Mere Sang Toh Chal Zara(Shivika FF) by Archiya (PART 4)

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Hi my dear lovely Ishquies
Am back with the most awaited part of my FF.Sorry for the delay, wanted to post last week itself , but my OS took sometime …

Link for first part : Here

Link for second part : Here

Link for third part : Here

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Anika flashback starts:
I returned from my work one day and I saw two people sitting in my orphanage room, a beautiful lady and a boy, they looked like mother and son, along with her was my caretaker, who had looked after me from the time someone had left me in this orphanage.

My caretaker told me that they had come for my relation, an that the lady son son Daksh liked me the moment he had seen me.I lifted my head an saw Daksh, he gave me a smile, but I was too nervous to smile.

The lady gifted me some gold bangles

Anika : I can’t take this aunty

Lady: No calling me aunty, you are my daughter from today onwards.Call me Maa, an she puts the bangles in my wrist

Tears flowed from my eyes for this affection, which I had longed since so long, I hugged her tight, and she hugged me back in return. My heart bloomed with an unknown person liking me so much, as my birth parents had never bothered about me.

After sometime they left.

Anika to Caretaker: I don’t want to get married. I want to stay here only

Caretaker : Anika, some day you have to get married, and till when will you be here.You need your own family, a husband and children.Think over it. Daksh wants to meet you tomorrow

A Month later
“Anika come out soon beta, Daksh is waiting for you” said my caretaker.

“How does one get ready in such a small notice” fussed anika, girls take time, don’t they Bholu.

Last one month Daksh had showered her with lots of happiness, they had spent each and every free moment with each other, going to the beach, gardens, restaurants, their dates list was endless. She liked spending time with him now, but just as friends, she did not know what love was, but what she had with daksh was not love, like they show in movies, butterflies in stomach, music playing, heart beat increasing… an so much more

“May be after marriage I will start loving him” Anika told bholu

Even though not in love with Daksh, she was totally in love with Maa, the lady loved her so much , and showered her with so much affection, that she wished this lady would have been her birth mother.

“Anikaaaaa…..” screamed her caretaker again

“Ok Bholu, need to go now will come back soon, will miss you ,take care darling” saying this she bid farewell to her teddy bear.Little did she know that this cheerful anika was gonna b lost forever

“Daksh, where are we going today ” I asked him cheerfully

Daksh : to my home

Anika : wow, mom must have prepared dinner for me.

It was kind of ritual, whenever I visited their home, the dining table used to be laden with dishes, an Maa used to keep feeding me, even though I used to be fill.. but her love was so much that my heart wanted to just have more.

Daksh: Yeah, she has

They reached Daksh home, it was in complete darkness.

Anika : why is the home in darkness, when mom is there

Daksh : Lets go inside

Both walk inside the house, it was a big bungalow., anika used to always get mesmerized seeing his house.. she had got lost here so many times…

Now as she walked inside, Daksh closed the door from behind

Anika started searching for Maa, but she could not find her anywhere

When she came to Maa room, it was empty, she was about to turn when Daksh came just behind her

Anika(a lil shocked) : where is Maa, daksh

Daksh: she has gone out

Anika felt a little unease with him alone
Anika : I think we should go out, we are not yet married an it does not look good for us to be in a house alone at night, even maa is not there

Daksh comes closer to her, an tries to kiss her. She says she does not like all this an they are not even married.

Daksh forcefully kisses her on the cheek, an tried to kiss her on lips when she pushes him away.

“I said I don’t like this” saying this anika tries to walk away, but Daksh holds her hand an pulls her towards him. An takes her dupatta away.
She slaps him hard.. He gets more angry and the anger in his eyes terrifies anika…

She tries to run away, but he hold her from behind..

Daksh: Kisses her hair an whispers in her ears

Did u actually think that I wanted to marry u, I just wanted you… but I had come to know that you have high self respect , and will never agree to this. Remember u slapped one guy few days back for eves teasing you,I got irked seeing that, and I wanted you at any cost, hence all this plan
She gets shocked an feels sick remembering all the moments they had spent together, so all this time he was just lusting after her, an she had thought him to be her friend. She pushes him away an runs, an starts screaming, but the house was so big that her voice never went out.. she was no match physically for the strength Daksh possessed.

Daksh: Run as much as u want anika, no one is going to come for you

He caught hold of her again, she started pushing him again but he slapped her hard and she fell to the ground;he started moving towards her, an she started dragging herself away from him,When he was about to hold her again,someone hit him hard on the head an he fell down

An she saw her savior, she just got up an went and hugged her, it was maa,his mother. Anika sobbed an sobbed but maa did not know how to comfort her, when her own son had done this to her, to the lovely gal whom she had accepted as her daughter.

Flashback ends
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Anika turned to see Shivay eyes read with anger an his fingers in tight fists.

Shivay : Where is he now? I will kill him

Anika was shocked to hear the possessiveness he had for her.. did he really love her?

Anika : Behind bars, maa spoke against him in the court.

Shivay : So the maa with whom you are staying is actually

Anika : yes, she is his mom.As she had accepted me as her daughter , she fulfilled her duty as my maa.Days together after that incident I was in depression. We changed the city, an slowly with her help I was able to come to normal.. Even now she is by trying to fulfill her duty by getting me married to you. But Shivay, I am not the same person I used to be, some part inside me is dead, I can’t trust anyone, an may be never love anyone too. After all this do you still want to marry me?

Shivay comes infront and holds her hand, this time she does not get scared of him, that gives him hope
“I want to marry you now, more than anything, and fill your life with love an trust, bring back that girl whom I fell in love with” said Shivay

An anika saw hope again, of getting the family her caretaker talked about.

Precap: Shivika Wedding

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This part completes here, Hope you all liked reading it.. the next part will be the last part of this FF.
An I will post it next Tuesday, 16th May
Actually when I had this story in mind, I wanted to convey something .. most of us are moms to sons, most of us may be moms to sons in the future, it’s our responsibility to teach them to respect girls, to teach them she not a toy to play with, she needs to be loved an nurtured.., and make this society a safer place to live, as its said “Home is the first school, an mother the first teacher”

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40 Comments
  1. Dhar

    Sooo true ,each and every boy should know that a girl is not at all a toy for him to play , loved the episode to the core, plzzzz do post the next update ASAP , awesome episode ??

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Dhar 🙂

  2. Amazing episode. I truly agree to what you said Archiya. You tried to convey a strong message through your ff . And that is really commendable. Please post the next part soon ?….

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Sofiya 🙂

  3. Kanfi

    It was really amazing deaer..will wait fkr next part,.
    N the msg u want to convey is really great,,we,this society needs to teach their son to respct girls,,,,,n dont put limitatioms to daughter n make them responsible for all those things of whic she herself is victim…

    Amazing like it dear

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Kanfi 🙂

  4. Arthi

    I completely agree with u dr….. A man is successful oly when he respects women and it is true that parents shd teach him regarding respecting girl………I just loved ur thought and even I believe in this……before a man eyes a girl with bad intentions he shd remember that she is someone’s daughter sister and someone’s mother too…….and this post was superb and waiting for shivika relationship…..

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Arthi 🙂

  5. Mehakchalag

    Amazing…I loved it from bottom my heart.U r.I like your ending message.Girls are not toy to play.Amazing lines-Home is the first school,and mother is first teacher.

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Mehak 🙂

  6. AMkideewani

    Fantastic

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Crazygirl 🙂

  7. Kiki

    Archi ??? Awesome.
    The message is sooooooooo true… please post the next update soon

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Kiki 🙂

  8. Jerry_36

    Sorry for not commenting previously but its amazing Archiya. I loved how you are proceeding with the story, can’t wait for the next part. Try to post it soon. This one was lovely☺

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Jerry 🙂 an no need of sorry dear

  9. Superb epi dear….loved it….

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Lilly 🙂

  10. Alekhika20

    Nice update

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Alekhika 🙂

  11. Gayathri.visu

    Fantastic Archu….. I love Daksh’s mother! And ur ending message absolutely true Archu…. Last line HOME IS THE FIRST SCHOOL N MOTHER IS THE FIRST TEACHER! Hats off to u dear…..

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Gayathri 🙂

  12. Neha_Pheonix

    Amazing update. Post soon! Even I loved your short msg…that’s true whatever you said. Splendid way you narrated it.

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Neha 🙂

  13. Excellent

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Banita 🙂

  14. Pushpa

    Fantastic archu…..i ws thinking why daksh…..of course daksh nvr change & our handsome shivaye is there 4 anika alwaysssss……..

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Pushpa.. ur love for shivay 🙂

  15. Amayaa

    Wow Archu
    U r conveying a good message dr
    I loved today’s part but I love ur thoughts behind this more
    Ya THIS IS A DUTY OF EVERY MOTHER TO TEACH HER SON HOW TO RESPECT A GIRL

    U know I many times heard this news in news channels Delhi is not a safe place for girls MOST CRIME BASED CITY

    Wanna ask this question to them

    WHERE IS THE SAFEST PLACE FOR GIRLS IN INDIA WHERE THEY CAN LEAVE INDEPENDENT WHERE THEY CAN FLY INDEPENDENT WHERE THEY CAN BREATHE INDEPENDENT

    WITH NO OBJECTION WITH NO DEPENDENCY WITH NO CONFLICTS

    THIS IS TRUE THAT DELHI IS THE WORST PLACE BUT WHERE IS THE BEST PLACE THE ANSWER IS STILL UNKNOWN

    IT IS THE CAPITAL CITY OF OUR COUNTRY
    IF CAPITAL IS LIKE THIS
    THEN HOW CAN WE PUT EXAMPLES TO OTHER STATE
    IT’S TIME TO CHANGE IT …….. IT REALLY NEEDS TO BE CHANGED …….

    INDIA IS ON DE WAY OF DEVELOPMENT
    BUT WHAT’S THE NEED OF SUCH DEVELOPMENT WHICH CANNOT SAFEGUARD HER PEOPLE HER CHILD HER DAUGHTERS
    THIS COUNTRY IS OUR MOTHER NA

    Nd it’s good u already informed us otherwise gangaram is on de way
    But still this is too late
    U need to compensate this by making de next part longer nd longer

    1. Archiya

      Amayaa
      u have asked perfect questions… there is no safe place for gals anywhere, not just the capital city

      i will surely try to make the part longer, the thing ism if i make it longer it will lose its essence, tats why i keep it crisp

  16. Nikita_jai29

    Hii dii… Update is awesome and your message is also good and true..
    But in present in the rat race situation we are almost forget totally about this is… Home is the first school…..
    With lots of love and care dii..

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Nikita 🙂 lots of love to u too dear

  17. AnuluvsIB

    Wow! We got to see annikas past..
    and yay NextBus shivika wedding! Am so waiting..!!
    And archu I loved ur final authors note!

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Anu 🙂

  18. Anu16

    Awesome update…..finally anika’s past is out… loved ur note at the end…agree with it…post soon…

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Anu 🙂

  19. LAX

    Archu
    This was the best part of the ff..!! Good job again ???
    Your message is so relevant. Star plus has posted a nayi soch video in Insta today. It conveys the same thot. Do watch it

    1. Archiya

      Thanks Lax.. thanks for the link, i just hope ppl learn from that video, all the moms watching TV

  20. Amazing update…

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