how many shades u have swara (part 24-25) last part

This is ur last part of my ff…Barsi day…Swara is looking at the mirror..
.Swara:what is this swara..u cant even stop this barsi…shame on u…At last moment sanskar storms in the room….
Sanskar:swaraaa (shouted)
He goes and drags her by pulling her hair where swara screams in pain….
He drags her down and pull towards sofa
All family gets there hearing the shout
Ap:are u mad sanskar…hiw dare u to drag her like that…she is not and object
Sujatha goes and helps her to get up
Sanskar:stop pampering her…she killed ur son…she is the killer of our laksh..
.All stood there in shockSwara was taken aback…
Sanskar goes and hold her face tightly
Sanskar:what u thought..we will nevrr be able to knw ur secret….
Swara:u r mistaken sanskar…how can I kill my lucky….
Dp:she said na…leave her
Sanskar:I knw u will never trust me…swara loved laksh only for money and our laksh falla for ragini and due to jealous swara killed both of them…
Swara:bakwaas banth karo sanskar….dont even utter a word….
Sanskar:I have full prof…I went to ut college and there I got to knw about it…how can u do this swara….
Sujatha:is this true sanskar…
Sanskar:u knw maa…she only forced me to marry her…
All looks on shocked
Ap goes near her
Ap:is this true swara
Swara:badi maa…wo
Ap:is this true or not
swara:yesAp slaps swara
Ap:we trusted u more than anything…this means what shaurya said was correct…
Swara:no badi maa…I knw I did wrong bt situation
sanskar:what situation swara…im sure that u got all ur money only by ditching rich people naa…by making them fall for u and later taking all their money..for that u must have spend some nights naa

Swara:sanskar…
She slaps him…
Sanskar:u bl**dy…u knw that day I kidnapped u only for this..I knw before that there is some relationship between u and laksh….
Sujatha:dont u have shame swara…how can u make 2 brothers fall for u…
Kaveri:its there on her blood…
Swara:just shut up u bl**dy b***c…I knw what I did and I will do whatever I like….no one will do this barsi
Dp:mein haath chott thi hoon..plz at least now leave us
Sanskar:swara….just move way…
Swara:no…I will stop this…
Sanskar:y
Swara:kyunki laksh zinda he
Swara realises what she said
All are looking at her

Sanskar:where is my laksh
Swara stands there silent
Sanskar slaps her…again and again slaps her…at last she falls down…her head was bleeding her cheeks are swollen….when suddenly two hands takes her and make her stand…she lools at him
Swara:la…laksh…
She smiles and hugs him….he too reciprocate….
All are stunned to see laksh
Ap:laksh
All starts to come near him
Laksh:bas karo….
He cares swara cheeks
Laksh:shona…tum teek he naa
Swara nodes
Laksh:how dare u all to beat my shona….
sanskar:she is the one who tried to kill u and ragini
Laksh:dont talk mr sanskr…
Sujatha slaps him
Sujatha:when did he became sanskar..he is ur bhai
Laksh:no…u all r my so called family….only shona is my family
Kaveri:what relationship u have with her…
Laksh:thats none of ur business kaveri….and u swara..only for ma naa u married this sanskar…y shona..because of me u made ur life hell….
Swara:no lucky…I enjoyed those moments…I really didn’t miss my maa…
.Ap:stop calling us maa…

.Laksh:who needs u…come shona…we will leave…
Dp:where are u going lakshLaksh:my house….
Sanskar:u r not going anywhereLaksh:thats none of ur business sanskar…
he hold swara hand and walks out….They all follows them….
At an isolated place where there is huge bunglow…
Swalak gets down….
Laksh:what the hell u r doing here
Rp:beta…come back..dont trust that girl
Laksh:I trust her
Sujatha:r u trusting her morr than ur maa
Laksh:yes…I trust her more…I trust her more than god..myself Shona u go inside….
Sanskar:just because of that girl..that bl**dy swara…u r not believing us
Laksh:dont dare call her by that name….
Just then swara comes there
Sanskar goes and holds her neck:because of u..we lost our laksh….
Laksh:leave her

Sanskar men get hold of laksh and others in the bunglow
Sanskar takes a knife and injures her hand..
she falls down and hits on rock and falls unconscious
Laksh:swaraaa…..
he goes and shakes her..but no response
Just then shaurya enters with his army…..
Shaurya:thanks sanskar…u made me an easy way….u made my work much easier….Come on guys get hold of each and every person….only laksh and swara are remaining
Shaurya:wow laksh….finally I got u….these 2 yrs ur shona saved u frm me…frm the whole world….great…hats off….and thanks to sanskarSanskar:whatShaurya:yes sanskar…it was me who tried to kill laksh ragini swara and their so called daughter…I thought only swara was left and rest of them died including her maa….bt some how raglak escaped….u made my way easy by finishing of swara….now only raglak remains….
Sanskar:it means
Shaurya:it was all my plan to find laksh and ragini for that I made u against swara…any my man tells the fake story of swara relationship…and u trusted me…..
All looks at swara who is still unconscious
All recalls how they harassed swara and tears fall frm their eyes…..
Shaurya:get hold of all badi people…I want raglak daughter…
Ap:my poti

Shaurya:yes aunty…and shekar jii that day I said u about swara daughter it is actually raglak daughter….I thought it will also die with that accident…bt..no problem I will take her too..
.He orders his men to take ragini..
.Laksh:spare ragini…plz…she is still in come
Maheswary:coma
Shaurya:ohh I see so u dont knw the story..i will explain…after that accident everyone assumed that raglak died along woth their daughter bt when their last rituals was going swara understand that they both are alive….bt for their survival both needs kidney and liver..for that swara givr half of her liver to laksh and one kidney to ragini..they were saved bt slipped into coma..and I think today laksh got up frm coma….
All were shattered hearing this…..
Badi people also reaches there….
shaurya:where is swalani…I need her
Kaki:what did that 2 year old child did to u….
Shaurya:else I will kill swara…
kaki:no….

Shaurya:choose between swara nd swalani….all can participate….
Maheswary:swalani….
Badi people:swalani
Shaurya:so u dont love swara
Badi people:we trust her…she will take u all…
shaurya:and u laksh
Laksh:spare swara…
All are shocked
Dp:swalagi is ur daughter and swara is just ur frnd..
.Laksh:I knw what im doing…u take swalani and plz spare my shona…..
Swara slowly opens her eyes where she finds men taking ragini in structure…..
Swara:laddooShe was breathing heavily…
Laksh:shonaa….get up naa…
Swara some how manged to get up….she pour water on her head….and opens her eyes…
She goes towards ragini and beats up all and take ragini
Swara removes her saree (now she is in only blouse and skirt)she drapes it around ragini only her nise is visible….Shaurya:ohh I forget, she cant stay under light naa…bt swara u r looking hot in this dress..

.laksh removes his shirt and put it on swara body….
Shaurya:such a protecting brother…..
Sanskar:brother??
Shaurya:haa sanskar..both shared a bond of brother and sister no no more than that…Sanskar close his eyes recalling all his allegations towards her…..
Ragini started to move her fingers….and catch swara hand
Ragini:shonaa…..
Swara removes the covering and starts to jumb in happiness
Swara:kaki saa…lucky see my laddo is alright…I said naa….some one plz get me some sweets for me…today 4 things is going to happen
1:lucky got his laddo
2:I got back my siblings
3:swalani got her parentsAnd 4
Kaki:what is that
swara:im going to kill shaurya..
all claps where shaurya looks on shocked…..

Shaurya takes out the trishul to hit ragini…
all scream ragini name….
bt swara comes in middle….
it hits swara stomach
Swara:maaa….
All:shonaaa…….
Shaurya:wow…swara I didnt think that u will die so easily…
Shaurya goes and hold ragini…
A women comes there….
Shekar:mishti…..
Maheswary looks at her in shock…….
Sumi:kya hua shekar jii….
Shekar:tum…
Sumi:what u thought im dead..no jii…u asked the dr to make me in coma….bt because of their sympathy..im alive and I made my death….so that u can live with ur kaveri….I even hided frm my daughter…bt I couldny do that further…I came to see her I told her everything. ….
Shekar:forgive me mishti…
Sumi ignores her and walks towards swara
Raglak:maa….
Sumi:is this that I thought u shona….I always said u should fight against them…then what is this…no u r not my daughter..if u were that by now u have killed this shaurya….
Shaurya get hold of sumi hair and drags her…
Sumi:shonaaa
Swara gets up
Swara:shauryaaa….

She removes the trishul frm her stomach….
Shaurya:dont come near me..else I will kill ur mom…
Swara:today I will not spare u shauryaa….if I do so, the girls who suicide because of u will curse me….
Shaurya:common boys..kill her……
Swara:wait..She takes the baby
Baby:maa…..
Swara:today I will show u two person…
she shows raglak
Baby:papa…mammma..dadi
Baby slowly walks and goes near raglak and sumi…
Sumi:come on beta…we will sit hear…u all play the games…swalani see ur maa is going to fight….
They sit on a bench just then a 6 year old boy comes there
Boy:shona maa laddo maa laksh mama
Sumi:aryan…where is ur papa..arjun
Swara:arjun bhai have gone to mumbai…haa aryan u sit there and watch how ur swara maa fights….
Sanskar recalls how he blammed swara and arjun relationship
By time they left everyone free…..
Maheswary goes to take swalani bt laksh stops them
Swara fights with them…and only shaurya was left…Shaurya cheat her by beating her on stmach where she was stabbed…
swara:maaa

Sumi:u should not back off..because of him, I was forced to away frm my 3 children and my poti..
.Her words was enogh for swara..
swara over power him..and takes the trishul and stabs him….he dies
Swara keeps the trisul in its placeSwara:forgive shivji…I knw I have did wrong with kiling him with this trishul..so sorry..next time I will try to kill with some other weapon….
All smiles….Just then police arrives
Police:who informed me that there is murder happened…You all have witnessed it naa..then say who did this….
Swara comes forward
Swara:sir I..
.Kaki (interepted) I dont knw sir..
Police:wow…this much happened…no one knows…
Swara:no sir…I did this….I killed him..u can arrest me..
.Police comes to her..
just knw all badi people takes blame on themself….
Police:whats this….
Swara:inspecter…I said naa..I did this
Dadi:no sir…I did this..he try to kill my poti, so I killed him
Kaki:no sir..I killed this guy..when he tried to kill my daughter….
All again started…
just then swara falls unconscious
All rushes towards her and takes her to hospital….
Dr takes her to icu
All are praying for her
Dadi:god..plz take my life..give our shona a good life..she is needed for our badi for the society….
Dr comes out

Dr:she is very weak….she may even die due to the bleeding and even she is not physically fit…I must say with just one kidney she lived like this way…if we need her same as before, she needs a kidney…
Badi people:sir u just say the blood grp…we will give it…she is more important to us
Dr:we need A+ve grp…
Kaki:those who all are A+ve go and do check up….After sometime…Dr:we cant find a perfect match
Shekar:sir..im her dad…and I havnt ever did any good things to her….plz give mine and save her life….
Dr gets him inside….
After sometime
Dr:operation is success….any one can meet her…
Sanskar was going to get inside bt laksh stopped
Laksh:where are u going mr sanskarSanskar:lucky she is my wife
Laksh:when did it happened…did u firgot what u have did with her….dont dare come to her..and not only u bt u all mr maheswaries….
Laksh:arjun bhai…aap jao…
Arjun wipes his tears and gets inside….
Arjun:shonaa
Swara:my bhai is crying….so sad of u…what happened bhai..im okk naa…evn im powerful than before….now plz smile
Arjun smiles
Arjun goes out and sanskar forcefully gets inside
Swara:anything left
Sanskar:shona…
Swara:I have already said dont dare use that name….
Sanskar:I knw..what I did is wrong…plz forgive me for that..
Swara:forgiveness should be given to the one who committ mistake…and what u did…without asking me, u only made up stop and blame me for everything….
sanskar:plz swara

Laksh comes inside and takes sanskar outside
Laksh:will u leave her alone
Sanskar:she is my wife
Laksh:no…she have already sign the divorce papers
sanskar:no…she cant…she loves me
Laksh:who said
sanskar:then y she married me
Laksh:onlu to get my medical papers and memmory card…after she gets that she signed the papers..
.Ragini:she doesnt want anyone to be suffered because of her..so plz bhai leave her…
Sanskar leaves frm thereAp:laksh..this is not good okk…he have the ryt to see herLaksh:no mrs maheswary..he doesnt have…he lost it when he mistrust her and even u lost that….when u slaps her….so im pleading to u all…leave us….
Maheswary leaves the hospital
After some days swara is distarged….
they take her to badi……
Hence lived happily with her maa cutie paal baby and her family…..Guys if u need u can add sanskar to her family…bt in my personal opinion I dont want him because he have always mistrust her harassed her..and I dont want swasan to be united in this ff….
thanku guys…only because of ur support I have reached here……
thanks a lot…

ALWAYS SMILE

Credit to: salluzz

23 comments

  1. Salluzz I hate u ccoz u ended my favourite ff..evn I’m with you.. Swasan shouldn’t be united…n tell me the name of ur new ff..
    I love u for writing such a wonderful ff..I was waiting for this since many days..n now it ended..so painful when ur favourite ff ends…
    Bye salluzz plz reply me the name of ur new ff..love u loads..

  2. Minu

    Sàlluuz… amazing u r such a fabulous writer. .. and tb thee plot was mind blowing. .. I was waiting for ur each and every update… thank u yaar… you did a fabulous job by making swara strong and value her self respect … I loved the fact that every story need not be romantic… and a couple is not much important but sometime our values and self esteem is what matters… thank u salluz for presenting an awesome piece of work… you are really a great writer and I wish you write a new ff… may god bless you my friend. .. may almighty help you achieve great heights. ..

  3. I agree… Swasan should be separated… He never trust swara… N trust is the base for any relation
    … The way he suffered is truly justified…..

  4. Tamanna

    Climax was awesome……..yeah I agree with you…..swara should not forgive sanskar

  5. awesome diff ending + emotional + awesome everything was awesome but u should have make swara eid someone else who trust her otherwise it was awesome..

  6. Bravo!!!amazing,excellent, I can’t find words to appreciate you……hats off to you,love you….ummmaaaahhh….salluzz plz come soon with another ff…till then take care….bye

  7. Vb

    Salluuz perfect climax I would say ! I agree with u sanskar doesn’t deserve her neither did his family in this ff. Way to go but gonna miss this ff.

  8. Bhargavi

    Salluzz this was my favourite ff and I have been waiting for Many days for this ff. But suddenly you have ended yar

  9. khushi

    i agree with u that swasan shouldn’t b united in this ff as sanskaar never trusted her and harrased her for no reason…..
    but try to give an epilogue with swara being happy and other people like maheshwari’s and shekhar being in trouble with sanskar facing trauma 😀 😀 😀 hahahahaha!!!!
    just kidding.. 😉

  10. Dev

    Hey salluzz….an amazing fab epi…with an apt ending…..n nc twist too..osm…eep smiling…love u lots….tc

  11. Mishti

    Ausm ending buddy..4 the 1st time I was hoping that swasan should not be together..Such an ausm ending dear..Good job..I l surely miss your ff

  12. IREENA

    I always want swasan together but according to the character of Sanskar I don’t want him to be with her. I’m happy with the end. ur ff was awesome.

  13. great dear … was waiting for next chappy foom a long time…… why u ended it so early….hun…. i wish swasan could have a happy ending.. but according too sanky’s character……. it was right.. honestly i didn’t like u giving sanky a bad role…… I AM a SANSKARHOLIC. HMM ……….BUT YR FF WAS AWESOME. THE STORY WAS EXCELLENT….

    KEEP SMILING

  14. maria

    it was awesome dear…evn I dont want swasan should be united….anyways come back with a new ff….may god gives u all the happiness….

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