MEMORIES DONT FADE WHEN YOU ARE IN IT…(Ishqbaaz OS) Part-1

Hii friends , I got a story in my mind , so am writing it up as an one shot in three parts..please do tell me if its good or bad .

.Next day ,
Morning..oberoi mansion ..
Soumya : hmm I am really feeling hungry….
She stands and moves towards the kitchen when rudra comes to her .
Rudra: if you are going to the kitchen, I will also come with you..
Soumya: then you will have to help me in preparing the food…

They both enter the kitchen .they are surprised to see shivaay preparing food for everyone…
Rudra:bhai you…….so your conference.
Soumya: you are supposed to be there right now bhaii..
Shivaay smiles at them and continues his work.
Dadi comes there hearing rudra and soumya.
Dadi : beta …how come you are here..the meeting was really important for you right.
Priy: did it get cancelled…
Shivaay finishes the work and calls everybody to the hall..
Shivaay: I did not skip the meeting neither it cancelled..but the point is that I had got the remaining votes from the Arora’s..
Om: bhaiyya ..seriously are you telling us that the same Arora’s who wanted to destroy us , supported us right now..
Jhanvi: unbelievable..how can that be possible ..
Shivaay: even I was shocked . I had been there early morning ..

Fb shown********************
Shivaay: is everything ready Mr .Bose (bose is shivaay’s secretary)
Bose: yes sir..
Suddenly bose gets some call and says to shivaay that mr. arora is arriving..
Shivaay greets arora ..
Arora: I am ready to give my two votes..
Shivaay: that’s nice of you..but you never supported us these many years ..and why now.
Arora: I know that, I am sorry for that..but now I want to know how you know this girl..
He was pointing at the family picture taken by rudra , which was posted on rudra’s fb…
Shivaay : that’s anika..my wedding planner..
Arora : ok any way I am leaving now..we will meet next week for the schedule meeting..
Before shivaay could shoot any questions further , mr.arora leaves..
Fb ends **************************

Jhanvi : how does he know anika..
Rudra : he might have been searching for a wedding planner..
Soumya: that’s not the reason he gave the votes..there is something else..
Suddenly anika enters humming a song ..
Anika greets dadi..she is surprised to see everyone staring at her ..
Anika: what happened to everyone..
She see’s shivaay there ,smiling at her.
Anika : your meeting is today right..
Dadi : beta we got the remaining votes ..
Anika: that’s great news .
Shivaay shows the picture of their board members to anika ..
Shivaay: see if you can recognize anybody in the picture..
Anika eyes through the picture ..suddenly her eyes gets fixed on something..she sits back on the sofa with a shock..
Anika: papa …
Tears fell off from her eyes..

Everbody gets shocked hearing her ..
Shivaay :what ..mr .arora is your dad..
Dadi:anika beta , are you alright..
Soumya: do you know mr.arora personally dadi…
Om: dad and mr.arora were close friends , and we always visited their house , and had a great bonding with his daughters..but a accident changed the deep friendship to hatred ..his both daughters died ..
Shivaay comes near anika and turns her , he has tears in his eyes..tears of happiness .anika is surprised too see him like this..
Shivaay holds her hand and says: niaa..

Next part: anika reveals the past incidents…..ishana entry …childhood memories ..

Ok guys ..i know that it isn’t as good as the other os’s . but forgive me as its my first attempt..

42 comments

  1. Bshama1239

    |Registered Member

    Dear princess …. First of all around of applause for you’re attempt it isn’t boring at all but interesting and I am happy with it ….
    Please continue writing as I personally feel that you’re a nice wait…
    Awesome writer … Dear… And I feel that u r writing better than mine…
    Best of luck …

    • Cuteprincess

      |Author

      shama dii ….your words are giving me a lot of encouragement .dii you are elder to me and I respect your words …. but I feel your writing is better than mine.

  2. Bshama1239

    |Registered Member

    Dear princess …. First of all around of applause for you’re attempt it isn’t boring at all but interesting and I am happy with it ….
    Please continue writing as I personally feel that you’re a nice wait…
    Awesome writer … Dear… And I feel that u r writing better than mine…
    Best of luck …
    Title and dp of story is awesome

  3. Safaq

    Awsome yaar plz post soon …..and a request plz give some shivika romance ….I will love to see that

  4. Sat

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ann, you rocked it dear, really very nice at your first attempt.
    It was awesome. Shivaay’s😍😍😍😍oh my god , he really showed a great feeling towards annika, really loved it
    You are really a cute princess. You showed great skills of writing Yar.
    And sorry for the late comment as I am in hospital for a treatment.
    Anyways I am really in a feeling of bursting out of happiness when you said that I am your inspiration.
    A great welcome to ishqbaaz writers family.
    So how many parts in this is, can I expect
    😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

    • Cuteprincess

      |Author

      thank you so much sat…
      I want to end it in 3 parts.. but I may make it longer in case I get good ideas…
      but its always good to keep it short and sweet , being a starter in the field…

  5. Shaza

    |Registered Member

    It’s awesome…loved it ♥️..eagerly waiting for the next one ..pls post it ASAP ..,and ur an amazing writer 👍🏻😄

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