Manmarziyan – Yeh Ladka Hai…Deewana..!!(Two Shots) Shot 1

Hello…..Everyone…..Its Jessie here….this time with a 2 shots..yea..the same OS grew double sized…Complan ke wajah se…Dont scold me plz..Guess..I will never develop the skill of writing crisp…Well…This is my gift to our Friend Sangee aka Sangeetha…. Yea..her birthday was 10 days back..and this time I tried a cameo role..haha..dont be scared..I just peep once…lol….First time am writing including me too…No cold stares!! pls save for future as I may bring something worth for that….Do drop in your comments yaar…Purely fun intended…Fingers cross for readers reviews…

Geet…May every wish of yours come true….Finally…As I promised…I came with a gift…Accept it dear..Late hai par phir bi latest hoga…kyun…you will know with the climax..heheh..I did warn you with my craziness..you are one of the best friend I got thro’ TU….Wish only the best to happen with you…love ya loads..Stay happy…

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Yeh Ladka Hai Deewana (Shot 1)

The whistle tone of “pehla Nasha” rang in her mobile,waking the birthday girl up…She smiled listening the tone and swayed her head to the music…Her eyes widened looking the caller name,”Arjun”…

She jerked and got off the bed,and looked her room filled with streamers and color papers…Yes…her room mates celebrated her birthday at sharp12 midnight….She did enjoy the surprise and cake cutting…Today is a day off for her…she recalled the choco mouse cake,and its taste still lingering in her tongue….Somewhere a song played and she wiggled her brows,enjoying the lines…

Boomi Enna Suthuthey
Ooma Nenju Kathuthey
En Munnadi Sukuran
Kaiya Katti Nikkuthey

(The earth is spinning around me
Dumb heart is now yelling
In front of me sukran (auspicious influence of the planet Venus)
Standing submissively with folded arms)

Her mobile again flashed with Arjun’s name….’may be he too calls to wish me’.,she thought and attended…

“I love you Geethu”,Arjun screamed…she frowned…

“Now what did you do Arjun…”,she asked as she sagged on her bed .She was sure he will bring stories abt his stupidity….

“Nothing Geethu….!!”,he replied softly..

“No…say the truth…did you fight with Radz,again.”,she asked…She was tired being a peacemaker between them….

“I need a help…”he mumbled after a minute….

She closed her eyes…She can’t neglect him…A best friend any one would yearn for…”where should I come”,she asked silently….

“This is why I love you!..I will msg you the details”,he said..She was about to say something but he disconnected the call…

“Arjun, this is why you are in trouble man”..she mumbled herself and got ready….

On the way to her destination.,she sat reminiscing the sweet moments of their friendship…

*A year back…*

“Hi am…Radhika”,Sangee turned her head to see a beautiful girl flashing a radiant smile …

“Hey…Am sangeetha”,she shook hers with a lively smile…this is how their friendship began..Little did they both know that.,they will turn more like besties…within next 6 months,being in same team or anything could be the reason as others say, but they became the best buddies…

“Do you really think Java is easy than Networking…”,Radz walked with coffee mug towards her…

“We should go for Big data,Radz…I thought of trying jobs outside…No hike and that TL…argh..”,Sangee gritted her teeth…

“Lets ditch the company baby”,Rads winked at her…

“Hmm…heard that today we will be assigned new project..and wonder who will be our TL”..Sangee twitched her lips..

” I wish we should be in same project”,Rads said more like a prayer..

After an hour…the girls smiled, when informed about project…once they got inside lift,they both squealed being in same team again…

“Guess..what..The guy is so hot…handsome…oh my god!! you girls are lucky..!”,Kritika came running and announced like a TV host…

“Who?”,Sangee asked sipping the coffee…

“Your new project’s TL”,Kritika again shrieked…

“What’s the use of being hot and handsome..will he do all works single handed…No isn’t..Kriti…we decided to put papers…”,Rads spoke and Sangee nodded with a smile….

“Rasan…You both here.!!..New TL..”,Teji was cut in when Radz said..”Yea… yea..we know..Sangee.I thought we will be on bench for some time..you know..we could have enjoyed..no projects..!!”.Radz said with dreamy eyes while Kritika and Teji saw her like a alien…

“Yea…we are already exhausted with the recent one”,Sangee mumbled throwing her fists in air..
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Sangee stood froze looking the guy before her… “Arjun…”,she murmured… Her college friend..Ah..No..!!…from high school…They did engineering together..and Arjun indeed drained all her energy and brain cells before they completed their course..Later,he moved for job and she continued Masters….

She saw him gaping at her…No..behind her…Who?!! Radzzz..!!! she got alerted.. why the hell he behaves like a fool..now how to introduce him as her best friend..She frowned a little but was shocked to see Radhika to have her eyes locked with him….Sangee moved her head left and right and saw both being in eye lock….Arjun walked to them,looking Radz,while Sangee fumed being ignored…

“Arjun..”,he extended his hand to Radz and she shook with hers… Right then.,her mobile rang with ‘Pehla Nasha whistle’ and Arjun’s fame beamed with happiness..so as Rads..Sangee cursed the caller under her breath, and it was none other than.,her another friend Jessie…”One more..!”,she rejected the call with a sigh…

“Geethu…You work here..?? from when??”,Arjun asked after a long time..

“From my last birth”,Sangee smiled wide…

“You are still the same..and am so happy..Geethu..I love you !!”,he hugged her forgetting the atmosphere…

“Aruuuuu”,she whispered high…

“Geethuuuu…”,he mimicked her…She saw Radz face to shrink like a kerchief bought in discount sales..

“Radz..he was my college mate..quite jovial with us..I mean..our gang…”,Sangee said hurriedly….Her phone buzzed again with Jessie’s number…

“Who is that?”,Arjun tried to look the mobile screen..His face got a naughty smirk looking the caller…He had the call in speaker and spoke with her,the moment he said his name,all they could hear was, Jessie to say,”The Subscriber you are trying to speak is currently not reachable”.. Arjun gritted his teeth.,but Radhika giggled at that…

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Throughout the lunch, Sangee said about Arjun’s naughty antics and how their gang in particular Jessie and she would land in trouble ’cause of his crazy pranks…

FB…

Haye haye re haye yeh ladka
(Oh My this Guy)
Haye haye re haye (Haye)
(Oh My)

Arjun to lay asleep over the books in classroom…Jess and Sangee pat him as the class is going on…

Karta naadaniyaan kyun poocho to haye
(Why does he behave childishly, ask him why)

He wakes up and yawns aloud extending his arms to the sides.,the lecturer glares him…

Kabhi yeh hamse ladta hai, kabhi jhagadta hai
(Sometimes he fights with me, sometimes he harasses me)

The whole classroom play throwing paper balls and Arjun dumps Jess and Sangee with the paperballs collected in waste basket..They both throttle his neck while he smiles pleasantly..

Koi paas iske na aana
(Don’t anyone go near him)

Jessie walks behind him and gestures him to be mad when he walks in college corridor..the girls looks him shocked…as she tied a paper coil to his back and it keeps rolling behind him…

Yeh ladka hai …. Deewana hai deewana …
(This guy is ….Crazy….)

Arjun pours a glass of juice on Jessie’s head..and when she turns to him shocked..,he pours another one smiling wide..

Radhika giggled and laughed listening all this..

“Radz…once.,me and Jess passed papers to him in semester exams..The invigilator was too strict and the whole college knew our talents..!! I was far away seated,but Jess being near to him.,passed her sheet..everyone turned a blind eye on that and it did happen well.,until Arjun opened his mouth…”

Rads came close to Sangee and asked..”what did he say?”…

Sangee heaved a sigh..”She and Arjun were the last to give submit their papers..and when she did it,he screamed at her..,”Jess..One of your sheet is with me…here”,and extended the sheet…She was actually seated five seats behind him…the invigilator glared her angrily….We were literally shocked and he realized what he did…

“Then”…Kritka,Teji and Radz asked in chorus.. Sangee said it…

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FB

“But why Arjun?..Its just 30 marks..Now..what will….”,Jessie yelled pulling her hairs when she came out somehow reasoning it to be not a paper passing…

“C’mon Jess…If not May…we have December”,Arjun gave her a side hug…all looked him shocked… “Dont worry about Arrears..when you clear 5 subjects, its cool to have 2 arrears..”,he shook his shoulders and ran throughout the corridor as he was chased…

“I love you J..”,he was cut in when she pointed her pen’s nib to his eyes…”Don’t say that..Enough!..now come to meet VP and fool him with a story..else…”

“Done.!!”,Arjun said.
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“What happened”,Radz bit her nails..

Sangee glared her,”As usual he turned them mad with his story but finally what he did was the highlight..he took a swear on our VP that Jess din’t pass the papers..”

“Smart!”,Radz said aloud..

“Huh?” the trio saw her..

“Well..he somehow solved isn’t…Mistakes do happen..!!”,Radhika bit her lips and moved from that place..

Rads walked fast wondering on her new found interest on a guy..which is really anew…She collided on someone.,and she felt a thick band of something to coil around her waist… “Careful”,a gentle male voice said and she saw him.,her TL.,Arjun…to hold her…He looked extremely handsome in that shades…(that dp one)She got out from the trance when smiled at her…

“You were in a hurry?”,he asked…

“Who wears shades inside office..Enough of your show off”,Sangee said as she walked to them..

“I went for lunch…with one of my cousin…”,he replied to her…

Radz silently observed his cool behavior with Sangee,though she mocked him every now and then…

“Ah..Radz..He is has no attitude yaar..I tell you..we are really lucky to have a friend like him but the only thing which annoys is his crazy antics..at times he drive us to the edge…”,Sangee smiled

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A week passed…

Radhika and Arjun would just share eyelocks….and formal smiles and greetings..

“hey..you both said,you wanna leave the job isn’t”,Kritika asked having lunch…

“Really..!! when???”,Rasan said in unison and did a hi-fi..

After a second,Sangee grew suspicious at Rad’s sudden enthusiasm…”Kuch toh ghadbad hai”,(something fishy)she gestured her hands like CID daya and Teji nodded his head…

The next one month,the duo noticed Ardhika’s growing fondness over each other.. Arjun to politely explain things to her.,and to have career oriented discussions,while Radz would just smile a neutral one…

“Still stupid…Of all things in this world,did he get only this topic”,Sangee facepalmed herself..

“I think he is trying to make Radz fall for him”,Teji said rubbing his chin…

“what a discovery..!! you discovered The sun!! wow!!”,Sangee clapped..Teji glared realizing her mock….

“Why are you troubling my friend..she is already engaged…”,Sangee saw his face intently.. He was seriously shocked..

“Oh..thats why she was uncomfortable when I spoke”Arjun masked his disappointment.

“You love her?”,she asked..

“Whats the use..she is already booked!! Am not even in waiting list…may be unreserved”,he shook his head sipping his coffee…

“Huh….have you booked any train tickets..?”,Sangee asked him..

“Yea..waiting list…Last minute…”,Arjun was cut in…

Sangee pointed a fork on his throat..,”Stop the nonsense…Say this..you love her or not?”,

Arjun saw her wide eyed..”You can’t turn violent like Jess..”,he replied…

“Anyone would..and you are idiot to speak about jobs instead of proposing her…what you thought…she will think you to be a encyclopedia and drool on you for being a genius…”,Sangee raised her brows..

Arjun’s eyes blinked after a second…”God..means..she isn’t engaged..thats a lie…Yay!!! Geethu…I love you”,he hugged her jumping from his seat opposite to hers..

“Aru..Its high time..you should stop yelling this..Anyone may get it wrong”,Sangee said smiling to him…

“I will ..and how to propose her..Idea pls”,he asked her..

“Well..just like you yell at me…do the same for her”…

“Cha..that would be stupid….Its Radhika!!….So… I should make it special…”,Arjun turned dreamy…and walked fast when Sangee charged him for his words…

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“I love you geethu”,Arjun as usual coochiecooed and Kritika made a face at that…once he left she asked..”Whats the need to say that frequently…”..

“Ah…he says that to convince us..when he does something crazy..”,Sangee smiled wide at his disappearing form… “but…He is very different..!! a trust worthy person..and a best friend any girl could get only by luck..I bet on that.!”

Radz sat smiling listening her.,”Yes…He is so lively..naughty..cute…lov..”,she stopped looking everyone around her.. Sangee raised her brows….

“So..Is he perfect for our Radz..?”,Teji asked suddenly..

“Perfect? for what?”,Radz faked innocence..

“Its 3 months..when will you propose?”,Kritika asked to her face and Radz opened and closed her mouth like a fish…

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*After a month…*

“Geethu…she is avoiding me…I din’t do anything wrong..Trust me…!!”,Arjun said with puppy dog eyes…Of course he is true..she did see him to follow her everywhere..
She herself was surprised to see him to fall this deep in love…but what happened…

“Is looking good a sin…!!what would I do if that Lekha proposes me..!! “Arjun pouted..

“Only Lekha?”,sangee asked…

Arjun looked her helpless..

“This is why I asked you to behave arrogant..See…they take you for granted…they pass weird comments on your back…whats the need to be over friendly”,Sangee glared him… “Any girl at Radhika’s place would be angry,listening such..you should propose her or accept openly that you are committed to her..”,she said sharp..

“I tried to my best..she is testing my patience..Just one chance..! Pls..Geethu”,he said to her..

“As thought you would propose in that one chance…”,Sangee mocked him..

Arjun starred her and said,”Can you send her to my cabin…I will propose then?..”

Sangee readily accepted….within few mins,after good ordeal moments,she sent Rads to his cabin and dusted her hands..

“Wow..you did it…super idea..I did doubt on the chances to happen”,she was startled to listen Arjun’s voice behind her..

“What are you doing here..I did sent for you…Aru..Utilize the opportunity..now go”,Sangee literally pushed him..

He saw Radhika near the lift area instead of stepping to his cabin…He locked her to the wall when she busy fiddled her mobile…

“Move”,Radz pushed him…

“Why are you avoiding me…”he asked to her softly..

Radz eyes looked around as she grew conscious on them to be noticed…Arjun pulled her to a corner of that place…And pinned her to wall… “Tell me..”,he asked her huskily..

“I dont want to speak with you..”,she saw the ground..

“I dint do anythi..”he was cut in..

“Who asked you not to..and why are you saying this to me…”,Radz hissed…

“Because I love you..”Arjun said…

After a second she said… “You say this to Sangee also..to Teji..to zubin….and now me too…”,she said

“Thats different…Radhika..you too know isnt…and you too love me”,he said to her..

“No..I don’t…and how to believe you..you behave the same way with everyone”,she tried to move while tears covered her vision…

He tried his best to convince her,and finally he held her close,her breath convulsed at their proximity,she was unable to speak anything when he captured her lips suddenly…
she threw her fists on his chest,while he held it to his back guiding her to hold his waist,and his hands pushed her close to him..after few seconds, when she responded,he bit her lip before pulling away…She blushed crimson red at that…”This is my first kiss…I think I did better..”,he said in her ears.. she was still breathing heavy being in the same trance and clutched him tight…she saw his eyes and his eyes were still on her darkest shade of pink lips…her cheeks bloomed with the new found pleasure and she gulped a little,and he saw her tongue to wet her lips…,that;s it..he kissed her again and this time so deep,and she moaned unable to control…her hands held his shirt tightly…

Sangee was in a call,finding the corridor to be empty,she loitered speaking in mobile moving towards the glass windows…her eyes widened when she turned to her right and saw Arjun to pull back his head from Radhika’s face… Arjun turned shockingly when he heard a audible gasp..

Arjun sighed a relief finding it to be Sangee and smiled sheepishly…while Radhika adjusted her hair and dress…

“What were you doing?”..Sangee asked unaware of what she spelt…

“Geethu..you did ask me to utilize the opportunity..and I did it..”,he said and walked away..

“What…what I said and what you did?”,She still asked..But was baffled to see Radhika glaring her..”No..Radz..he is lying..I din’t say this…He said he will propose thats y I sent you..”

Sangee stepped back a little looking Radhika….”This fellow spoilt my image…I thought of helping for my best friends love..,But see….”,She stopped abruptly when Rads squealed in happiness and hugged her…

“What did you say…he thought to propose.me……Am so happy…”,saying so Rads kissed Sangee’s cheeks,while Sangee wiped it immediately…

“Chi…chi…”Sangee pushed Rads,but she held her tight in return…”Go… at least you propose.him….”,she said

“Naaaa…now you see..what I do with him..”Radz shook her head with some decision and thinned her lips…

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A week later,Ardhika came to Sangee chatting with each other happily…..

“Geethu…I love you”,Arjun hugged her the moment he saw her….

Radhika’s smiled wide to her ears and hugged her..”He proposed me…candle light dinner…”…she whispered…

Sangee squealed in happiness and hugged her back..

After few days.,Sangee got transferred to another branch as the project they dealt with,needed a person of their team at that branch…Though initially she did miss them,her new friends and pg mates were so cool she loved the new place too…Its been six months,and just only because of technology’s gift they get to chat and msg and in past one month that too got a standstill owing to work pressure….

She sighed as she got out of her reverie….The cab came to a halt and she saw the huge bungalow to be decorated…She dialed Arjun…

“Where are you?,”she asked but jerked when a burqa clad lady hugged and whispered “I love you Geethu..”.

Her eyes widened looking the leather shoes peeping from the burqa….”what the hell..remove it..”,she said irritated…

“I won’t…they won’t let me in..so I disguised..”he said clasping the feminine attire…

“Wha..”,her words struck with her throat when the board over there pinned with flowers read. …Radhika weds Saral…she looked Arjun with shock….

“Her dad rejected our love….and then…”he sighed…”…it’s a big story”,he said..

“Now say what you want to do..?”,she asked,but her mind alerted about his ability to pull new troubles.

“Correction!! What I want you to do..?,he smiled as she slid the veil covering his face a little…

“I guessed..”,Sangee said and made a face…

“Lets go inside”,he pulled her.

“Why me..you go…”she said….

“They will find me…so…”.,he dragged

“So you need a scapegoat..”she hissed….

She knew Radz belong to rich family and her dad, let her to work,only for her wish…but what is he actually….??

As though he read her mind,Arjun said,”well…he is a local politician…popular also I guess”..

Sangee blinked…;Where have I got caught on my birthday’….She knew Rads loved Arjun wholeheartedly and Arjun too..She knew him…! A moment later she stepped in but halted and asked Arjun not to come with her…

“Do you think they wont find you…you and your tower height!!”she said..

“Say am your friend”,Arjun said..

“How…like…hi…am sangee…sangeetha..and you???”she asked…

“Mangee..man..gee..tha..”Arjun dragged looking her to glare…

“Sangee…Mangee….!!Are you for real…!!”she asked looking his childish pout…

“I want her….I love her…why does status have to be a prob…”,he said sadly…

“Aru…what to do after we get inside”,Sangee asked….

“Lets see that later…Ok…Leave…You go…I will find a way..”,he walked back.

She felt bad looking his disappointed face…How could she let him down…’now what way will he find’,she thought

“Aru…don’t step back…am with you”,Sangee said with chin high in air…

Arjun looker her confused,”why would I..???Geethu….I said you go INSIDE…!! I Will find a way ONLY TO GET INSIDE!!”,he twisted his lips as though he is in deep thought…

She looked him with mouth wide opened…what she thought..!! Somewhere back in her mind,a voice played back…”Geet..dont fall for his puppy dog face…”

Sangee was relieved when she saw Radz’s mom in lawn area..She got in with that chance,as Dilip Mishra.. Radz dad made it clear not to let anyone without invites…The right side of the house had a huge lawn area.,and that’s where the marriage dais sets had been made,but it was two… “Aunty.,Radz informed me the last minute,btw who is the other one getting married?”,sangee asked..

“Its my son..Ankhush..with Rashi..,Sister of Saral…”,Mala said dryly…

As she took the steps,she halted looking Arjun already inside the house,that too under a table looking here and there,peeping out behind the table cloth…How he came in this soon?..Arjun saw her and gave a thumbs up..

‘huh..what for?…’..

“Aunty where is Radz room…is there anyone to help or I should do the honors for my friend”,Sangee asked sweetly and Arjun crooked his neck to listen…Sangee waited for mala to move after listening the details…So as Arjun.. “Am going..you come”,she turned but stood shocked when she heard all the utensils over the table to crash down…She saw Arjun to rub his head…

“I just got up”..he said

“Do something”,Sangee said looking a guy to approach that place..

“Meow..Meow…!!”,Arjun mimicked like a cat and ran somewhere while she stood shocked…

“Cat..!”,she said looking the goon like guy..he looked the vessels scattered..

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So…how was it??? I tried something anew..!! Ok fine..If you find it good..do share your precious reviews..welll…based on that I will be like should I try like this or not…the 2nd shot is done..so will post tonight or tomo… And don’t look for logic in sem exams part …and in IT proj part too…well..what favors the story..I brought in..

Pls ignore my Typos and grammatical errors….Love you all loads and Take care

65 comments

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Heyya…sweetie pie…howz you? am fine dear….exams on..??? Thanks a lot sweeto…. love you loads..Dp..nice isnt…I liked it so much..thanksss…TC…stay happy

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      hi Chashni…Tamil ponna…Nandrigal pala…. thats my fav too…last leyum oru part of the same song varum… am glad you liked…Love you loads…TC

  1. likii

    Hey Jessie this was too good. …..I loved the cool attitude of arjun. ….n even urs n sangee’s role. …waiting for the next one

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Heyya…Likiii dear…Thanks a lot dear…. cool attitude!! glad that you liked..I targeted that only…thanks again…mere cameo bi pasand..first prsn to say this..am so happy…love you loads..will post today..TC

  2. Dipika

    Dipika

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    Jessssss what’s that. Goshhhhh i m laughing badly like anything… πŸ˜‚ πŸ˜‚ πŸ˜‚ πŸ˜‚ πŸ˜‚ πŸ˜‚ πŸ˜‚ πŸ˜‚ πŸ˜‚… What a shot really.. You possess humour darling… Sangeee.. I guess u r dancing…. Arjun saysi love u to everyone… N pahla nasha tone.. Wow.. Bechari love guru sangee… Paper shir passing.. God reminded me of my exam.. Lol.. We did tht… Sangee mangee.. Lol… M damn excited for next one… N the song at first u put.. Wss splendid yarrr.. Come soon JB.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Judwa behana…. thanks a ton.. glad that you enjoyed this much..am so happy girl… Sangee..hehe..she may be…you too passed it..same pinch..lol….Pehla nasha am addicted to that tone… hehe glad that you pointed your likes..am so happy and satisfied.. will post today…hey thanks yaar…love you loads..TC

  3. Sathya

    Sathya

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    Oh no… Now I too need a TL like Arjun n my project. He is sooooooooo cooooooooool n I love that Sangee mangeeee…. Ha ha aha semma story Jaaaazzzziiiiiii…. Unaku aandavan moolaiya konjam perisa vachutaanu nenakaren…. Ennama nΓ©e ipdi eluthuriye Maa… Yaarukaachum pudikaama irukuma…. Lol semester paper passing I remember my college exams…. I did that too n luckily dint get caught… Lovely lovely.. I adore sangee n arjun friendship more… Jaaaazzzz what’s this u r about hurting him. By ur pen nib.. How dare u jaaaazzzz… Remember us OK… Dare to do it next time… We support arjun only…. Totally awesome lovesome episode 😘😘😍😘😍😘

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Awwwieee…coooll…Thanks a lot satz…. TL ?? hehe… thanks ji… onum perusa vaikala…katha kathaiya ezhuthitu en kaala varureengala…adi….kannu vaikateenga ma…lol… you too paper passing..same blood..same pinch….we wont get caught re..coz we are clever na….Friendship..!! Thanks on that note…. am so happy u enjoyed it…lol satz…he poured juice over me…you din’t read that…waise…ithellam natpule sadarnam appa….Oh..you are threatening me…I see…..oh no..am scared…EEEEEEEE….. well…Arjun will support me…here we are friends you see…glad to know that..TC and loads of love

  4. Sulbi

    Sulbi

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    Jazz kutty…. i was enjoying this new Arjun… how sweet?? He is so cool and friendly… thats sounds great… i was laughing till my eyes got wet…. u and sangee were rocking in clg days…

    First kiss… its hot…. and arjun in burkha omg cant imagine… he is acting like a cat… 6 feet tall handsome hot guy sounds like a cat… omg… hilarious…. i was enjoying to the core… new try was awsme… i loved it baby… love u alot… tc darlu…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Am so happy you enjoyed this Arjun..Sulbi jaan…Teddy huggs…. glad that I made you laugh..apppaddaa…. thanks a lot dear…. arjun and burka…hahah..sema la… cat wali meow…thats his character…. thank you dear….am overwhelmed with your response..Love you loads…TC jaan…

  5. ana

    Di. .this is just so unfare….I also want arjun to say this to me…..very bad….I also want him….😭😭…
    BT Di u r just blasting ur stories lyk anything…. 1 baad 1…continuously…. Really amazing….
    This 1 is really cool…ciz hero hi itna cool hai….oops sorry hot hai..😁waiting for its 2 part..
    Nd sorry Di for not able to comment on ur previous ff….coz really busy…this full week having exams nd upar se I am not well….just frustrated… But aap logo ke ffs r there to enlighten my mood….nd make me happy….
    So for that …a big thank to all of u…
    Nd plzzzz wish ki mere papers accha ho….
    Nd I will surely try. To comment but if not then already asking sorry…
    Bye love u…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Anaaaa…….. don’t cry….Tell me your b day…I will gift you one Arjun..lol…am gifting Arjun…
      will do it for you my dear….

      thanks a lot dear….ya ya..cool hero…hot..!! wah…!! combo hai na..will post today… oh..Take care of your health dear..study well but don’t stress yourself a lot… hope you do your exams well…All the very best..

      Glad on that note ki..our ffs help you..we all do want that… thanks a lot dear…I! Once again I wish all the best and papers to be so easy… thats ok dear..Love you loads and TC

  6. Brin

    Brin

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    Outstanding OS, how will Sangee get Ardhika together, waiting for the next OS, you nail it Jessie, well done. πŸ™‚

      • Sangee

        Sangee

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        work from home so no office today πŸ™‚ so dancing like nazriya in raja rani..nighty tied like dhoti… hair in messy bun..that type dance..still cant stop what to do..

      • Kakali

        Kakali

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        Waaaaa Sathuuuuuu even u forget CHOTUUU !!! huhh it’s still pending showing him negative .. then how can SR finish..!!! my SwaSan..!! i loved MMZ a lot … then it finished giving me 199999 volt jhhatka. !!! somehow i composed myself.. !! then i started loving SR … it’s my heart beat.. !! SwaSan r my habit.. goshhhhh !!! it pains lot.. !!
        now m just praying to God to do some miracle n my SR come back to us.. !!!
        since i heard a news even now a days writers r also having no option except following colors team as again SR gonna show us kidnapping drama… writers wanted to end it ina happy note … but seems it’s not possible … huhhh that’s why i have a HOPE that my SR will b abck with bang… i know i know it’s my DREAMS .high expectation… urghhhh.. hehhh even though i know d truth… let it b … i fdun wanna make my cold coffee hot … Gd ewnggggg !!! ;-*

  7. Jewel

    Jewel

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    Yeh ladka hai dewana hai dewana…. Jez I loved this Arjun, he is so cute and naughty. And that examination hall part, I laughed like anything, and the subscriber u r trying, loved that, he is troubling u both a lot…. and he is saying I love u. Beware of his I love u…. And that proposing part, that was really nice. Totally u made me laugh, loved this jez… I read this yesterday night it self bt I couldn’t comment, I was in travel now I am reading this again…. Waiting for the next part… Post soon jez….

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Shonnaaaa……Teddy hugs….I loved that song…. am so so so happy you loved this shade of Arjun..
      thanks a ton dear…. Awwwieee…Thanks for pointing all those yaar…. yep..troublesome…hehe… Beware of I love you..hahah…. am so glad you enjoyed to this extent..Proposing..woo…Have a happy journey…. will post today…TC and loads of love

  8. Kakali

    Jesiiieeeee !!! *pinch ur cheek.. !!!
    urghhh this cool Arjunnn !!! love it. !!! waaaa but i imagine My Sanskar here… !!! i dun know why 1st time reading ur chappy n i imagine Sanskar.. !!! goshhh m going mad .. !!! u know i instantly blush imagining him !!! now m having tornado in heart n goosebumps on cheeks n nose thinking about Arjun n Sanskar.. !!! jump jump jump.. i love them !!! yeeiii !!!
    Love it Jessiiii !!!it’s so awesome… i need more n more n more n more.. !!!plzz don’t tease me reading my comment.. !!!its kinda overloaded emotions… !!! heeyaa !!!
    Thnk u.. ;-*

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Ye lo….Pinch it….My surprise friend…. am happy you loved this Arjun…. Sanskaar..oh ok….oh really..I have watched few epis of SR.,that swasan trying to prove Ragini at fault…lonnnnng back na… cool boy he is…wowo!! Mixed reactions….!! lets jump together…I love this Arjun..heheh…. am so happy reading your enthusiastic words dear…woowhhhoo….more and moree…ke liye check tonight..I will update…. I won’t tease re…Am sailing in same boat you see…fellow passengers ko tease nahi karungi…. I understand…You have no idea how much am overjoyed reading this…..the article made you feel this much…gosh…Am worth enough to write..like seriously…this genre was a finger cross one for me…dinka chika..dinka chika..dinka chika..hai..hai.. Thanks a ton dear…Teddy hugs…TC….Love you for your words…straight from heart…Muahhh…stay blessed…

      • Kakali

        Kakali

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        waaa jessiieeee !!! let’s jumpp.. huhh gimme hifi *by leg … we r same .. !! *hug.. DHINAA DHIN DHAA,, DHINNA DHIN DHAAA ,,,

        Haaaa jessiieee it’s long back u watched my heart beat.. *SR… u know now its going off air. !!! colors tv wanna end it n m going mad with it.. !! i m not getting what to do.. !!! just cursing d whole production team of colors.. !!! i wish i could wrap all of them n send to PLUTO.. !! huhh i hate that channel now. !! my SR will leave me.. !! my SwaSan..!!! *crying on footpath.. !! u know i have this kinda feeling – tsunami of sadness,,
        -land sliding of heartbreak….
        -jwalamukhi of anger…
        -earthquake of frustration….
        -flood of my own tears…
        -hurricane of my own feelings that is only LOVE FOR MY SWASAN.. !!!
        huhh feeling much better saying u all this.. !!! love u tooo Jessieee !!!
        God bless u… !! heyya jump to my SR page to reply my comments.. !! ;-*

      • Sathya

        Sathya

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        LOL KAKALI…u know what…after long time i m watchng SR from recent days..since i got to know it is going off air. Yeah me too feel bad..but the problem is with the creators who spoiled the good concept by putting so much of negativities. They actually missed one thing in this story..they forgot to show Swara in negative…only that is pending. And i m missing my dida a lottttttttt. we have VOOT na..go and catch swasan there….actually i m doing there to get to see the old scenes of Swasan….

  9. Viprida

    Viprida

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    Wow Jessie!! Pinnita ma!! You possess some amazing humour sense!! For the first time, I found Arjun very cute!! Who would want to quit if they had a TL like Arjun!! You’re one superb dialogue writer I tell you. I mean, they’re very casual and at the same time funny as hell!! Beginning la semma situation song!! Sukkran nikran nu sonna odane Arjun odane call!! Kalakitinga ponga!! Please post the next chapters of both the FF’s.. Take care happie day!!

  10. Viprida

    Viprida

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    Wow Jessie!! Pinnita ma!! An appropriate title for a cute story!! You possess some amazing humour sense!! For the first time, I found Arjun very cute!! Who would want to quit if they had a TL like Arjun!! You’re one superb dialogue writer I tell you. I mean, they’re very casual and at the same time funny as hell!! Beginning la semma situation song!! Sukkran nikran nu sonna odane Arjun odane call!! Kalakitinga ponga!! Please post the next chapters of both the FF’s.. Take care happie day!!

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Vipu…Reg member a..Super ji….thanks a ton yaar….. Title ok va…Nandri…Nandri….Vipu…thulli kudhiten vanam idikala..hahah..am so happy…Usually I frame Arjun too sharp fellow.. so cute and playful..konjam doubt that…Ippo romba santhosham… am glad with your likes…thanks dear..yes..none will quit..company ku labam.. easy a vela vangalam…arjun kaga OT parpanga..heheh… Adra sakka..!! You are the one to say that…sukran and arjun call…Keen reader ji neenga…will post today…,,Cousin lappy kedachachu…TC and loads of love…Teddy hugs….
      Vaarthaiye illa…Avalo super a comment paniteenga..sukran part solli asathiteenga..

      • Viprida

        Viprida

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        Elaam unga aasirvaadham dhaan!! Sonna madhiri yaarum quit panna mataanga OT ah vitta veetuke kuda pogama vela paapanga!! Teddy hugs to you too!! Please post Sweet Mistake too!!

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Vipuuuu….. aashirwaadd na andha gothuma maavu company thana… πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ hehe just kidded… Factu..Factu…. pasangaluku thindatam…ponnugaluku kondattam..lol….sweet mistake ok ya..done..2 parts..back to back….TC dear…Lappy was available na..so trying for it

  11. Aasthu

    Aasthu

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    Its funny and enjoyable……what’s TL?? Arjun says I love u to everyone…haha…..u know what Jess? Day by day u r improving in your field of specialisation……by the time u finish ur ff u’ll outrun Shree Satz and u’ll reach the top third……be proud dear….πŸ˜†……love u….😍😚😘

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Chinnu…Thanks a lot….TL means Team Leader..in IT companies… improving…well..if its in other fields I would have rejoiced you know..hahhaha….Naughty Chinnu….I don’t think so…heheh..why to outrun..Am safe here..heheh…. proud!! Where is Ammu…I need her know..to pull your ears…
      love you loads…TC

      • Aasthu

        Aasthu

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        ok ok…Team Leader……..this is also a field to rejoice man….after all isn’t love the breath of life???????????? U wudn’t know it dear…………as a reader I can understand it…..no no Jess….weren’t sad that u were the last in line?????? Don’t worry..I’m there to support u……………I’m sure that Ammu chechi will also agree with me…after all who can disagree when that is the fact???????

        Ammu chechi’s 4 exams are postponed….they are on 20 21 and 22…….5th one’s dte is unknown……..I don’t know how her 1st 2 exams went….she hasn’t seen my msg……..

        Love u tooooooooooooooo…………………..its soooo fun to pull ur leg…………….muuuuuuuuuuuuahhhhhhhhhhhh………………….

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Hahahah chinnu….you are on a roll…chalo….go on…lol…am glad i made the reader understand….I wasn’t sad…you see..being last..it would favor me…I can run back anytime…no one to catch…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰..

      Oh..ok…Guess she would have done better….lets wait…waiting for her updates too…love u loads….fun…I see…lil sissy you are…so am like…ok…let her…

  12. _Ritu

    _Ritu

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    Jessie..hows u dear???…another amazing story from ur side…I totally enjoyed it.. πŸ™‚ sorry dear..couldn’t comment on ur ff… need to catch up wid many stories..waiting for nxt shot..loads of love. πŸ™‚

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Ritu…..My punch queen…am fine dear..howz you????thanks a lot..and am glad you enjoyed…oh ok…next shot tonight…loads of love..will wait for your reviews…TC

  13. Rossy

    Rossy

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    Jazzy….jazzzy….u r crazy….chalo….kitni stories update kiye link dede re baba…else will torture uπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜ˆ

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Rozzzzzzyyyyyyyyy….Mere lal….abhi pata chala tume.? me to pehle se aise hi hoon….dedoongi….done dona done…torture…me…no…Will give links..you post my Mars Prince story as 1st one…plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz………Love you loads….Bahut miss kiya yaar… TC…

    • Jewel

      Jewel

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      rossy u r back, missed ur stories a lot… plz post mars story soon…. and arts and sculptures also….. plz, soon…. jez and i requesting together, plzzzzzz……

  14. Sangee

    Sangee

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    Hey jessi Sry for the late comment .. What to do can’t stop dancing… It’s pakka mass from first line to last line… This arjun is wow sΓΆooo cute yar…. Sukiran Kai katti nikiran ah… 😍😍😍😍… First dialog itself… Iam flat… Rads and my friendship… Awww choo sweet… My Tl arjun wow wow… Next dance… Paper passing… We have December… Ha ha ha… Pouring water… Working from last birth… Rofl… Love nu vantha friend ah kalati vitudreenga. . And jessi dialog… Subscriber cannot be reached… Omg Iam laughing like a manic here…. Only lekha… Ha ha ha… Next scene… Dei unna propose dan ah da panna sonna… Nee panradu kulam Enna en da witness akara… Poor me… Rads kissing me… Chi chi… Seriously my reaction will be the same.. πŸ˜›πŸ˜πŸ˜œ…..sangee mangee… Omg… Rofl… Only to get inside…. Ha ha ha Vida mattan pola ye…. Geet don’t fall in this puppy dog eyes… Messing the table…. Ha ha ha I was continuously laughing…. Thanks for the dedication dear love you lots 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Again Sry for the short and late comment… Take care…. 😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Geet chelllam….thanks a lot dear……dance a..Super.. aama..sukran.. geet…that song they shot in pondy na….adhnale than…ungaluku fix panen…sweet friendship ..ok….hahah Arjun….glad you loved…neenga thanma help paninga….only lekha…heeehe….unga character fix…ena panna…adhana. witnesss na kooda paravila…nee sonna nu sollitane…lol…Arjun vaalu…..same reaction a…appo double ok….am so happy….I was able to make you laugh…nejama…u know isnt how much I was hesitated…lol…appada….sirikka vachuten…..love you loads….glad you loved your gift….don’t be sorry dear…..TC and loads of love….😘😘😘😘

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Neetzzz….thanks a lot dear.. .long time isn’t…glad to get your views again…. am so happy you liked this cool Arjun….TC and love u loads….thanks again….

  15. Gauri

    Gauri

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    Jessi seriously what are you eating….so many stories different conecpts …baap re ….tussi chaa gaye yaar…this was so funny….you really have an amazing comedy streak….I am feeling so wonderful after a tiring day πŸ™‚ loads of love darling waiting for second shot 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Gauriiiiiiiiiiii…..I eat a lot….heheh….only veg..!! hahah..thanks a lot dear…. am so glad that this was able to entertain you…am so relieved that ..I did good in this too.thanks a lot dear…had posted…love you loads and tons….TC and stay happy……..Muaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh

  16. Vedha

    Wow … jezzy…. super ji super ji super ji….all ur scene was unique …. and I loved it to the core….. specially arju charc… and Sangee 😍 actually Sangee has natural character as in role … she saves me in many situations in my life too… I am one of Sangee’s follower ….. love u Sangee darl…😘😘😘😘😘update the next part as soon as possible …. with loads of love …..

    • Sangee

      Sangee

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      hey here comes my bestie love you darl …… my real life radika for me my darl…
      seriously jessi i will match 100% to this char and vedha will match 100% for rads character..
      you are brilliant jessi seriously…pure genius you are….keep going ….love you jessi baby……..love you vedha darlllllll

      • Jessie

        Jessie

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        Geet…thats a real surprise yaar…Rasam off screen and I tried here..gosh..!!! edho miracle…I turned brilliant…May your friendship long live forever….Be together and rock the world together…..now am honestly satisfied… thanks a ton dear….love you loads. and TC and Stay happy you both SaHa…ship name for you both… it also means friend yaar..sema porutham…!!

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Hey Vedhaa…..thanks a lot dear…Sema santhosham pa…. am so happy u loved it….Adhan enake surprise a irundadhu..I brought her character…really…!! life saver a..!! Vedha….you have no idea what I feel now… neengaellam lucky ji…Arjun pidichurundadha..am so happy…posted..Read and say…loads of love and TC…Thanks for dropping in dear

  17. Shree

    Shree

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    lol jess… hahahaha.. u n geet akka.. lol haha.. arjun left no chance.. lol rads n he.. geethu i love you.. hehe.. totally awesome.. jess nee kanna kutirukanum.. he got u caught.. cchhaa. lol take the opportunity.. akka nalla dhaan idea kudutanga.. saral lol.. he is intelligent.. sangee mangee.. lol .. edo oru padam gnabagam vandudu.. ore margama iruke.. lol.. table.. vessel scatterd.. haha.. meow.. meow.. lol..

    jess pinnita.. love you

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Shreeeee….Teddy hugs….. glad to see you laughing this much…means Papppu Humor paper me bi pass hogayi..heheh…Arjun is all rounder you see..lol….. acho..how to hurt him…cute wa friend illaya…chuma miratal..heheh…Geet than a….pavam ya..she thought he will propose..lol…. sangee..mangee…aama…oru vadivel dialogue ma… meow was my fav…I does that often…spill milk coffee and meowss…Thanks a ton dear…Am so happy …Love you loads…TC

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Vasurajjjj……thanks a lot… am happy you liked it… ena paniten..heheh…cool nale santhosam than…Nandrigal ji…TC..stay happy…

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