Mantara Rocks episode 1

Hey it’s deepti I am here with my New FanFiction named mantara rocks and here is the first episode so let’s start

a girl is seen singing a song
Haan ho oooo
Main jjaane yeh vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Kimat ho koi tujhe beintehaan pyaar doon
SSarri haddein maine meri ,ab maine Tod di
Dekar mujhe pata awwargi ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Han nami ban gaye
Tum mere Aasma
Meri zamin ban ggaye

Someone enters

AA….oo..

She stops and smiles
Antara: aai bas main jaa hi rahi thi
She hugs and greets her mom
Charulata: beta all the best I m proud of you beta but don’t make me wrong
A lady enters
An: Nani
And hugs her
Nani: ye sab baad mein pehele dahi chini kha all the very best
An: bye aai bye Nani
CH and Na chorus: bye beta

She leaves

She reaches the studio no.7
She Mets a boy and it’s shaan
Sh: excuse me you are… antara joshi right
An: ya hllo it’s antara nice to meet you
Sh: hllo it’s shaan nice to meet you too
Come llet’s go inside
They both go

EEveryone introduces themselves except sunny and stands at other side fuming
Antara forwards her hand
Hllo antara
She replies sunny
Antara gets a call and she excuses herself and go outside

A a boy is shown who is wearing goggles and guitar is hanged on his back

Antara slips and a boy hold her from her waist and it is none other than our Mandy
They share an eyelock and feel some strong connection
Came back to their senses

An: sorry
Ma: it’s OK and by the way are you one of the contestants in this competition
An: ya and you too
Ma: ya hllo it’s Mandy
An: hay antara …. Antara joshi
Antara stares at him awkwardly

Precap : mantara became partners but something make antara hate Mandy and Mandy is also upset with her

What’s it ???
Please please I want lots and lots of comments and ideas please please do comment it really means a lot to me
I want your support it’s my first ff so please give me some ideas I will try my best to make you like it
I know today’s ff is very short
From the next day I will make it long
Please let me know if I should continue or not

Credit to: Deepti

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