Manmarziyan:His presence.. chapter 2 ( part 2)

It’s playback time (continuation)

Neil’s pov

After driving recklessly for an hour I reached “the bones” pub. Sitting in a dark corner gulping the burning drink all I could think was Sam. She is one of a kind. A flash of memory returned to my dizzy brain….

Katrina kaif was walking towards me..”Neil” She said seductively.umm …was all the came out.”Neil” this time the voice was shrill.”Neil….” and I woke up with a jerk. Some one was banging my door and if I don’t open it would come off the hinges

Waking up lazily I saw the time it was 4 in the morning “Neil” God yaar why did you create someone like her…muttering curses went to open the door only to get hit by her. “Are you crazy, woman?” I yelled. “Who told you to open suddenly?”

Huh! Whatever..that’s when I looked around…boys with only their boxers and tees and a few without them..all with their eyes red and sleepy..GOD!! She barged into a boys hostel
” you are shameless”

The only response was she smiling sheepishly at me. Pulling her into my room I yelled a sorry to all the spectators who were watching her new drama…yeah she was a drama queen for sure..

Seeing my angry and frustrated face she started her acting..keeping an innocent face and big puppy eyes she started explaining ” You see I called you about 5 times what if I was in some danger wouldn’t be of any help . I did not expect this from you ”

What! This girl..” Dramebazz come to the point”She smiled, there was a sparkle in her eyes “surprise,wear your trekking shows fast!”
“Trekking at 4 in the morning and that to at the cost of my dreams with Kat this better be interesting” I told her while wearing my shoes.

After two hours of climbing we saw the beautiful sunrise And indeed it was worth all the effort. I saw the sun lazily rise Hong in the sky painting various shades at every stage.What was even more beautiful was her angelic face with a peaceful smile on it..uff could do anything for it. Her eyes,an open book always displaying the emotions she felt were sparkling with happiness..

Immediately her pale face came into my mind bringing me back to reality. Her eyes …they were showing too much pain..maybe I was wrong maybe I should give her a second chance..making my mind and hoping I’m not late I dialled Bonnie’s number .

Hiee guys!! please forgive me for this late n short update. My counselling sessions r going on and I’m busy with them. So so so sorry. The next part of this chappy will be long for sure and yeah you read it right it’s Bonnie…let’s See it’s playback time for whom…Neil,Bonnie or…Sam. Guess it peeps..

There goes a part of their past. Which Sam do you like the present or the past and why? What do you feel about Neil giving her a chance…do tell me and please comment your reviews.
Can’t promise the next one fast but will try

Credit to: sahithi


  1. Jessie

    Nice one sahithi…old Sam seems all lovely n lively.. yup.. want Neil 2 give a chance for her.. she a villi story has ardhika also na…

    • sahithi

      Thank you Jessie?and yes ardhika are also there will introduce them with time…but its more of nesam.
      Take care! Love u loads?

  2. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Nice one Sahithi.. πŸ™‚ I like Sam in the past..She is so chirpy.. πŸ˜€ Waiting for the next.. πŸ™‚ Keep smiling.. πŸ™‚

  3. Gauri

    Awesome Sahiti πŸ™‚ I loved when she barged into boys hostel πŸ™‚ now who is Bonnie her waiting for the next πŸ™‚

    • sahithi

      Thank you dii? haha and about going to boys hostel..I wanna do it too?
      Take care you loads

  4. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous episode, sahithi very lovelyyyyyy. …the sunrise scene was beautiful. …image with this update so cuteeeee. …loved it…take good care of your studies. …will wait for the next episode, love you loads. . . . Muaaaaahhhhhh. .. πŸ˜€

    • sahithi

      Thank you Roma?? I love to watch sunrises too! Yeah I’ll study well madam? take u loads..bear hugs!

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