MANMARZIYAN – thank you friend..! Episode 2

Hey guys.. deeksha is back to irritate u all… thank you so much for ur comments as its my first FF it is so exciting to see many reacting… im on cloud nine …and im so sorry for the late update… I actually have weak end tests on every sat and Sunday… so preparing for those boring exams… and satya di.. ur FF is too good … I still dint read it completely but I loved the start…. ok ill stop my blabber here … so here is chapter 2
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Both raneil were walking towards the car… they enter into black colour audi and started to home….
radhika“har koi humein couple kyun samajhtein hain…” (why do every one think we are couple?)
“mujhe kya pata …?” (what do I know..?)neil
“vaise idea bura nahi hain…?” neil with a smirk on his face
“try karein kya…?” (should we try..?) neil
“Tumhare saath ?? no way…!” (with you no way..)
“Why..??” with a pout face…
“because…”
“because…?’he questions her back with the same face
“because… idont wanna waste my lyf with monkey who have dimples….”
“very funny”neil with frustrated face….
Both watch each other and burst out into laughter…. And they reach home….
A big mansion is shown … “RADHIKA MANSION” it is beautifully written on the name plate…. Prerana suggested that name.. prerana treats radhika as her daughter only… its been jst 6 years they have met each other but bond grew to that extent ki we cant even imagine….!!!
As soon as they reached home radhika jumped on the bed… it was dinner time …
“dinner ready… neil .. radhu … come down…”prerana started calling them..
“thank god mom im feeling so hungry.. chalo serve it fast…”
“radhu …?where is she..?”
“kumbh karn apni room mein so rahi hain..” (kumbh karn is sleeping in her room)
“jaa uthakar le aou… khana thabi milegi…” (go and bring her .. then u casn have ur dinner)
“cheating mom….”
“I don’t know..”with a determined face…
Neil accepted his defeat and and was going towards radhus room…
“jaa beta ur not going to have dinner tonight…”he said to him self and went to her room…
He tried many things but every thing failed… radhika was not ready to get up… after struggling for more tha half an hour she woke up and went down… she was so sleepy so prerana was feeding her and she was eating like a small child…
Neil keeps a pout face seeing them… he also asks prerana to feed him….
“chota bacha hein kya.. chalo eat …” (ur not a small kid..?)
“radhu is studying in L.K.G right…”he said sarcastically….
“shut up finish it fast….”
He keeps a pout face.. radhika takes his plate and starts feeding him… neil smile grows wide… and gives a winning smile to his mom…
Jst then radhika phone starts ringing….
“hello”
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“hey awesome … so when are u cmng..?”
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“Awesome ill be waiting for u…”
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Acha rakthi hoon bye.. good night.. luv u ….
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Prerana and neil were looking with a question mark on her face….
“kaun tha” (who was that ) neil
“Sammy is cmng to Mumbai… I said n aim asking her from many days to shift here …. Finally she is cmng….”
“oh really that’s awesome….”
“why are you so excited…?”
“your friend mathlab my friend….!roj eki chehra dekke bore ho raha honn… ek naya chehra mil jaayegi dekhne ko…”
“Oh really…?”
“Mr. neil malhotra…. jiske saath baath karne ke liye hi log darthe hain who friendship karega…?”
“bet…?”
“no”
“kyun…?”
“kyun ki use ueh sab pasand nahi…. U don’t flirt with her… and if she wants to do friend ship she will ask… u should not irritate her neil please……”
“I don’t irritate any one…”
“fine… but don’t do any ulta seedha with her please… don’t irritate her im saying you again and again because she is my only best friend after u.. agar who hurt hogai.. tho ill not spoare u…”
“acha fyn… ill not even look at her…:”
“itna attitude bhi math dikhana use…”(don’t show this much attitude also…)
“acha rukho… ill bring board and a marker u teach me what to do…”
“very funny…. But im serious…”
Radhika was still speaking some thing but neil took a big piece of chapatti and put it in her mouth…
“ab bas bhi karo chasni… my head is hurting…..”
Radhu gave a glare to neil… but her anger got down seeing neil smile…. And prerana informed them that she is going to holy trip so she will not be in home for few days…..
Both were going to their rooms…
“chasni….”
“hmmm”
“tumhare friend ka photo hain tumhare pas….”(do u have a photo of ur friend..?)
“nahi hain… aiur hain bhi toh mein nahi dikaungi…”(no .. ill n ot show u….)
“kyun…?”
“kal aarahi hain… tumhe deklo…” (she is coming tomorrow … see her ur self…)
“acha fyn… good nite…”
“I hate u mr. neil malhotra…. U are a cheater… !”
A girl is shouting at neil….
“no …. Im not a cheater…”
Neil jerked off and woke up…

Neils pov…..
Same dream again….this is not leaving me at all…. I HATE YOU… I.. HATE…. YOU…..i was sweating very badly though my room temperature was in 16… but then I noticed some one was about to open the door….i know its radhu… because it’s a deal between us who ever wakes first will wake the second person…she will be worried if she will come to know I had that dream again… so I composed my self and slept as if I was in the deep slumber….
Radhika’s pov
Asusual I woke up first and went to wake him up….but may be he got the dream again… he was shouting I HATE YOU…. Who the hell is this girl… I hate her for making my neil like this… I still donno the full reason but I know he needs his space… time aanepe who khud mujhe batayega…. And he thinks the walls are sound proof so I donno about his dreams… but obviously… when I open the door little I can hear every thing… and apne app ko over smart samjtha hain.. budhu kaheeka…. I slowly opened the door….he was sleeping… my neil looks so cute while sleeping… actually so cute while acting…..i know he is disturbed.. so I took a glass of water and splashed on his face…..
“good morning….”
Neil woke up with a jerk…
“I really wish u have a splash day… lyk this only…”
“really…?” with a fake anger on his face… actually he enjoys my antics a lot….
I gave a peck on his cheeks and ran out of the room for jogging befor he could catch me…..
Pov ends….
It was time for radhika to come back from jogging… neil was walking here and there checking the main door atleast twice in 5 seconds.and finally there was sound of opening gate….

Neil’s pov
Thank god she entered… I was woriied.. vaise neil stick to your plan… don’t shift ur mind and please don’t see her face…. He was telling to him self….because neil know he cant irritate radhika by watching her cute face….
He slowly went beside the dorr hid himself behind it cathching a bucket full of water in his hands….a soon as she entered neil splashed whole water on her….
“ab aaya maza….” Neil said… and realized she is not radhika as he saw radhika coming from back so busy listening songs…
Neil’s pov
Oh my god… chasni is coming from back… then who is the girl I threw water….
“O SHITTTT”
Screen freezes on neils shocked face…..

Precap : a biggest shock…. Not for us its for “NEIL”
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So that’s it for today guys… hope u all liked it…

22 comments

  1. Myra

    |Registered Member

    nice episode deeksha….loved it….update the next real quick please…..and sam’s the one he threw water on…right? and another arrow in the dark if you don’t mind….she is also the one who neil dreams about…maybe?
    take care..

    • Sree_deeksha

      |Author

      Thank you Myra…I’ll try to post next one as soon as possible…. and I don’t mind… u can ask me freely …. but u know I’m something lyk suspense….. ull cm to know abt it in next episode….

  2. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    nice one deeksha….nesams first meet is supr, by splashing water on sam…. nice… post the next chaptr soon

  3. S.v

    |Registered Member

    Nice update deeksha vaise radhika and neil ka bond kitni cute tha awww so why is beil shocked and kon hai neil dream main aur voo bhi u hate u ?? Argh chalo I’ll talk nonstop if I start . A good start and is sam is the one whom he threw water and when will arjun come ?? Too many questions lol cabt help .

  4. Jessie

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    Lol😂😂😂the last part was super… thats sam isnt n she is d one who disturbs his sleep…hahah Now d same dialogue 2 neil.. Ab aaya mazaa..!! Eager 4 nxt one.. enjoyed reading RaNeil pulling each other..

  5. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    Raneil are so cute n cool together curious to know more about Neil’s dream. I think Neil drenched Sam by mistake. Waiting for more.
    Love u 😍😘

  6. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Loved it dear.. 🙂 RaNeil bonding was too adorable…bt what is it in Neil’s dream…m all curious…waiting for SaRjun entry as well..love u..tc 🙂

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