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My mental wife..swasan ts…epilogue…

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Guys I am really sorry for stopping it abruptly… Actually I was getting busy day by day due to diff.programs like new year Christmas etc…so I could not expand and write everything…many were sad with me stopping it…I don’t know I am very bad at ending stories…I had no clue what to give in the epilogue so I asked Rabia di to help me..she gave me this idea for epilogue…

Swaraglak were laughing like tell seeing sanky in jokers clothes…

Ragini comes and pulls his cheeks-omg my bil looks so cute…

Sanky pouts…all bursts into laughter…

Sanky looks at swara and gives her “I will show you” look…

Swara gives”let’s see”look…

All go to their rooms… Sanky goes inside the washroom to remove all these clothes and stuff.

It has been one hour since he went inside…

Swara slowly knocks….-sanky are you sleeping inside…

Suddenly he opens the door…

Sanky-removing that makeup takes hours…panting heavily…

Swara laughs sanskaar looks at she stops…

Swara-good night..I am going to sleep…me and baby will sleep in the bed..

Sanky-then what about me…

Swara-you sleep in the cradle..

Sanky-ohk……what are you kidding me..

Swara nods while she gives a flying kiss and says good night…

Sanky-not fair..

Swara- everything is fair in love and war…dear..

Sanky adjusting himself in the sofa-wat does war have to do with this…

Sanky turns and looks at swara and the baby…

He was very happy….he was thinking about how he dealt with her mind swings…

Flashback…

Swara was changing day by day…she used to irritate sanky like hell…sanky sometimes got angry but he always dealt her with love…he never showed any form of his anger to her during those months….only pure love for his jaan and their symbol of love…

Swara-sanky I want milk chocolate…

Sanky bring milk chocolate and gives it to her within 10 min…

Swara-nooo I want dark chocolate…

Sanky-what swara..

He bring dark chocolate…

Swara-actually sanky I want chocolate ice cream..

Sanky-god…

Sanky goes and bring chocolate ice cream….

Swara eats the entire box…shocking sanky..

Sanky-where does this go swara…

Swara-shut up and go bring me some spicy flavour chips…

Sanky gives an impossible look…

He goes and bring three packets..he gives one to swara and keeps the other two inside the cupboard…

Swara-sanky give those two also…

Sanky-no swara your stomach will burst…

Swara cries-mama….jiju…diii…he is not giving me chips..

Sanky takes it and gives it to her-dramebaaz..

Swara smiles and haves it peacefully…

She sleeps…after sometimes sanky bring milk..as per doctors advice it can keep her healthy…

Sanky-shona have this milk..

Swara-yewww…its tastes like potty…

Sanky-yuck…..leave that and have this milk..

Swara-nooooooo jijuuuuu…..screams…

Sanky-jiju me bachhe have this milk..

Laksh comes running…-what happened shona..

Swara-jiju dosth is forcing me to drink that yuck……pouts sadly…

Laksh-sanky you don’t even know how to handle her…five the milk..he goes down and puts chocolate syrup and brings it…

Laksh-shona here this is chocolate milkshake..

Shona-yummm….she has the whole thing in one go..

Sanky stand there with open mouth-srsly…

Swalak nods…

Sanky atoms his foot angrily-bhabii…

Ragini comes there-what happened sanky..why are you screaming…

Sanky-bhabi this is not fare..look at that only when I give she doesn’t drink…not fair right..I take all the trouble and bhai gets the credit…

Ragini-yes you right what is this Laksh…first of all your not there at home to take care of me..second of all when you find sanky doing anything good you come in between and now when he took the trouble to make the milk you cone and take her side and make him bad in front of her…

Sanky-yes bhabi and side hugs her while putting his head on her shoulder…

Ragini-its OK sanky don’t worry…

Laksh-arre I was just helping shona and looks at her…

Swara was sleeping peacefully with a face “call me once you all are over”…she had a cute smile plastered on he face..

Raglaksan bursts out laughing…

Ragini-for the person we all are fighting she is sleeping peacefully…

Sanky used to fulfill both swaragini’s wishes as Laksh had to go to office…

Both were hard to manage….for swara whatever he bring she would ask something else instead of having it…while ragini used to have a lot of things and her lists never get over…

Swaragini used to fight over silly matters while sanky used to stand there with a expression I have no idea what’s happening…because if he goes in between them both will shout at him..

Ragini wanted to watch romantic Hindi movies while swara wanted to watch chota bheem…

Swara while watching bheem-bheem bheem bheem chota bheem chota bheem….dii bheem is my hero…

Sanky-that stupid cartton character has more luck than me…

He also was watching it….while

sanky-hey that princess indumati looks pretty nice….then he realized….god sanky after joining with swara you totally changed into a child….scratches his head….

Ragini used to watch romantic Hindi movie cause still he has to stay there because both swaragini sees it together and at the time of romance he has to come and close swara’s eyes as per ragini’s order. .

Both swaragini used to watch Hindi serials…

Swaragini were crying seeing kasam…

Ragini-swara why can’t that stupid rishi understand that tanuja won’t cheat him…look how much he is insulting that poor girl who is trying to save his family from humiliation..

Swara-haan di that rishi does not understand tanuja..poor girl..look how she is crying..

Both hug EO and wipes tears…while sanky was horrified seeing his wife and bhabi so serious about some stupid serial…

Sanky-god are they living inside that show…

Swara wanted to go to park while ragini wanted to go to beach…

He first takes swara to park then ragini to beach….more than swaragini sanky used to get tired each moment cursing Laksh for giving him two responsibility while he was struggling with one…

Months pass by swara was in her ninth month…

Once swara was sitting in her room…she looks at the time and finds its 2:00….

Swara-its time for chota bheem…

She runs downstairs…. Sanky had warned her more than hundred time not to run or climd down the stairs fast..she did not listen…

Swara runs downstairs and in this process she falls and her head hits the staircase rail…

Note-thats how she got her memory back..

She cries in pain ragsan comes running down to help swara…because of tension and stress seeing swara ragini also gets labour pain…

Sanky also was crying seeing both of them as dp,ap and uttara had went to Mumbai and Laksh was in office…

He could not handle both …he was going out to start his car when suddenly Laksh comes in…

Laksh was shocked seeing both of them crying in pain…

Laksh-sanky start the car fast…

Sanky goes an starts the car…they take both of them inside the car and rushes to the hospital…

There were a lot if risks for both swaragini as swara had hit her stomach down which can hurt the baby while ragini was only in her eighth month…so it would be a premature delivery..

But then with gods grace all four were fine…

Flashback ends while sanky open his eyes seeing swara screaming…

Swara-sanky don’t you want to go to office… Its been months you went…now get up and go get ready..

Sanky-oho let me romance with my kiddo wife..
And pulls her…

Swara-ohh hello you are a kiddo not me…

Sanky-then today your kiddo will show you how to make more kiddos…

Swara-chii besharam..

Sanky starts romancing with her while swara also lost herself..both again became one…but this time with his shona’s consent….

They lived happily everafter….

Bye hope you all are happy with this…I can’t do more…*tired…

Please comment and sorry to people I did not comment actually was busy will surely reply when free…

84 Comments
  1. Simi

    Superb..

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dii…

  2. Astra

    Ur awesome dear… plz come back with a raglak ff… plz…plz…

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear..yes my next one is surely on raglak…

    1. SRSL

      Thanks…

    1. SRSL

      Thanks…

  3. Maryum

    Nice

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear…

  4. Nice one dear

    1. SRSL

      Thanks…

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear…

  5. RakshaSwasan

    Lovely……………….. come back with new one di………..

    1. SRSL

      Thanks choti….you are my third choti here..and ya call me di if you are below 13….hehe just kidding…you can always call me diii cause I am used to it..I am the eldest in my entire family cousins etc…so you know all calls me Chechi(in Malayalam)

  6. Wow loved it ❀️

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear..

  7. Deeksha gupta

    Awesome ..
    Happy new year …

    1. SRSL

      Thanks…

  8. Mynalove

    waah this was so hilarious Liya
    i think this the best ending u gave to a story
    i’m still going lol

    and a Happy new year to u
    may u achieve all ur dreams

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dii..uff you know its not at all my idea…Credits-rabia dii..cause I had no idea what to give in an epilogue…

      1. Mynalove

        naaah then credits to u and Rabia di too

  9. Damn good….. loved it

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear..

  10. Mariyajap

    awesome liya

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dii…

  11. Rabia

    hehehehe i was wondering who else rabia di is here then i thought that it must be 2nd rabia.. because i totally forgot about the name as usual (because im poor in remembering story and author’s name ) then i realized ooopppsss it was mee hehehehehee and awesomeee epilougee liyaa :* :* and dont worry reply when u will be free πŸ˜‰

    1. SRSL

      Diii you started forgetting your own name…😱😱😱go to the doctor and get a check up done…thanks and this was because of your idea cause I was totally clueless on what to give..glad you liked it..

      1. Rabia

        hehehehehe yaa i thinkk i should goo to doc πŸ˜‰ hehehehe

  12. Soujanya

    Awesome…😊

    1. SRSL

      Thanks…

  13. Good story wanted greater punishment but I really liked ur writing style

    1. SRSL

      Thanks…

  14. Alsha

    Haiiii thanks a lot dr for showing swara’s mood swings in epilogue. Ad poor sanskar. ..
    It was really awesome dear…..the fruit of hard work always pleasure…. seriously it was too good…..
    Thanks 4 the effort u put in
    And happy new yr..
    Cum up with another awesome cute lovely story πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    1. SRSL

      Thanks a lot….I will come up with another story but after Jan 20 cause my exams are starting..

  15. Deeksha

    Awesome dear…..!!!!!!! Thanks for the epilogue…..!!!!!!

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dii…

  16. Awsm epilogue…..now this is d perfect ending

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dea

  17. SNY

    Amazing Liya….!!

    1. SRSL

      Thanks a lot..

  18. superb ending dr plz come soon wid new concept new ff n thank 4 ur ff

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear..I will write new one after my exams get over..

  19. Raina

    so sorry for not commenting in the last few shots, ok ok! i agree that i didn’t comment from the second shot, sorry was a little busy *holding my ears* your ss was really really very amazing, the conversation of jesus and sanky, innocence of swara, and now this epilogue which made me laugh heartily because of swaragini tantrums on sanky, i loved it, enjoyed every bit of it, well done *clapping my hands*

    1. SRSL

      It k dii..in sometimes even I get lazy and don’t comment…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰thanks and glad you loved it..

  20. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Superrrr, marvelous, stupendous, mind blowing ending liiiii.. Loved it..sanky shocks,swaragini rocksπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.. Keep writing like this dear…I will be not in tu till February bcz my exams are starting from 7th January..So till then take care, bye bye, lots of love and all the best for the further parts of your every ff.. Keep smilingπŸ˜€πŸ˜€..

    1. SRSL

      Uma HiFi even my exams are starting on next next Sunday…even I am taking a short break from TU…thanks this time you have no complain*praising lord…

      1. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

        Yeah Hi-fiiiii..Waa!that’s called kismat connectionπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰.. All the best for your exams in advance dear.. Rock the sheets..

      2. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

        BTW,you mean to say mein complain karti hu.. I am a complaint box*crying tone… Gooooo,I will not talk with you*dramatically..

      3. SRSL

        Ohh merit maa stop being so dramatic like shona…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

      4. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

        Hehe*blushing smile

  21. Tamil

    Awesome

    1. SRSL

      Thanks…

  22. awesome loved it

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear….where are you in Kerala..

      1. kottayam

    2. SRSL

      You live there or some where else..

      1. my district is kottayam i am living in a village near kottayam. where are u living?

    3. SRSL

      Abu Dhabi….capital of UAE..

  23. Vyshu10

    superb…glad that u wrote an epilogue

    1. SRSL

      Thanks vyshu….πŸ˜™πŸ˜™

  24. Mumpi

    nice one

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear….

  25. Nailed it

    1. SRSL

      thanks choti…

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear…

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear😘😘😘

  26. Zeestum2

    Liyaaaaa just awesome yaar and milk tastes like potty? Yuck! But overall the epilogue was amazing gonna miss you come back with something soon 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    1. SRSL

      Thanks diii…ik

      1. Zeestum2

        Love you liyuuuu 😘😘😘

    2. SRSL

      Awww…how sweet..

  27. G.Chandu

    awesome…!!loved it…!!

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear…

  28. FROZEN CHOCO

    ha ha ha… lol.. poor sanky.. loved it..☺☺

    1. SRSL

      Thanks dear…

  29. Shrinjal

    Amazing dear

    1. SRSL

      Thanks diii.

  30. Shifa96

    Awesome

    1. SRSL

      Thanks…

  31. Nice…..

    1. SRSL

      Thanks…

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