MERI AASHIQUE SEASON 2 EPISODE 16 (HATE STORY PART – 3)

Hey guys …I know I am late ….sorry for that …as actually yesterday I went to take xray ….so …I am really sorry for that ..
I am really very happy seeing ur comments in the previous episode ….I have replied everyone individually also…

Guys , lately someone asked me about my personal life and how do I know french and all …
So here is just a glimpse of my family and me ..
My full name is dolly Gupta ….I have just finished 11th and I am studying in Paris american academy .Paris .I am the youngest member of my family …I have two elder sis …
One is Alia Gupta ….she is doing second year IT in Nethaji subhas institute of technology . New Delhi ….and one is Riya Gupta she is first year biochemistry and is studying in oxford university .england ….
We all r not always together …
My mother name is alpana Gupta ….she is staying in Delhi with my elder sis …Alia
Riya di is staying in england with my uncle and aunty …..I am staying in Paris with my dad ….sounds so confusing right ..
Just in April alia and mom came and I got accident …now they are with me …my sis Riya doesn’t know about my accident ….as my dad and mom don’t want to give tension to her …..
Plz don’t tell her …..actually even she is writing an ff in tally updates in the name NEW STORY TO LOVE STORY
She don’t know that even I am writing ff ……plz don’t tell her …lol ..
I know french very well then Hindi …..so that’s y I add french lines in will u be mine forever …ha ha ha lol

OK now enough of my bak bak… back to the story …

So here is the story ,
“HOW IT FEELS WHEN THE ONE WHOM U LOVE , WHOM U MADE UR LIFE , FOR WHOM U R LIVING IS NOT URS ……”
This line was keeping on echoing on both swasan minds ….

@swara room ….
Sanskar comes drunk again …..this is the only way to lose his tension …that’s what he thinks …
His legs keeps on dancing ….he came with a brittle in his hand
Swara was arranging the bed
Swara : sanskar from when u started to have this addict ..
Sanskar is not in his senses ,..
Sanskar : from the time u entered my life ……u made my life hell Swara …..only for u …..only for u ….I had to sacrifice my love , my life , my happiness …….u and ur dad ……u both ….
Swara started to have tears ….but doesn’t show him ….
Swara was about to sleep in bed …
Sanskar : oh hello ….this is my bed and u miss Swara maheshwari …..sleep down …..
Swara takes pillow
Sanskar : listen I said sleep down without pillow , no blanket on this bare floor ….did u get it ….
Swara eyes become moist …..
Swara throws pillow on the bed and sleeps on the floor ….which is more colder as the Ac was on ….
Sanskar : now good ….and don’t worry this is just a first look , still teaser , trailer , premier and main picture is there dear …
I will make u something ,…..that u will start to hate to live …..like me ……I will make ur life hell ….more than hell …

Now Swara couldn’t tolerate .
Swara stands up
Swara (angrily) : enough sanskar ….enough …..I can’t take any more …..I am going …
Sanskar : where my dear !
Swara : I am going to my home
Sanskar : and who gave u the permission …
Swara : I dont need any …Mr sanskar maheshwari ……sorry Mr sanskar arjun malhotra …do hell with ur life ….
Swara was about to go ….
Sanskar gets furious …and catches her hand ….
Sanskar : what do u think ….u will make my life hell and I will leave u go ….yes I am sanskar arjun malhotra …..the only heir to malhotra industries Swara turns her face
Swara : u r wrong ……u r not the heir to malhotra industries that Laksh …..my brother …..u r not ….u are just set up wife’s son ..
Sanskar became furious hearing that ….
Saying this he comes closer to Swara ….Swara steps back ….
Swara : sanskar don’t .
Sanskar : how dare u talk like that about my mom ….
Swara : if I tell the truth y r u getting angry ! Truth is truth …..ur mother was a *****
Sanskar couldn’t control …he takes the bottle aand breaks it in swara’s hand ….
Swara shouts : ahhhhhhhhhhh !
She cries …..the glass pieces gets into her hand …..blood starts to flow ….
Sanskar laughs …
Sanskar catches Swara hair ….and says
Sanskar : and now I think …u can feel the pain which I felt ….miss Swara maheshwari ….u will never be Mrs ….and will never get a life to live
Saying this sanskar storms off the door .
Swara winces in pain ……
Swara in mind : I will not lose sanskar ….torture however u want ….but my love , my life is only for u …..
She cries ……..
Soon the most Deathful night fades ….

@morning ….

Sanskar wakes up …….he finds himself in the sofa in the hall ..
He sits straight ! And starts to rub his eyes ……
Sanskar : ahhh ! My head …I guess I drank so much ….need to get freshen up ….
He goes to his room and gets freshend up .
Sanskar : where is this Swara ……I guess still sleeping …..

He gets a Call
The screen pops up and the name was of ragini ….
Sanskar mood lightens …
Sanskar : haan ragini ..
Ragini : sanskar is Swara reach ?
Sanskar : ready ?
Ragini : she said she is coming with me for check up ….
Sanskar : shoot ! I forgot …hmm …I guess she is still sleeping …
Ragini : oh …actually its 10:30 now …my appointment is at 11 ….make sure she wakes up …
Sanskar : sure don’t worry …she will come with u ..
Ragini : thanks sanskar ..
Sanskar : welcome ….ragini …OK bye ..
Ragini : bye …
Both hangs up

AT THAT TIME SWARA COMES DOWN WEARING PURPLE AND WHITE SLIMFIT MODERN SALWAR SLEEVELESS

sanskar was just looking at her …or… memerised seeing her
He was looking at her from top to toe …..and noticed her hand ….which was band aided …..
He gets into thinking and remembers he was the one for the cause …..
He feels guilty …
Swara comes seeing down ….
Swara (lower tone) : sanskar ….if u would allow me can I go with ragini !
Sanskar was shocked and surprised that Swara talking with a fearful tone .
Sanskar : I ….I …..am ……sorry …..(Swara stops)
Swara (fearful tone) : its OK ….u have all right on me ….u can beat me , slap me , punish me …..but I have one wish sanskar …I don’t want to die soon …..let me be with my family for some more years ,,…..after that its ur wish …

It was a like knife stabbed in sanskar’s heart ……he is not getting y its his heart wincing in pain .

Sanskar catches her arms
Sanskar : Swara I am sorry …..I shouldn’t have ….first of all look at me …
Swara looks at him ….
Her eyes was full red with moist …..and tears ,…

Both look into each other ……
Swara lowers her gaze …
Sanskar : I promise …..that from now on ….I will stop drinking …..I promise ,,,
Swara looks at him …
Swara (tears) : y r u saying it to me …….like an typical husband …..I am just a ……..servant In ur home right ,,….only miss Swara maheswari never can be Mrs …..
Saying this Swara goes to kitchen …
Sanskar feels so much guilt ……so much ….
Sanskar in mind : what is happening to me …….

@mm
Ragini : ok Laksh when u reach office call me
Laksh : OK baba
Ragini : take ur lunch in time OK …
Laksh : OK …..darling …..
Laksh : and u ….be careful don’t take stress ….go in car with Swara OK ….
Ragini : OK darling …..
Laksh : call me after check up
Ragini : sure …
Laksh : love u …
Ragini : love u too ….
Laksh bends down and hugs ragini tummy
Laksh : princess ….bye dad is going office Now ..meet u in evening ….don’t give trouble to mom OK …..
Ragini smiles …
Laksh kisses her tummy
Laksh : bye princess ….
He again stands up and hugs ragini ….
Laksh : bye take care ….
Ragini : OK ….u too ….
Laksh smiles and leaves …..

Ragini : see princess u r very lucky to get Laksh has ur dad ,…
Ragini smiles …..

Ap : ragini ,..its 11 dear …..u call Swara ….
Ragini : OK ma …

@swasan mansion ..
Swara serves sanskar …
Sanskar was looking at Swara continuously …..with his dashing brown eyes …..
Swara didn’t pay a heed …but
Swara in mind : plz sanskar ….don’t …….I can’t be weak in love again ………
Sanskar gets call
Sanskar : Swara …ragini is on line
Swara wipes her tears and takes the phone ….
Swara : haan bhabhi …
Ragini : Swara I am coming now OK …..to pick u up
Swara : OK bhabhi …..u come …
Ragini : OK Swara …
Ragini hangs up and while the home screen comes back ….
Swara was surprised and shocked seeing Swara photo ..
Sanskar was not aware of it …he was busy eating .
Swara gets a hope
Swara in mind : I know one day even u will love me back ……I guess the is not far away ……
Swara gives him the phone back ….
Swara : bhabhi is coming now to pick me …..I may come home bit late …..
Sanskar : OK but be careful ….and take care …..
Swara : u r telling for me or bhabhi …sorry ,sorry ragini …..
Saying this Swara leaves ….
Leaving sanskar blank .

@Swara room ..
Swara was combing her hair ….and was getting ready ….
She was unable to lift to wear earings as her hands are band aided ….she tries hard but ….
Sanskar comes onto the room …
Swara : what work do u have in my room …
Sanskar (bit loud ) : for ur info ….its my house …I can go anywhere ……
Swara : but I don’t want to be with u …
Saying Swara was about to leave …….sanskar catches her and pulls her …
Due to imbalance …..both slips ….
Both lands on bed …….sanskar top of Swara …..
Swara started to breathe heavily ! ….sanskar tucks Swara hair …which was a disturbance ….
Sanskar catches Swara wrist and makes her wear bangle ……in the same position …
He then takes earing and makes her wear ……(Swara was all numb)
Sanskar takes sindoor and fills her maang ……swasan look into each other .
Sanskar goes closer to her neck …….Swara closes her eyes .
Sanskar kisses her neck …which gives shivers to Swara ……….

But it didn’t last longer ….its a dream and it was disturbed by wind which comes through the window …
Swara in mind : what’s happening to me ….but the fact is even though he is my husband …..I don’t have the right to touch him (lol)
Swara goes down …and finds ragsan talking ……
Swara feels bad seeing it …..and seeing sanskar glaring at ragini …..
Swara : bhabhi can we go …
Ragini gets worried seeing her hand …
Ragini (worried) : Swara what’s this ….and ur leg ….what happened ….
Swara looks on tensed …
Sanskar : actually ragini I ..was ….the one ….(Swara interuppts )
Swara : actually bhabhi ….u know na ….yesterday I fell down from bed and there was a glass vase and I got hurt ….and leg slipped in bathroom when …..(she gives a take blush )
Ragini understands …..sanskar looks on shocked ,…
Ragini ( naughty ) : devar ji ,…so bad …..u r so naughty huh ….
Sanskar : hmm ….nothing ….nothing …..actually the real is …I am the one ….
Again Swara interuppts ..
Swara : yes he is the one for the cause bhabhi ,…
Ragini (teasingly) : devar ji ..have some shame …saying it in public ….
Before sanskar could say anything ….
Swara hugs him …..which shocks sanskar …..
Swara whispers ; our matter will be with us only …no need to say any other person. …even if it is ur lover …..
Swara breaks the hug ….
Swara : bye sanskar take care ….come bhabhi …we are already late ……..
Sanskar was shocked seeing her behavior ….
Sanskar : OK bye Swara ….ragini take care ..
Ragini smiles …..Swara feels bad ……..and insecure ……

Swaragini leaves and sanskar goes to office with confusion
@malhotra industries …
Sanskar was just sitting and keeps on thinking about Swara and her words ….making him feel guilty ….
Arjun enters …
Arjun : so here is my son , my gold haan ……u know I am so happy today that I cracked three deals and the revenge of life is also over ….but I want the Dp to know about this ,…did she tell about her tortures to Dp …
Sanskar (bit angry) : dad …how can u talk like this about a girl ,…plz
Arjun (mind washing) : sanskar that’s what she deserves ….her father killed ur mother …..ur mother …..my life my mishti ……so whatever we r doing is correct …
Sanskar stands up
Sanskar : the matter is about Swara …..did she kill my mother ……did she ! No right ….we don’t have the right to spoil her life dad …..let her live ..
Arjun (angrily) : sanskar ….erase that from ur mind ….the first which she did is ….she was born as a daughter to Dp ….that’s her mistake …
Sanskar (angrily) : ohoh ..so if that’s the mistake …then u should punish o …not Dp nor Swara …
Arjun (harsh) : sanskar what happened to u ….why r u behaving like this …she is our enemy …
Sanskar (angrily) : no dad …u r wrong she is not my enemy …..if the case come ….then u r my real enemy …..
Arjun was shocked ,…
Sanskar (angrily) : because u r one who snatched my life from me ……I sacrificed my whole life for ur revenge …..sorry not revenge for ur selfishness ……u r my enemy ….u r my enemy …who snatched my love , my life ….u destroyed me ….Swara was right …..she is always right …I lost my whole life ..I dont have anyone …..its all because of u …Mr arjun malhotra
He throws all the files down in rage …..
Arjun (angrily) : sanskar what the hell r u doing …..are u going against me …..u r choosing that Swara over ur father ….
Sanskar (boldly) : if a situation comes to choose between u and Swara ……..plz don’t have any doubt …..I will choose Swara only ………
Arjun was shocked …..sanskar walks off ……..

@hospital
Doctor : Mrs maheshwari …the baby is absoulutely healthy and normal ….
Swara and ragini gets happy
Doctor : but ragini ….I guess u need to take more rest …..as u will have some complication in the delivery …
Swara (worried) : y doctor
Doctor : lists. Swara ….she is very young for pregnancy …and if it will be a normal delivery then the pain will be double times more than the normal …and if it is operated …then there are chances of loosing it ….
Ragini gets worried ….
Doctor : I want ragini to opt normal delivery as operation is a risk ….but for normal delivery ..she need to prepare mentally and physically …
Just eat more fruits and some healthy green leaves ….then it will be smooth make ur self ready ….
Ragini (but relaxed) : OK doctor …
Doctor : these are some medicines ….just have them in the appropriate time …u may leave .
Swara : thank u doctor …

@ pharmacy …
Swara : bhabhi don’t worry …..if u will make urself ready then nothing will go wrong …
Ragini : ya I know but still ….
Swara : bhabhi stop thinking negatively ….everything will be alright …
Ragini : even I wish the same …
Swara : OK come let’s go ….its already 3
Ragini : one second ..I will inform ur brother and come
Swara : OK bhabhi ..

@malhotra industries …
Arjun calls someone …
Arjun : I think sanskar is changing ….we cant believe him ….now i think we have to get into it …
Caller : OK dad as u say …
(Yes it manik )
Arjun : I won’t. Leave Swara live in peace …..and that’s a promise ……
Manik smiles ….and arjun smirks ….
Arjun says something to manik ……which is muted …
Manik : OK dad …make it as done ….I will do it and inform u …
Arjun : OK manik ..even u will do my job …..
Manik hangs up …
Arjun smirks ….
Arjun : miss Swara malhotra sorry ….Mrs Swara sanskar maheshwari …..be ready rp pay for the deed ……and mr sanskar maheshwari u will regret for going against me …..
Arjun laughs .

PRECAP : MANIK KIDNAPS SWARA , SANSKAR BUSINESS LOSS

hope u all like the episode and plz comment ……
From tomorrow u all will have regular updates …..tomorrow I will update first love is always first and then will u be mine forever …

Guys a bad news to all …that I am stopping charmers ….as I got some issues regarding it ….so plz ignore that …
Sorry for the fans ….sorry for hurting u all ….but i am sorry …I will the say problems in the next chapter …..

Sorry once again …..

Sorry for wasting ur time …..
With love ,
Dolly

Credit to: Dolly

42 comments

      • Dolly

        I have read yours ….but I didn’t get time to reply sorry for that ..
        I am really honored …that u really like my story……thanks a lot dear

      • Dharsha

        Arey u no need to be sorry and BTW I understand u might have been busy (I commented that plzz read Comments u might not know me….that’s y) !
        And also I didn’t say am a new reader in this chappy..
        That was the sole readonly for doing so…..?Plzz don’t say sorry?…..

      • Dharsha

        And also no need to say thanks coz I feel really good to read ur ff and comment in it……
        But I dunno about other ffs of urs….

        BTW how is ur leg now???I guess u r alright……(Sorry if I spoke more)

      • Dharsha

        And sorry for the disturbance again but I must say coz ur dp (the emblem pic )..u r really looking beautiful and can I call u by ur name itself coz u r going to step into class 12 and am going to step into class 11(just an year difference)
        Sorry if I spoke unnecessarily

  1. Thilo

    I really hate this sanskar so much… He played with her emotions n now he hurting her not only physically also mentally.. Better she leave him n move on with some else who deserve her love…

    • Dolly

      Oh oh thilo calm down dear …one side he is hurting her and on the other side …he is repenting and correcting do its balanced dear …
      U will surely get to see a new sanskar dear ..thanks for the comment dear

  2. Tvisha

    awsm yaar dolly!!!!!! so can you uload will u be mine forever as I am a die fan of that fan fiction!!!! and why did u stop charmers it was sso good and mesmerising!!!!!!

    • Dolly

      Thanks tvisha ….. I am happy that u like my other ff”‘s too ….
      Charmers I stopped as I have some issues regarding it ….
      Sorry for hurting u dear
      Thanks for the comment

  3. shan

    its nice…..but i cant c sanky caring for ragini rather than swara nd still he loves ragini…..

    • Dolly

      Thanks dasha. ..ya I will try to add ur idea ..but not sure ..don’t know how the story goes …but I will try

  4. Ayendrila Saha

    Hi i am silent reader….. I like ur ff no no love ur ff very much….. I have missed some previous chapter due to my exams.. … . Pls give me the link plsssssssssss ??

    • Dolly

      Thanks dear …I am happy that u like my ff
      About the links …actually I am updating it by phone so ….it’s difficult ….but u will try …sorry for the inconvenience

  5. Prateeksha

    As usual no words to describe. I am already addicted to your ff. Waiting eagerly for each and every episode of your ff. This is one of the very few swasan ff that I read as I’m a raglak fan. Keep up your good work.

    • Dolly

      Thanks dear ….I am very happy with ur comment ..
      This made a curve in my lips dear !
      Oh so u r a raglak fan …but this ff contains only little part of it ….but even though u r reading ….
      Thanks dear …..

  6. raglak

    for d first tym I am cmmnding here.i can’t stop my self frm it.it was nice.u portrayed swara’s feeling very well.its difficult to adjust with the fact our love loves some one less nd to prentend like just nthg happened

    • Dolly

      So I made my silent reader ….that’s good to hear dear …seriously I don’t know how u portrayed the feelings …but I am happy that u all were able to feel it ….
      Ha even I know the feelings ….it pains a lot

  7. Seeba

    I am a die hard swasan fan..but sorry…I hate this sanskar yaar…he is behaviour like insane…
    Pls don’t make swara beg for her love who is not worthy enough…
    Her concern towards ragini is too good…it shows how pure soul she is…
    But after all this..swara longing 4 sanskar is highly pathetic…. Bcz he tortured her in every way…it is bcz he is speaking some dialogues …it can’t be taken as repenting…u developed swara’s character well…pls don’t make her weak..
    She is independent girl and have self respect….it is not at all necessary 4 her to bear his torture..

    Pls make swara hates sanskar…he should long for love… If she accepts him easily..wat is d value of her????
    I am die hard swasan fan…but as a girl..I feel swara’s character is turning as naive….

    • Dolly

      Thanks for the comment dear ….
      Ya sanskar is behaving insane now …but don’t worry now he is slowly stopping the drinking problem …so there won’t be any tortures …
      Ya I won’t make swara character so weak that she will beg for her love ..
      When a correct time will come ….I will give a twist …don’t worry ….
      Afterall this ff is full of twists dear .
      Don’t worry swara won’t accept the fact easily …and forgive him ….

  8. Bhanu

    I just knowed that u had meet accident,accident by listening this word itself I was getting heartstoke its really painful one accident made my complete life a hell it snatched my everything but u Plz be careful dolly

    I was surprised how ur writing this many ffs at time its amazing

    ND same pinch even my di my complete family dont know about my ff if they know they will hang me upside down

    Coming to today’s update its tremendous but by seeing swara pain it really painful

    Plz ah hate story love story banadoo

    Finally ur writing skills are awesome dear

    Keep smiling ?

    • Dolly

      Ya bhanu I know how it feels to …..when someone who we share our life and whom we think as our life ..
      ..
      If he/she leaves ….the healing time of the pain is numberless ….
      Ya di I will be careful next time …you plz take care of urself.

      Oh really ….my family knows except riya ..she is very strict ….so …she won’t allow me to write

      Haan di…..love story is on the way …..?

      Thanks di ….writing skills …I learned from u ..the way u write ..I just read ur ff 3-4 times again and again …

      Di plz update urs. …I am eagerly waiting …plz it’s an humble request from ur fan

      • bhanu

        JOKE MAAT MARO u learn from mee ah its a good joke i heard noway days it made me laugh nd right now i posted part-25 too will see how far u will like it

    • Dolly

      Thanks dear ….I won’t let swarm forgive him easily …
      You the only one asking for more tortures ..ha ha
      No offence …I will

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