My mental wife..swasan ts…part 4..

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So the flashback part ends with part 3…now the continuation of part 3 I s part 1….hope no one is confused…

Here is the link to part 1(the continuation of part 3)

Part 1
Here

So this part is gonna start from where it stopped at part 1. .

Sumi was very sad thinking about swara. .when all this happened raglak were not there as they had gone back to mm to meet do,up,uttara…as when they came they could not meet them properly… They did not stay there as they thought swara and sumi would need them…

So raglak went back to baadi…

Sumi-ragini did you come here for a visit…

Ragini-no maa Laksh got transfered back to kolkata.so now onwards we will be staying here…

Sumi-but you have to be staying in mm naa..

Laksh-no maa now Swara needs us a lot and I dont want to go to that persons house..

Sumi-ragu I want to say something..

Ragini-what happened maa..

Sumi tells everything to raglak about swara fainting then coming to know that she is pregnant and swara revealing that sanskaar had forced on her..

Raglak were hell shocked…blood was boiling inside both…

Laksh-i won’t leave the blo*dy f**kin guy…what does he think of himself….

Laksh was going out while ragini stops him…

Ragini-fighting is not the solution…. You are not going anywhere…swara needs us now. .

Raglak goes to swara…

Ragini-shona…

She sees swara playing with barbie and she has a happy face…

Swara-didi you know I gave a small baby in my tummy…mama said I am going to become a mama like her…

Ragini had tears in her eyes-haan mera bacha…and hugs her tightly…

Swaragini were hugging each other….swara always got a mothers care and affection with her…..

Swara slowly sleeps in ragini’s embrace ….ragini kisses swara’s forhead…and makes her lie on the bed..

Ragini goes out and cries hard…Laksh consoles her..

Ragini-laksh my sister is suffering so much all because of that guy..I loved him more like my brother than a bil….but he cheated us……crying..

Laksh-he will suffer…

Whereas is sanky’s side…

They both were in the register office… Sanskaar was drowning in guilt ….

Sanky-kavitha do you think I am doing the right thing…

Kav-yes sanky…

Sanky-i left my family,property,affection of all and most importantly my shona….all for you..but why did I do this..

Kav-just a min sanky you left your property means now you don’t have any inheritance to Maheshwari families property…

Sanskaar-noo I left all of them….for marrying you but thing I do t understand is why did I do that..I don’t love you…I only love my shona…just because I got embarrassed of her doesn’t mean that I will just leave her…

Kav-sorry sanky I can’t marry a person who is on road….why do you even think I will marry a person like you who has no money…bye..

She goes and sanky smirks…

Sanky-i know this that’s why I lied to you that I don’t have any right on the property…

Flashback is shown…

Sanskaar reaches the registration office…he was looking for kavitha..he finds her talking to someone…he goes a bit near to hear what she is talking…

Kavitha-i know yaar I so lucky.. Now that idiot will come and we will marry…god he us so damn rich….I can just you enjoy my life…man you have to see his bank account balance..I had checked it..it somewhat more than 50 crores….wow I know isn’t it……..no what do you think I love him…not a bit…only mad girls will love him…example that mental wife of his….I really enjoyed making fun of her…man it was Awsm…yes I will surely continue my relation with sahil…I can never be happy with one man you know………….hahahaha…

Sanky was shocked but then he thought to playback for hurting his shona….

‘His shona’ his mind and heart mocked together..

Heart-ya right his shona who he left for that stupid money minded girl..

Mind-his shona who he insulted in front of all..

Heart-his shona who he hurted every second from past one week..

Mind-his shona who he called a mental girl instead of supporting her..

Mind and heart together-now tell do you really deserve to call her my shona…

No a voice came from up…

It was Jesus…๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Jesus-you don’t deserve her sanky..she is pure as a gem..you don’t deserve….

Sanky-you know all this was going to happen then why didn’t you stop me…

Jesus-my father has given free will to everybody in this world…like you even Adam and eve asked him why couldn’t you stop us from eating the forbidden apple….but the he said I don’t want all to be my puppet..hence he has given you free will…sanky you know when you were taking this step both evil and good were with you but you failed to see the good and ignored it…and as per my dad’s law every person is given a second chance so even I give you a second chance…its your wish his to use it..if you use it wisely you will be forgiven…and ya don’t forget to teach that cavity a lesson..

Sanky gave a ‘srsly’ look to him..

Jesus-abhey yaar go show her a lesson its OK I won’t punish you for this…

Sanky nods and goes…

Flash back ends…

Sanky reaches back to mm..

Sanky- you are gone…

He steps inside…

Dp sees him…..-look who has come here…the great sanskaar Mahesh…sorry the great sanskaar..

Ap and uttara comes there..

Sanky-maa…..tears well in his eyes…

Ap-sanskaar mera bacha…..and hugs him..

Dp-ap move aside…

She moves…

Sanky then explains everything to them…

Dp-you made this knot bow remove it by yourself…

Sanky-please forgive me dad.. Even Jesus says everyone should get a second chance…

Jesus-ohh hello stop dragging me Into this..

Dp-fine I will give you another chance but not forgivnes…

Jesus-look I told you just simply take my name they will forgive you…

Sanky eyes him…

Jesus smiles sheepishly and runs..

Sanky-thanks papa..thanks a lot…

She hugs all…

Uttara-bhai bhabi went back home…since you divorced her…

Sanky-what..who told you that I divorced…I just made her sign the papers…and I also got the papers back before it was approved…

He took the papers which was in his pocket…he tore it in front of all…

All were very happy….

Sanky-now I have to get her back..

He goes to baadi…

Sanky enters inside…he was going inside when someone stopped him..it was Laksh…

Laksh-dont you dare Mr.Sanskaar Maheshwari..
You are not allowed to go inside…

Sanky-bhai please bhai…please let me in..

Laksh-dont call me bhai from that tounge…what kind of a person are you…. You knew that she is not mentally stable and still you forced on her…now even after making her pregnant you left her for someone else….. Chiiii…

Sanky was hell shocked…..

Sanky-swara is pregnant…

Laksh-dont act as if you don’t know…then he remembered that doctor came to check swara after she reached baadi…..

Laksh-shit man…

Sanky-bhai please let me in naa..I wanna see her..I made her life hell..please give me another chance…

Laksh-you don’t deserve another chance..

Sanky cries badly…

Laksh also feels bad he was reminded something..

Flashback

Sanky was crying badly in school…he was 8 years old while Laksh was 10…

Laksh-sanky what happened…why are you crying…almost in the verge of crying..

Sanky-bhai that boy hit me…

Laksh gets very angry and hits that boy…

Laksh can stand anything but he can’t stand if a drop of tear forms in his brothers and sisters eye…

Flashback ends…

Now also Laksh felt like crying seeing him…he wanted to console him but he was very adamant not to do it…he goes inside while sanky is crying outside the door and Laksh in the other side of the door inside the house…

Ragini comes….

Laksh-i can never see any tears in his eyes and today I became a part of the reason due to he is crying…

Ragini-laksh he is repenting naa..forgive him…you love him a lot…don’t hurt yourself and him…

Laksh-no ragini he has to get punishments..

The screen freezes there….

Precap-hmmm…I have no idea…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

Please drop your valuable comments down……

125 comments

    • Maha016

      |Registered Member

      liyaaaaaaaaa…….what was that omggggggggggg…….everytime i m misunderstanding him….y r u doing this go i m angry on u….n ya i have say about this chappy na than hear it was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee…love u dear……..

    • SRSL

      |Author

      Thanks di…that’s why I told you have patience.1st chappy -hated him..
      2nd chappy-loved him..
      3rd chappy-hated him..
      4th chappy -loved him..
      ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…very funny…

  1. Shreeyu

    |Registered Member

    Nice one liya…. Hehe u know I was feeling Like I m attending my school on Sunday…. As sometimes we were called on Sunday for bible lessons as my is a missionary school u explained so well liya… Loved it

    • SRSL

      |Author

      You k ow how I know all this mine is a convent school..in all religion class Sister comes and preaches on random stuff..so I thought somewhere I will get yo use it…storing all this in my mind and not using is frustrating you know…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

      • Shreeyu

        |Registered Member

        Hey liya… To b true mujhe kuch samajh Nhi aaya wat u said i n reply… Hehe don’t mind Han but can u pls write it again…๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

    • SRSL

      |Author

      Hey idk whether you believe in god or no cause I not doing any preaching here..I was just showing the way how Jesus brought him to the right path..it had nothing to do with preaching and if you have a lot of problem please just avoid that part…sorry if I insulted you..

      • Xyz

        That’s what so called preaching…Even I don’t want to insult you. But, plz stop such things. Bcz, I’m regular reader of ur ff.

      • SRSL

        |Author

        Hey listen I was not promoting any religion here and there was no problem with tu since as I posted it…so please understand I am not preaching on any religion..its just a true fact that is present in Christianity and all over the world…I just told about a small truth present in Christianity that is free will..you had taken it in a completely different way…and thanks for reading my ff’s…and if you are continuing pleez one more thing I am also feeling insulted and this religion also..I feel like you have some allergy to Christians..it hurts me alot..pleez…if you did not like it avoid it pleez but stop trying to insult it cause I am a pure devotee..

      • Xyz

        I don’t have any allergy on christians. Even i studied in missionary school. It’s great that u r a true devotee. Keep smiling and tata… sry if i hurt you. And I’m not insulting the religion. Plz note it. I have much respect over lord too. And, i never insulted religiou plz remember it.

      • SRSL

        |Author

        Xyz I am really sorry if I hurt you..I know after hurting sorry won’t do but whatever I said was not purposely it was just because of a sudden anger…and listen don’t take this srly it often happens between people…we all are joined by swaragini..so now let’s not break this bond…I k ow that whatever I wrote in the previous comment was false…pleez forgive me if you can..๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

  2. NDSG

    |Registered Member

    Awsome.. I just love it..๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜..

    Aww my sanku..๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ Jesus showed him right path..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

  3. Maryum

    |Registered Member

    Chapter is awesome but one little request dear plz dont use dad word for god its realy harts plz dont take me wrong i m a Muslim so try to understand

    • SRSL

      |Author

      Ohh I am really sorry but I did not understand how does it hurt Muslims…anyway I am really sorry if I disrespected your religion by anyway…it was not purposely.. Just wanted to show how god brought him to the correct path..thanks dear..

      • Maryum

        |Registered Member

        Dear we believe in one god it not disrespect any religion but i dont feel comfortable as reading god have son that y i say dont use father word for god that it nothing alse plz dont say sorry for that

  4. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Hahaha,Jesus and sanky part was funny๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…..Thank God,idiot ne kuch toh suna๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜…Swaraginilak bonding is very nice๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜…Loved the chappy lii.. Keep going.. Waiting for nxt..
    Take care
    Keep smiling๐Ÿ˜€

  5. Ashwini Mool

    Wooow superb part….. ๐Ÿ˜˜ love it.. End swasan story awesome… Swara mantel h but she’s truly love his sanskar or sanskar also truly madly love his Swara….. Superb concept… Waiting for next part

  6. aamias

    U will never understand many religious thing so leave it don’t use ur brain for that just keep on writing
    One time I also told it to another writer bcuz she wrote cousin marriage if u start thinking ur brain will get exhaust ed better not use it ppl could read anything where woman are treated like craps husbands are morons Casanova while woman are virgin and toys at last they love with them . Just waiting to read a story where a woman betray s but husband stays there or husband is virgin wife is Casanova they end up happily . Where woman is bold strong but I know it will never happen so if this stories are there they don’t effect anyone then this small petty things are negligible too

  7. Anurta

    |Registered Member

    Lllliiiiaaaaa……u r superb…..
    Ur every writing is above imagination I haven’t read ur this ts today only I thought to try it and see the result I loved it alot….๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    Waiting eagerly for next part post it soon……..
    Keep rocking with ur super duper episode as u r always doing waiting for ur next part post soon……๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

  8. Astra

    |Registered Member

    Oops..! I’m sorryy dear, i have missed ur previous parts. All were awesome. Sanky can be excused. Bcz, he realized. Hehe, awesome part. Update soon….

  9. sneha

    awesome loved to the specially jesus part(thakarthu polichu adipoli) i want sanskar taking care of naughty swara plzz.continue soon waiting

    • SRSL

      |Author

      Thakartu ennu parayan ayitayi athrayinu ayitila…itu verum oru normal story aan…I will surely put an scene of that sought…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

  10. Jay

    Hey liya im jay
    Belated Christmas wishes my dear
    I like this fiction but nok-jok of jesus and sanskar is similar to nok jok of kannan sanskar in someone write sometime before
    I said nokjok is similar but story is different

  11. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    How can evrybdy frgve him so easily๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ
    Is ragini for real swaraz sis ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• m shckd by her bhvr….
    He needs punishmnt

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