Mehrya- Kiss.. SS #Intro

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One of the hustle bustle city Road of Delhi filled with siren sound of ambulance.. a man was holding his unconscious wife hand.. as soon they reached hospital, he lifts her in his arms and went inside without waiting for stretcher…

Doctor takes her inside of ICU… He sits in chair hiding his face in his palm… someone jumps from inside of him and gets relaxed himself…

(Wait wait.. inside of him.. ? who is it..? Let see.. arre he is just like him… same eyes same nose.. he is just like his mirror image.. ohho his replica… so you’re his conscience, his heart…
His replica nods showing his full tooth…
“So why you’re here…”
Replica: arre it’s introduction… so I came here to intro everyone… again he shows his tooth…
Ohho then u continue ur work… I’m going bye…
Replica:bye…)

Replica looking at man gives a big sigh… Rep: huh… always same reaction…even I’m getting difficult to understand his emotions… bz of him everyone scolding me…(he pouts sadly…) ohho I forget to intro him and myself na… ok lets meet “Mr. Shaurya Khanna..” the great and youngest photographer… Photography is his passion, love and all… he is married… 28yrs old… South Indian… dnt get confused with his Sur name… basically he is Delhiite but settled in Tamil Nadu.. so logically south indian?
“one women man” that was his tagline… and I’m his conscience (Manasatchi)… he smiles…

One lady in black saree with backless blouse angrily walks towards shaurie and held his collar…

Lady: what u did with my baby.. what happened to her… if something happened to her, I won’t leave you… She shouts with full Rage…
Sha: Mami pls lemme explain…
Mami: what u gng to explain haan…
Sha: oh Mami…

(Rep: vandhuta Thai kizhavi(oldiee).. ivaluku mansula periya nattamai sarathkumar nu nenaipu (she think she is natamai sarathkumar)Huh… maidha maavu… she is swetlna… shaurie wife ka mami.. head of village… (dnt ask which village even I too dnt knw ?) everyone is afraid of her… even me and shaurie… seriana villi.. but hero of shaurie marriage life… he blushes☺)

Another lady with simple dress comes and removes her hand from shaurie shirt…

Lady: swetlna what you’re doing… he is our Jamai.. dnt u knw to respect him..

Mami: jamai my foot… kanta first ask him what he did with our baby…

(Rep: Yep she is kanta chachi… shaurie wife ka chachi.. so sweet women in thr home… I like her lot.. and her hand made food… umm yummy?)

One Man: haan swetlana will ask him, first leave him.. everyone is watching us…
Mami:Jeevan here everyone is ready to shut my mouth.. she huffs…

(Rep: jeevan chacha… kanta chachi husband… mami’s brother… pulla poochi… I always pity him…huh)

“Jiju nothing will happen to didi na” one girl cries holding shaurie…

Sha: haan nehal don’t worry nothing will happen to ur didi… be strong… youre my brave girl na… shaurie consoles her…

(Rep: she is nehal… kanta and jeevan daughter… shaurie Friend… his wife younger sister)

“Shaurie beta..” one lady comes running…
“How is my bahu..” she asked with concern…

Sha: Mom.. shaurie runs and hugs his mom tight… he weeps like kid.. his mom comforts him…

(Rep: Shaurie Mom… Karuna… he loves her lot…she is the only one in his family…)

“Mr.Khanna, what is this…”, Nurse asked Shaurya showing one form…
Sha: Kya hua sister..
Nurse: instead of patient name… u wrote Ladoo… it’s nt any sweet stall… Nurse huffs…
All looks him in disbelief… his replica laugh at him.. he glares his replica, his replica gulps…

Sha (to nurse): sorry sister gimme.. will correct it…
Nurse: no need tell ur wife name…

“Mrs.Mahek Shaurya Khanna… did u heard my name” a girl giggled, her voice echoed in his ear…

“Her eyes, a curve of smiles in her lips, her long black hair” everything flashes in his mind… a tear fell on his cheek… his heart pricked…

Nurse: Mr.Khanna your wife name…

Sha: Mrs.Mahek Shaurya Khanna… he said lovingly…
Sha: sister how is my ladoo.. hmm.. I mean my wife…
Nurse smiles: now she is better… dont worry… she leaves from there after filling form…

(Replica goes to ICU ward… and watches Mahek lying in bed unconscious… he feels bad… Rep: Mahek, Shaurya wife… she loves him morethan anything… his heart beat…his ladoo… his teddy bear… 23yrs old… she Married to shaurya by fate.. pet of Sharma family )

( “That’s it they’re my and my wife family… I mean Mr.& Mrs. Shaurie family…” Replica says smilingly…

“Oye u forget me” Voice over says…
“You… u came here also ? ” he perplexed…
“He he he… Yep, it’s all bz of Moni” she laughs..
“Huh this moni won’t allow let me alive in peace” he rolled his eyes and shouts…

“Enama anga satham (why was thr sound..?)” another voice over asks..
He realised whose voice is that and panicked..
“Onnum ila Moni ma summa peasitu irukkom darling ( nothing moni ma we are just talking darling)” he immediately replied…?
“Oh seri seri..” Moni went..
“Ok lemme intro she is nive… gng to bore u all with my story…” He sighs…
Nive raises her brow looking at him…

“Hmmm.. I mean she is going to write my story…” He smiles sheepishly looking at her…

They’re interrupted by mami shouts…
Nive: ok ok bye… mami is damn angry…
Rep: yeah this Thai kizhavi always ready to eat my brain bye… she leaves… Replica goes and settled inside of Shaurie…)

Mami: now I need my answer Shaurya what u did with my baby… I knw u tried to take revenge from her for the marriage…
Karuna: swetlna he won’t do nothing to my bahu… he loves her lot..

Mami: ok bhabi thn ask him all of sudden why Mahek went unconscious… she cries…
Karuna: Shaurie beta why you’re silent tell us what happened with Mahek… why she went unconscious…

All insists him to tell the reason… Shaurya Bow down his head with guilt…

Sha: Wo… umm… I… (he stammers) all looks on…
Sha (closing his eyes tight): I Kissed her… ?

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Done with intro part.. 😀 guys lemme knw how is it.. it was ss.. probably 5 shots… will try to end within 5 shots… sorry if it is boring… 🙂 Thank you all… 🙂 🙂 ☺

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21 Comments
  1. Moni7

    Nivee dear… superb…plz post. Nxt part????

    1. FROZEN CHOCO

      Thank you moni darling… ☺???

    1. FROZEN CHOCO

      Thanks dear.. ☺☺

  2. Funny one nive nice

    1. FROZEN CHOCO

      Thank you somi dr..☺☺

  3. Nice …

    1. FROZEN CHOCO

      Thank you dr…☺☺

  4. Vinitha

    Nice nive waiting for next part.

    1. FROZEN CHOCO

      Thanks vinitha.. ☺☺ nxt part already posted.. ☺

  5. Hi nive…sorry yaaar…ennukku puriyala…i felt lot of confusions…??
    I hope u take it as feedback…?

    1. FROZEN CHOCO

      Thanks for your feedback dr… ☺☺

  6. Kamali

    Svetlana mami ?maida mavu Thai kizhavi super …Shaurya south Indian ? story line nalla comedy iruku. Next part seekram upload pannunga ✌

    1. FROZEN CHOCO

      Ha ha ha..?? thank you dr☺☺ nxt part already panniachu. .

  7. Hiiiii nice amazing epi…bt irritating mami always behind shaurya..I lov d part when shaurya said mehek got unconscious coz he kissed her????..lol yaar..bt almost every word in Tamil u translated bt their r still some left which I did not understand…so plzzzzzzzzz translate all Tamil words in d next part plzzzzzzzzz….n ya post d next part soon also…lov u???
    With lov??
    Urs sweta

    1. Sry typo error nive not nice..

    2. FROZEN CHOCO

      Thanks sweta dr..☺☺?

  8. Fabme

    Lovely and sweet

    1. FROZEN CHOCO

      Thank you dr☺☺

  9. Latha

    Nive nice yaar….. Waiting for next one.

    1. FROZEN CHOCO

      Thanks latha dr..☺☺ nxt part already posted.. ☺

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