u.
Shravo:and I as husband of my wife.
Sumo:I m so happy u r back.
Shravo:ha tumne toh soch liya hoga ki shravan.
Sumo:dhravan shutup not a word more like would I live without u meri jaan toh tumme hai.
They hug each other.
The end.

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  1. Very nice frd

    1. Prettypreeti

      Thko vaishu friend.
      Lots of luv.
      Take care

  2. Angel20

    Short and sweet?????
    Love you..
    Vaise what’s your age? Because you call me di Na so I want to know☺☺

    1. Prettypreeti

      Dido thanks.
      I m 13.
      In Feb 14.
      Lots of luv

  3. Hey…
    One more OS..?????
    Thanks ya….??
    Aaj kal tho ffs bahut kam hogayi hai..??
    So..I’m very happy reading ur OS???

    1. Prettypreeti

      Aww di thanks.
      I m happy to make u happy.
      Haan .
      Thanks again.
      Lots of luv

  4. Ufaaq

    hey my bhangre wali whats up?????
    kese h tu?????
    tere 5 ke 5 shots ere amaziiiiiiinnnggggggggggggggg sorry agar maaine kisi pr comment nae kiaa sorry for that han
    they were much more than amazing
    miss u yar
    love u

    1. Prettypreeti

      Hey my ufffu merit bhangra queen.
      Oh raabba thnko tu jaan le li.
      I m happy reading ur comment .
      Be with us.
      Lots of luv

  5. Hey di!
    LOVELY is the only word that I can think of and possibly say after reading this OS!
    It was soooo cute!
    Loved it!
    Loads of love!?????

    1. Prettypreeti

      Hey ans such a lovely compliment.
      My sisso I m happy reading ur comment.
      Lots of love

  6. WeirdSister

    amazingggggg preeti..
    Love ya..

    1. Prettypreeti

      Hey weirdy.
      Thanks ya.
      I m happy u liked.
      Lots of luv

  7. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Hey prettypreeti !!!!!
    All i can say is this was just wayyy tooooooooooooo CUTE nd BEAUTIFUL one ???????????????????
    Great job ✌✌?
    Take care

    1. Prettypreeti

      Hey fati.
      Thanks dear.
      I m glad u commented.
      Lots of luv

  8. omg it was so sweet cute nad romantic
    don’t tell me u r 13
    I m 16 and cant even imagine of writing such amazing os
    love u

    1. Prettypreeti

      Oh di its a big compliment.
      No j can.
      Lots of luv

  9. RANdomfANCreationz

    This is too good Pri loved it to the core

    1. Prettypreeti

      Hey jo thanks a lot.
      Lots of luv.
      Take care

  10. Ariana

    Awww… Cuppy sry so much for a late comment. I’m bad girl 🙁
    But the os was so cute!!! When Shr started being rude with Sumo, my heart shrank so much, but when u there, y would I worry? Ending toh happy tha after all! Beautiful
    pls make more os even if I comment late
    u rock
    love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
    take care

    1. Prettypreeti

      Ohhhh aru cupcakes.
      Thanks for this yummy cupcakes.
      It was so tasty.
      And obviously thanks for ur comment.
      I m glad u commented.
      Lots of luv.
      Take care

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