Manmarziyan – Yeh Ladka Hai…Deewana..!!(Two Shots) Shot 2

Hello….Everyone….Its Jessie again..with 2nd shot…Thanks a lot my friends…and am overjoyed with the reaction..yep..cool Arjun! you all liked..Thanks again….

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Yeh Ladka Hai Deewana – (Shot 2)

“Radz..”,Sangee whispered seeing Radhika in bridal wear in her room….

“Where is that Idiot?”…”,Radz asked peeping behind sangee…

“First..tell me..What are you doing..I mean..till the day of marriage..what you both were doing?will you plan only at last minute?”,Sangee hissed…

“We had a fight last week…and..this one got fixed 3 days back…”,Radz said with a sad pout.. “I din’t see this coming…I threw my phone in anger..so we couldn’t contact..uff..but I knew..somehow my Ajju will come for me”,Radz jiggled in happiness…

“And I came!!”,Arjun chirped closing the door behind…

“How.??.Ajju…”,Radz jumped into his embrace and Arjun kissed all over her face…

Sangee sat with her hand supporting her forehead looking the other way..”did my wish come true”,her mobile beeped with Jessie’s msg..Ah..This girl..she admonished..She was the one who wished that day to bring a super dooper surprise for Sangee…

“It’s all because of you I fought..Idiot..”,Radz slapped his arms being in his embrace…both blamed each other when Sangee finally demanded to know the reason.. Radhika said….”last week, he came to meet my dad…and my dad rejected our love without even listening to us..later that evening,I went to his flat and he sat drinking..no..no..sipping his drink…You are correct..Sangee…he is crazy..just for 3 shots he blabbered a lot…
I dint budge for his eloping idea fearing my dad’s influence…this fellow got me wrong and drank further…then…then…I…we….Somehow…that night….”Radz dragged with much hesitant to continue further….and its no rocket science to be tough to decipher..Sangee looked at Arjun unbelievable…

Arjun and Radz were deep drowned in their memory lane looking each other….

*Last week in Arjun’s apartment…*

“Listen me Ajju”,Radz pleaded as she knelt on his bed and pulled him to sleep..”You sleep..we will speak tomorrow..”,she said..

“No..no…”,he claimed her waist and pulled her to him…”tell me..will you elope with me or not..I will convince my parents…”,he spoke incoherently…

She said no..but was highly uncomfortable with the closeness…”Then you don’t love me”,he pouted like kid and held her even more close..

“Ajju..leave me”,she whispered unable to find herself normal..His grip grew more tighter…”Ajju…Listen..I love you so much..but my dad..”,she was cut in when he nuzzled his nose in crook of her neck..

“Don’t speak about him..I love you so much Radhu..more than anyone in this world”,his inebriated voice came with a husky notch….his hands unconsciously snaked inside her tops and caught hold of her bare skin..she gasped a little but he was already making her crazy with his open mouth kisses and rolled over her..”Don’t leave me pls..”he pleaded looking her face..

“I can’t Ajju..I love you s..”,he captured her lips suddenly and she responded equally,the liquor taste in his breath drove her mad on him…his hands on her skin sent heat waves to her and she drowned more in his manly sweetness…All she could remember was to moan high when he sucked her skin beneath her shoulder…”Ajju…”she trembled a little holding his shoulders…within minutes,she surrendered herself to him…

Next morning…

She saw him to sleep over her left,with mouth open…she sat pushing him a little…the clothes laying around the bed spoke his madness on her..she blushed beet red remembering the moments..

“Ajju”,she whispered kissing his bare shoulder… he stirred humming…He smiled at her,later got confused.,and his eyes widened in shock at last realizing the reality..

Radz looked him baffled at his continuous changing expressions…”Ajju..you…”,before she could complete..he spoke.,”Am sorry.!! Am so sorry!! I never intended to do this…! I shouldn’t…No..we shouldn’t have done this….Radhu..why din’t you stop me..”,he said looking his love bite on her neck… “Radhu..your dad will be searching you…go home!! and..and..Am sorry…I really..”,he rubbed nape of his neck and got off the bed with sheets on..He left the room without a backward glance…

Tears covered her vision wondering the reason for his apologies…He din’t look straight to her eyes when she came to the hall…Unable to hold after a day she met him and he again apologized…”Why to apologize when you love me truly”,she asked in a meek voice..

“Still its a mistake isn’t..grave mistake..I was in…”,he stuttered,but was shocked when Radz slapped him…

“How could you call as a mistake..it..it…”she sobbed,,but Arjun was shocked with her slap and let her go without convincing..A week passed with him trying to contact her and she got upset when her dad informed her marriage date just 3 days before…

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They both were pulled out of their trance when Arjun’s mobile rang..He rejected the call and saw Sangee to glare him,
“Geethu..Don’t..Pls..see..I apologized for that”,he said shocking ladies….

Radz punched him hard,”Still…”,she asked…

“Will you both stop..and tell me what’s next..why to call me when you can get inside by yourself?”,Sangee asked looking Arjun..

“You are my moral support”,he said smiling…

Sangee remembered him saying the same to Jessie before the semester exam stunt…She shook her head vigorously..’thats Jessie..and Am Sangeetha..! He cant pull his stunts..’,she smiled at her thought…

They grew alert at a door knock…and it was Ankhush,Radz bro… He was having a flower sehra in his hand..

“What for?”,Radz asked pointing it…

“Radhi..I called the guy umpteenth time and that idiot din’t pick my call…Why can’t he attend”,Ankush lamented..

“’cause he is here”,Radz pointed Arjun lying beneath the cot..Sangee laughed,looking him lay holding his knees together to accommodate the length,under the bed…

“Oh..”Ankhush gave a angry glare and “what’s the plan and who is she?”,he asked looking Sangee..

After he and she intros.,Ardhika argued a lot and finalized a plan and Sangee felt her head to swirl…

Now she realized the words of Jessie…”Oorla pathu pathinaju friends vachurukravenallam santhosama irukan..ivan oruthana friend a vachukitu namma padra paadu irukeee….Aiaiaiyoo”

(People having 10-15 friends are staying happy,but having this one guy as our friend,the ordeals we face…Arggghhh…)

Inspite of her protests,Sangee was forced to slip into a bridal lehanga,and Arjun came wearing Ankhush’s sherwani..

“See..I will fool the saral saying,let Ankhush marry first.,that idiot will stay back..we both will walk to dais,and last minute we will escape from the place…Ppl will think you as Radhika, as you stay here..and when they get behind us thinking me to be Rashi…..Bhai will help you to get out.. meanwhile… my cousin will create a chaos in Rashi’s name and they will get busy bickering each other…”Radz said…

“But they will find Arjun isn’t”,Sangee asked..

“No..Saral’s mom wants us,I mean the grooms to wear sehra.”Ankhush said extending his..

“Why”,all asked in chorus..

“She is a daily soap fan you see..”Ankhush smiled…

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Ankhush and Sangee saw Ardhika to step down.. “You should get them married too..what if your dad does something”,Sangee looked him.. “..and what about Rashi”…She asked..

“Oh yes..I will say the same story in reverse and make her stay back in room”,Ankhush rushed..”I will send my cousin here..he will handle if someone comes”,he went out…

After a minute, a guy did come as Ankhush said..Sangee silently prayed for her safety…She saw Arjun to move towards the wedding altar and Radz who took a step on other side followed him with the ghoonghat covering her face…

Sangee called him the minute Arjun sat in dais,”What the hell,Arjun…”Sangee asked..

“Geethu..think logical…we have no time to marry in peace..even if we escape now.,they will chase isn’t..so…”..Arjun whispered

“So??….”

“I..,Arjun.,invite you to watch,my marriage with my sweet heart Radhika..”,he disconnected the call…

She stood with mouth wide open…

“Hey..My brother ki dulhan…bhabhiiii..whats your name?”,the guy asked and Sangee almost in the verge of anger threw cushions at him..

“Am not anyone’s dulhan…Today’s is my birthday..what have this Aru done?..”she screamed scaring the guy…

“Relax..I just kidded…I will get you safe outside…Rashi’s dad is also influential you see..that’s y..sorry for troubling you..”,he spoke with real concern..

“They are getting married”,she said watching Ardhika..the guy came rushing to the window..

“Ankhush..where are you..atleast you be with Radhu……”,the guy said calling Ankhush thro’ his mobile.

Sangee smiled looking her best friends to get married…The rituals…Garland exchange…Arjun leaped forward like jumping,when Radz was carried a little high by Rashi’s cousin brothers…

“Seriously..I admire him..so daring…look the security around..anyone at his place would have thought to escape at the first chance”,he said smiling…

“At times he behave crazy..but he is good”,Sangee giggled looking Arjun’s antics…

“No..our Radhu is lucky…He is risking himself for the marriage…Now..we have lotssa witness..uncle can’t do anything”,the guy said sliding his hands to his pant pockets..

“Hey…pls share this videos with Radz…”,Sangee said crooking her neck to watch the marriage..

“Sure..”,he said..Ardhika took marriage vows and Sangee heaved a sigh when he tied nuptial chain…

“Good that,Saral’s mom was Daily soap freak..see…her sehra and lengthy ghoonghat demand,favored us”,he laughed a little…

Radhika’s mobile rang disturbing them,Sangee had it in speaker and Saral spoke..”Radhu..Lets move to altar..I can’t wait..else shall I come to your room”..

Sangee looked the guy and he spoke..”Jiju…I will come as your best man..and Rads will join us in downstairs..”

They saw outside and Arjun sat with a small box of sindoor in his hand..”Oh god..now he needs to lift her ghoonghat ..what if someone sees her face”,the guy scared sangee too…

But to their surprise,Arjun leaned completely to her side covering others view and applied sindoor….Radhika smiled happily looking him..she pushed the sehra a little biting her lips..With sehra covering his face,that was the first moment she got to see him since she stepped in dais…”Love you Radhu”,he whispered…She was overwhelmed with emotions…
Immersed in the ocean of happiness, she held his hands as they stood up.. “Ajju..This is a true surprise…”,she said to him….

Sangee came covering herself in ghoonghat…”I gave him tablets..he will rush to washroom when he steps near the stage..so relax..bride madam!!”,the guy mocked her…

“Am not a bride here..and good job..best man!!”,Sangee mocked him back..

Ardhika was shocked to see Saral stepping towards them..”Rashi..am so happy!!”,he patted Radz head.. and moved…

Ardhika stood froze watching Sangee to come..”I did a big mistake”,Arjun mumbled…

His phone rang and Sangee whisper screamed,”Move away silently…we will manage..Go you both”..

“You both leave..I had given him tablets..I will get your friend safe”,the fellow said…

Sangee halted on her steps when Saral laid unconscious on the dais…”to your right..move fast”,Ankhush whispered to her…

Dilip and Saral’s dad rushed to the place….

Ardhika slowly walked to the entrace,while sangee moved backwards mingling herself into the crowd…There was a small door near the lawn area.. She moved towards it..Arjun turned suddenly..

“Radhu..we should go only when she steps out safe”,he said to her..

Radhika pulled Arjun’s mobile and dialed to her cousin…it kept ringing…and she spoke to Arjun..,”you are correct Ajju..She is a gifted friend for us….she helped in right moment…no one will risk themselves..that too on her birthday…stupid of me!! I forgot to wish”…

Arjun stood emotional looking her..their college moments flashed before his eyes.,the way she rolled her eyes when a guy came listening utensils down,and finally…patting his shoulder with a smile wearing the lehanga… “Geethu….I love you….”,he yelled shocking the entire crowd including Radhika… “And many more happy returns of the day my sweeet dooolllllll”,he smiled wide…
Radhika slapped his hand and he turned behind to see the crowd looking them…

They saw guards to move towards them.,when Dilip saw Ankhush to stand in between the crowd in normal attire.,”get that guy”,Dilip yelled high looking Arjun…

Sangee lifted her lehanga a little and ran to the gate,she stumbled but felt a sudden grasp on her wrist and she was pulled to the door….”They will move..you don’t worry”,he said and got inside the car..

“Geet..!! get in”,he said and she got in…

“Hey thanks..!! how you..”,she was cut in…

“I should thank you Geet!! you helped our Radhu.. and she said about you just now…”,he turned the ignition on…

“and you are…”,Sangee asked him..

“Arjun…Naam to suna hi hoga(Name..you would have heard isnt)!”,he smiled…

She blinked “Of all the names..you got only this..”,she sighed and he laughed..

“Well…Am Arjun Singhania…”

He stopped before a cafe shop after about half an hour of drive….

She stepped in as she was already hungry….’thank god! I have my clutch..I could pay..’she mumbled but was shocked to see Ardhika there…

“Geethu…Happy birthday…!”,he hugged her before she could respond… “I have no words to thank you..”,he said with tears forming in his eyes..”I thought to remove my sehra when you walked in…but..”he was cut in

“Aru…c’mon…and Happy Married life…Am so happy..This will be one adventurous birthday,I would remember forever”,she smiled hugging Radhika…

“Why Saral fainted,instead of running to washroom”,Rads asked..

“That..!by mistake I gave him sleeping pills..”Arjun Singhania said sighing…

“Then Rashi?”Arjun asked..”Ankhush said he will give those to her”..

“Hmm…the tablets got exchanged…”Arjun Singhania said with a serious face…after a moment all the four laughed holding their stomach…

“Happy Birthday Geet!!”,Arjun Singhania wished her….(hereafter AS)

They threw streamers in that small party hall and had a cake cutting…Sangee was surprised when AS fed her a piece of cake…

“Bride madam…Thanks for helping my sister..”,AS said looking Radz..

“Best Man..Thanks for the sweetest birthday party…I know..you arranged isn’t”,Sangee looked him…

“Yea..Radz said before we eloped”,he said…

“Whattt”,Sangee asked as though hit by 1000 watts

“Yea..Of course..Everyone including my Parents watched me running with you hand in hand..so by now..this would be the hot topic isnt”,AS winked at her..

After a moment of shock.,she asked,”You were that so called cousin isn’t, to create chaos in Rashi’s name..now see”,she laughed covering her mouth…

AS saw Ardhika to be in their own world.,looking each other with their hands entwined…

“Geet !!why don’t we make the rumor a real one”,he winked at her…

Sangee looked him shocked… “you are kidding..”she said..

“Well…will your parents object for a North Indian groom,”,he asked swiping his phone screen… “This is your land line number isn’t”,he turned the mobile to her side..She nodded her head…

“Geet…Think well and reply…I wasn’t joking..”,he said..

“How you got my details”,Sangee asked wide eyed looking the details…

“I did say…Arjun Singhania!!”,he smiled…

She moved aside citing a call,after some mins she came back and was surprised to see AS waiting for her in their table..

She heard a song playing in that cafe and recalled her friend’s wish…(that’s me…sooper dooper surprise msg..!!)

Vaazhka Mella Mella Okay Aanathey
Jodi Vanthu Ippo Jolly Aanathey
Bike Ride’du Kooda Happy Aanathey
Kaalam Vanthathey Gethu Aanathey..

( Life moves okay.,little by little
Got a pair now, and it became a Jolly one
Even my bike ride became the happiest
Time has come now., I am with full of pride)

She smiled to herself ,having a piece of cake…Ardhika smiled listening that…

“Is it possible to tune a channel in particular here..I need to see a program”,she asked to the waiter over there and AS did the honors…

Ardhika’s heads snapped listening their name…”Well..Its my best friends marriage today…I wish him a very happy married life..May God bless you both with immense happiness Arjun and Radhika…Radz.. beware of my crazy friend..and Geet..A very happy birthday…hope you got the sooper dooper surprise…and here this song is my special dedication to my friend Arjun….Arjun….In your words…I love you Arjuuuuunnnnnn”…

“How come she could speak nonstop like this”,AS looked the Television screen wide eyed…

“Jesss….”Arjun smiled…Sangee muffled her laughter….And the song played Arjun’s face reaction changed….

Haye haye re haye yeh ladka
(Oh My this Guy)
Haye haye re haye
(Oh My)

Radz laughed when Arjun thinned his lips…

Karta naadaniyaan kyun poocho to haye
Kabhi yeh hamse ladta hai, kabhi jhagadta hai
Koi paas iske na aana

Why does he behave childishly, ask him why
Sometimes he fights with me, sometimes he harasses me
Don’t anyone go near him

Sangee and Radz both sang in unison pointing him…

Yeh ladka hai…Deewana hai deewana (Deewana,deewana, deewana)

(This guy is Crazy)

Arjun nodded his head and sat comfortably with a smile….The girls continued teasing him and he enjoyed smiling…

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Ok..now..how this was??? No idea about the last part…Cameo nahi..AV pe aagayi..lol….Eager for comments…Well…How was Ardhika marriage part?? that was something am looking for here in your words…Share your valuable words…Take care and loads of love to you all…

49 comments

  1. Jewel

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    jez, this is awesome…. that marriage part, they married infront of every one, and saral fainted because of sleeping pills, that was funny…. the most adventurous bdy of sangee, and she got arjun, AS……… i loved this story jez, and this arjun too, really he is enough to make every one happy, to trouble also…. and his i love u, this time also sangee was in trouble after that.and ur role also, i liked a lot… this was really nice jez, u wrote it beautifully……. waiting for such stories……..

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Shonaa…i so like your dp girl….thanks a ton dear….yes…marriage before everyone…fainted nahi..he slept..isnt ..lol…yep…Geet ko jodi diya maine.. am so happy that you loved it..Arjun bi,..
      that’s fantastic…I mean he won the title na…you are so correct about his character…First time handling such…yes…his I love you..lol..They were about to get caught….thank you….am jumping in happiness….oh..wow!! That calls a success…!! will definitely try dear…Loads of love…TC and stay happy…

  2. Shree

    |Registered Member

    jess lol.. aati adi aati.. uff im still laughing.. haha one adventurous wedding.. ankush as always a good brother… sarals mom lol.. daily oap fan.. nalla vela.. lol that dialogue.. santhanam .. boss padam.. that is true.. enna kelu.. naa pata kashtam iruke.. lol pills exchange.. arjun singhania!! ada akka ku oru arjun.. how many arjuns do we create? uuufff.. hehe jess in tv.. haha that song.. totally awesome.. as has her details.. make rumor real.. haha

    awesome.. crazy.. just like you.. ponne unnaku oru mega kumbudu…

    come back soon.. love you so much

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Shreee……aati dialogue..lol…. yep that dialogue is my fav…am glad ya..you enjoyed this much….heheh… neeyuma..same blood…aama…innoru Arjun clone..hahha… aama tv le vandhen…Cameo in a cameo role..lol….yep…Geetukaga…AS na summava…Arjun nu per vachale
      edhavadhu seiyanumle…..

      Meow…ena pola crazy…heeee…Nandrigal D….. yen da kumbudu podra…naan ena panen..*flapping my eyes* innocent illayo….nee than joot vidraye..en koopidra..orediya new yearle sandhipom..love you tons girl…TC ..stay happy…

  3. Sulbi

    |Registered Member

    Jazzzzz…. i was enjoying baby…. How he could be so cool yaar???? Arjun gethu panra pa… Arjun cool attitude made me to fall for him more yaar… The marriage ceremony was brilliant move… It’s a serious situation but you made it with funny moments… wow… simply superb… Sangee how sweet… But she eloped with AS… Even she is shocked hearing those words from AS… Hehehe… Enga pathalum Arjun… lol… Jaz kutty u gave a speech… Thats cool one… I love you Jazzzzzzzzzz…. Hehehe dont chase me for this…. πŸ˜‰ Seriously love this shot…. tc darling….

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Sulbi jaan….. am so happy u enjoyed…!! cool a irundhutane…haiya..adhu success ji… falling for him…. aama…sema fun a… Geet is so sweet… lol ..elope…Arjun..lol… aama…ore Arjun maayam than… aama..nanum cameo le..eeee…. Awwwwiiiiiiieeeeeeeeee….I love you Sulbi….. why will I chase you….am so happy reading your likes..am like…Haiya..aaha….Thank you so much darling…and the energetic words keeps me more happy…TC and loads of love

  4. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Semma update..MAAASSSSS….PAKKAAAAA MAAAASSSSS. Ithuku peru than Galatta kalyanam nu solluvaanga..illa Jaaazzz. lol kalyanthula ore kalebaram than. Semma jolly update. Sangee’s role is the best yar…risking her life on her bday just for her friends and their love. Great theme Jaaazzziiii..and nallavangaluku nallathu than nadakum athu maathiri Arjun ku help panni kadasila Arjune eh kidachutaan..Arjun Singhania va…lol AS kooda elope aana oore kekume…apo rumor ah unmai nu solla vendiathu than…

    Super duper update πŸ™‚ love u Jaazz…..haiyyo antha song i can’t forget. I still remember we mixed this song and Koi mil gaya song and did group dance on our school annual day function. I just got the same dress as our dance dress which Kajol wore..White and Red combo…its now running in my eyes…jaazzziii u gave me my memories..love u dear πŸ™‚ i was in 9th when this movie came…lol

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Telugu padam pola sollitenga..Mass…thank you dear….. yes..adhedhan…Galatta kalyanam than…
      If we have Arjun like groom what to do..lol…. Geet thana heroine ye..viduvena…thanks a lot Satz….Aahaaaaaaa..thathuvam super…Yes…Arjun ku jodi setha rasi…Geet ku oru Arjun…. hahah
      Rumor pathi naa sollala..unmai ya nu naa sollala…but ena pananum nu geet sollanum…lol

      Oh…school days memories..I remember the dress..Awwww…Am so so happy that you revived super sweet memories…love you loads Satz…I could understand ji….school days memories oru thani santhosham….that too annual day function…TC and stay happy…thanks again…

  5. arti viswanathan

    Superb episode, arjun and geethu’s scenes were so cute na… And atlast he says arjun singhania to everyone….. And jessie’s scene too i liked it…..

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Arti darling….Thanks a lot dear…. Arjun and geet..!! thanks for that…yes..cute….AS..yea..thanks dear…am glad you liked it..so happy…TC loads of love

  6. vedha

    Jezzyyyy…….. you r rocking … sangee’s birthday was awesome , we should plan such in her real life tooo ;)haha… she will love such situation…… your scenes was just coming in front for my eyes….. sangee’s reaction was exactly as she does…. and i was surprised sangee , you think me as Radz…… πŸ™‚ aaaha…. ;)love u dear….no one can replace u in my life…….. jezzy thank u for ur ship name and ur wishes… sangee lets rock the world in rest of our life………

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hey Vedhaa…thanks dear…. In real life too..hahah.. am glad you liked it to that extent…dear..thats a wonderful compliment..REally!! She does the same…wow!! My Pleasure dear…rock you both…Am happy vedha…you know when you say its exactly like herself..am feeling so excited…Nandrigal…you dropped in and shared your words….TC…loads of love..glad to get to know about two lovely friends…Stay happy and smiling…

    • Sangee

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      What same plan in real life 😨😨😨😨😨 aiyayo…. Jessi… I shud be carefull hereafter… Enna Yarkita yadu maati vitu du vanga… Polaye…. Enna yar kapathu va… Poor me…… Idu kootu sadiya la irruku… Jessi 😭😭😭😭😭

  7. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Jessssss you are pakki my judwa behana haa…..lol i never read this kind of adventurous wedding in my life…arjun…haye haye re haye ladaka..lol..seriously i read this while brake n couldn’t hold myself laughing.. Ppl gave me weird look….ankush..bhai ho to aisa….saral’s mom..lol..ghunghat helps….aradhika moment..later his guilt.. Their fight..wow..its so written realistically….. After that AS ki entry.. Ufff..mujhe bhi mera arjun mil jaye yarrrr….sangeee..god she would hav been crazy handling such frnd..lol..jess ur advice tht to hav 10-15 frnds bettr to hav arjun as frnd…u knw aradhika wedding reminded of three idiots movie..u wrote it brillently…now gng to read my swt mistake..see u thr JB..love you loads….muhhha..tc

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Confirmed!!!! wow!! Judwa behana…just imagine what will happen if I organize a wedding….lol…Kahani me itne zare twist diye to asli zindagi me socho..lol..Adventurous..haan ji…
      weird looks..heheh…happy on that..I got when I read KYM..so barabar ho gaya…heheh… Acha….sachi yaar….Bhai ho to aisa…Guilt one..hheheh… AS bi pasand.. Deepzzz…SAtz gave Arjun C na..hahahahah..Rofl……Arjun mania…. !!Deepz…my advice dialogue is a movie line yaar….very popular one…!! so used it… Geet ..she would have enjoyed you see…Handsome hunk listens to her…3 idiots..oh Kareena one..Yea..Yea…..but they wont marry isnt..Lol..Now am thinking about Boman Irani reaction…Thanks a ton mere judwa behana….Ahh..I feel happy..happy… oh ok..Love you loads…TC….Muahh

  8. manha

    jesss biggggggggggggg hug baby doll. do you really want to know how much i liked??? ufff it was just fantastic. dont have words. geeta girl now i’m jealous of you. kya bday gift mila hain. dost bhi arjun then partner bhi arjun. lol. tooo gud. belated happy birthday. jesss my dearyyy you are awesome, amazing. kya story hain. i was laughing reading it non stop. everything perfect. arjun full on crazy guy. i loved him more. this is so refreshing. lol.. his dialogues were fab. ‘i arjun invite you to watch my marriage with my sweetheart radz’ haha.. i was rolling for this dialogue…. man he was such a cutiepieee. radz jiggling and telling’ i know my ajju will come for me’ then arjun entry and ‘im here’ lol…. kya timing hain. jessie bali ki bakri.. lol.. semester papers. jess ur paper is with me. haha… when you clear 5 its no prblm to keep 2 arrears. heh??!!! jessie words running in geeta’s mind ‘ ppl hav 10-15 frnds n they r happy but we are dying with this one guy’ haha. that was best and super way to describe arjun in this story…. marriage superbbbbbb. arjun’s antics… 1000/100….. really superb… geet love youuuuuu. lol… that was te best dialogue…. i loved their frndship…. ardhika first liplock n geeta shocked face… and then arjun telling you told to utilize the oppurtunity so i did my best…lol…. hahhhhaaa. arjun in burqah… under table… lying under cot….. then the very imp scene… mistake wala lol….. arjun is crazy… this is grave mistake.. radz punching him…. hehehee. ‘is it my fault that i look too gud”” hahhaaaa. goddd… every line i was laughing like maniac… every scene perfect and superbbb… jessie ke toh i lovedddddddd. lol… bechari jesss. last arjun singhania… whoaaaaa…. elope with geeta… icecream.. cake…. bday gift… goddd.. aise bday tum hamesha manati raho geeta.. love you girl…. and not to forget arjun singhania mubarak ho darling… hahaaa… then final touch jesss on air… lol… AS asking how can she talk non stop like that… lol… ask us we will telll…. in your style….. i loveeeee youuuuuuu jessssssssss. muahhhhh.

    • Sangee

      |Registered Member

      Hai manha dear… Ya iam double blessed… Dhost bhi arjun.. Partner bhi arjun 😍😍😍…no jealousy… See all of you guys have different versions of arjun… I have two arjun πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰.. Lol… Thanks for the wishes
      Love you 😘😘😘😘

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Awwiee…Am your baby doll.!!!! thank you…Manha..you have no idea how much am happy reading your name here..Thanks dear..I made you jealous on Geet…..Succcesss!! yipee….Am happy you loved the gift..double treat…hehe…Manha…all those dialogues..my fav..especially…I Arjun invite and utilized the opportunity..lol…thanks a ton yaar..am just reading it again and again…you love him??!!!! Like more!! Manha…that calls for a party isnt…I mean Manha..loves ARjun here…Cutiepieee..really…wow… Semesters dialgue…lol… Friends one is movie line..A famous one..Arjun scored 1000….Now am jiggling like Radz… love you dialogue ..hahha..That was the first dialogue I framed… Mistake wala..heahh…. grave..ya..isnt..!!! cute na…..you made me speechless with pointing every single thing…AS ko mubarak..hahah….waiting for green signal from sangee..then I will call Jiju…lol and dedicate the other song to them…yes…On Air..safe cameo..lol..Meow..!! I speak less..!! Manha……You finally proposed me…!! this calls for a celebration..the whole world reads this….. Rofl….I love youuuuu Manhaaaaaaaaaa……Muahhhhhhh…Chalo…am running in slow motion to hug you..lol..Dont shut your house’s main gates toni8..I may gate crash anytime…Love you tons and Thanks a ton…am really happy…no words to express…TC…

  9. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Jessiiieeeeee !!!! even i m feeling dizzy watching their marriage… goshh hilarious.. !!! beautiful n enjoyable.. !!! *hug Arjunnnn !!!
    Huhh today even i imagined Sanskar in that cool avtar urghh kya karu heart beat hain na.. dun know why all that is happening with me.. !! Don’t b angry waaa i got 199 bees in my stomach,, 99 butterflies in my cheeks,, 100 grasshoppers in my whole body imagining Arjun Sanskar both.. !!!
    i know i know m so shameless.. !!
    u won’t believe i was coming from tution n my car ditched me .. yrghh then i thought to check ur post n good luck i found the 2nd part… but during reading i almost fainted laughing… but i could only laughed…. hehehehe !! it was awesomely n cutely written with loads of love for ev1… I guess m feeling something for Arjunnnn !!! *mad me.. !!
    Love it dear.. !!! sorry fir blabbering… actually i couldn’t hold on my emotions which were overflowed sooo..
    Thnk u ;-*

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Heyya Surprise Friend….. dizzy…haha..*pour water* hehheeh… yay!! success…I wanted it to be so…. thank you…Thank you… Sanskar… wow…bees..butterflies…grasshoppers..my god….everything around you..all targeted my Kakali… Arjun and sanskar..zor ka jhatka…chalo dual role for you.heheh…..

      Glad that it helped you..I understand…… Very beautifully said…thanks again and glad that you enjoyed this much…something for Arjun..I see… heheh..dont be sorry coz you dint blabber…I too would comment the same way yaar… hehehe….overflowing…!! love you loads..thanks for the lively comment…I loved it…TC and stay happy….

  10. Sangee

    |Registered Member

    Hey jazz… Can you see me… No u can’t… Because iam flying in the sky…😍😍😍😍
    Theri baby top to bottom… Your sooper dooper wish came true… Lol.. Siting with hand in my forehead… Rofl… Same reaction I used to give when my friends annoy me… Some how you caught my pulse dear πŸ˜‰ iam exclaiming how this happened πŸ˜• Ardika scenes πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ dei arjun panrade ellam pannitu sorry ah… Sema… Iam proud of you my friend… Moral support adapaavi… Balikada nu sollu da…santhanam dialog… Exact…sehra… Daily soap… Rofl…. Adapaavi Enna inga okra vachi tu kalyanathuku invite panriya 😨😱😱😱😱
    My brother ki dhulan omg… 😭😭😭😭😭
    Ardika marriage chance less na pinnita…
    Happy tears Seeing my besties marriage…. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚… Super ippadi dan wish pannalam num infront of all.. Nee lam nalla varuva da… Innoru thadava I love u sonna Appa ram nan nan ah irruka matta…AS AWWW 😍😍😍😍😍… Unnaku Vera per eh kidai kala ya…. Lol… Tablets got exchanged…. Omg uff… Poor rashi…cake as hands 😍😍😍…bride madam…. Best man….we eloped 😱( imagine santhanams expression from ok ok when he cuts partha s friend ship) idu
    eppa da nadanthichi… Hot topic 😨😨…make rumour as real… 😨😨😨…. Parents wish… Landline number…. Think we’ll and reply… Iam fainting… Anyone spray some water…. Ur msg 😍😍😍…bgm… I luv that song… Shot in Puducherry yep… U wished me on my bday sukran Kai ah katti nikiran… I got it now… Jeez on air… Sema cameo…. I just loved it to the core… Loved you 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Thank you so sooooooooooooooooo much…. Iam blessed… I have two versions of arjun… One as bestie.πŸ˜‹ and other as partner… πŸ˜‰….Tanku Tanku Tanku baby…… 😍😍😍😍😍

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Geeeeeeet………….AS called you Geet….Vera yaarum koopidala…Unga peru Geet kana reason ji…ok thana..hahah…naangellam appave appidi plan panuvom…hahh…Kathiya ezhuthi vachutu than pera sonen..am so so so happy dear…am flying high more than you….I too wonder..got your pulse…etho maayam…proud of your friend..really!!..hahha…balikada….yep…nalla varuvan..hahah..sema dialogue…I love you..venama..lol….naan vandhu spray panren…..AS epidi propose panan parteengala…namma surprise apidi…elope..hot topic…othuko…lol…partha friendship scene..yes..I remembere…. u like a..appada..ye..nyabagam iruka…yes….correct a sonnenga…sukran dialogue…. ippo than form le vandrukeenga…am so so happy that you liked and enjoyed this much…2 versions..happy ji…cool friend and clever partner..woo,,fix paniteenga..ok..ok..double santhosham..climax kaga than adi vilumo nu ninachen..AS kaapathitan…thanks a ton Geet chellam…TC and loads of love…Stay happy..stay smiling..TEddy hugs… sukran kai katti nirka vazhthukal…muaaahhhhhh

      • Sangee

        |Registered Member

        ohhhhhh this is was the resaon…. iam blushing here…nee genius nan othu karen πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ once agai thanks for ur wishes..sukiran kai katti nika… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  11. Chinmayi

    Jassss darling ummmmmmahh😘😘😘 ahh!! I need time to recover..i laughed like a maniac.. Thank god I had closed my room door if not my mom would hve snatched my phone *poor me* πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I was only thinking how crazy and lively, you are while reading the entire hilarious shot.. I am having study holidays now.. But I have effortlessly erased the word study in it… I hate study holidays dear.. Padne ko bhi man nahi lagtha, poore man se enjoy bi nahi kar sakthe… The days were very boring.. but u brought laughter to my dry phase.. Thank you soo much….i LUV u😘😘😘

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Chinmayiiiii……teddy hug dear….thanks A ton dear…..Am glad I was able to…door closed..haha…laughter is good therapy you know…lets laugh..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ thanks dear…effortlessly erased….heheh…so its only Holidays..yep….all the best for your exams…dry phrase…yep yaar…glad u had some relief…chillax dear….mom snatching phone…hehe…you do that much naughtiness I guess….take care of yourself dear…don’t stress yourself…study well…and thanks a ton dear…TC..love you loads…

  12. likii

    Fantastic Jessie. ….loved the marriage drama ….so funny hahaha …..n ur cameo was awesome ….n the whole story was a masterpiece ….loved it. …love you too

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hi Likii….Thanks a lot dear…am happy you loved and enjoyed… aww..thank you… masterpiece..
      thanks dear..it means a lot…TC and loads of love

  13. Viprida

    |Registered Member

    jessima!! Naan enna solradhu!! Vazhakam pola moochu pechu ilama aakita nee!!! Semma chapter!! Kalyanathula “Niruthunga” style la prachana varumnu theriyum, aana kalyaname prachanaya irukuradha naan inga dhaan paakuren!! AYM style la solanumna, appa oda kalyanam evlo thadabudala nadandhudhu theriyuma nu naan thrilling ah en pullaingaluku solluven nu Arjun solluvan!! Paavam Geet, naan apodhaan oorla 10, 15 friends dialogue ah yosikuren nee correct ah potuta!! Aana, idhuku mela terrific aana b’day gift ah yaaralayum kuduka mudiyadhu kanna!! Arjun Singhania twist bhale bhale!! Naan Neil ah irukum nu nenachen!! Aana, pazhaya pazhamozhi solra madhiri “Ooran veetu Arjun ah avan love oda serthu vecha, namma veetu Arjun namma kita thana vandhutu poran”!! Aana AS indha ranagalathulayum unaku oru gilugilupu kekudhu nu solra madhiri “Why don’t make the rumour true” nu potan paaru oru bit-u!! Bayangarm!! Best love proposal ever!! Aana, rendu crazy Arjun oda iruka pora Geet oda nelamaya nenchu paathiya!! On the whole, it was a kick-ass episode with a lot of hilarious moments and Ankush was the best brother!! Paah, romba pesiten! You rocked it darling!! take care happie day!!

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Vipuuuu…..Teddy hugs…moochu pechu comment….am smiling wide…Nandrigal…… hahha..super dialogue..adhan jessie…* collar a thooki vitting.*kalyanathaye pirachanaiyakiten..wah..!! Vipu…
      Sema dialogue Arjunku..illa… unmaile best..!! appa oda kalyanam.. hehehe..Indha arjun solluvan..Aiyo I loved that lines..muahh….. traffic ana gift..hahaha….Pazamozhi… claps..adra sakka…ena oru nachu dialogue..ooran veetu arjun…hahh… Aama AS ku avan kavala…jodi sekanum nu ninaikran…Awwwiieeeeeeee…..Best proposal…Thank you ji…. Geet chellam vevaram ana aalu…heheh…thanks a ton…hilarious ku than ithana padupaten..ippo nimathi…Teddy hug…Ankush..score panitan… Stay happy dear..your words works like a boost and I feel energized… I loved your counter dialogues dear… satisfied now…loads of love..stay blessed…!!!

  14. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    It was funny…..but I got confused…….happy that everything turned out fine and funny……Sangee is indeed lucky……..Arjun as friend and life prtner……..

  15. Aastha

    Jessssiiiieeeee…… superb.. amazing….Masti ka khazana…..full on entertainment….. entertainment…!!!… very very hilarious…
    Sangee… Arjun.. Jessie .. group of all crazies..!!!
    πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Arjun himself spoked “jess your copies are with me “… lol…so carefree about surroundings …poured juice on you and the song” haye haye ye ladka……” very well compliments him.
    Ringtone ” pehla nasha ” πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
    Jess you aren’t less too…” the subscriber you are trying to reach is currently not available.”….hi.fi dear.. good job…!!!😎😎😎
    You very well played your role…
    ” I loveee youuu gethuu…I loveee you jess.. I loveee you radhu..I love you all… the way Radhika imitated him showed full anger.. jealousy…lol

    Arjun in burkha…the way he hid under table…dropping utensils and Meow meow and ” am sorry it was a mistake I shouldn’t have done that…!!!!
    You won’t believe how I was beaming in happiness… jumping….πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    By his antics he could drive anyone crazy…oh!!! I could understand how hard it’s been for Sangee to handle him..
    My brother ki dulhan……bhabhi… Saral fell due to sleeping pills and RASHI….!!!!
    Arjun… Radz..Sangee.Ankush..AS all crazy at one place..” saare pagal ek Saath ”
    Ending was emotional… really it’s all been possible Arjun Radhika marriage.. because of the bond Sangee Arjun shared…their friendship… standing for each other…care… togetherness
    I too want a friend like her..??
    And it’s the best.. precious.and one memorable bday gift for real Sangeetha…l know she would lack words for such a gift…..
    I totally enjoyed & rolled in happiness…story framing excellent…
    Love you dear… Teddy hugs..take care…😘😘😘😍😍😍😍
    Do come back with such stories…

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Aasthaaaaaaa…… Am jumping in happiness reading your comment…My god!! you made me speechless….Muaaahh…and TEddy hug dear..Thanks a lot dear…Grp of craziess.heheh..Thank you..Wow..songs..juice..papers…subscriber dialogue..burka..hahah…you brought a mini precap here..and meow meow..my fav… it was a mistake…rofl part isnt….I laughed a lot while typing that…Even imaginged Arjun saying those…yep…driving crazy..you understand GEet’s plight..!!
      Welll said dear..very well said!! you brought the essence of the plot saying about Sangee and Arjun friendship… aww…Geet on demand !! Successs!!! am happy… yaar…such a appreciation for my gift…Believe me..Am just enjoying this moment…!! I read your comment many times…how beautiful you had expressed everything….. story framing…Thanks a ton dear…love your enthusiastic words…love you loads..TC and teddy hugs…. will do dear…

  16. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Jessie should try writing more of comedy….I was rolling when Saral fainted…..loved the marriage part…today my place got changed in office I was sitting in the middle and giggling because I couldn’t laugh aloud …. my collegue asked me to share the joke I said its personal…. hence this was the best time I write the comment ….loved it Jess … keep wrting darling you are blessed with a unique humour πŸ™‚ love u

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Gaurrrrrriiiiiiiiiii…..teddy hug…. Thanks for boosting me dear.. am glad you pointed your likes…Am imagining your situation in office..hheeheh…Personal!!! hahah…Yep..its personal..!! πŸ˜‰ ok dear…. thanks a ton dear…will do…wow.!! Love your words…Love you loads…TC..stay happy…

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