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My mental wife..swasan ts…part 4..

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So the flashback part ends with part 3…now the continuation of part 3 I s part 1….hope no one is confused…

Here is the link to part 1(the continuation of part 3)

Part 1
Here

So this part is gonna start from where it stopped at part 1. .

Sumi was very sad thinking about swara. .when all this happened raglak were not there as they had gone back to mm to meet do,up,uttara…as when they came they could not meet them properly… They did not stay there as they thought swara and sumi would need them…

So raglak went back to baadi…

Sumi-ragini did you come here for a visit…

Ragini-no maa Laksh got transfered back to kolkata.so now onwards we will be staying here…

Sumi-but you have to be staying in mm naa..

Laksh-no maa now Swara needs us a lot and I dont want to go to that persons house..

Sumi-ragu I want to say something..

Ragini-what happened maa..

Sumi tells everything to raglak about swara fainting then coming to know that she is pregnant and swara revealing that sanskaar had forced on her..

Raglak were hell shocked…blood was boiling inside both…

Laksh-i won’t leave the blo*dy f**kin guy…what does he think of himself….

Laksh was going out while ragini stops him…

Ragini-fighting is not the solution…. You are not going anywhere…swara needs us now. .

Raglak goes to swara…

Ragini-shona…

She sees swara playing with barbie and she has a happy face…

Swara-didi you know I gave a small baby in my tummy…mama said I am going to become a mama like her…

Ragini had tears in her eyes-haan mera bacha…and hugs her tightly…

Swaragini were hugging each other….swara always got a mothers care and affection with her…..

Swara slowly sleeps in ragini’s embrace ….ragini kisses swara’s forhead…and makes her lie on the bed..

Ragini goes out and cries hard…Laksh consoles her..

Ragini-laksh my sister is suffering so much all because of that guy..I loved him more like my brother than a bil….but he cheated us……crying..

Laksh-he will suffer…

Whereas is sanky’s side…

They both were in the register office… Sanskaar was drowning in guilt ….

Sanky-kavitha do you think I am doing the right thing…

Kav-yes sanky…

Sanky-i left my family,property,affection of all and most importantly my shona….all for you..but why did I do this..

Kav-just a min sanky you left your property means now you don’t have any inheritance to Maheshwari families property…

Sanskaar-noo I left all of them….for marrying you but thing I do t understand is why did I do that..I don’t love you…I only love my shona…just because I got embarrassed of her doesn’t mean that I will just leave her…

Kav-sorry sanky I can’t marry a person who is on road….why do you even think I will marry a person like you who has no money…bye..

She goes and sanky smirks…

Sanky-i know this that’s why I lied to you that I don’t have any right on the property…

Flashback is shown…

Sanskaar reaches the registration office…he was looking for kavitha..he finds her talking to someone…he goes a bit near to hear what she is talking…

Kavitha-i know yaar I so lucky.. Now that idiot will come and we will marry…god he us so damn rich….I can just you enjoy my life…man you have to see his bank account balance..I had checked it..it somewhat more than 50 crores….wow I know isn’t it……..no what do you think I love him…not a bit…only mad girls will love him…example that mental wife of his….I really enjoyed making fun of her…man it was Awsm…yes I will surely continue my relation with sahil…I can never be happy with one man you know………….hahahaha…

Sanky was shocked but then he thought to playback for hurting his shona….

‘His shona’ his mind and heart mocked together..

Heart-ya right his shona who he left for that stupid money minded girl..

Mind-his shona who he insulted in front of all..

Heart-his shona who he hurted every second from past one week..

Mind-his shona who he called a mental girl instead of supporting her..

Mind and heart together-now tell do you really deserve to call her my shona…

No a voice came from up…

It was Jesus…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Jesus-you don’t deserve her sanky..she is pure as a gem..you don’t deserve….

Sanky-you know all this was going to happen then why didn’t you stop me…

Jesus-my father has given free will to everybody in this world…like you even Adam and eve asked him why couldn’t you stop us from eating the forbidden apple….but the he said I don’t want all to be my puppet..hence he has given you free will…sanky you know when you were taking this step both evil and good were with you but you failed to see the good and ignored it…and as per my dad’s law every person is given a second chance so even I give you a second chance…its your wish his to use it..if you use it wisely you will be forgiven…and ya don’t forget to teach that cavity a lesson..

Sanky gave a ‘srsly’ look to him..

Jesus-abhey yaar go show her a lesson its OK I won’t punish you for this…

Sanky nods and goes…

Flash back ends…

Sanky reaches back to mm..

Sanky- you are gone…

He steps inside…

Dp sees him…..-look who has come here…the great sanskaar Mahesh…sorry the great sanskaar..

Ap and uttara comes there..

Sanky-maa…..tears well in his eyes…

Ap-sanskaar mera bacha…..and hugs him..

Dp-ap move aside…

She moves…

Sanky then explains everything to them…

Dp-you made this knot bow remove it by yourself…

Sanky-please forgive me dad.. Even Jesus says everyone should get a second chance…

Jesus-ohh hello stop dragging me Into this..

Dp-fine I will give you another chance but not forgivnes…

Jesus-look I told you just simply take my name they will forgive you…

Sanky eyes him…

Jesus smiles sheepishly and runs..

Sanky-thanks papa..thanks a lot…

She hugs all…

Uttara-bhai bhabi went back home…since you divorced her…

Sanky-what..who told you that I divorced…I just made her sign the papers…and I also got the papers back before it was approved…

He took the papers which was in his pocket…he tore it in front of all…

All were very happy….

Sanky-now I have to get her back..

He goes to baadi…

Sanky enters inside…he was going inside when someone stopped him..it was Laksh…

Laksh-dont you dare Mr.Sanskaar Maheshwari..
You are not allowed to go inside…

Sanky-bhai please bhai…please let me in..

Laksh-dont call me bhai from that tounge…what kind of a person are you…. You knew that she is not mentally stable and still you forced on her…now even after making her pregnant you left her for someone else….. Chiiii…

Sanky was hell shocked…..

Sanky-swara is pregnant…

Laksh-dont act as if you don’t know…then he remembered that doctor came to check swara after she reached baadi…..

Laksh-shit man…

Sanky-bhai please let me in naa..I wanna see her..I made her life hell..please give me another chance…

Laksh-you don’t deserve another chance..

Sanky cries badly…

Laksh also feels bad he was reminded something..

Flashback

Sanky was crying badly in school…he was 8 years old while Laksh was 10…

Laksh-sanky what happened…why are you crying…almost in the verge of crying..

Sanky-bhai that boy hit me…

Laksh gets very angry and hits that boy…

Laksh can stand anything but he can’t stand if a drop of tear forms in his brothers and sisters eye…

Flashback ends…

Now also Laksh felt like crying seeing him…he wanted to console him but he was very adamant not to do it…he goes inside while sanky is crying outside the door and Laksh in the other side of the door inside the house…

Ragini comes….

Laksh-i can never see any tears in his eyes and today I became a part of the reason due to he is crying…

Ragini-laksh he is repenting naa..forgive him…you love him a lot…don’t hurt yourself and him…

Laksh-no ragini he has to get punishments..

The screen freezes there….

Precap-hmmm…I have no idea…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

Please drop your valuable comments down……

125 Comments
  1. Niku

    Amazing….I love d jesus part…Pls. put it more….☺☺

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear..I will try..

  2. Super duper awesome… Hate that kavita 😑😑😠

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear even I hate her….

  3. Astra

    Oops..! I’m sorryy dear, i have missed ur previous parts. All were awesome. Sanky can be excused. Bcz, he realized. Hehe, awesome part. Update soon….

    1. SRSL

      Its ok dear…thanks for liking it…

  4. Mirna

    Awesomeeeeeeeeeee dear loved it πŸ™‚

    1. SRSL

      Thanks diii…

  5. awesome loved to the specially jesus part(thakarthu polichu adipoli) i want sanskar taking care of naughty swara plzz.continue soon waiting

    1. SRSL

      Thakartu ennu parayan ayitayi athrayinu ayitila…itu verum oru normal story aan…I will surely put an scene of that sought…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

  6. Vyshu10

    nice….i wish sanskar gets his punishment from swara

    1. SRSL

      Thanks vyshu….haan sanky ko punishment zaroor milegi..

  7. Saba

    Awesome dear…But u don’t know the real story behind Adam and Huwa(Eve)

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear…actually I know the real story..the thing is that I just changed it a bit for the story..

  8. Hey liya im jay
    Belated Christmas wishes my dear
    I like this fiction but nok-jok of jesus and sanskar is similar to nok jok of kannan sanskar in someone write sometime before
    I said nokjok is similar but story is different

    1. SRSL

      Yes dear in the ff yere ishq mein…I was inspired by that story…

  9. Amazing 😊

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear…

  10. Soujanya

    Awesome

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear…

  11. SNY

    Amazing dr…
    Nxt one soon…

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear..

  12. Jesus…….cavity……he he he……amazing dear……

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear …hehehe

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear..

  13. Arshaanya

    How can evrybdy frgve him so easily😱😱😱
    Is ragini for real swaraz sis πŸ˜•πŸ˜• m shckd by her bhvr….
    He needs punishmnt

    1. SRSL

      He will get punishment dear…don’t worry..

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