MANZIL (Chapter 1)



Everyone busy in packing.
Sanskar bump into Raman

Raman : kya kar rahe ho dekhe chalo ( what are you doing watch where are you walking )

Sanskar : sorry bhai

Raman : is everything ready we should depart in an hour..

Arnav : yes aman is monitoring everything

Shagun : where is ruhi..

Harshad : she was with swara..

Kushi : where is swara..

All look at each other

Everyone : not again

Both are sitting bear a small pond making sad face..

Raman : what are you doing here come let’s go..

Ruhi : hum dono motu patlu pinky chinky titu bubbly sonu monu ko bye bol rahe the

Arnav : what the.. How many times I told they are only fishes but no..

Ruhi : you know nothing chote don’t make fun of my friends..

Harshad : oh ho sorry ruhi mam ab chale ( shall v go now)

Shagun : haan ruhi it’s late now..

Swara : ine yaha akela chodke ( leaving them alone ) she wink at them

Kushi : swara shut up

Arnav : I can’t believe this..

Raman : yaar Arnav chupa ho jaav yaar.. Ab ruhi naraaz ho gayi toh ek taang pe kadha karwayegi sabko ( stop it arnav.. If ruhi gets angry she’ll make us stand on one leg )

Swara : arnav bhai you told nothing is impossible for you then.. Now see its proved wrong you cannot carry thses fishes to Darjeeling

Harshad : shona chup you are provoking ruhi & arnav now

Ruhi : tum chup.. Shona is right.. Chote can’t you do this much for me.. ( she plead the same way her mom used to ask making innocent face)

Kushi : no Arnav no..

Arnav : these fishes will reach Darjeeling before us..

Shagun : gaye kaam se ab

Ruhi : thank you chote love you

she go from there everyone stare swara & arnav

Arnav : what how can I refuse when she’s asking so much..

Swara : I too couldn’t resist supporting her

Sanskar : accha ab tum dono hi jaana roz usske saath mujhse nahi hoga meine socha tha woh din ab khatam lekin nahi.. ( oh we now you two only go with her I can’t do that anymore.. I thought those days are gone but no .. )


Ruhi sitting near pond with kitchen set playing some “ghar ghar “game. Sanskar being her husband & all those fishes are their children.

Ruhi : yeh lijiye coffee.. ( have coffee she give some water in cup & sanky takes it )

Sanky : very nice..

Ruhi : drink fast & make children ready for school.

Sanky : they’ll go to school!!??

Ruhi : yes give them bath & dress them in these ( she give some ribbons )

Fb end..

Sanky : who on the earth can bath fishes..? & she made me pour water on each of them & tieng them ribbon of their names I have fallen minimum 100 times in that pond.

Everyone laugh at him loud..

Swara : poor sanky..

Sanky : I’ve done it every day & now when it was finally over this arnav & swara.. ( he look at them angrily swara run from there & sanky follow her but she run away.. )

Sanky : it was who’s plan to have a small pond in house

Kushi : I think I’m forgetting something just a minute

She too run away..

Ishitha in a saree sitting in front of laptop seeing pics of arshi ishra swasan hargun & ruhi… adoring their cute smiles loads of happiness & full of fun… They always stayed together, enjoyed a lot eventhough everything was ruined 5 years back the lil angel ruhi binded them together.. But now her internship was over its been 3 months now she returned to Lucknow..
Ishu lost in thoughts get a call..

Ishu : hello simmo how r u..

Shagun : kitni baar kaha hai simmo mat bulav lekin nahi.. Ab chodo woh sab envelope mila.. ( how many times I’ve told you not to call by that name.. Ok leave it… Got envelope)

Ishu having envelope in hand & she opens it..

” Ruhi Group of Association ”

We cordially invite you & your family for the Inauguratio of our company.

Venue : Darjeeling

Shagun : are you there ishu..

Ishu : yea I saw.. I’ll try to come..

Shagun : what will try I’ll kill you & you’ve one more envelope if you have noticed what about that tgen

Ishu : who told him & who gave him the permission to make me the co owner of hospital. I can’t join simmo try to understand. Mummyji won’t agree

Shagun : it was dream someone’s dream if you remember. The persons who supported us took care of us , who realised our dreams..

Ishu : I know… & I’ll..

Someone snatch the phone

Person : she’ll come I’m sending her she is all yours for a year happy..

Shagun : ji thank you aap bhi function ke liye aayiye ( you too come for function )

Person : ah.. I’ll try have some important meeting

Ishu: don’t tell anyone I wanna give everyone surprise..

Shagun : ok done

Everyone reach Darjeeling seeing those 3 beautiful villas, huge classy office & hospital everyone are impressed by Arnav & Raman’s ideas.
Shagun tell everyone ishu not coming.

Arshi & swasan & Ruhi are sitting in ruhi’s room kushi swara are sad..

Arnav : will anyone tell us what happened

Swara : ishu di is not coming

Sanskar & Arnav : what ishu di not coming..

Kushi : because of that haddi ( kabab mein haddi )

Arnav : I swear I’ll kill him one day

Sanskar : that’s why Raman bhai is so gloomy from morning.

Ruhi : not to worry when ruhi is here I’ve some great idea to bring maasi here

Everyone : what is it

Ruhi explains her plan

Arnav & Sanskar : no way we are not doing this..

Arnav : shagun di will eat me alive

Sanskar : Raman bhai will hang me upside down

Ruhi : can’t you both do this much for maasi

Arnav & Sanskar agree & these 3 show thumbs up to both.

Ruhi : waise chote where are my motu patlu pinky chinky titu bubbly sonu monu..

Arnav : in garden..

Ruhi swara & kushi go to see them. Sanky goes to Raman & Arnav go to shagun..

Arnav & sanky about to tell something to shagun & Raman they hear ruhi crying & all run to garden.

Raman take her in arms & shagun ask

Shagun : what happened baby..?

Ruhi : chote is cheater

Precap : Ishu in Darjeeling..
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  1. Great year.. Love it so much..

    1. Thanks varsha

  2. Anaya I was laughing again and again…….
    U at mmmmmmmm…….. what to say………
    Speechless………….. U ar that much awesome my dr……………I’m feeling cloud nine………

    1. Thank you ude. I’ve written some other ff also check them out on my fb page

    2. In fb you can find related picture for the scenes in between you might enjoy more check this out in above link too

      1. I saw it dr ………the pond is sooo cute…….and can u please give me the link every day after u post it? Please

  3. Ruhi amazing act yaar. So funny…..

  4. hahaha ruhi bathing the fishes it’s dso funnyccouldn’t stop llaughing continue please

  5. Its Superbbbbbbbb……….????????????

  6. ?????????????????????????????????
    I’m in my office n I’m laughing lyk a mad reading d scene…….. Ur damn gud……. I jus lovd ths…… Poor sanky??
    Waiting fr nxt epi

  7. really thanku for ur episodeeee the episode made me laugh very muchhhhh thanku once again

  8. Thank you soo much.. All your comments mean a lot thanks for the support @ Jo, safu, kumud, Reshma pradeep, sueno

  9. Superb , the pond part was really funny, poor sanskar. Ruhi is superb ?????☺

  10. wow it really awesome yaar

  11. wow anya it was seriously very funny… i was literally laughing readin sanskar’s ghar ghar game with ruhi…… post the next part asap i am waiting swthrt…

  12. Thank you Chery, Mona, sowmy & Sweta

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