My mental wife..swasan ts…part 5..

Guys thanks a lot for all your comments…some people felt bad by my previous post..I am really sorry…

And yes this jesus sanky non jhok is not my idea…I was inspired by another writer..if you guys remember the ff tere ishq mein….I love that ff..in that the way she wrote Krishna and sanky nok jhok is way funnier than..this…it was Jay who remembered this and pointed it out..if you guys want then go read that ff..its a bit serious and emotional but sanky and Krishna were damn funny…*still laughingπŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

So this is the last part…

Sanky was sitting outside and crying…l a ksh was feeling very bad..

Laksh-sanskaar if you want to cry go to your house and do so…not here..

Sanky-please bhai..

Laksh goes inside and cries hard..

Sumi-beta its ok just forgive him…he is repenting for his mistake naa…

Laksh-maa you know I can’t even see one drop of tears in his eyes and if today I am hurting him this much there is a reason right…more than him its my heart which is crying….I was like a dad to him because our father was always busy whenever he needed a fathers love and care I was always there for him….I can’t even see him in this condition..I feel like burning my hand which slapped his face…..cries badly…

Ragini-its ok laksh…please don’t hurt yourself and him..

Swara come crying….

Swara-i want my dosth..I want my dosth…

Laksh-beta he won’t come please don’t think about him..

Swara-who are you..

Ragini-you have a dosth right like that he is my dosth means your jiju…

Swara-jiju I want dosth….crying…

Sanskaar hears this and comes inside.

Sanky-shona…

Swara-dosth…runs and hugs him….

Sanky-sorry shona…I love you ..I am really sorry..

Swara-dosth you won’t marry anyone else naa..you are only my dosth right..

Sanky-haan shona I am only your dosth…

Swara hugs him…..Laksh comes and pulls her back…

Laksh-she does not know about your betrayal that’s why she is loving u…once she come to know she will hate you..

Sanky-please bhai…and falls on his feet..

This was it for laksh…he could not control more..

Laksh-chote what are you doing..please stop it..

Laksh makes him get up and hugs him tightly…

Laksh-sanky….

Sanky-sorry bhai..please forgive your chote….

Laksh-haan but don’t you dare do this again…

Sanky nods no..

Sanky-sorry bhabi..

Ragini-its ok…haan and don’t insult my sister again..

Sanky-never in my life..

Ragini hugs him…

Ragini-you got our forgiveness but when swara gets normal her punishment is left..

Sanky smiles and nodes yes…

Sumi-beta why did you disown swara..

Sanskaar tells everything to them…

Sanskaar-i am sorry….and cries hard…

Swara-dosth don’t cry….or I will also cry….almost in the verge of crying …dosth you know there is a baby in my tummy..

Sanky smiles-ik and kisses her tummy…

Swara smiles….

Sanskaar hugs her again…

Sanky-bhai let’s go home..all are waiting for us…

Laksh nods yes and all goes to mm.

In mm all are happy seeing that all are soughted out..Dp also forgives him..

After 5 months..

Swara-dosth..dosth..

Sanky-yes swara..

Swara-bring me chocolate ice cream…

Sanky-now…

Swara-yes..chocolate and butterscotch.. Double scoop..

Sanky runs outside….outside he sees PPP Laksh going somewhere..

Sanky-bhai..what happened. .

Laksh-you pyaari bhabi wants ice cream…let baby come out..I won’t spare her…

Yes guys even ragini is 4 months pregnant…

Sanky laughs….-same condition bhai..

They buy ice cream…and goes back..

Sanky-bhai I will give ice cream to bhabi..you handle my wife..

Laksh-ok here is the icecreame..give me yours…and all the best..hope I will see you alive..bye..

Sanky is confused…

Sanky goes inside and finds ragini is sitting turned to the other side…

Ragini-so Mr.laksh came..couldn’t you come fast…no right…you always gave to be late..I know now you started hating me…you don’t like me and our baby..how sad…

Starts throwing pillows on him…

Sanky could not balance himself.. He was shaking…

Sanky-jesus…

He was trying to avoid each pillows ragini was throwing…

He saw Jesus standing there and laughing holding his stomach…

JESUS-OMG..I can’t laugh more..he take out his camera and starts clicking picks…

Sanky-what the hell are you doing..huh..instead of saving me…

Jesus-i am busy laughing..can’t you see..omg..

Ragini stops throwing pillows and turns back..and finds no one…

Suddenly someone pops from the floor..

Sanky-bhabi..what is this..

Ragini-shit…sanky.. Are you ok..

Sanky-perfectly fine bhabi..first class….

Ragini nears him…

Sanky-no don’t come near…no…

Ragini stops and laughs…

Swalak also laughs…who was watching the show..swara was fully prepared to watch the show with ice cream…as popcorns. .

Swara drags sanky and goes from there…ragini gives an I will kill you look to laksh….

Laksh quickly hugs her and sleeps..

Swasan also sleeps hugging each other…

After 4 months…swara gives birth to a baby girl…due to the stress and pain in delivery..swara gets her memory back…

Ragini also gives birth to a baby boy… It was a premature birth but baby and mom is fine..

Swara was very angry on sanky…she remembers everything what happened with her when she was not mentally stable..

Sanky-sorry baba…please forgive me naa.

Swara-you will get your punishment..

Sanky-ok what is it..

Swara whispers something in his ears…

Sanky-nooooooooo way…..

Swara-yes dosth..if you want my forgiveness…

So next day sanky invites all Hus friends,relatives,cousins,neighbors and all he knew..

Everybody were in the hall waiting for sanky and enjoying the party…

Swara was wearing a blue saari with black blouse..(the same dress deepika wore for yeah jawani hai deewani song batameez dil)

All were waiting for sanky …

Sanky came…all were looking at him shocked… He was wearing a joker clothes…he came there and started dancing like a joker…

All were laughing at him..

Laksh-shona this is the best punishment you can give self respectful bhai..

Swara laughs…

Later they name the baby girl sanskriti while raglak name the baby boy raksh…

While sanky was still in joker clothes..in all the photos he was sitting like a joker…(poor sanky)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

They all took a happy family photo..

While even jesus took a snap in his camera…with tears…

The story ends with a short note we won’t always have someone to guide us the right way..but for every body god has given a sense through which we can differentiate right from wrong…that self warning will always lead you to a path which either maybe wrong if you see the evil side or either maybe correct if you see the goodness side…so all the best for your future..
remember to choose the right path of goodness.

Hehehe look who is giving that speech…don’t worry I did not copy it from anywhere..its my own..πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

54 comments

  1. Alsha

    Nyc…. but why did you end it soon… it was going well… was loving it… I really missed swara’s mood swings, troubling Sanky nd all…
    Will really miss u…
    Cum up with a different one soon plzzzzz

  2. chanu

    awww
    soo sweet ts dr!
    i lv dis!
    abt krishna and sanky yup i remember dat ff and dat ws hillarious!
    finall swara gt her mmry back and her punishment ws awsome!
    lv it!
    bt y u end dis so hurry?
    huuhuu
    bt its ok!
    cm with another short stories!

    keep writing
    be happy always

    happy new year
    may ur all da dreams cm true!
    all the best!

  3. Astra

    Astra

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    Bad…! Very bad..! 😭😭 why did you end ff so early?? It’s super dooper hit right..!! All are liking this…! Why yar…??? 😒 I love this part very very very much…and i loved ur ff also a lot…!!! Plz, come back with other ff or continue this… miss u…

    Advance happy new year dear…

  4. Mica

    Mica

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    uugghhh happy ending.. well i dunno why , i understand Sanskar feeling those time, just imagine ourselves to marry unstable person, will we accept them wholeheartedly ?
    Sanskar even care about her at home

  5. Xyz

    I’m very sorry for hurting you. If you are stopping this ff bcz of me…please do continue…
    I always loved ur ff. Sry again..!

  6. Mariyajap

    Mariyajap

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    me too like tere ishq mein a lot and u know what yesterday i read the whole part once again after reading ur ts thank u soo much for thia lovely ts

  7. Maha016

    Maha016

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    awesome liya….loved it wowwwwwwww swara made him as a joker omgggg i m laughing like hell by imaginig it…hilarious dear…lovedddddd it come back with another awesome work…will miss u :-*

  8. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Liiiii.. It’s too good dear…loved it..Finally,swara got her memory back..Stupendous ending dear…Haha,sankys punishment was really funny,lolπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…Their bonding was very nice..Swaragini and sanlak,aww😍😍.. Keep writing like this dear.. Plz come back with another ff if possible*puppy face.. And yeah this time sanky should suffer..Otherwise I will not read it*blackmailing you..Poor swara,poor swara kehte kehte takk gayi mein*pout face…

    And yeah you asked me for register member.. Well,I will but after April..Actually,I am very busy with my studies nowadays.. So,agar mein register member hogayi then I will be not able to chat with anyone much..Or if I can’t chat with anyone properly then I will feel very bad,that’s why.. Anyway,I will miss you..Bye bye,tataπŸ‘‹πŸ‘‹.. Love you*tight hug and lots of kisses..
    Take care
    Keep smilingπŸ˜€

  9. Arshaanya

    Arshaanya

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    D way swara got her memory bck was so funny… dat reason omg πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    N abt punishmnt not satisfd bt anywayz was nyc… y u alwayz end ur stories lyk dis???

  10. Shreeyu

    Shreeyu

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    Lol Dr… Awesome… U ended it so early … Well no problem … I liked this ss so much u Didn’t made such a serious issue too emotional… This is ur art… Loved it … Punishment was so funny

  11. Zeestum2

    Zeestum2

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    Liyaaaaa!!! It was just awesome yaar too good love u yaar 😘😘 okay so brotherly love perfect πŸ‘then swasan love swaragini’s mood swings and sanlak exhausted πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ then finally swara’s punishment just tooo good πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜… love u an amazing ending will miss you ❀❀❀

  12. Nimisha

    I was loving this ff and i was a silent reader.Today i was forced to comment.I’m disappointed.I did not like this simple ending.You had an excellent plot but this story did not deserve such a normal ending.You could have shown how Swara recovered,Sanskar’s reaction seeing a perfect Swara,swasan married life moments.I just spoke out as i was loving it and at the end it i felt like why???The first part of this epi was cute but as it was proceeding,with a leap you showed Swara’s delivery and all of a sudden due to pressure she got her stability back.It’s hard to get a good track and u did but u lost it too πŸ™

  13. Mynalove

    Mynalove

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    the first part was emotional
    and the 2nd part was so funny
    bechara joker sanky (if only i could have seen him like that)

    awesome and amazing story and the speech at the last was good sissy

    come soon with a new story

  14. sneha

    awesome .but why u end it soon?i will really miss this story.u should come back with cute swasan story plzzzzzz.

  15. Shagun

    Awesome liya di
    In the last ep tu didn’t uploaded my comment
    I don’t know why they did that..
    I m aaking one question
    Who r adam nd eve???
    Plz give an epilogue
    Bye
    Take care and come back with a new ff

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