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MERA BACHPAN KA PYAAR ::: SWASAN FF EPI 13 & 14 REWRITTEN

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hey guys this part is written with many changes from the last artie changes will take place from the topic SWARA ROOM so plzzz dont miss to read it…so here we go

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MERA BACHPAN KA PYAAR
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| EPISODE 13 & 14|

Episode starts from swara runs upstairs….leaving broken sanskar….!! Shan went near sanskar nd taps his shoulder…..!! Sanskar turns…hugs him nd broke down in his arms….!! Shan rubs his back in order to console him….!!

After a long cries sanskar bcm normal….!! Shan makes sanskar sits in the sofa nd kneels down infront of him…!!

” bhai…calm down ok abhi sab kuch patha chalgaya na….now what u going to do….!! I already said na bhai….!! U ll regret one day….see now what had happened…??

U broke her bhai…!! U broke her trust….!! U broke her heart…!! All the above u broke her love for u…!! I dont think u can get her back…!! ” shan said while passing him a glass of water…

” i have realised shan…i have tortured like hell….!! But that time i thought that shekar uncle only killed my father….i thought swara also know about that thats y i done like this…

but u know shan everytime when i hurt her it hurted me also….when i m seeing her tears…i thought to stab my hands for beating her…

but my bl***y revenge had covered my feelings….!! Now she is far away frm me…!! Plzzz shan help me…i want my swara back…i want my love back….she is my love….!!

HAMARA BACHPAN KA PYAAR….!! I want her back shan plzzz help me….” said sanskar while holding shan’s hand with pleading eyes….

Sanskar seeing shan with eager eyes that shan can help him in getting his swara back…!! But shan smiles sadly nd took his hands out frm sanskar’s nd stands up….!!

” shan….!! ” sanskar asked while looking up at shan who is turning towards otherside….sanskar holds his wrist…!! Shan turns towards sanskar nd removes his hand from his wrist…!!

” i m sorry bhai…now i cant do anything…!! Till last min swara had beared ur vemon words nd ur tortures….!! Now its time for u to bear the punishments…haahaa ( laughs sadly )

i dont know bhai what type of punishments are waiting for…!! May be swara can leave u also….!! U have tortured her that much….!! I cant help u…!! ”
Shan said nd was about to go…

” shan plzzz dont leave me….” said sanskar with teary eyes….

” bhai i just said i cant help u…that doesnt mean i m leaving i ll stand by ur side all time…dont worry…!! Now think how to convince her….” said shan nd leaves from there….

SWARA ROOM

swara was no more wants to cry…!! She just calmly sat on the bed for sometime nd thinks something….!!

She goes to her cupboard nd takes out a bag nd starts to pack her stuffs…!! On that time shan entered in with a bang…!!

Shan goes to her..!! Holds her wrist nd turns her to face him..!! ” what are u doing damn it ” is the only thing shan can ask now…!!

” kya…i m leaving this house shan…!! I m leaving this HELL ” swara said nd again starts to pack her stuffs…!!

” what the…!! Swara i m dieing here to make u both together..!! But u r simply saying that u r leaving this house ” said shan while throwing the bag somewhere…!!

” than what should i do…!! I need to give him the same pain which he gave to me…!! Now he realised his mistake he needs me now…!! So i wont be here with him he have to suffer shan…!! ”

Said swara nd again moves towards the bag…shan holds her hands nd kneels down infront of her….!! He folds his hand infront of her….!!

” swara plzzz i did all this for u both only..!! If u want to give him punishments than u can !! But plzzz swara dont leave him…!! Plzz do this for me…!! ”

Shan getsup nd wipes his tears ” i know that swara u still love him…!! But ur pain i can understand u want to give him punishment rite…!! Than ok give him…!! I wont stop u but plzzz dont leave him…!! ”

” ok shan but he cant get me easily this time..!! He have to suffer…!! Nd i will make him suffer…!! ” said swara while wiping her tears…

” thank u..!! ” shan wispers…” no sorry nd no thanks in friendship hai na…!! ” said swara , shan smiles nd side hugs her…!!

AT NIGHT

” bhai swara didnt ate anything till the morning…!! Go nd talk to her plzzz…” shan said while arranging the dinning table….

” shan do u think she will talk to me…plzz u go na…!! ”

” bhai how long will u hide frm the truth bhai….u have face it…!! Mistake is urs nd u have to correct it…!! Go nd talk with her….!! At least try to clear this mess…!! ”

” but what if she….” said sanskar in a scared voice….

” nothing will happen go bhai…!! Talk with her…!! If u ran away from the present…than swara will not be in ur future…”

” shan plzz dont say like that…i ll…i ll talk to her…!!” Said sanskar nd goes upstairs…

” oh god this couple na…impossible….god knows how i m going to solve this mess…” said shan nd again engrossed in his dinning setting..!!

AT SWARA ROOM

” shona ” sanskar calls while entering swara’s room…

” mr.maheshwari this may be ur mansion but this is my room…first knock the door…!! ”
Swara said with attitude….

“I m…i m sorry….” sanskar said nd knocks the door nd came in….

” nd mr.maheshwari may be u can forgot ur tortures towards me but i cant forgot nd forgive u easily…so first stop calling me shona…nd i dont have any intrest to talk with u so plzzz u can leave…”

” shona plzzz….i know did a sin…give me any type of punishment u want…but plzzz shona come back in my life as my love as MERA BACHPAN KA PYAAR… ”

Swara shouted at him ” u have lost the rights to address me as shona Mr.maheswarai More over what relation do we share and ur entering a women room at odd hours?? What will society will talk about me??? ”

” Swara plzzz ” he said with teary eyes ” but I have every right on you. Did you forget i m ur husband..” said sanskar calmly…!!

” Oh just now did u rememberme as ur wife. Where did this wife go while i was begging to listen to me once??? Ahh wr sanskar. Open ur mouth damn it….!! ” Swara was crying her heart out.

Sanskar was not able to see her crying. He sat on his knees and hold her left arm and his right palm wiping her tears…..

” Shona im sorry…!! I know sorry wont replace the things but i am trying to….!! ” said san while controlling himself not to broke down…

Swara shoved his hands with jerk “Mr.maheswari move away from here…!! Who am i too u?? ” Sanskar fell on his knees crying hardly like year old kid.

His shona’s words broke his heart into trillion pieces which were already broken.

He composed and stood up ” okay shona…!! im ready to relieve u…!! I will leave this place and move to foreign branch u can live here ”.

While saying this sanskar eye’s welled up with tears and his nails were digging into palm turning them red.

Swara’s heart was bleeding while hearing his words and her world stood blank. She had loved him like anything…!! She wanted to spend her entire life with sanskar like love strucken couple but fate had played so much in their life…!!

Swara thoughts again broke when sanskar again said ” i m leaving to abroad shona…!! ” thats it…!! We can see her fingerprints on his left cheek..!!

Swara held his collar ” what do u think Mr.maheshwari..!! U spoiled my life and tortured me to core and now ur acting as mahaan trying to repend for ur evil deeds…!!

Never try to leave this house or this world bcz this is my turn to punish u. U cant escape from swara’s court Mr.maheswari…!! Are u ready to face the world of HELL..!! ” Swara asked him with a rage eyes…!!

Sanskar shook his head and left to his room…!! Swara closed the door with thud, ran towards her bed clutching her bedsheet tightly and weeped like 1 yr kid.

” I cant see him in pain but but….. I cant live without him. How easy was for him to say that he will leave me…!! I will accept that i also said i m leaving him but that i need to give punishment…!!

But he…he is trying to give me punishment…!! I wont let u to do it mr.maheshwari…!! This is my turn to punish u..!! Be ready…!! ”

SANSKAR ROOM

Sanskar sat on the floor with his back resting on door ” As i was engrossed in my revenge plan i did not think u as my love. My only motive was to punish u as urfather killed my father who is my everthing after u shona.

Every time while hurting u, my heart was being pricked with needle.do u know shona i only ask that man to scare u on our first night but he did many more…!! Nd u know now he is not in this world too..!!

What would have happened if i didnt come on time that day …!! I cant bear anyone touching u shona…!!

You tell me shona when ur papa is dead and im reason for his dead will you leave me?? Wont u punish me r tryto hurt me???

I did the same thing shona…!! But now ur far away from me. I know that i can never be forgiven but atleast give me a last chance to rectify my mistake???? ”

Sanskar was weeping silently he had slept like that..!!

SWARA ROOM
After sometime…While swara was talking to herself holding her sheet..!! She felt an arm on her backside.

Swara turned to look at the owner. Her eyes popped out and swara sat on the bed with amazed reaction….!!

She whispered ” sansskar…!!”
Sanskar moved towards her and looked into her eyes with pain and love. Swara too drowned in his eyes..!!

Sanskar immediately gave her bone crushing hug and cried…!! As a result his tears wetted her neck and hairs…!! Swara too wanted to feel him and need support…!!

Unknowingly swara hugged him back crying on his nape…..Both stayed for 15 mintues feeling pain and relaxing in eo arms…!!

Sanskar parted and kissed swara’s forehead ” you have full rights to punish me swara and im ready to bear the pain..!!

He left the room with pain…..Swara was not able to believe what he has done to her. She was crying and confused…!! She was messed up by his actions….

Later shan entered the room, consoled her , fed her food and left to his room by bidding her good night…

MORNING : SANSKAR ROOM

Shan entered sanskar room and found sanskar leaning on the bed while sitting on the floor…!! Nd sleeping on the same position…!!

Shan bends down near him..!!.nd patted his shoulder..!! ” bhai get up its late…!! ” said shan while caressing his hairs…!!

” sry shan i slept three hours b4 only thats y…!! ” said sanskar while wiping his face…!! Shan smiles in btw is sadness sanskar smiles back and went to have shower..!!

Sanskar goes infront of the mirror Sudddenly shan’s face appeared before him” bhai once u knew the truth u will regret later..!!”

Sanskar was feeling guilty since he did not believe on his love shona and his life shan…!! He was angry on himself andgave tight punch on the mirror which broke into pieces…!!

“Aahhhh..!! ” sanskar yelled in pain..!! Shan banged the restroom door continuosly asking him to open the door..!!

Sanskar opened the door and shan was shocked to see the restroom and sanskar’s bleeding palm…Shan gave sanskar a tight slap on his cheeks making him fall down…

” R u on sense??? ” Shan shouted at hin which made swara to ran to sanskar room..!! Swara was too broken seeing his hand which was dripping with blood.

Shan “what have done bhai?? By hurting urself will make things replace once again like before?? Act maturely!! “His eyes were reflecting anger due to love..

Swara ” let him do shan…!! Let him do what he want to do…!! But mr.maheshwari dont think i ll leave u easily if u hurt urself…!! nd mark this in ur mind i ll punish u…!! ”

Saying so called doctor, he dressed his wounds and gavehim injection. He left saying not to strain his hands.

Swara and shan were angry on sanskar for his stupidity.Sanskar was lying on bed and watching their face with sad look…!!

Swara gave him stern look and left his room while shan too left him behind swara while glaring sanskar once again…!!

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21 Comments
  1. SHAN

    Awesome maha loved it

  2. Simi

    Awesome

  3. Anniya

    Awesome part

  4. Tamil

    Awesome

  5. Mica

    huh! coward Sanskar.. try to leave her after torture her ? hmmm…… *hammer over and over

  6. Loved it… ❤❤❤

  7. superb Machi 😊😊😊😊😊kalakitinga Mavina………

  8. i love this shan…episode is too good…continue soon

  9. AnuAnn

    Awesome dear

  10. Seebu_s

    Loved it…waiting for punishment to sanskar☺

  11. Sus

    Nyc

  12. Awesome dear

  13. Nice….

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