MANZIL (Chapter 4 & 5)

Morning

Ishra are avoiding each other.. Everyone busy in today’s preparations..

Sanskar give coffee to Raman

Raman : I’ve left it 3 months back.. Won’t you remember

Sanky : because ishu di was not here to make your favourite coffee now she’s there naa

Raman about shout but ruhi come there..

Ruhi : ooho kya subah chit chit kar rahe ho.. Abhi kitne saare kaam bhaaki hai ( there’s so much of work remaining why you guys making fuss )

Harshad : yep ruhi is right come on everyone get ready fast…

Everyone disperse.. That coffee is kept in kitchen. Ishitha sees it.

Ishu : ( to herself ) raavan Kumar.. Attitude dikha rahe ho.. ( raman.. Showing attitude ah.?) I’ll only drink it..

She take a sip but ruhi call her so she keep the mug & go. Now Raman come & drink it without anyone’s notice but swara kushi see it & come to him..

Swara : you refused right..

Raman : it will get wasted so I’m drinking..

Kushi : bhai isn’t it bit sweeter.. ( she tease )

Raman : yes she ( ishu) doesn’t even know to make coffee properly..

Swara kushi laugh… ishgun come there..

Shagun : what happened why are you laughing

Swara gesture towards coffee mug in Raman’s hand.. He keeps it down..

Kushi : he is saying its too sweet

Ishu : I sipped from it & you..

Swara : that’s why its sweet ( she tease )

Kushi : oh.. Now I get it why bhai only drink coffee made by di..

Hargun doing pooja preparations

Harshad bump into shagun & all flowers fall over them.. Harshad hold shagun from falling.. They have a eye lock…

Harshad : ( breaking eyelock ) are you fine..

Shagun : ( bit uncomfortable) yea..

She turn to go & step on thorn

Shagun : ouch…

Harshad : simmo..

He tend to her make her sit & start removing it slowly making sure it doesn’t hurt her.. But she push him back & remove it herself hurting even more..

Harshad: simmu what..

Shagun : ( interuppting ) Shagun.. I’m only Shagun Raizada.. Simmo died 5 years back with that accident.. I’m telling you for last time

She turn to go but stumble due to pain.. Harshad hold her.. & start bandaging her

Harshad : ( shayiri )
Yu nafrat se naa kato ko dekho kam aayenge
Phakat phulo se aayee gul dosti achi nahee hoti

She get up hearing this..

Harshad : simmo.. Sambhalke ( careful ) why are you hurting urself.. I can’t see you in pain…

Shagun : oh really.. You can’t see me in pain.. Then what about the pain u gave us all 5years back.. Because of you ishra’s life is so messed up Because of you all of us are living like orphans… we lost our parents long back but because of you we lost even who stood in that place.. That accident occurred because of you.. You ruined everything.. Rahi humari baat ussi din sab Kuch khatam hogaya.. Aaj mein sirf shagun hoon simmo nahi.. Kabhi nahi.. ( and if we come to our relationship.. Everything finished that day itself.. Today I’m only shagun.. Not simmo.. Never.. )

She shout stressing last line & go leaving behind heartbroken harshad..

Arnav’s room

Arnav working on laptop.. Kushi come there

Kushi : what’s this Arnav why aren’t you ready yet its getting late..

Arnav : party is at 8 right

Kushi : but pooja starts in ½ an hour

Arnav : you know I’m not attending in any of your stupid acts…

Kushi : Arnav..

Arnav : do whatever you people want don’t drag me into it

Kushi : don’t say like this about God Arnav..

Arnav get up & hold kushi..

Arnav : ( angrily ) what will he do.. Ah?? Will he snatch you too from me.. Or will he snatch my left over family..?? Actually he can do nothing kushi.. Because he doesn’t exist..

Kushi : Arnav please..

Arnav. : if he existed he wouldn’t have snatched our parents he wouldn’t have caused that accident.. Why did he do that when they worshipped him fasted for him.. The live example is ishu di.. Where do you see her life leading to ? She is living in hell worshipping your so called God..

Kushi : look everything will be fine don’t..

Arnav : ( interuppting ) Nothing… nothing will be right again don’t you see that hatred between those 4 ( ishra & hargun ) stop living in dreams kushi.. That accident snatched everything from our lives.. Everything…

Kushi : ( freeing herself from him ) you might have lost hope but not me.. I’ll make everything right between them.. Our family will be back together happy as before..

Arnav : ( smirkingly he ask sarcastically ) Family!! Where are the pillars of that family where are those 2 people who binded this family together.. Where are they who showed path to these crazy kids ( arshi, ishra, swasan, hargun )

Kushi’s eyes filled with tears remembering those 2 persons she too had no answer for this question of Arnav..

Arnav : didn’t I say.. Everything is finished..

He go out kushi stand there numb.. Harshad heard this heated conversation..

Harshad : ( to himself ) Aap dono ko humare liye wapas aana hi hoga.. Iss tarah hume beech raste mein hume chod nahi sakte aap.. Aap ko wapas aana hoga.. Ab aap log hi sab Kuch teek kar sakte ho.. ( you two have to come back for us.. You can’t leave us like this in middle.. You two have to come back.. Now only you two can make everything right )

All pooja & inauguration is finished. Ruhi do the inauguration.. Kushi message & call Arnav many times but he doesn’t respond..

A small party is organised in the evening .

Ruhi gets ready in beautiful gown she run to hall flaunting her dress ..

Ruhi : how am I looking

Harshad : princess

Raman : you are looking like angel..

Sanskar : who dressed you up

Ruhi : ishu maasi..

Ishgun kushi, swara come there..

Sanky : God you people are still here get ready fast.. Once you start it will take ages to get ready

Kushi : ah.. Sanky

Arnav come home..

Arnav : no arguments .. He’s right get ready fast..

Kushi frown seeing arnav

Swara : chodo kushi di.. Jab ye hume goorenge ne baad mein tab batayenge hum.. ( leave it kushi di.. when they’ll admire us naa then we will show them )

Sanky : in your dreams..

Ishu : ok now let’s get ready.. We need to look better than these guys… right..

Raman : isse kehana classy party hai sar pe bageecha laga kar naa aaye.. ( tell her its classy party so not to get ready like village girl )

Ishitha : isse kehana pehle shave kar le baad mein mujhe gyaan de ( tell him to shave first & then advice me )

Sanky : ( clapping ) what a dialogue di..

Party

Ishra & Hargun avoiding each other… kushi too angry on arnav.. Noticing these 6 swasan are confused..

Sanky : I understand these 4’s behaviour but what happened to our love birds..

Swara : we should only do something..

Ruhi : idea..

Mr & Mrs Sethi arrive

Harshad : welcome uncle Aunty.. ( he take blessings)

Mr.Sethi : very nice arrangements..

Harshad : thanks uncle

Mrs.Sethi : oye yeh sab chaddo yeh bata teri bhaliye kaha hai.. Tu akele kada hai swagat ke liye.. ( seeing shagun) oye shagun puttar idar aa
( leave this.. Tell me where is your partner you are standing alone for welcoming (seeing shagun) shagun come here)

Shagun : ( to ishu ) I swear to kill this Mrs.Sethi one day..

Ishu : calm down & go..

Shagun : hi aunty..

Mrs.Sethi annoy both for a while asking about their marriage plans & all…

On stage..

Sanky : Attention especially couples.. Don’t you feel the party is getting little boring…

Everyone scream yes..

Sanky : so let’s dance…

Meri aashique tum hi ho..plays..

Raman shagun dance together while harshad ishitha pair up… while kushi pull sanskar for dance.. Having no other choice swara pull arnav to dance floor…

While dancing…

Ishu : you look bit upset..

Harshad : nope.. Just bit tired..

Ishu : I can read in your eyes

Harshad just smile…& say : I’m fine.. Don’t worry

Raman : why are you in mood of 3rd world war

Shagun : nothing.. I’m bit tired..

Raman : I can read your face..

Shagun : so.. Tell me which leg am I thinking to break..

Raman : I’m blind by birth how can I read your face..

Swara : you spoiled all plan..

Sanky : me? Leave it I’ve a solution let’s swap partners..

Kushi ; no way..

They swap partners.. & now arshi, ishra, swasan & hargun are dancing together..

Arnav : you angry baby…

Kushi : no Hungry.. Shall I eat you.. she bite his hand)

Arnav : what the..

Ishra & Hargun are having an eyelock lost in their past memoires. Finally song end breaking their eyelock

Sanky & kushi plan to bring ishra & hargun closer..

Swara : are you both sure this works

Sanky & kushi : damn sure..

Sanky & kushi go on stage..

Sanky : what a romantic act by all couples.. Big round of applause for all of you..

Kushi : party is not over yet guys..

Sanky : there’s still final dhamaka pending..

Kushi : toh party ko chaar chand lagane ke liye.. ( to make party even more enjoyable )

Kushi & sanky : hum apne chaar sitaro ko bulaana chahate hai.. Welcome.. Ishra & Hargun.. ( welcome our 4 stars )

Kushi : jinki awaaz se koyal bhi sharma jaye.. ( by who’s voice even nightingale will also shy )

Sanky : jinki awaz ki poori Delhi diwani thi.. ( full Delhi was crazy for their voice )

Everyone clap for them.. But those 4 are not ready..

Ishu : no.. We have stopped singing long back.. Now.. I don’t think we can..

Harshad : yep so excuse us..

Mr.Sethi : oh come on only one song.. We all know how well you people are..

Ishu about to refuse but see Raman on stage holding mike.. Staring her angrily..

Raman :
Meraa dil jis dil pe fida hai
Meraa dil jis dil pe fida hai,
Ek bewafa hai,Ek bewafa hai
Ek bewafa hai,Ek bewafa hai
Ha mohabbat kee yeh saja hai
Ha mohabbat kee yeh saja hai,
Tu bewafa hai,Tu bewafa hai
BTu bewafa hai,Tu bewafa hai
Meraa dil jis dil pe fida hai,
Meraa dil jis dil pe fida hai,
Ek bewafa hai,Ek bewafa hai
Ha bewafa hai, ek bewafa hai

Ishu : ( murmuring) bewafa ?? Mein bewafa hoon?? ( betrayer? I’m cheater?)

Shagun join him staring angrily at Harshad

Shagun : you are right Raman..

Sach Keh Raha Hai Deewana Dil
Dil Na Kisi Se Lagaana
Sach Keh Raha Hai Deewana Dil
Dil Na Kisi Se Lagaana
Jhoothe Hai Yaar Ke Vaade Saare
Jhoothi Hai Pyaar Ki Kasmein
Maine Har Lamha Jisse Chaaha, Jisse Pooja
Ussi Ne Yaaron Mera Dil
Toda Toda, Tanha Tanha Chhoda

Raman : perfect shagun.. This is the truth.. ( in her ears )

Koyee shisha agar tute badee aawaj hoti hai
Magar dil tut janey kee sada koyee nahee sunta
Mai divana mai divana mai divanapan karta hu
Uski yado mai jita hu, uski chahat mai marta hu
Kya hal hai mere iss dil kaa, bedard hai woh kya janegi
Mai lakh use samjhaunga, phir bhee naa kehna manegi
Kitnee jalim uski ada hai,
Kitnee jalim uski ada hai,
Tu bewafa hai,Tu bewafa hai
Ha bewafa hai, ek bewafa hai
Meraa dil jis dil pe fida hai,
Meraa dil jis dil pe fida hai,
Ek bewafa hai Ek bewafa hai
Ha bewafa hai, ek bewafa hai

Swara : I think bhai is drunk..

Kushi : I don’t think so his voice is do clear & stern..

Shagun :
Sach Keh Raha Hai Deewana Dil
Dil Na Kisi Se Lagaana
Jhoothe Hai Yaar Ke Vaade Saare
Jhoothi Hai Pyaar Ki Kasmein
Maine Har Lamha Jisse Chaaha, Jisse Pooja
Ussi Ne Yaaron Mera Dil
Toda Toda, Tanha Tanha Chhoda

Arnav : what’s all this going on guys..

Sanky : they both have gone mad

Ishu : who asked you people to do this see now..
Raman again start..

Raman :

Use bhee nind naa aaye, woh bhee jage tamam rat
Woh bhee kisike pyar mai tadpe khuda kare
Usne mujhko tadpaye hai, mai bhee usko tadpaunga
Mai aaj bhari iss mehfhil mai, usko ruswa kar jaunga
Woh sar ko jhukaye baithe hai, dekho gairo kee baho mai
Har ghadee mujhe jiska nasha hai,
Tu bewafa hai Tu bewafa hai
Ha bewafa hai, ek bewafa hai
Meraa dil jis dil pe phida hai,
Meraa dil jis dil pe phida hai,
Ek bewafa hai,Ek bewafa hai
Ha bewafa hai, ek bewafa hai.

Ishu’s eyes filled with tears…

Ishu : ( she sing staring Raman )

Tumne Hi Hansi Di Thi, Tumne Hi Rulaaya Hai
Tumne Hi Hansi Di Thi, Tumne Hi Rulaaya Hai
Kya Pyaar Mein Socha Tha,
Kya Pyaar Mein Paaya Hai
Kya Pyaar Mein Paaya Hai

Arnav : what’s going on.. I’ll become mad..

Kushi : only harshad bhai is matured.. These 3 are leaving no chance to embrass us..

Harshad hold a mike..

Swara : ab yeh kya karenge.. ( now what will he do )

Sanky : hopefully tadap tadap ( from hum dil de chuke sanam ) song naa gaye.. ( hopefully he doesn’t sing tadap tadap song )

Harshad : ( seeing shagun )

Abb Naam Mohabbat Ke Iljaam Toh Aaya Hai
Abb Naam Mohabbat Ke Iljaam Toh Aaya Hai
Tum Jo Bhi Saja De Do, Sar Hamne Jhukaaya Hai

Ishu :

Ek Pyaar Ke Mujrim Se Ulfat Bhi Kare Toh Kaise Kare
Tumhe Tutake Chaaha Tha, Nafrat Bhi Kare Toh Kaise Kare
Jo Paar Hame Karta, Usane Hi Dubaaya Hai
Kya Pyaar Mein Socha Tha, Kya Pyaar Mein Paaya Hai

Harshad :
Tum Jo Bhi Hame Samajho, Par Tumko Sada Sarhaaenge Hum
Begunaah Jo Hame Thehraaye, Labj Aise Kahaan Paayenge Hum
Ummid Na Thi Isaki, Jo Saamne Aaya Hai
Tum Jo Bhi Saja De Do, Sar Hamne Jhukaaya Hai
Sar Hamne Jhukaaya Hai

Sanky : humne kya socha tha yeh kya ho raha hai?? ( what we thought & what’s happening)

Kushi : we should do something..

Swara : but what..

Mr & Mrs Sethi come to them : we have a idea..

They tell something.. To which everyone agree..

Ruhi, Swasan & kushi snatch mike & pull those 4 off stage..

All 4 start singing.. Along with Mr & Mrs Sethi

Ooh ooh, ooh ooh, ooh ooh, ooh ooh
Zindagi ki yehi reet hai
Haar ke baad hi jeet hai
Zindagi ki yehi reet hai
Haar ke baaz hi jeet hai

Thode aansu hai, thodi hasi
Aaj gham hai to kal hai khushi
Zindagi ki yehi reet hai
Haar ke baad hi jeet hai
Thode aansu hai, thodi hasi
Aaj gham hai to kal hai khushi
Zindagi ki yehi reet hai
Haar ke baad hi jeet hai
Zindagi raat bhi hai, savera bhi hai zindagi
Zindagi raat bhi hai, savera bhi hai zindagi

Zindagi hai safar aur basera bhi hai zindagi
Zindagi hai safar aur basera bhi hai zindagi

Ek pal dard ka daanv hai
Dusra sukh bhari chhaaon hai
Har naye pal naya geet hai
Zindagi ki yehi reet hai
Zindagi ki yehi reet hai, zindagi ki yehi reet hai
Gham ka baadal jo chhaaye to hum muskuraate rahe
Gham ka baadal jo chhaaye to hum muskuraate rahe

Apni aankhon mein aashaaon ke deep jalaate rahe
Aaj bigde to kal phir bane
Aaj roothe to kal phir mane
Waqt bhi jaise ek meet hai
Zindagi ki yehi reet hai
Zindagi ki yehi reet hai
Haar ke baaz hi jeet hai
Thode aansu hai, thodi hasi
Aaj gham hai to kal hai khushi
Zindagi ki yehi reet hai
Haar ke baad hi jeet hai
Zindagi ki yehi reet hai
Haar ke baad hi jeet hai.

Precap :

Shagun : Raman.. We are seeing movement in di.. She said something..

All 8 run to hospital..

Credit to: Anaya

6 comments

  1. Varsha

    Wow…. Its awesome anaya….. I loved it….. My mind is having too many questions….. Who r those two people….. What accident…… I am so eager to know all those…… Such an awesome writer u are….. HATS OFF ANAYA!!!!!!!

  2. Dini

    Superb Anaya. Who r those two people?….. I guess it’s Ruhi’s parents. But What accident?…. How Harshad got connected to the accident?… What happen in past? … Plz update it fast yaar. Otherwise I’ll become mad.

  3. Reshma Pradeep

    Its AMAZING yaar……Such a Beautiful story…..I have soooo many Questions in my Mind……Plzzzzzz update regularly….. plzzz……

  4. Anaya

    Thank u soo much Varsha, Natasha, Choti, Dini, Reshama… I had tests guys so couldn’t upload earlier.. Sorry

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