Manya alive in my heart episode 7

Ok guyz i am not stopping this ff now keep commenting as it feels good when u get appreciation for ur work.Guyz i am thinking to make mantu or amaya feel jealous wat do u think??? Mention in comments and give some ideas for a good track

Start
Sneha leaves and amaya sharma jaati hai
Mantu: chalo madam….oh sorry amaya
Amaya: (in a naughty tone) vaise tum mujhe pyaaaarr se amu bhi bula sakte ho
Mantu: no, i think amaya is better
Amaya: maine kahan pyaar se kya tum mujhe pyaar nahi karte
Mantu: arre maaf karo amaya tumse humne kuch sahi keh diya toh
Amaya:hun(turns her head right)… Good for nothing
mantu: tumne kuch kaha???
Amaya: haan….mental case, lost case , gone case/ sada hua aalu, pichka hua nimboo, kerela (english or hindi anything u like)
Mantu: amayaaa!!!
Mantu runs behind amu and both run in the whole house then they finally reach mantu’s room

Mantu: idhar aao tumhe batata hun (come here i’ll show u)
Amaya: nahin aaungi kya karloge tum
Mantu then goes towards amaya and pins her to the wall
Mantu: amaya ek baat bolun (can i say a something)
Amaya: (in a romantic way) why not…bolo na
Mantu: tumhari aakhen….
Amaya: haan aage bolo…..tumhari aakhen
Mantu: tumhari aakhon ke side mein ek kala dhaba hai (there is a black spot near ur eyes)
Amaya: what…..oh no!!! (Seeing in the mirror) mantu kahan hai vo spot…main apni shaadi se pehle ye sab nahin chahati…pls tell (mantu where is the spot….i dont want all this before my marriage)
Mantu: (laughing) it was just a joke yaar….so chill…
Amaya gives him a angry look
Mantu: mahadev……tum ladkiyaan bhi naa ek kaala daag aane par itna hyper ho jaati ho jaise kisika accident ho gaya ho…
Amaya: haan haan….agar mera chehra itna accha na hota na toh tum mujhse pyaar bhi nahin karte
Mantu: pagalon jaisi baatein mat karo main tumse pyaar karta hun tumhare chehre se nahin
Amaya: ok ok….bii now
Amaya turns and laughs
Mantu: kamal baat karti hai amaya bhi ….kuch bhi bakwaas bolti rehti hai

Next day: engagement
Amaya is wearing a pink-blue combo lehenga
Mantu is wearing a blue color shervani matching to the blue color of amaya’s lehenge
Amaya:(in sign language) how am i looking???
Mantu: shows a superb?? sign
Amaya comes to mantu
Amaya: wah see matching blue color….i love it
Mantu: i love this color and u
Amaya: i know
Sneha: chalo sab engagement ke liye yahan aajao
Amaya: coming mom
Amaya puts ring in mantu’s finger and mantu is about to put ring suddenly
Lady: stop!!!
Mantu stares and the ring falls from his hand and then everyone sees the lady
Mantu goes and hugs her everybody is shocked
Amaya: m..ma…mantu who is she???
Jazz: aapka inke saath koi chakar to nahin chal raha??
Amaya: shut up jazz unki umar ka toh lihaaz kar
Lady: chup kar ladki, mane lage hai ki tu bahut bole hai (shut up girl, i think u speak too much)
Mantu: ek minute, amaya ye meri dadi hai Amaya and everyone shocked

Amaya: but mantu tumhare parents toh mar gaye I thought u had no one in this world
Mantu: actually my dadi lived in a village

Precap: dadi: chal chori hume kuch khana
bana ke dikha
Amaya: voh…actually….
Dadi: kya??
Amaya: mujhe khana bana nahin aata
Mantu teaches amaya how to make food with lots of fun and love talks

Guyz pls give me ideas

Doubts:
1. Sneha’s father is dead and she has no family from childhood except her dad
Where do u want them to live
1. Banaras
2. Mumbai
3. Udaipur
4. Lucknow

Credit to: Sanika

3 comments

  1. Manisha

    Nice epi….thx for not stopping ur ff…make amu jealous cause that will be funny. I think they should be in mumbai

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